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 Posted: Sun Jun 26, 2011 2:24 pm
Character: Shinsetsu Aburame
Technique Name: Yudoku Kikkaichu (Poisonous Destruction Bugs)
Rank: B (Passive Ability)
Type: Bloodline
Element: Null
Description: Due to Mutation, the destruction bugs that inhabits Shinsetsu’s body developed a unique poisonous characteristics that allows them to release deadly poison from their fangs when they bite their target. Though the amount of poison from a single bite isn’t that much big of a threat, being bitten by a large swarm of these Kikkaichus proves to kill an enemy almost instantly.
When a target is bitten by these Kikkaichus they would experience.
Stage 1 = Blurred Vision - when the poison begins to enter the victim's blood stream (After 2 posts)
Stage 2 = Dizziness - when the poison reaches and begins to infect certain nerves inside the body (After 4 posts)
Stage 3 = Cramping of the Muscles - when the poison spreads itself more inside the target’s body due to being carried by the target's blood stream (After 6 posts)
Stage 4 = Paralization of the entire body - occurs when the poison finally destroys the nerves the infected nerves. ( After 8 posts)
Stage 5 = Death - when the poison finally reach the victim’s heart. (10 posts)
If the infected target get's bitten once more by the Kikkaichu bugs, they would skip one stage as more poison enters the blood stream.
(Ex)
Victim is in stage 1 and gets bitten again, he/she would skip stage 2 and proceed to stage 3
In addition, by taking the Kikkaichu's poison and mixing it with the host's chakra, Shinsetsu could easily make an Antidote for it to give to allies or a spared adversary. (costs rank E of chakra to create one antidote)
Because the Kikkaichu bugs inhabited their host’s body for a long period of time, Shinsetsu gained Immunity against their poison and abled his body to have a high tolerance against other type of poison.
Character: Shinsetsu Aburame
Technique Name: Konchū gisei chiyu (Insect sacrificial healing)
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: Null
Description: Utilizing the Aburame’s use of insects, Shinsetsu will send his chakra throughout his body that would kill half of the population of Kikkaichu bugs inside him. These dead insects would then provide large amount of protein and other nutrients inside the host’s body that would be evenly sent into injuries, rapidly repairing damaged muscles, tissues and broken bones which fully restores the user’s body to its usual shape.
Since the user loses half of the insects inside him, it would lower the effects of insect type techniques by [1] one rank.
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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2011 4:14 pm
Approved. As for the rest of you I will get to you when I get a chance
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Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 8:00 pm
Character: Aki
Technique Name: Growth
Rank: C for learning and the first stage.the B,A,S
Type: (Ninjutsu,
Description: Aki increases his size with every rank of the jutsu he uses. at C rank he doubles to 14 feet. at B it triples to 21 feet. at A it is 28 feet.at S it is 34 feet.his strength increases with it and his hearts stay the same size to better hide from attacks. this jutsu only floods his tendrils with chakra so it dosent require hand signs to do.
five posts in the C rank state and each state increases the max posts by one. example B would be seven posts.and so on. each state can be used twice in battle.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:25 pm
You need to list all the ranks and amounts of chakra/growth amount before I can approve this its just to vague as it is.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 7:49 pm
drizzit1121
Character: Aki
Technique Name: Growth
Rank: C for learning and the first stage.the B,A,S
Type: (Ninjutsu,
Description: Aki increases his size with every rank of the jutsu he uses. at C rank he doubles to 14 feet. at B it triples to 21 feet. at A it is 28 feet.at S it is 34 feet.his strength increases with it and his hearts stay the same size to better hide from attacks. this jutsu only floods his tendrils with chakra so it dosent require hand signs to do.
Put a limit on how many times that it can be used as well as the amount of time he can spend in that state ok once you have done that your approved ^.^
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:39 pm
Character: Shin Aburame
Technique Name: Hijutsu: Mushi Chokkan (Insect Instinct)
Rank: B (Passive)
Type: Hijutsu
Element: Bloodline
Description: Mushi Chokkan Is an ability developed by Shin Aburame after a close observation and study about several species of insects. Shin utilizes the unique sensing abilities of the insects that reside inside his body by training to be able to link their highly perceptive qualities into his own. It virtually enables Shin to be aware about anything that the insects inside him perceive, granting the user a higher visual ability and a stronger hearing capability that can detect vibrations and all sorts of other frequencies in the area not sensible to regular human ears which allows him to accurately classify the source of different kinds of noises or sounds emanating around the area.
