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You're missing 4 distribution points for stats.
Exp should be out of 100. (0/100)
WIth your stats the way they are now, Hp should be 8 (Con mod should be -2)

I'm feeling a sense of deja vu razz

Anyway, makes those changes and I will approve you.

]http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=22114557
Haha I was wondering about that!

Ummm, your Kaguya clan bonuses/penalties. Should be added on to the stat, not BE the stat. You don't set it out very clearly. It should be 20 points distributed, then apply the clan modifiers to the stat. So, 1.3 x 13 = final Con score. 0.8 x 8 = final Wis score. 0.9 x 9 = final Int score. (Or you can move things round to get the best config)

Haha I was wondering about that!

Ummm, your Kaguya clan bonuses/penalties. Should be added on to the stat, not BE the stat. You don't set it out very clearly. It should be 20 points distributed, then apply the clan modifiers to the stat. So, 1.3 x 13 = final Con score. 0.8 x 8 = final Wis score. 0.9 x 9 = final Int score. (Or you can move things round to get the best config)

ok so it should look like:
b]Constitution: 10x1.3= 13
Intelligence: 10x0.9= 9
Wisdom: 10x0.8= 8
(before i had originally added the kaguya bonuses all the stats were at 10)
Yes, please keep the clan modifiers in your profile smile OK.

Con mod should be +1.
Dodge Bonus should be 9.
Fort should be Base Save + con mod = 1.
Will should be Base Save + wis mod = -1.

Hp should be 10 + con mod = 11.

Fix that and you're good to go!

Also, I can't speak for Gid for sure, but I think he would appreciate it if you just put a link to your profile in the Kirigakure shinobi scroll just to make it easier for Kages/other RPCs of Kirigakure to find your profile. Or it would be even better if you moved it there actually, but if you're storing your post format/whatever in your profile thread, it's cool smile

sweet beans, head to academy whenever smile to meet the incredibly hot boom boom! rofl

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Actual Name: Tamakeri
NickName/CallName:Tama, Tamako, or Takoko
Village: kirigakure
Clan/Bloodline: Uminezumi
Element Affinity: Water
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Rank: academy student



Headband: none
Height: fun size
Weight: 60 lbs?
Hair: black
Eyes: green
Physical Description:
Clothing:
Background: A brat child from the Minamiyami clan. Her criminal record scroll weighs more than her school records.
Personality: She doesn't care much for authority or really anything that doesn't give her whatever she wants which she rarely gets.
Other:

Missions:

S:
A:
B:
C:
D:

Jutsu:

Ninjutsu-

Medical Ninjutsu-

Genjutsu-

Taijutsu-

Summoning Contract-


LV. 1
Experience: 0
Hp: 8
Cp: 3
MHp: 8

>>>PLEASE ARRANGE YOUR STATS CLEARLY SHOWING WHICH POINTS WERE GAINED FROM TRAINING AND WHICH POINTS WERE GAINED FROM LEVEL UP, THANKS.<<<
base/level bonus/Training/ditributed
Strength: 6+0+0+1=7 Mod: -2
Dexterity: 6+0+0+5=11 Mod: 0
Constitution: 6+0+0+0=6 Mod: -2
Intelligence: 6+0+0+4=10 Mod: 0
Wisdom: 6+0+0+0=6 Mod: -2
Charisma: 6+0+0+8=14 Mod: 2
Chakra: 6+0+0+2=8 Mod: -1
Dodge Bonus: 8

Base Attack Bonus: 1
Attack Melee: -1
Attack Ranged: 1

Base Save Bonus: 0
Fort: 6
Rex: 8
Will: 6



Ninja Skills [Mundane] ((Modified By)):

Acrobatics (Dex): 3
Alchemy (Int):
Awareness (Wis):
Athletics (Str): 2
Chakra Control (Int): 1
Concentration (Con):
Craft (Int):
Diplomacy (Cha): 2
Escape Artist (Dex): 2
Handle Animal (Cha):
Innuendo (Cha):
Intimidate (Cha):
Perform (Cha): 2
Read Lips (Wis):
Seduction (Cha): 3
Sense Motive (Wis): 1
Sleight of Hand (Dex): 1
Stealth (Dex): 1
Survival (Wis): 2
Treat Injury (Int):


Ninja Skills [Passive] ((No Modifiers)):

Ninja Weapons:
Taijutsu:
Ninjutsu:
Medical Ninjutsu:
Genjutsu:
Fuuin Jutsu:
Sneak Attack:
Puppet Play:



Money:

Ryo:

Equipment:


Valuables


Name of the contract:
Nature of the summons:
Description:
Origin:
Signature form: Body tattoos [family tattoo]
4 of any various crimal acts [theft, assault, seal clubbing, battery, murder, peeping, cowtipping, con-artistry, disrespecting authority, rick-rolling, groundhog stomping, vandalism, and other potentially heinous acts]
being of the Uminezumi family line, surviving until age ten (as long as you are around for ten years it doesn't matter if your physical age changes or you somehow died and came back as long as you're actually alive)
some other tasks chosen on impulse by each individual summon (this one is actually optional but you'd hafta talk them out of making the signer do it. Its can be anything from something simple like bringing them snacks or something complex like making an entire lake warmer. It will vary with the summon. If you attempt to summon you've never summoned before and you've never done this all you'll get is a pervert squid with a note for you saying what the particular summon wants before it may be summoned.)
Physical requirements:
Psychological requirements: