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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 5:21 pm
Gaia Name: Crazymexican101 Character Name: Relic Gender: Male Age: 20 Race: Human Character Description: Relic stands about 6'4", rather dark skin, no tatoos. He has camoflauge robes, brown eyes, and jet black hair always in a ponytail.
Home Planet: Corellia Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: one brother Character History: A month after he was born, his entire family except one of his brothers, was slaughtered by a Sith Lord, and he was rescued by a powerful Jedi Master who trained him in the ways of the Jedi. He's not yet a Knight, but he is about to take the Trials. He wants to scour the galaxy for the Sith responsible for his family's demise.He found his last relative on Endor, where the Ewoks had raised him.
Alignment: Jedi Occupation: Padawan learner Skills: Skilled in Forms I-VII lightsaber combat, exceptionally gifted with the Force, and gerat mechanic
Weapons: single bladed lightsaber, twin custom built blasters, vibrosaber, vibropike Ship: stolen ARC-170, Jedi Starfighter, stolen Naboo Starfighter Personal Belongings: A single relic from which he got his name.
Roleplay Sample: Having crashed on Endor, Relic sought out the local Ewoks to get repairs. As he searches for the Ewoks he has a run-in with battle droids about to kill some Ewok chiefains. Running to them he Force pushes the droids away.He then finishes them off and kills the Nemoidian controling the droids. The chiefains take him to their village, where he meets a human who looks strangely familiar.
~.~ Firstly Ewoks know nuts about repairing. Hell, they are so primitive that they uses a wooden stick tied to a sharpened stone as weapon. If his brother was raised by Ewoks, he will know nuts, and probably is almost just as Primitive.
Secondly, your Sample is too short. And like I mentioned, I prefer that you changes the whole plot about you related to the Ewoks. If you persist, at least change the storyline.
NOT accepted. ~SK
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Posted: Sun Mar 19, 2006 7:45 pm
Gaia Name: hydro flame Character Name: Wickett Gender: Male Age: 20 Race: Human Character Description: Wickett stands about 6', dark skin, tatoos on neck and fore-arms. He has black robes, brown eyes, and jet black hair always let loose. Can speak the Ewok language.
Home Planet: Corellia Starting Planet: Endor Relations: a brother Character History: A month after his brother's birth, his family except his brother, Relic, was slaughtered by a Sith Lord. The Sith, not seeing Relic, kidnapped Wickett and lost him on a public transport. An Ewok, finding Wickett, took him to Endor and named him Wickett, raising him as the son of a chiefain.
Alignment: Jedi Occupation: Padawan learner Skills: Skilled in Forms I&V lightsaber combat, gifted with the Force and Akido.
Weapons: double bladed lightsaber, walking staff (used for akido) Ship: 2 Speeders, one green and tan, the other black. Personal Belongings: An Ewok charm necklace.
Roleplay Sample: After hearing a ship crash, Wickett went towards the noise and was jumped by 10 battle droids. After beating in their heads, he headed home to warn the village. He then saw someone he hadn't seen in a long time... his brother, Relic.
Good gracious, read the above reply for crazy. And no, NOT accepted ~.~ SK
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 3:14 pm
Gaia Name: Cherii_says_h! Character Name: Cherii Gender: Female Age: 18 Race: Human Character Description: I have a loose-fitting blue dress with rather large sleeves with a silver star-shaped necklace. I also have blue hair and big gray eyes.
Home Planet: Naboo Starting Planet: Tatoonie Relations: Elders of the village Character History My family was slayed shortly after I was born by an unknown person for reasons unknown, so the elders took me in and raised me.
Alignment: Republic Occupation Pilot Skills: Piloting and healing
Weapons: A small dagger Ship A fairly small starfighter Personal Belongings: A small silver star-shaped necklace that had once belonged to my mother and a battered old wooden recorder
Roleplay Sample After sitting up in the tree for awhile, I noticed something silver glinting at the base. Curious, I jumped down and landed in front of the glinting spot. It was a piece of metal. "Now, what is this doing here.....?" I pondered out loud. After looking around a little more, I noticed the pieces were getting bigger and bigger the farther I went in one direction. I came up on a total scene of chaos. A battle droid from the Imperial army was shooting at a small ship trying to take off. It was blasting off fairly good chunks of metal. This ship wasn't going to get out in time.
