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 Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 9:56 am
Trying this again >.<
A cold burst of air hit him as he opened the door. He closes the door and mubbles to himself as he goes to get another jacket. He puts on the other jacket, thinking the Kage better have a good reason for him to go see her. shuting the door behind him he takes off in full speed to get to the Kage's office asap.
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 4:03 pm
ivory_vamp Rhunon Tatsuhiko RP Sample Rhunon almost jumped from surprise but he still couldnt move verry much, "you just love sneeking up on people dont you?" Rhunon tryed to move his arm to his pocket but to no avail, "I cant reach it but its in my right pocket." He tried to relese the small dagger hidden in his poket but it had become stuck. He finally broke the dagger free and threw it at Kaire. Hopefully this one is better. Mardore entered his office. As he sat at his desk he thought about who he will give missions to. Mardore dosed off into a day dream, he was walking along a hidden path in the forest. Then he heard a strange noise coming from the background. All of a sudden a knife went wizzing pass a woman into a mans cheast. A short scream escaped his lips "NO!!!!!!!!!!!FATHER." Another knife hit the womans chest as she fell on top of the body of his father. "MOTHER." But it was to late, nothing could be done. Mardore looked up to meet the eyes of his parents killer. "Argh!!!" Mardore woke from his day dream, sweat dripping down his forhead. "I will never forget the night my parents were killed, Mother and Father I will avenge your death as I promised on that day." Mardore found himself weeping at his desk as the memory flashed through kis eyes again
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Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 9:11 pm
RP Sample:
Yumi Otosa pushed open the window to her bedroom and stepped out onto the roof of her apartment. There was a slight breeze and Yumi pulled her jacket tighter around her for warmth. She crossed to the edge of the roof and sat down with her feet hanging off. She used one hand to brace herself as she stared up at the crescent mood. Yumi would often go out on the roof to think things over, tomorrow would be her first day as a Genin, and it meant one step closer to reaching her dream. A cloud obscured the moon from view for the most part and Yumi decided it was time to go inside and get some rest, tomorrow would be a long day.
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 2:10 pm
I haven't been accepted into a village yet but my character's name is Jas Une. His nickname is Wrath.
RP Sample:
Wrath leaped from one branch to the next. After traveling 20 kilometers((12 miles)) around his village he stopped on a sturdy branch and gazed at his town and thought, I hate patrol duty. I thought it was Zuia's turn to patrol the village anyway. After a brief moment of day dreaming Wrath continued his patrol.
While Wrath was traveling he heard a rustling from down bellow. He stopped and waited to see what caused it and readied his shuriken as a precaution. A couple seconds later two children came running out of the brush giggling. It was a small boy and girl that looked to be around the age of six.
Wrath jumped down landing on both his feet.
He stood in front of them and demanded to know why they were so far away from the village.
Wrath noticed that they began to stutter. W..w..we w..were just pl..playing and got l..lost sir."
"Well your not supposed to be this far away from the village so I am taking the both of you back now." Wrath was annoyed because now he had another job to do. Escorting these two children back to town.
Wrath grabbed them by the back of their shirts and walked them back into town and left them at the ninja academy for their teacher to deal with them.
