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TheQualityofMercy

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Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 8:25 pm

Madame Solo

There ARE a lot of folds, but I like it blaugh

Here's a commision I just did of an OC

Anyone know anything about tails?? I just have such a hard time doing them...

The shading on the tail looks pretty good, you could push your shadows if you wanted. The biggest thing I notice about it is it doesn't match the rest of the edit-it needs some tattooing or a different colour.

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:09 am

Saga

cheesey

Saga

cheesey

i did this to get my mind off work. blah. i like the pose but im not particularly fond of the edit itself.

You're not fond of her? Whatever it is that was at work must have made you do it O_O

I like the look of her eyes. Very intense water fight. whee

thanks. the shading looks kinda icky to me, though.

Shading isn't icky.
I think I would have a hard time with it too. sweatdrop

thanks. im always way to hard on myself, i guess.

cheesey

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cheesey

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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:11 am

Shianu

cheesey

i did this to get my mind off work. blah. i like the pose but im not particularly fond of the edit itself.

Oh wow, I can't see anything wrong with the shading, though...I don't know jack about shading xD.
Bloody excellent pose tho.

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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:13 am

TheQualityofMercy

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TheQualityofMercy

Shwee!! My latest edit, and my latest self-portait!

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And thank you my dearest Judyfay for my FANtastic new signature!!

*dances*

She looks so naughty~ 4laugh

I was afraid of that...She's supposed to look innocent!

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I love the face Cheese, very gorgey!

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cheesey

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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:16 am

Elenyae

Eeek! It's scary posting in here cos you guys are all so good...I can't get a copy without the Sample on it..but could you critique what I have there so far?

(And does anyone have tips for shading leather?)

thats pretty good, but i would suggest a bit more contrast in the shading. heart

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:22 am

Kameko

I'd suggest shading the skirt a bit more with a slightly grayer shade of yellow. 3nodding I like it so far!

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...I think I may have gone overboard on the folds. sweatdrop

a bit too many folds, i agree, but its still beautiful!

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Lucifer aka Fallen Angel

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Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 7:30 am

Aurora from Sleeping Beauty

Eclair from Kiddy Grade

Customer

Mermaidia (dvd cover)

Birthday edit done yesterday
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Movie with music(click to play..photobucket made it a bit pixilated)

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 1:48 pm

yeah so its my newest edit lol
what do you guys think?
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(i seriously think my pixel artist side is slowly coming out of me on some of my newer edits @.@)

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SaphireSienna

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Posted: Mon Jun 12, 2006 11:51 am

Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 5:32 pm

Whoo, been awhile since I've posted here.
Anyway, here's my newest edit:
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He's a traditional Japanese Kyubi (9-tailed demon fox) in human form.
Here's my refrence piccy:
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Edward Lecter

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Raeshal DeKashai

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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 6:47 pm

Work in progress. A custom for my shop. How's it so far?
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Posted: Tue Jun 13, 2006 7:36 pm

So many edits in a row!

SaphireSienna - I really like Edward's jacket, how it's windblown and all. You got the shape down very well.

Edward Lecter - Awesome! A traditional kyubi, what a great idea. Good job working off the reference.

Fire13 - looks really nice so far. Gorgeous folds. My only critique is that the bow and ruffle are off-center - they're in the middle of the dress and should be off to the left a bit if they're going direclty in front of the avatar's body.

Anyways, now to show off mine. I got this idea last week and have been dying to edit it since.

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The saying at the bottom is something I repeat while waiting in the ranks for the first melee battle to start at SCA events. I get really nervous until the first charge.