Partially accepted... And don't rp in 1st person view. ~SK
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Posted: Mon Mar 20, 2006 5:31 pm
Gaia Name: Crazymexican101 Character Name: Relic Gender: Male Age: 19 Race: Human Character Description: Relic stands about 6'4", rather dark skin, no tatoos. He has camoflauge robes, brown eyes, and jet black hair always in a ponytail.
Home Planet: Corellia Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: one brother Character History: A month after he was born, his entire family except one of his brothers, was slaughtered by a Sith Lord, and he was rescued by a powerful Jedi Master who trained him in the ways of the Jedi. He's not yet a Knight, but he is about to take the Trials. He wants to scour the galaxy for the Sith responsible for his family's demise.He found his last relative on Endor, where the Ewoks had raised him.
Alignment: Jedi Occupation: Padawan learner Skills: Skilled in Forms I-VII lightsaber combat, exceptionally gifted with the Force, and gerat mechanic
Weapons: single bladed lightsaber, twin custom built blasters, vibrosaber, vibropike Ship: stolen ARC-170, Jedi Starfighter, stolen Naboo Starfighter Personal Belongings: A single relic from which he got his name.
Roleplay Sample: Having crashed on Endor, Relic sought out the local Ewoks to get supplies. As he searches for the Ewoks he has a run-in with battle droids about to kill some Ewok chiefains. Running to them he Force pushes the droids away.He then finishes them off and kills the Nemoidian controling the droids. The chiefains take him to their village, where he meets a human who looks strangely familiar. He finds out that this human crash-landed on Endor a week before he had, but , unlike him, his ship had been completely demolished. This man was his older brother Luis, who had been a wanderer for the last 10 years after he found out that Relic still lived. After he made his repairs, Relic left Endor, taking Luis with him.
Can't say you have the best RP sample ever. But I am putting on you being able to improve. So... Accepted for now. ^^~SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 7:12 pm
Gaia Name: Balidur Character Name: Viar Bahn Gender: Male Age: 21 Race: Human Character Description: A 6'3 human, he was born with mysterious red eyes, not common within the Galaxy. He radiates with high amount of mediclorians, which serve him well in getting into the Jedi arts.
Home Planet: Coruscant Starting Planet: Korriban Relations: No family, only his droid, T5G5 Character History Born on Coruscant, this average human boy was talented in the combat wherever it faced him. He only knew of survival there and did not consider if he lived or died the next day. His parents left him when he was 3, and he was taken into the Jedi influence. He trained with the Jedi for many years but recently his philosophies of the Jedi ways caused him to doubt his masters and fellow students. Now he is in search of power and the truth of life.
Alignment: None Occupation Dark Jedi Skills: The basic Force skills of a Jedi, & Force Choke
Weapons: A single green lightsaber Ship A small starfighter, The Vortex Personal Belongings: His Jedi robes from the Temple, & his lightsaber is all he carries.
Roleplay Sample 'But my lord, if we attack now...that would result in full-frontal war.' Viar Bahn explained with a stern voice.
'I know that, young one. If we go to war, that will only benefit us...' A dark figure loomed over the view screen on The Vortex, Viar's personal starfighter.
'As you wish, my liege, I will order the troops immediately...' Viar's expression oozed of impatience as he only thought of one thing...Succeeding his master after this war began and turmoil arose within the Galaxy.
Very well accepted.~SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 23, 2006 8:09 pm
Gaia Name: Snailmail Character Name: Vesuvius Gender: Male Age: 20 Race: Zabrak Character Description: Blue and Black Zabrak facepaint, wearing black Mandalorian like armor, with a black cape going to knees. Traditional horns growing out of head. Red eyes. Does not care about how easy the Bounty is, he just gets the job done.
Home Planet: Raxus Prime Starting Planet: Raxus Prime Relations: None Character History He some how...appeared in life. He has no parents, he just was. When he was young(during the clonewars), he had a friend named San' Delude. The war was dangerous, because the planet of Raxus Prime was a sepratist base. Once the clones came, the battle started. It was nearly impossible to avoid the fighting, because of the clone perseverance. Eventually, his friend was killed by a missle that missed it's target. Ever since Vesuvius has been trying to have hunting people as an outlet for his rage. This started his career as a Bounty Hunter. His rage never ended, and the bounties kept coming.
Alignment: None Occupation Bounty Hunter Skills: Beating someone to death with fists and feet.
Weapons: Blaster Rifle, Blaster Pistol, Flame Thrower, Wookie Bowcaster, and Vibro-ax. Ship Etna Personal Belongings: None
Roleplay Sample Vesuvius is on the planet Tatooine to investigate a drug smuggling. He finds an Jawa. The Jawa seemed to be frightened. He followed the Jawa to it's roller. He goes inside to see if he can find some help. He asks the one that was frightened what it was frightened about. "There was a man that I saw! He tried too shoot me! Like he was hiding something,and I was just there to find parts!" said the Jawa. Vesuvius asked the Jawa to show him where he found the man. He followed it to town called Mos Espa. Then someone came and started shooting at him, and Vesuvius took out his bowcaster and shot at him. As his body lay there, Vesuvius went to check it. Apparently he was one of the Hutts body gaurds. Vesuvius went to find the Hutt's palace. Once he found it, he needed an identity check, so he used the person he killed arm, and used the finger print. Once he was in he went to the Hutt's area, where several gaurds, and a bounty hunter name Gan was, and said "Do you know anything about the drug smuggling?" "Yes, but why should I tell you?" He replied. "I'm a bounty hunter, I have to find where this is happening, and I know that you'll help," "Why would I?" "Why should I let you live?" "Gaurds, dispatch of him," At this point Vesuvius shoots a gaurd down with his blaster rifle, and attacks several others going to kill him. He goes over to the Hutt and points the rifle at his head and says, "Do you want to live anymore?" "Okay! I am the smuggler, but I won't die by you! Kill him Gan!" So the bounty hunter come to him and shoots Vesuvius, but misses. Vesuvius attack back and merely scratches his arm with the blaster. Gan takes out a knife and stabs Vesuvius' arm, but Vesuvius drops a thermal detonator that none saw, and runs out. Once he is out the room explodes. He recieves his pay on the bounty, 1,000 credits.
Of course it is too short. You really expect me to accept you? Well... Oh kay... Since I am in good mood today. Accepted~SK
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 12:16 am
Gaia Name: Strange Grave Character Name: Gen Obin Gender: Male Age: 18 Race: Human Character Description: White, dark robes, gary eyes, mid length black hair.
Home Planet: Nar Shadda Starting Planet: Korriban Relations: I had a good relationship with my father until he died. Character History: My father was a Bounty Hunter and he was a big part of my life until he was killed when I was 8. After his death my master found me and could tell that I was force senceative. He traned me. All I know is from him... Accept the dark side.
Alignment: Dark Side Occupation Dark Jedi Skills: Lightsaber Skills
Weapons: One Red Single Bladed Lightsaber and my father's old blaster Ship: A Jedi Starfighter Personal Belongings: Not much, an old blaster that was my father's.
Roleplay Sample: ((Now I get what you mean.))
-Gen just steps out of his speeder when some thugs jump him-
Thug Leader: Back away from that there speeder, hand over any credits you have, and you might live.
Gen: You don't know what you getting yourself into do you?
Thug Leader: I said get the ******** back or I'll blast your a**!
-Gen puts his hands up starts to walk away from the speeder- -he passes a thug pulls out his lightsaber and cuts the thug's leg off then head- -the thugs panic-
Thug Leader: What a Jedi! Kill 'em men! Kill 'em now!
-thugs shot at Gen and he easiely deflects them saending them back at the thugs killing the last 2- -Gen force chocks the thug leader-
Gen: I'm no Jedi.
-Gen puts his lightsaber away and walks into the bar-
((That better?))
nononono... Roleplaying now in a rule, uses typical literacy as like in novel and book. They don't use "- ______-" to suggest an action, or "XXX: ____" for speech. Please refer to the above post of Cherri's for more detail... Once you changed it, you are considered ACCEPTED, and can start Roleplaying straightaway~SK
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 6:13 pm
Gaia name: AngelicWarrior629 Character name: Adrian Starkiller Character Description: Tall, lean, Olive skin, Normal eye color is brown, eye color when channeling the dark side is red, short pitch black hair, one small silver earing in his left ear, Dark Jedi robes. Gender: Male Age: 25 Race: Mandalorian Home Planet: Taris Starting Planet: Corusant Relations: Girlfriend (who he hasn't seen since the Corusant riots) Father(deceased) Mother(still alive) Sister(Jedi) Others that won't be mentioned just yet. Character History: Son of a well known Mandalorian bounty hunter in the Outer Rim Planet of Taris. When he and his sister (Fiora) were found to be Force Sensitive they were sent to the Jedi Academy in Corusant. (much to the father's displeasure) There they were trained to become well rounded Jedi Knights. At the time, Adrian fell in love with a Jedi girl named Jessa, which was forbidden among the Jedi. Although she was relunctant she too fell in love with Adrian as well. His sister, Fiora, couldn't except this and being the opposite of Adrian(well dicsiplined, seeker of justice) she tried to stop him. Ofcourse he didn't listen. Hearing rumors of hidden Sith schools, Adrian, accompanied with his best friend and partner Justinius, he set off to investigate. He soon disappeared for a time and the two emmerged as Dark Jedi. This brought great pain for Jessa considering his last words to her before he left on his mission: " I will never hurt you, and I will return to you." He left on his mission and a year later, he returns, and causes much destruction. The hidden Sith begin to cause a great riot, the likes of which was never seen in the history of Corusant. Thousands died within the chaos. And among the chaos stood Adrian, striking down his foes and anyone standing in his way. He killed many Jedi Knights, most of which, he knew as student aquantences and supposed friends. Even killing his own former Master Dorin by stabbing him in the back as he saved a little girl from falling from a burning building. The violence soon came to the Jedi Academy itself. Sith V.S Jedi. Violence and bloodshed filling the halls. Adrian, killing his share of Jedi as well. War in the streets. Sith V.S. Jedi. This followed by a light saber dual with his sister Fiora, who he almost killed. And even, tragecally, a dual with his beloved Jessa, who he wounded, but then healed her. In light of this, Marcus, his greatest rival before they both turned to the Dark Side. (Marcus being the first to do so) attacked Jessa mortally wounding her. This enraged Adrian, started a heated 30 minute lightsaber dual. Marcus dies by being stabbed in the stomach and then beheaded. After that Adrian, to the surprise of many, started killing Sith! Even his Sith Master, the one who seduced him to the Dark Side. After the bloodshed, Jessa is taken to a healer and is hospitalized. As Adrian leaves her in her sick bed, he leaves and become a Jedi mercenary, working for the highest bidder. Alighnment: Dark Side (though does not have an alliance with the Sith, Republic, or Jedi) Occupation: Dark Jedi/Mercenary Skills: Lightsaber use and Force use self healing ability(which all Mandalorians have due to an implant) Weapens: One Single Bladed Red lightsaber Ship: Oblivion (name of the ship he gave for his ship is a modified Drak Jedi Starfighter) Personal Belongings: His credits ^ ^ And a gold chain Roleplay Sample: Tatooine. In a bar. Adrian sits at a table drinikng his drink and watching the Twilek dancers. He has just won a game of Pazaak from a self proclaimed champion. (cheated) And is now relaxing. Suddenly a bunch of Sith assasins emerge from the crowd and threaten Adrian.