Note: Like the Byakugan this ability can be turned on and off by the user’s will though it doesn’t cost any chakra since the insects simply provides information they perceive to their host when activated.
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Posted: Thu Jun 30, 2011 5:23 am
Repost~ Character: Shiki Narumi
Technique Name: Shukuchi - Reduced Earth
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu/Passive
Description: Shukuchi is the power of teleportation attributed to some sennin. Those possessing this ability were believed to be capable of moving vast distances in a single step, in reality, one has just trained him/herself to move their entire bodies at amazingly high speeds, rivaling that of the Shunshin. Once one has trained themselves intensely enough, they too will have this ability. ((Some more edit techniques, 1/2 a slot each. Second one replaces Empower - Kyouka)) Character: Shiki Narumi
Technique Name: Shouheki - [Barrier]
Rank to learn: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: An edit technique created by [Character] for Utsuro Fuuin. Once this has been activated, it will form into a flat, solid chakra barrier able to stretch much to amazing lengths. The higher the rank of chakra used, the more it can stretch and the stronger the techniques it can block before breaking. Can take [3] attacks of the same rank or [1] attack of a higher rank before breaking.
D : up to 6ft tall/wide, D rank and below cannot penetrate it.
C : up to 10ft tall/wide, C rank and below cannot penetrate it.
B : up to 12ft tall/wide, B rank and below cannot penetrate it.
A : up to 15ft tall/wide, A rank and below cannot penetrate it.
S : up to 30ft tall/wide, S rank and below cannot penetrate it. Character: -Sealer/Genjutsu-
Technique Name: Armor - [Yoroi]
Rank to learn: B
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: Maruton/Varies
Description: An edit technique made by Shiki for the Utsuro Fuuin. When activated on a seal, creates an effect similar to the Armor techniques of the Kaiser Fist style. The chakra of Utsuro Fuuin will envelop the user in a flame-like shroud that sharply/greatly/significantly increases all physical abilities and reaction time of the target of the seal. Yoroi also acts as a defensive shield that, sharply/greatly/significantly reduces incoming attacks damage. Lasts [8] posts. Effects depend on rank of chakra used. Lowest is B ranked, highest is S. For a bonus [10] chakra it can take one of the elements of the user.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:11 pm
Character: Castiel Dara
Technique Name: Jisatsu no Shokushu[ Explosive Tendrils ]
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Nonton
Description: This Jutsu can only be used by a membor or the Jiongu Clan and someone possing the Oragami No Dara Bloodline. The Jiongu Member will extend several tendrils in which the Dara member will wrap in explosive paper. The Jiongu member will then expand his Tendrils how he wishs and at the right time,the Dara member may detonate at will. The resulting force will destroy the tendrils completely,making this jutsu only able to be used twice in a battle,otherwise the Jiongu member will not be able to use any Clan jutsu for fear of running out of Threading to hold himself together before he can create more
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:32 pm
Character: Castiel Dara
Technique Name: Mind Bending Preformance
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element:
Description: By playing his Mandola for a single person,over extended periods of time multiple times,he can shift the targets perspective,point of view and sometimes perception of others. He could make it so that a person would react this way instead of that,make them think that an evil person is a good man or to convince someone what they are doing is wrong. However if the person goes three days without hearing the music,they will begin to return to normal and if left unchecked will be back to normal within one week. The only people who will recognize what is happening to them as the music is being played is advanced genjutsu users or people of the preformer class
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 2:14 pm
Character: Nameraka Hari
Technique Name: Mirror On The Wall
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Bloodline
Description: Grabbing the mirror from his back, Nameraka performs a chain of handsigns and places his hands on the mirror. The mirror begins to glow brightly and if the opponent looks at the bright mirror at his relfection, then he is pulled into the Genjutsu. When he opens his eyes, he is in complete darkness where the only light shines on him. Nameraka appears and says the phrase 'Mirror Mirror on the Wall, Your death will be the worst of all...' The opponent will suddenly appears inside of the mirror and begin to see life past him by. The opponent will see himself and watches as he is killed in a horrible manner. Once the genjutsu ends, the opponent will be in shock and in fear, usually unable to move due to horror that just saw.
