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 Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:36 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 5:36 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Sauvie ForsakenSwordsman Sauvie ForsakenSwordsman Seaphron Allriac afraid of water nice XD
Good chapter, it to me was a little different then the others and I liked that. You are now officially the Mr T of this story 3nodding what am I? You can be Mad Murdock (I hope that someone used to watch the A Team) mad murdock, which one is that again? The mad one *smacks forehead again*of course, that almost seemed too simple, and me mad wow thats a stretch
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:22 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Meta Fish Edit: Also, I wonder if you'll expand on what "hints" Christina gave to Paul. When I said hints, what I meant was when a women loves a man they tend to leave subtle hints, but nine times out of ten the man will miss these hints, and the lady in question will get frustrated. It's a bit of long running joke in society really, that men are terrible at picking up the hints (just ask almost any girl). Just ask Christina herself! sweatdrop And oh, man. I laughed so hard when Quote: “Why don’t you just take us across on your rippling back?” said Ms Carol seductively, whilst grabbing Fisher around the waist. Oh man, that was good. I really already like the love that the two share, and how it annoys the other characters a little bit, such as Drakam. It's very good writing, in my opinion, but again, I'm probably a bit biased, as it's the character loosely related to me, and the one loosely related to my girlfriend.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 9:43 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Masamune 5.0 So when I eventually die at the end of this can I be the last of the three on the boat to die? domokun You assume they're all going to die? mrgreen I actually have the next bit planned out, so you'll just have to wait and see who survives. It seems like we're pretty much dead. The others aren't coming after us and we're being dragged helplessly through rapids and it's likely that there will be a waterfall at the end of it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:20 pm
rofl Fish is right. that WAS an awesome line! and Drakam's (flustered?) response after it too. xd
surprised oh noes! the group has been separated! This can't be good.
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:21 pm
Koosei rofl Fish is right. that WAS an awesome line! and Drakam's (flustered?) response after it too. xd surprised oh noes! the group has been separated! This can't be good. especially for Masamune
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:23 pm
Sauvie Koosei rofl Fish is right. that WAS an awesome line! and Drakam's (flustered?) response after it too. xd surprised oh noes! the group has been separated! This can't be good. especially for Masamune Quote: Atleast we're not dead, like you!
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:28 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 10:37 pm
I totally pwned those spikes.
Anyways, this is an amazing story.
I need more!
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 5:27 am
Good chapter, love the mental trap thing. The romance is well written also , drakam's reaction. Looking forward to next chapter. 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:11 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:18 pm
A railing system, of course! Shoulda seen that coming sweatdrop Raised tensions brought on by sexism, and a foreshadowing passage of an ancient text. Will our heroes be able to unravel the mystery behind this room of scripture? Will the two groups meet up again? Will Fisher get laid? These questions and more will be asked, and possibly ignored in the next exciting installment of Journey into the Unknown.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:22 pm
Allwing A railing system, of course! Shoulda seen that coming sweatdrop Raised tensions brought on by sexism, and a foreshadowing passage of an ancient text. Will our heroes be able to unravel the mystery behind this room of scripture? Will the two groups meet up again? Will Fisher get laid? These questions and more will be asked, and possibly ignored in the next exciting installment of Journey into the Unknown. My original idea for the boats movement was magnets. As for all the questions, I aim to answer them all by the end of the story (obviously), but for now here's a preview: -Will the two groups meet back up ? Take a guess. -What is the meaning of the scripture? Next chapter -Will Fisher get laid? I actually had a sex scene planned for two characters, but I think I will probably either remove it or tone it down xd . -Will Ty Keene get killed by a girl? Wait and see.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:25 pm
ForsakenSwordsman Allwing A railing system, of course! Shoulda seen that coming sweatdrop Raised tensions brought on by sexism, and a foreshadowing passage of an ancient text. Will our heroes be able to unravel the mystery behind this room of scripture? Will the two groups meet up again? Will Fisher get laid? These questions and more will be asked, and possibly ignored in the next exciting installment of Journey into the Unknown. My original idea for the boats movement was magnets. As for all the questions, I aim to answer them all by the end of the story (obviously), but for now here's a preview: -Will the two groups meet back up ? Take a guess. -What is the meaning of the scripture? Next chapter -Will Fisher get laid? I actually had a sex scene planned for two characters, but I think I will probably either remove it or tone it down xd . -Will Ty Keene get killed by a girl? Wait and see. Shoulda seen that last bit coming xd But hey, it's but one of the side affects of the Man Whaura
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:26 pm
Allwing ForsakenSwordsman Allwing A railing system, of course! Shoulda seen that coming sweatdrop Raised tensions brought on by sexism, and a foreshadowing passage of an ancient text. Will our heroes be able to unravel the mystery behind this room of scripture? Will the two groups meet up again? Will Fisher get laid? These questions and more will be asked, and possibly ignored in the next exciting installment of Journey into the Unknown. My original idea for the boats movement was magnets. As for all the questions, I aim to answer them all by the end of the story (obviously), but for now here's a preview: -Will the two groups meet back up ? Take a guess. -What is the meaning of the scripture? Next chapter -Will Fisher get laid? I actually had a sex scene planned for two characters, but I think I will probably either remove it or tone it down xd . -Will Ty Keene get killed by a girl? Wait and see. Shoulda seen that last bit coming xd But hey, it's but one of the side affects of the Man Whaura
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