Adrian: What? You guys are still after me? After all the good times we been through! (this obviously mean that he killed the other assasins that went after him earlier)
Assasin: You will pay for your treason!
Adrian: Yeah yeah. Don't they all pay? Jeez. *gets up*
*the 5 assasins take out the'r double bladed red lightsabers*
Adrian: Lets get this over with I got stuff to do. *takes out his red lightsaber* *the Sith attack* *Adrian backward stabs on of the assasins that came from behind and kicks him away as he falls on a patron's table* *two assasins attack at the same time* Adrian: *jumps on bar table avoiding an incoming strike* *uses the force to grab and table a flings it at the assasins* Sith assasin1: *table hits head* Adrian: *beheads Sith Assasin1* Sith Assasin2: *force jumps to Adrian* Adrian: *uses forc lightning and blows sith assasin2 across the room* *force jumps to him and lightsaber fights him as he lays on the ground* *stabs his abdomen*
*other two assasins attack Adrian* *hit* *hit* *hit* *hit* *hit* Adrian: *easily blocks all attacks* *slashes one of the assasin's knees*
*he bends down in deep agony and pain* Adrian: *grabs other assasin and stabs him continueously in the stomach* *stab* *stab* *stab* *stab* *stab* *lunge* *kicks away*
*Adrian's eyes glow bright red* Sith Assasin: You'll regret this!!! *still in pain* Adrian: Shut the Hell up. *slits his throat*
Adrian, watches and the patrons are in a slight panic(espeacially considring that Force users are heavily feared these days) The bar manager starts to make a fuss on the mess made. Adrian leaves quietly before more trouble starts.
This is probably the funniest App I have ever read. Firstly, way to hard to read. We put the headings in bold for a reason. Secondly, not allowed to be Mando. considering the entire race is dead and all. Lastly, w.t.f. was that RP sample? No way is this getting accepted smile ~ Seffi
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Posted: Fri Mar 24, 2006 7:09 pm
Gaia name: AngelicWarrior629 Character name: Adrian Starkiller Character Description: Tall, lean, Olive skin, Normal eye color is brown, eye color when channeling the dark side is red, short pitch black hair, one small silver earing in his left ear, Dark Jedi robes. Gender: Male Age: 25 Race: Mandalorian Home Planet: Taris Starting Planet: Corusant Relations: Girlfriend (who he hasn't seen since the Corusant riots) Father(deceased) Mother(still alive) Sister(Jedi) Others that won't be mentioned just yet. Character History: Son of a well known Mandalorian bounty hunter in the Outer Rim Planet of Taris. When he and his sister (Fiora) were found to be Force Sensitive they were sent to the Jedi Academy in Corusant. (much to the father's displeasure) There they were trained to become well rounded Jedi Knights. At the time, Adrian fell in love with a Jedi girl named Jessa, which was forbidden among the Jedi. Although she was relunctant she too fell in love with Adrian as well. His sister, Fiora, couldn't except this and being the opposite of Adrian(well dicsiplined, seeker of justice) she tried to stop him. Ofcourse he didn't listen. Hearing rumors of hidden Sith schools, Adrian, accompanied with his best friend and partner Justinius, he set off to investigate. He soon disappeared for a time and the two emmerged as Dark Jedi. This brought great pain for Jessa considering his last words to her before he left on his mission: " I will never hurt you, and I will return to you." He left on his mission and a year later, he returns, and causes much destruction. The hidden Sith begin to cause a great riot, the likes of which was never seen in the history of Corusant. Thousands died within the chaos. And among the chaos stood Adrian, striking down his foes and anyone standing in his way. He killed many Jedi Knights, most of which, he knew as student aquantences and supposed friends. Even killing his own former Master Dorin by stabbing him in the back as he saved a little girl from falling from a burning building. The violence soon came to the Jedi Academy itself. Sith V.S Jedi. Violence and bloodshed filling the halls. Adrian, killing his share of Jedi as well. War in the streets. Sith V.S. Jedi. This followed by a light saber dual with his sister Fiora, who he almost killed. And even, tragecally, a dual with his beloved