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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 4:18 pm
Gaia Name: AvianFlame Character Name: Renii Gwahedial Gender: Female Age: 21 Race: Humanoid Character Description: Dark haired and cold eyed Renii demanded respect from the often shaddy characters she delt with. As she has spent most of her time in space she is unfamiliar with the city life of major worlds. She favors a dull black jumpsuit with and cloak
Home Planet: Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: Renii's mother and father travel trade routes as escorts for all types of crafts. Character History Raised to outwit and outlast Renii grew up in her parents escort job. Given the job of emergancy gunner on her father's vessal at age five Renii has refined her dogfight skills over the years. When she was 15 she left in her own ship the Red Harrier and spread her families buisness. She soon found the job dreary and left the buisness for the Coruscant to seek out the Jedi as she had been thought to be force sensitive.
Alignment: Republic Occupation Jedi Skills: Assuming false identities, minor hacking, piltoting
Weapons: Old red lightsaber beloning to "?", conceled viroblade, small palm blaster Ship: Red Harrier, small light weapons cruiser Personal Belongings: A large silver-white canine
Roleplay Sample
Revka felt her powers expand beyond there original ability..she felt feverish...but not only from the power she wielded...Aranion had said nothing about their betrothal. Had he accepted the fact that she was prepared never to marry? She had not wanted to think about her betrothal but she felt like she had to. No it had been so annoying when everyone thought she loved Chase...but the raven next to her...maybe he could be a different story...again no. Not until this war was over could she love if she truly loved at all. Aranion might not even be loyal to her...she was too trusting. As they waited on the edge of the city limits for the boundry to fade...she turned to look at him and found that he had taken his avian form...K'tanaqui gaurded restlessly and she watched every shadow. The night watchman walked by and she quickly transformed. The raven looked at her his eyes glistening...the same cold black that they did when he was in human form. And then the wall of flame was gone and the two flew into the night. At the mountains peak they landed and she stared at yet another orb...It's surface reflected the flames of the wall returned so it took her a moment to realize it was jet back. Aranion looked nervous and in this moment she saw his gaurd had lowered. "I could capture you right now you know. I could bring you to my father. I would be raised up above all...He could make you love me. But I have seen that you truly do not desire ultimate power. Many years have I watched you Aranel, and now I give you this choice. You can take the orb now and I will melt out of your life. Or you can allow me to journy with you...and the orb shall be mine." Revka had always acknolaged that she was not extremly atractive...her flaming eyes were not welcoming and the downy feathers in her hair scared most people. In fact, never had she even been approched by a man, or boy in the concept of love and attraction. She on the whole...considered herself...well not desirable...So even now she did not belive the words that Aranion said...In fact truly...she did not know how to act toward a man in this situation...Her first instinct was to lie that she cared not or that she didn't like him, but past experiance had taught her not to deny the truth. She did not want to get caught in self-denial again. "Aranion, I will not ask you to join me. That is your job, as the man you must put your foot forward first. I will never initiate a relashionship. Also remember that before I can give myself up fully to any man I must create peace in Irthica. So in the same way that a young man may have to wait for a girl to finish collage before marring her, you have to wait for me to finish this quest." Aranion then to her suprise turned around and quietly picked up the orb. I shone for a minute and then the barrier disapeared. "Quickly, if you can, shield the city with psychic force to hide the fact that the barrier is gone" Revka complied and soon a purple dome encircled the avian city. "This orb was created for me...my demon, feline, and avian powers are enhanced by it. Revka...now may I come with you to Irthica?" "Why? Aranion what do you see?" "We must prepare for an attack. Tadi and Drake have returned to Irthica, they must come back. So must the rest of you friends. Soon the hosts of flying felines will come. Your people must help. Let us go down to the city and assemble an army of avians." Revka who had never been kissed by a man in her life, blushed furiously at his next move...but there was no retort because the crafty raven was flying back to the city.
Accepted. Although you would want to paragraph them with a clear spacing between each paragraph. ~SK
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 4:31 pm
Gaia Name: Loki the Stampede Character Name: Knire Dark Gender: Male Age: 18 Race: Human Culture: Mandalorian Character Description: Tall and thin, but well built. He has a more charming look to him, though he has a small scar above his left eye. He wears his fathers Mandalorian Armor, which is colored as fallows. The black jump suit repersents a justice, the dull, dark silver repersents memory for the lost, and the sand-gold around his visor repersents quest for revenge.
