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 Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:49 pm
Over powered
i think this on the fact that the durability only really suits taijutsu users. If it wasnt for my Bijuu I would have had Havik use that clan. Their is just nothing of the clan that helps anyother class besides a weapon master.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 6:42 pm
Defined By Spontaneity Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier. This can only be maintained for three posts due to the amount chakra control required for its effect.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Touch
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals. The user will touch the opponent, and in a sense "stop" the movement of chakra in their body for two posts, or continually if the user maintains their palm on the opponent.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Touch
Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. Placing a palm on an ally, their chakra is augmented, increasing the rank of all chakra techniques by one. This can only go on for two posts if contact is disconnected, it will be maintained if the palm is held on them.
Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator. The balls of chakra are roughly the size of softballs, and burn to the touch with explosive effect. The dragon may fire a total of ten, before it dissipates. The dragon lasts for ten posts.Edited once more... STOP ******** FLOODING. PLEASE and thank you. Damnit.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 6:45 pm
Defined By Spontaneity Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Weak Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. This is restricted to Medical-class nins only.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent's wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to spread. There may only be very bad stinging pain.
Technique Name: Cellular-degeneration: Minor
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, cells are pulled from them. This has no lasting effect on life force. This causes moderate pain in the affected area.
Technique Name: Trauma Relief
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be directly over the person. Can not perform to oneself. Anyone may learn this technique, of any classification.
Technique Description: Aaron developed this technique, based on what he had seen within the Sound dojo. There was more to healing, than merely closing wounds and making momentary sealing of pain. By performing a mere three handseals, one is capable of placing both hand on the patient's head. This allows them to soothe the patient's mental status. Clearing the patient of all sorrow, all pain, all anger, they may free them of insanity, and traumatic stress. This also relieves the patient of lasting genjutsu effects up to Jounin in rank, costing equivalent chakra to the genjutsu used, additionally. This is only temporary, after five posts, they will have to deal with their mental instability once more.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Minor
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the weakest form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 15% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Major
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the middle form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 25% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Cellular-degeneration: Major
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, cells are pulled from them. A larger amount is taken this time. This has a minor lasting effect on life force. This is an advanced amount, this time causing severe pain.
Technique Name: Adrenaline Jump-start
Technique Type(s): Support, buff
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Person must be able to handle stinging pain. It can be used on oneself. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique.
Technique Description: Aaron developed an ability to make use of advanced medicine. He wanted to be able to keep people going, even after they had fallen incapacitated in battle. Using a scalpel, preferably the Chakra Scalpel, one may create tiny incision. From there, a unique salve in the form of a medicinal powder is placed upon the open wound. It directly enters the bloodstream, and will awaken an unconscious patient. It it used in conjunction with Healing Hands Technique. From there, their heart rate jumps, and they are able to function once more, for a short duration of five posts. Must be used as soon as the ally had passed out.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Superior
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the max form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 30% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Deadly Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to rapidly spread. This causes severe inflammatory pain, potential convulsions, and heavy coughing.
Technique Name: Cellular Genesis
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Sannin/Kage
Technique Requirement(s): Must exert chakra and manipulate living cells, forcing mitosis and meiosis to double in division. Can not lose focus. Must have chakra control as main strength. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron was tired of seeing ninjas return home without limbs, or missing parts of their face. By delving deep into the study of cellular growth and division, he was able to create a technique that exceeds the laws of medical science, thus making him re-known in history forever. Breaking the barrier of cell fiction and fact, he found a way to grow back body parts. Performing a long series of handseals (roughly twenty-five), Aaron will pool a large amount of his maximum chakra over an area missing something. This is done, by using a previous tissue sample. If possible, a large clump would be even more effective. By knowing its genetic make-up, and having an envisioned appearance of it in his mind, he is able to rebuild the bone, then the cells, then the tissues, muscles, and finally the dermal layer of skin. The body will take time getting used to the new part, but it will not reject it. ((Editations for the 2nd set of techniques)) DO NOT FLOOD, PLEASE.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:55 pm
Hey def since Cobra was the one looking over your jutsu why dont you send him a pm instead of reposting you jutsu a s**t load of times.
There is a good chance he has forgotton due to the fact he is planning a wedding and all, it would be far more effective if he received a PM.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:07 am
Def:
Everything is approved except for Adrenaline Jump.
...make sure you incorporate an actual technique involved with it besides simply the drug's concoction. Otherwise, it wouldn't make any sense that no one but medical class ninja could use it.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:46 am
Deil:
1. Psychometry: TI agree with havik. I don't think its appropriate for the bloodline to be able to gather information so easily. It doesn't sound like the sort of a technique a group of bloodthirsty fighting maniacs would create, and it is a bit Over-powered as well.