Jessa, who he wounded, but then healed her. In light of this, Marcus, his greatest rival before they both turned to the Dark Side. (Marcus being the first to do so) attacked Jessa mortally wounding her. This enraged Adrian, started a heated 30 minute lightsaber dual. Marcus dies by being stabbed in the stomach and then beheaded. After that Adrian, to the surprise of many, started killing Sith! Even his Sith Master, the one who seduced him to the Dark Side. After the bloodshed, Jessa is taken to a healer and is hospitalized. As Adrian leaves her in her sick bed, he leaves and become a Jedi mercenary, working for the highest bidder. Alighnment: Dark Side (though does not have an alliance with the Sith, Republic, or Jedi) Occupation: Dark Jedi/Mercenary Skills: Lightsaber use and Force use self healing ability(which all Mandalorians have due to an implant) Weapens: One Single Bladed Red lightsaber Ship: Oblivion (name of the ship he gave for his ship is a modified Drak Jedi Starfighter) Personal Belongings: His credits ^ ^ And a gold chain Roleplay Sample: Tatooine. In a bar. Adrian sits at a table drinikng his drink and watching the Twilek dancers. He has just won a game of Pazaak from a self proclaimed champion. (cheated) And is now relaxing. Suddenly a bunch of Sith assasins emerge from the crowd and threaten Adrian. Adrian: "What? You guys are still after me? After all the good times we been through!" (this obviously mean that he killed the other assasins that went after him earlier) Heavily angered, the leader yells, "You will pay for your treason!" Look at them nonchalantly, Adrian replies, "Yeah yeah. Don't they all pay? Jeez." He calmly gets up. The 5 assasins take out their double bladed red lightsabers, and get ready to kill. Adrian, sighs then says," Lets get this over with I got stuff to do." He quickly takes out his red lightsaber. The Sith attack. Adrian backward stabs one of the assasins that came from behind and kicks him away as he falls on a shocked patron's table. Two other assasins attack at the same time. Adrian jumps on bar table avoiding an incoming strike and uses the force to grab a table and flings it at the assasins. As the other assasin dodged one gets hit in the head with the table. While the fool is in a daze Adrian beheads Sith Assasin.The otherr Sith Assasin becomes enraged and force jumps to Adrian. Adrian uses force lightning and blows the guy across the room. He then force jumps to him and lightsaber fights him as he lays on the ground in pain. In a matter of minutes Adrian stabs his abdomen, killing him. The last two assasins begin to attack Adrian at the same time, however he easily blocks all attacks. In one swoop he slashes one of the assasin's knees. As he bends down in deep agony and pain Adrian grabs the other assasin and stabs him continueously in the stomach 4 times thenafter a quick lunge he kicks him away. Adrian's eyes glow bright red. Sith Assasin says,"You'll regret this!!!" Adrian Silence. He coldly slits the assasin's throat.
Adrian, watches and the patrons are in a slight panic(espeacially considring that Force users are heavily feared these days) The bar manager starts to make a fuss on the mess made. Adrian leaves quietly before more trouble starts.
Same as above, just without the RP sample complaint. Ain't gonna read the RP sample until the other bits are changed ~ Seffi surprised
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Posted: Sat Mar 25, 2006 9:46 pm
1. gaianame-soonerboyjc 2. charactername-tidus 3.gender-male 4. age-17 5. race-sith 6. character description- young brown hair blue eyes robtical foot sliced from light saber 7. home planet-naboo 8. starting planet-tatoonie 9. relations- sister rebublic jedi wich does not no about 10. character history- born on naboo in a small vilage. then moved to tatoonie where he learned the powers of the dark side 11. alignment- to the sith 12. ocupation- sith aprentice 13. skills- piloting, saber moves 14. weapons- light saber, fusion cutter 15. ship- star fight 16. personal belongings- droid 17.role play sample- *walks into rebubllic base* meets up with rebulic soldiers your no match for the dark side * roles pulls out light saber reflecting blaster shots throws light saber at him* walks into engine room where is shot by auto turrents and is temperarely knocked out.