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 5:47 am
Galileo17 ivory_vamp Rhunon Tatsuhiko RP Sample Rhunon almost jumped from surprise but he still couldnt move verry much, "you just love sneeking up on people dont you?" Rhunon tryed to move his arm to his pocket but to no avail, "I cant reach it but its in my right pocket." He tried to relese the small dagger hidden in his poket but it had become stuck. He finally broke the dagger free and threw it at Kaire. Hopefully this one is better. Mardore entered his office. As he sat at his desk he thought about who he will give missions to. Mardore dosed off into a day dream, he was walking along a hidden path in the forest. Then he heard a strange noise coming from the background. All of a sudden a knife went wizzing pass a woman into a mans cheast. A short scream escaped his lips "NO!!!!!!!!!!!FATHER." Another knife hit the womans chest as she fell on top of the body of his father. "MOTHER." But it was to late, nothing could be done. Mardore looked up to meet the eyes of his parents killer. "Argh!!!" Mardore woke from his day dream, sweat dripping down his forhead. "I will never forget the night my parents were killed, Mother and Father I will avenge your death as I promised on that day." Mardore found himself weeping at his desk as the memory flashed through kis eyes again Passu desu. Like I said, try not to over do the tragic past though ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 5:49 am
LadyEliza RP Sample: Yumi Otosa pushed open the window to her bedroom and stepped out onto the roof of her apartment. There was a slight breeze and Yumi pulled her jacket tighter around her for warmth. She crossed to the edge of the roof and sat down with her feet hanging off. She used one hand to brace herself as she stared up at the crescent mood. Yumi would often go out on the roof to think things over, tomorrow would be her first day as a Genin, and it meant one step closer to reaching her dream. A cloud obscured the moon from view for the most part and Yumi decided it was time to go inside and get some rest, tomorrow would be a long day. Pass 3nodding Of course you'll still have to go through the whole Academy Student training thing once you join a village but yea ^_^
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 5:52 am
Nagaharu Ishikawa Trying this again >.< A cold burst of air hit him as he opened the door. He closes the door and mubbles to himself as he goes to get another jacket. He puts on the other jacket, thinking the Kage better have a good reason for him to go see her. shuting the door behind him he takes off in full speed to get to the Kage's office asap. I think this is a little short but it works I guess. Pass, but try to lengthen things up ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 5:53 am
Bromisto I haven't been accepted into a village yet but my character's name is Jas Une. His nickname is Wrath.RP Sample:Wrath leaped from one branch to the next. After traveling 20 kilometers((12 miles)) around his village he stopped on a sturdy branch and gazed at his town and thought, I hate patrol duty. I thought it was Zuia's turn to patrol the village anyway. After a brief moment of day dreaming Wrath continued his patrol. While Wrath was traveling he heard a rustling from down bellow. He stopped and waited to see what caused it and readied his shuriken as a precaution. A couple seconds later two children came running out of the brush giggling. It was a small boy and girl that looked to be around the age of six. Wrath jumped down landing on both his feet. He stood in front of them and demanded to know why they were so far away from the village. Wrath noticed that they began to stutter. W..w..we w..were just pl..playing and got l..lost sir.""Well your not supposed to be this far away from the village so I am taking the both of you back now." Wrath was annoyed because now he had another job to do. Escorting these two children back to town. Wrath grabbed them by the back of their shirts and walked them back into town and left them at the ninja academy for their teacher to deal with them. Pass! I like it 3nodding
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 12:08 pm
RP Sample
Rin was jumping from limb to limb trying to escape from this mysterious ninja was follwing her for some time now. She couldn't believe that she only let her guard down for one minute and was attacked out of no where. She kept going for awhile until her body was suddenly giving up on her and she start to slow down. "What, why is my body..." she blurted out *gasp* she suddenly remember when that mysterious ninja hit her with that kunai that he must of had some type of poison on it, "DAMN!!" she yelled to herself. Rin started to slow down while secretly trying to take out a weapon from out of her sack.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 3:19 pm
Yeabsera RP SampleRin was jumping from limb to limb trying to escape from this mysterious ninja was follwing her for some time now. She couldn't believe that she only let her guard down for one minute and was attacked out of no where. She kept going for awhile until her body was suddenly giving up on her and she start to slow down. "What, why is my body..." she blurted out *gasp* she suddenly remember when that mysterious ninja hit her with that kunai that he must of had some type of poison on it, "DAMN!!" she yelled to herself. Rin started to slow down while secretly trying to take out a weapon from out of her sack. Well, instead of using "*gasp*", try using 'she gasped'. We don't use action marks here. ^^ Other than that, it's really good! Pass!