3. Oxygen Efficiency: I also disagree with parts of this technique. I can understand boosting your ability in a low-oxygen environment, I have no problem with that... but allowing it to ALSO function to give you a BIG boost the MAJORITY of the time, when oxygen is plentiful, is a bit over powered. It should never EVER increase your effective rank by 2 ranks... that's just broke in terms of SPEED and POWER. I can buy it for 1 rank up, and for only 2 posts, sounds good to me. (Fuuton element doesn't need to be a primary prerequisite either... as its more of a physical change then a wind change).
There are also several innate problems with your descriptions...
Air is Air. At all times, it is roughly 78% Nitrogen, 21% oxygen, 0.9% Argon, .03% Carbon Dioxide... and the rest are trace elements.
There is no situation or place where the air has a different composition. The reason why humans and other mammals have a hard time breathing at higher altitudes has to do with the decreased partial pressure of oxygen at high altitudes and the effect that has on the saturation of our Red Blood Cell's hemoglobin. (In fact if the air was 100% oxygen, we'd all die, as Oxygen in it's purest form is poisonous to us)
...that being said, there is no place where Oxygen is "more plentiful" then others, or where it can be found at higher percentages.
what really boosts an athlete's ability to perform at sea level, when they have been training in the mountains is an increased level of Red Blood Cells and other blood chemicals which I wont go into, which allow you to carry more oxygen to your muscles and fuel them for longer. the effect of this jutsu should focus on the concept of increasing the body's capability by:
1. Temporarily increasing the number of Red Blood Cells.
2. Multiplying the number of Mitochondria in their muscles.
3. Increasing the connections of blood vessels to the muscles themselves.
...I'm imagining some kind of induced, chakra based cellular multiplication (similar to opening gates, but not as drastic). the increased connections could be chakra-based muscle strands which temporarily supply the body with more routes for the increased energy to flow.
using a technique like this should tire you out though and leave you somewhat drained after it's use (similar to how the Hurricane Kick technique works)
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 8:36 am
O.k. so I said it needed to be used with Healing Hands Technique, hence why no other class can perform it.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:23 am
RPC Name:Kingu Shisui
RPC Rank:Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Soul Removal
Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai
Element: Yin-Yang
Chakra Cost: A
Range of Jutsu: Personal/Close
Description:
In order to properly use this technique, certain requirements must be met. First, the user must maintain contact with the organism whose soul they are removing. Secondly if their hold is displaced, even temporarily, the jutsu starts over. Third, the jutsu takes time to use and only in rare conditions does it happen instantly.
With this in mind once the user grasp the target they must hold on for three posts before they finally grasp the soul. On the third post the victims soul is violently removed and drawn into the user's body, transferring experience and memories. If the victim is heavily fatigued (less 15 chakra points remaining), the user may take two posts to extract the soul.
The victim is free to struggle but the user will often bind or trap the victim so they may safely extract the soul. Soul extraction means instant death through the sudden decaying of the victims body. To combat this extraction the victim may engage in a battle where they require both Durability (to hold on tightly to their soul) and Chakra Control (to fight the extraction). Starting at secondary strength for every tier Durability lies on extra post is required for extraction. If chakra control is a strength the victim may will cause the jutsu to require 3 extra chakra points to execute per ranking. However if chakra control is a weakness of the victim the user may pay 3 less points depending on their own chakra control strength starting at secondary. If the user pays more than 6 extra chakra points or two extra posts for extraction the jutsu forecefully cancels and the soul of their forearm is torn asunder, leaving the limb COMPLETELY useless due to a swift decaying effect. The limb also begins to secrete a painful toxin until it's removal, causing the body to experience intense pain and make jutsu use impossible.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:57 am
Completely and Utterly denied.
If not for solely this reason:Martin_Spiralwave Soul extraction means instant death through the sudden decaying of the victims body.
...also, for the following reasons:
1. This is not an A-rank technique... it's S-ranked or higher, AT LEAST.
2. You've very obviously taken the concept of the "Dead Demon Consuming Seal" that Hiruzen used in the series and reworded it so that it's not a sealing jutsu.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:15 pm
I'm alright with it being S-rank, this is a Rinnegan technique I didn't plan on autolearning. Yin-Yang is an element, and a canon one at that. I've actually taken Nagato's Soul Removal and given it mechanics. I used part of the Dead Demon Consuming Seal to give it a weakness. Unless you'd rather the technique not have that part?
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 1:50 pm
As I've said before, I'd rather the technique not exist.
...I don't even think people should be allowed to have the Rinnegan. As is however, I have to deal. However, what I can do is deny things which would auto-kill people, which I'm doing in this case.
The Rinnegan, and it's PATHS are broken enough as is, we don't need to add the 15 jutsu that Pein used... all Nature Manipulations and Paths should be enough.
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Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:19 pm
RPC Name:Kingu Shisui
RPC Rank:Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Frigid Wind
Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Chakra Cost: C
Range of Jutsu:
Description: Chakra Control as a strength is required for this jutsu.
The user projects an intense wave of coldness from their body, causing a sudden drop in ambient temperatures and the formation of ice constructs that are fired as projectiles towards the enemy. The temperature drops by around 10 degrees every use and it does effect the user, especially due to their proximity to the freezing winds.
This technique can be used on water jutsu up to B-rank and can completely stop them in their tracks. On an enemy the effects enough to lower the victims speed by a single level [secondary to tertiary strength] and make it impossible to concentrate during the wave.
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Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:35 am
Jutsu Name: 1bi akuma kurÅku gijutsu (One Tailed Demon Cloak technique)
Jutsu Rank: S
Use: Restricted. (I have to teach you this technique, no one else can teach it to you...)
Range: the user
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Chakra
Description: This technique is very harmful to the user. After making the required hand signs the user will expel a huge amount (about half) of visible chakra from their body and make it surround them like a Tailed demons (one tailed) cloak.The users appearance changes a little bit and shows more of their demonic side which include: black rings around the more berserk-looking eyes, longer nails, and canine-like features. This form also came with an additional bonus: the chakra becomes a complete shield around the users body, in the shape of a fox (like Naruto's), complete with long ears and a tail, known as the demon fox cloak. The chakra cloak can only be broken through by a B-rank technique or 3 C-ranked techniques. This technique does come with a few drawbacks:
1) it damages the users body and can kill them if used too much.
2) the cloak can only be used for a small amount of time before the user dies (20 posts). If the user deactivated the cloak before their time is out (10 posts or sooner) then they can survive as long as they get to a hospital right away.
3) this cloak can only be used once a day (this is so that the user can regain all of the lost chakra so that they are able to use it again when needed).
(( Ok... i can edit this or delete it if needed...))
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Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:34 pm
RPC Name:Kingu Shisui
RPC Rank:Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Shinra Tense & Bansho Ten'nin
Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Chakra Cost: B
Range of Jutsu: 50 meters
Description:
The user directly channels an impressive amount of chakra to excite nearbye molecules in order to generate a high velocity wave that seems to negate the mass of the objects it strikes. Generally Shinra Tense is capable of pulverizing or at least negating anything in it's path and commonly delivers serious blunt force damage. On an enemy ninja common ailments are severly damaged/broken bones. The only barriers capable of standiong up to Shinra Tense must be at S-ranked.
Howver despite this certain ninja can push on past this impressive jutsu. Shinobi with durability as a primary strength are able to take the full force of Shinra Tense without being flung off their feet and only receiving moderate bruising but three direct blasts will result in the breaking of bones. Bijuu with durability as a primary strength or if they have excelled 5 tailed transformation, are capable of receiving a direct Shinra Tensei and send it rebounding back towards the user IF they are properly secured to the ground.
Shinra Tensei can only be used every other post but Bansho Ten'nin does not suffer from this same problem.
Bansho Ten'nin creates a powerful vacuum force that draws objects and organisms towards the user. The user is capable of controlling how many items are pulled towards them ranging from a single person to a small group of ninja. However despite this shinobi with strength as a primary strength can greatly resist the pull of Bansho Ten'nin, only sliding along the ground a few meters instead of being dragged off their feet.
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Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 2:11 pm
Martin Spiralwave RPC Name:Kingu Shisui RPC Rank:Chuunin Name of Jutsu: Frigid Wind Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu Element: Wind Chakra Cost: C Range of Jutsu: Description: Chakra Control as a strength is required for this jutsu. The user projects an intense wave of coldness from their body, causing a sudden drop in ambient temperatures and the formation of ice constructs that are fired as projectiles towards the enemy. The temperature drops by around 10 degrees every use and it does effect the user, especially due to their proximity to the freezing winds. This technique can be used on water jutsu up to B-rank and can completely stop them in their tracks. On an enemy the effects enough to lower the victims speed by a single level [secondary to tertiary strength] and make it impossible to concentrate during the wave. I think that any jutsu having "cold" as the primary effect should be reserved to the Hyouton bloodline. Sorry, but I would prefer not to let the uniqueness of the Hyouton bloodline be stolen by another bloodline. Cold is a bloodline technique of the Hyouton, and therefore should not be available to anything other than that bloodline. Therefore, unless another mod thinks I am being unrealistic, denied is the verdict.
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