wakes up in rebublic fighter restrained then quickly busts through them in search of slight saber. kills rebublic soldier and puts on suit. walks in control room wich there finds his light saber. little did he know it was guarded by rebublic captin. so you think u can stop me. pulls out light saber. republic captin- your to much of a threat to let go and pulls out his blaster rifle and starts shootin at Tiduses wounded spot. tidus tries to block it but cant to and gets shot and falls. republic captin- now u must die and takes his light saber holds it at throught but just in time tiduses trusty droid showed up and shot him in the head instantly killing him wich from there they got in there star fighter and flew to the safety of koribian.
Can't be the Sith race, they died out ages ago. On the same note, you can't be the Sith Apprentice, there are only two Sith at a time, and we already have both slots covered in the RP. I'm not even gonna start on your RP sample, just change it. mrgreen ~ Seffi
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Posted: Mon Mar 27, 2006 7:25 pm
Gaia Name: tarsoin Character Name: Tarsoin R. Tonsuka Gender: Male Age: 26 Race: Human Character Description: 6 feet 3 inchs, Brown messy hair that came down to the back of his neck, White, Blue eyes, Skinny
Home Planet: Tatoonine (sp?)
Starting Planet: Space over Coruscant
Relations: A dad who he has only met once when he was 5 years old. Rumors say he died long ago in a ship crash. Mom died during childbirth, raised by his grandma and grandpa.
Character History He had always been interested by ships and how they worked and flew. When he was little he worked in a small shop that sold junk. He learned most of his tech from his own experimenations and watching others work. One day while he was walking around in a small city, on a remote planet, he came across a vendor who was selling a Jedi Lightsaber that was taken from a Jedi who was killed by blaster fire. He bought he and decided to try to make his way to the Jedi Temple..
Alignment: Neutral as of right now
Occupation Pilot, Mercenary
Skills: Good Piloting skills Good Reaction times?
Weapons: 4 Medium Laser's (Linked in Pairs) 4 Missle tubes, Each armed with 6 missles each Small Blaster
Ship A Modified ARC-170 which he had found when he was 15. He spent several years repairing it and modifying it to where it did not require three pilots anymore by routeing all weapons systems to the front pilot, and making the rear gunner position to be computer targeting by a Astrodroid, however due to the lack of the ability to find a actual droid, that position has yet to be filled or used.
Personal Belongings: None
Roleplay Sample (This will explain his current situation he will be in IF this profile gets accepted..) Tarsoin sighed as flipped a few switchs on the console. He was close to his destination, The Jedi Temple on the planet Coruscant. He glanced down at the lightsaber hanging from his belt and he wondered who was the Jedi it belonged to..He was hoping that the people at the Temple would help him..or at least take it back. He had always had ideas of being a Jedi, but he seriously doubt he would be taken in nor would he have the skills. Still..He would like to know how to use it...
As he sat and thought he didn't realize that another ship had exited from hyperspace and was following him. Not until his communication device began to beep, indicating a incoming message. He fliped it on and a husky voice began to fill the small space he was seated in. Most of it was filled with static, but he had gotten the gist of it. Due to the fact he was holding a lightsaber he now was being considered a Jedi..
"Dam that vendor," Tarsoin thought as he listened "He must have been playing a joke, getting someone to buy it and then reporting them and earning a small reward."
He knew a fight was about to happen. He straightened up and began to turn on his weapon systems. Various lights blinked on and a diagram of his ships power readings, damage reports, system gauges appeared on a small screen. The bounty hunter opened fire and lasers flew by in split seconds. Tarsoin jerked the stick to the side and he tilted in a barrel roll. A distant chime in the background indicated that he was about to be locked on and if that happened he would have more to dodge then just missles. He tilted his nose upwards and rose and at the same time pulled back on the throttle. His ship slowed quickly and the surprised pilot flew past. Tarsoin smiled at his luck with the oldest trick in the book and began to fire volleys of lasers. They scored the side of his ship and smacked into his engines. He barreled rolled and Tarsoin followed close behind. This was going to be harder then he thought...