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 3:31 pm
I'd like to try a bit.
Lupin was sitting under a large tree meditating...or so it seemed. If you looked at him it would appear that way, but because of the mask on it was hard to tell but he was actually sleeping. He had done a lot of training the day before and had been sleeping the entire day. A man walks up to him curiously and begins to stare, Lupin's subconcious reacts to the attention he's recieving and he wakes up yelling at the top of his lungs "Stare at me one more minute and I swear I'll rip you to shreads!!!!" The man runs as fast as he can towards his home to report what had just happened.
If it needs more detail or anything else please tell me and I'll try my best.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 3:42 pm
`Lupin I'd like to try a bit. Lupin was sitting under a large tree meditating...or so it seemed. If you looked at him it would appear that way, but because of the mask on it was hard to tell but he was actually sleeping. He had done a lot of training the day before and had been sleeping the entire day. A man walks up to him curiously and begins to stare, Lupin's subconcious reacts to the attention he's recieving and he wakes up yelling at the top of his lungs "Stare at me one more minute and I swear I'll rip you to shreads!!!!" The man runs as fast as he can towards his home to report what had just happened. If it needs more detail or anything else please tell me and I'll try my best. Details fine. ^^ I kinda like it. Pass.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 6:57 pm
RP EXAMPLE
Mikhail yawned as he woke up in the bed at the inn. That was the most rest he had gotten in a long time. He turned and caught a glimpse of Howaiken, his dog, sleeping peaceably at the foot of the bed. The small grey-white dog was pawing at the air, probably dreaming of chasing some unknown feline offender.
Trying not to rouse his only friend from slumber, Mikhail cautiously inched himself out of the bed and pulled his clothes on. A ninja knows no breaktime, unfortunately. Today he would have to piece together another team and start looking into more missions. By the time he had his headband tied, Howaiken was already awake and wagging his tail in excitement.
The pair stepped out of the inn and took a breath of the fresh air. Today was a new day.
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:57 pm
Freakshow_4198 RP EXAMPLEMikhail yawned as he woke up in the bed at the inn. That was the most rest he had gotten in a long time. He turned and caught a glimpse of Howaiken, his dog, sleeping peaceably at the foot of the bed. The small grey-white dog was pawing at the air, probably dreaming of chasing some unknown feline offender.
Trying not to rouse his only friend from slumber, Mikhail cautiously inched himself out of the bed and pulled his clothes on. A ninja knows no breaktime, unfortunately. Today he would have to piece together another team and start looking into more missions. By the time he had his headband tied, Howaiken was already awake and wagging his tail in excitement.
The pair stepped out of the inn and took a breath of the fresh air. Today was a new day. You pass on only one condition...>__> You MUST join Kirigakure!!! lol Just kidding! You pass without question! ^___^ But I really do want you for my village! lol
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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 4:43 am
shizuka_kage Freakshow_4198 RP EXAMPLEMikhail yawned as he woke up in the bed at the inn. That was the most rest he had gotten in a long time. He turned and caught a glimpse of Howaiken, his dog, sleeping peaceably at the foot of the bed. The small grey-white dog was pawing at the air, probably dreaming of chasing some unknown feline offender.
Trying not to rouse his only friend from slumber, Mikhail cautiously inched himself out of the bed and pulled his clothes on. A ninja knows no breaktime, unfortunately. Today he would have to piece together another team and start looking into more missions. By the time he had his headband tied, Howaiken was already awake and wagging his tail in excitement.
The pair stepped out of the inn and took a breath of the fresh air. Today was a new day. You pass on only one condition...>__> You MUST join Kirigakure!!! lol Just kidding! You pass without question! ^___^ But I really do want you for my village! lol It was honestly one of my top choices before you even said anything ^_^ We shall see what happens. A lot of it has to do with what kind of character I want to come up with.
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