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 Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:13 pm
I am not going threw this again...
Fix what I have asked or you are denied
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:14 pm
then what am i missing from my good sample?
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:24 pm
Just add more of the clans abilitys, for me to be sure you can use all/most of them correcly then I need to see it in your sample.
Read threw the Hyuuga Clan post untill you understand everything and then edit with a better description of your abilitys.
If you need help after, and only after you have read the clan post then PM me.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:27 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:33 pm
Sorry just got done reading yours, it seems as tho you know the clan well enough and I liked the story if that is the same type of RPC you will be useing i think it would be pretty cool.
So you are approved Greg, hope to see your Profile up for approval soon.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:36 pm
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:47 pm
edited~ not the sample though~ can't understand the hyuuga's justu without a description of what it is..
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:51 pm
You are approved minty the jutsu are being looked over atm moment and should be up with descriptos soon
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:06 pm
ok thanks
edit~finsiehd weapon appilcation toooooo xD
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:54 pm
This kid right here, just finished the RP sample. He didn't want to write a story, so he got to the point asap. If you want a re-write, then go ahead and tell me to add more... but I displayed the intel and the shadow abilities. The main things about the Nara clan members.
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:17 pm
You forgot that what every you do the person cought in your shadow does....
If you can manage to remeber that then you did ok i you can use this clan
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:13 pm
Lol. I know. I believe that she would have done the seals, but not been expelling chakra. You also forgot that will power can beat it, that's how she was able to release the grip of the hand...
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:38 pm
I ment when you walked toward her she would walk toward you as well.... but you also didnt post that in the sample so how was I supposed to know?
If you didn't post it it didnt happen remeber that
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Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:55 pm
When Dealing With The Insane,
lmao. I was rushing the post... had to go clothes shopping. My bad XD
The Best Method Is To Pretend To Be Sane.
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