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 Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:58 pm
Sammy flung her arms and legs around rapidly, trying to get down. "GET ME OFF OF THIS THING!!" She yowled, feeling sick to her stomach. She soon found that pounding the ceiling wasn't getting her anywhere.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 8:59 pm
"Haha, sorry!" She snapped her fingers and both Ike and Sammy plummeted to the ground. "Anyways, I'm gonna run off before I really DO get married off. Seeeee ya!" With that, Maddy disappeared in a flash of purple.
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Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:02 pm
"Bye~..." Sammy groaned, sprawled out on the floor. "I'm never gonna be an astronaut, I'm never gonna be an astronaut..." She repeated, as if it was a chant.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 10:04 am
Ike moseyed around the loading bay. The Sootopolis 6 was spent. He left it behind in Orre, knowing it was no further use to them.
"I miss the hanger..." he whispered to himself. Scizor and Typhlosion were playing their daily game of Mahjong, trying to see who could beat the other's time.
"Me too." commented Scizor. "This room smells like salt water."
It was a bit humid in the loading bay. Ike walked over to them and jumped up on an empty oil barrel, taking a seat.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:36 pm
*Christian walks in and looks around*
"It's good to be back here"
*Christian walks over to a couch and sits in it and turns on the tv*
"something never change about me"
*Christian laughs a little*
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:38 pm
"Hey, I remember you." Cody said, walking into HQ. "It's Christian, right?" He looked around, not seeing an admin anywhere. "Figures..." he mumbled.
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Conservative Exhibitionist
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 2:47 pm
Maddy teleported into HQ with a slight yawn and a flash of purple. "Rain... Gotta hate it..." She pushed her sopping wet hair from her face with a sigh.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 3:48 pm
"Yea, i'm Christian, and your Cody right?"
*Christian said as he turned toward the sort of familiar face*
"what you looking for?"
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:03 pm
"AGH MY HEAD!" Jack yelled as he walked into the HQ.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:11 pm
*Christian turned to the scream*
"are you ok?'
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:30 pm
Christian was sitting in HQ flipping through the channels trying to find something to watch. Then all of a sudden his TADS went off in his bag. Christian went digging for it and got it. He opened it and it read:
MISSION- Mission Im-Fossil-able
There is rumor that fossils have been found in the desert. Your mission is to go and get ONE.
Funds upon completion: 200
Pokemon: None
Item: Fossil (Claw or Root)
Christian then shut off the television and went and got his bike. He then rode off into the direction of the desert. While he was riding to the desert he was thinking of which fossil he wanted to take. He figured that one had to be better then the other, but he didn’t know what one was better for him to take. Christian thought of it real hard and long, and he finally figured out that he was going to take the Claw fossil instead of the Root fossil. Christian then got to the road that went straight into the desert.
Christian took that rode and started to pedal faster to get to the desert sooner. On that road he was offered to battle but Christian declined them and said he had something better to do. Christian then went up a hill and could see the desert in the distance of his vision. After a while of riding the bike down the road, he got to the desert and started to look around the desert. He couldn’t seem to figure out which way to go for the Claw fossil. Christian entered the desert but needed goggles to keep going. Christian rode back to town and bought some goggles and then rode back to the desert after.
Christian then entered the desert and rode left on his bike. He rode for a while, while looking around for the fossil. He got to a cliff and didn’t find anything in that direction. Christian rode back and instead of going left he went right. He looked around as he rode this way but didn’t find it. So Christian rode back and instead of going left or right he went straight. He found a bunch of rocks in the direction that looked like fossils but weren’t fossils at all. Christian looked through the rocks for a while until he came across 2 weird shaped rocks. One was the Root fossil and the other was the Claw fossil. Christian grabbed the Claw fossil and the Root fossil sunk into the sand and was gone. Christian the rode back to HQ and put his mission and the fossil on the desk and waited for it to be graded.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:40 pm
Lord Snickers MISSION- Mission Im-Fossil-able There is rumor that fossils have been found in the desert. Your mission is to go and get ONE. Funds upon completion: 200 Pokemon: None Item: Fossil (Claw or Root) Welcome back ^_^ It's an okay mission, minimal spelling/grammar error. But what really bugged me was your sentence variation, as in, there was none. "He...Christian...He...He" is how most of the sentences start which makes the piece choppy and bland. Try to spice it up a bit. "Pokemon: None" means that you can't catch a Pokemon, not that you can't battle any on the way. Pokemon battles help add story if you're lacking any. But as a low leveled mission, with minimal rewards (200 PD and Fossil), I'm going to let that slide with the advice I mentioned. If you do the next mission in the series (I think there's a de-fossilize one) that is. PASS
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:47 pm
Sammy trotted in, racing Dancer to the couch. Of course, the Bayleef beat her. "No fair!" She frowned, folding her arms. She sat beside her pokemon.
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Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 6:50 pm
"Yo Sammy." Jack muttered, he held his head.
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