Suddenly the ship barreled to the side and before Tarsoin could turn in time, he was being chased again. Suddening the chime turned into a whine as his ship was now locked on. Two missles were launched and Tarsoin managed to tilt to the side. One of the missles missed, but the other one was more accurate. It struck the right wing's engine and it was damaged badly. Switching his power down to his weapons systems he let the other ship fly past. Turning on his missle lock, he managed to lock on the speeding ship. He let fly 2 pairs of missles in quick order, They struck their target, sending it spinning and exploding. Tarsoin leaned back in his chair sweating. He quickly reverted power back to his engines and began to plot a course to coruscant. He had one jump left for that damaged engine. He was close enough to reach the planet and perhaps send out a signal to get some help. He tightened his grip on controls and pressed a final button. His ship creaked as it fired into its last jump. The cockpit shook violently and the engine had finnally had enough. The engine along with the rest of the wing broke off. The ship broke out of its speed and finnally eased to a stop. Tarsoin looked at the planet ahead and grinned.. He was finnally there..
Excellent. Although I prefer more paragraphing, and please use double spacing for that. As for an example, I shall help you paragraph abit. ~.~SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 30, 2006 5:54 pm
Gaia Name:kotor39 Character Name: kotor Gender: Male Age: 26 Race: human character Description: he wears a clone trooper's outfit painted black on the chest and red on the head to represent power.
Home Planet: rexyond 3 Starting Planet courscant Relations:No family when born was left in a cave later Maren Rau came to look for lightsaber crystals and spotted young kotor and raised him to be evil Character History trained with a light saber he is also good with pure strength he is wanted in many places and is in courscant to attack the jedi temple and steal there funds
Alignment Sith Occupation mercenary, Assasin, Sith, sith guard, imperial rifleman Skills Force crush, force jump, force lightning, Splitcision accuracy, force grab, force push, sith mind trick sith rage Most everything else
Weapons laser sniper,laser rifle,red lightsaber,laser blaster pistol, staff
Ship small battle cruiser used for destroying small ships and inlitrating
Personal Belongings Black armor, helmet,
Roleplay Sample kotor pulled out his lightsaber and swung at jack?'s head kotor missed though quickly pulled out his staff and slamed near jack's face kotor throws it again leading right to jack's face...
Obviously.... NO! You also had been posting before you were accepted. And with obvious no respect for the rules. If you want to be accepted, at least better your Roleplay Sample. Use punctuation pleaseee.~SK
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Posted: Sun Apr 02, 2006 5:11 pm
Gaia Name: tta1995 Character Name: Ken Darklighter Gender: Male Age: 16 Race: Human Character Description: civilian clothing Home Planet: Tatooine Starting Planet: Tatooine Relations: family died Character History Used to be a jedi a sith jacked him up so he had mechanical parts put on him but he didnt like the rules he had to follow so he left the jedi and became a bounty hunter using his skills to help him with hunting Alignment: Nuetral Occupation Bounty Hunter Skills: Piloting, Mechanics, Bounty Hunting Weapons: Blue lightsaber, Stun Gun, Wire Cable, Poison Darts, Blaster Rifle and Pistol Ship Slave 1 Personal Belongings: Mandalorian Armor, laptop that allows him to see all the current bounties Roleplay Sample Ken jumped out of the ship as soon as it touched the ground. Im coming for you Tycho He shot his cord at him and tycho got trapped in it. Nice Try Noone gets away from Ken Darklighter He dragged him into the cargo bay of his ship then he got in himself. He flew off to Tattoine where Jabba the Hutt had madfe the bounty. Here is Tycho Thul Jabba now wheres the 2k credits you promisedErm... Okay... But when really rping, try to paragraph them out. Accepted. ~SK
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