Technique Name: House Of Mirrors
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Bloodline
Description: Nameraka performs a few handsigns then places them on his mirror. If the opponent looks at the mirror and sees their reflection, then the genjutsu begins. The opponent suddenly appears in darkness with a spotlight on him. Suddenly, spotlights click on over 3 mirrors behind curtains and one more spotlight on Nameraka. After some talk, Nameraka snaps and one by one, the curtain flies up and reveals the fear of the opponent in the first two mirrors. The last mirror reveals the death of a loved one whether it is a friend, a family member, or a teammate, they will die in a horrible death. This genjutsu usually leaves the opponent devastated and in shock. This can also be used for torture and interrogation.
Technique Name: Reflection Glass
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Bloodline
Description: Performing quick hand signs, a large mirror forms in front of Nameraka. This large mirror can reflect any Rank A ninjutsu/genjutsu technique and amplify its power by knocking up one rank up to Rank A. This technique does not work on taijutsu or bukijutsu but glass will shatter on top of the opponent on impact. Shatters after reflection.
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Posted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:09 pm
Character: Saku Nara
Technique Name: Bound with the Shadows
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kageton
Description: The user would conceal himself in shadows as he would focus his chakra on a shadow on the wall or possible the his/her own if no other shadows are present. While within the shadows the user is resiliant to all ninjutsu attacks but Katon and Raiton. The attack will instantly knock him free hiwever no danage shall be taken diue to the attack not actually hitting him. The user may also pull his or her opponent into the shadows trapping them with his shadows. (last five posts)
Character: Saku Nara
Technique Name: From the Shadows of Death
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kageton
Description: After Being trapped inside the shadows from the technique "Bound with the Shadows" the user would summon two shadow blades one on each hand. The user would then attack the most vital points of his opponents body such as the biceps and the quads. After the attack the shadows would be dispersed as the user and the oppoenet return to the reality as the oppenent would find it hard to stand afterwards.
Character: Saku Nara
Technique Name: Creation of Shadows
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Kageton
Description: The user while in this mode will be able to create shadows upon request no matter if there is light present or not. This technique take two posts to begin and lasts for ten posts. However this technique requires great focus and can only be preformed once per fight.
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 8:42 pm
[ Finger: } Approved.
[ Desin: }_____
[ Reduced Earth: } What exactly is the point of this then?
[ Barrier: } Approved.
[ Armor: } I'd really rather you not have this technique. As it is we're having complications with the Kaiser Fist style at this time.
[ Fall: }_____
[ Explosive Tendrils: } Mmm... the restriction ( last warning ) seems a bit wonky, but I suppose it works. Approved.
[ Mind Bending Performance: } If you shrink the recovery time to two days, I think it'll do. With that change, approved.
[ Regi: }_____
[ Mirror otW: } Element should just be "Bloodline." Approved.
[ House of Mirrors: } Should probably clarify or add into the description that they have to see their reflection in the mirror. With that change, approved.
[ Mirror World: } Aaaah... I think I have to deny this. Aside it being ridiculously powerful, you said in the description itself that it was based on another anime.
[ Reflection Glass: } You should note that it could still be used as a barrier to protect against taijutsu or bukijutsu- the attack will simply cause the mirror to shatter on top of them. Approved.
[ Perfect Prism: } The actual purpose of the technique needs clarification. Make it apparent what the attack part of it is.
[ Anbu: }_____
[ Bound with Shadows: } If you make it so he's immune to physical techniques, but can still be knocked out by elemental ninjutsu, it's fine. Though, you should also make sure you clarify how long you're in shadow form, and how long the opponent can be trapped. I'd probably say 5 for you, and 2 for the trap.
[ FtSoD: } If I'm not mistaken, this attack is redundant as the clan can already make shadow blades.
[ Creation of Shadows: } Change the duration to eight posts, and it's fine.
[ Licky: } W-what are you doing in here? You're a crew member girly. > . <
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 3:52 am
Reduced Earth : Ability to move at shunshin speeds, just like Ergo's technique. o.o
Armor : I see, I see. Very well then.
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 8:55 am
W-which of Ergo's techniques now? And, what's the difference between just using Shunshin? Or, is this for battle purposes and junk?
Thank you.
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