Home Planet: ??? (Is Nomadic) Starting Planet: Tatooine Relations: None anymore... Character History: He was part of the Mandalorian Clan, Dark Clan. His father was a great warrior, and the same was for his mother. The Clan was named after his father, who survived with five other Mandalorian defending the home they were at, at the time. Danik Dark and the rest of the Mandalorians of the town, 300 total, grouped together, to fight off an infestation of over 3,000 Ackley sent by the local Baron to kill of the clan for the idea of change and dis-trust of the warriors. After two days and one night of fight of the horrible creatures, his father and the five other survivors went into the Baron palace, killing about 100 guards, and finally the Baron. Unfortuntly, Danik Dark was died of his wounds fours days later. Soon, Knire's mother became the leader of the Clan. But, not so long after surviving the attack, an Imperial Commander, ordered the killing of the Dark Clan, and leaving no survivors. Knire managed to escape, and at this point, he was 16, and already was in marriage to another Mandalorian girl. She was, supposedly killed during the attack, though Knire believes that she was kidnapped and most likely sold to Hutts. He is now 18, and wears his father's armor. The black jump suit repersents a will for justice, the dull, dark silver repersents memory for the lost, and the sand-gold around his visor repersents quest for revenge.
Alignment: None Occupation: Guardian Skills: Flight, Hand-to-Hand, Accurate Shooting
Weapons: Two quick-draw blaster, blaster carbine, and a Mandalorian sword. (I will get proper names soon) Ship: Modified Z-95 Headhunter Personal Belongings: Kept hidden
Roleplay Sample:
((Will do in a bit))
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Posted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 1:34 pm
((Okay, so I wanted something to do, and I wanted to see if I could revive some of the other threads.))
Gaia Name: Wild Cards Character Name: Rayce Alesan Gender: Male Age: 17 Race: Human Character Description: About 5'10", has medium-long black hair, green eyes with yellow flecks in them (optical implants, used to be brown), tanned skin with freckles, and a stocky but muscular build. He wears a simple grey flightsuit most of the time.
Home Planet: Born on Kessel, moved to Ansion at eleven Starting Planet: Deep Space Relations: His friend / adopted brother, Jami Hailon Character History: Rayce was born on a remote part of Kessel, to a very poor spice miner. He never remembered his mother, but supposedly inherited her looks. He grew up fascinated with machinery, but the only machinery around was the simple mining equipment his father had. At about eleven, his father was killed by a band of raiders, who were trying to gain some of the precious cspice rystals of the planet, but turned to raiding when mining failed them. They then threatened to kill Rayce, and since they were so isolated, no one would ever find his body. Terrified, he fled until he found a ship that was headed to Ansion. The trip was long and difficult, but he soon was too fascinated with the ship's equipment. He quickly was able to configure it, and by the time the week-long trip was over, he knew that he had a true knack for machinery. However, he has had a prejudice for raiders and thieves ever since.
Rayce landed on Ansion and ran into the vast grasslands. For two months he stayed there, living off of the edible plants on the prairies, and the occasional animal carcass. One day, he caught the sounds of a blade cutting through trees. He saw a tall, skinny, pale, blond boy, training with a vibroblade, a look of disgust on his face. Curious, Rayce approached the boy. His name was Jami Hailon, and he said he was training to be a warrior, though it was against his will. Curious, Rayce spoke with the boy for two hours, and they became fast friends. Jami's father came looking for him, and found him with the boy. Taking pity on Rayce, his father allowed Rayce to live with them. He was also given a Bio-Antidote Implant, which combated a fierce disease that he had contracted on the plains. The ailment was uncurable, but was kept dormant with the implant. Jami and Rayce still consider each other like brothers.
Rayce continued to be fascinated with machinery, and was a huge help with Jami's father, who knew very little about machines. Rayce taught how to build different things, and became a master engineer. Jami taught Rayce how to use a vibroblade, but Rayce favored a blaster and grenades more. At about fourteen, however, Rayce went blind in an accident while working on a simple short in a swoop bike. Jami helped him build optical implants that not only restored his vision, but enhanced it, allowing Rayce to work better than ever before. By the time both boys were seventeen, Rayce had built numerous things, including the droid HVD-9 and his own personal ship out of parts from a downed airspeeder. Jami wanted the ship, but he got Deenine as a consolation. Rayce now works as a sort of roaming engineer, working wherever he is needed.
In contrast to Jami's ice-cool personality, Rayce is optimistic, bold, and brash. He prefers to rush into everything, sometimes without thinking, believing that destiny will come to his aid him. This is often harmful to him, since it caused him to contract a prairie disease and lose his sight. Still, these experiences made him stronger, and it is sometimes disputed as if this is really bad. Indeed, it shows that he is unafraid of risk, and this makes him stronger in the risks that he does undertake. Also, some find it a welcome change from Jami's indifference.
Alignment: Neutral Occupation: Engineer Skills: Mechanics, Computer Use, Demolitions
Weapons: A small sporting pistol, a thermal detenator, and three frag grenades.
Ship: Modified airspeeder. It has life support systems, can support an astromech droid, has hyperdrive and deflector shields, and a rear repeating turret was installed. It has four seats. Personal Belongings: 12,035 credits in the bank, Bio-Antidote Implant, optical implants, mechanical equipment.
Roleplay Sample: Rayce slowly shook his head as he examined the problem at hand. He was at the medical facility on Hoth, and there had been problems with the heating tanks there. No one could figure it out, so it was up to Rayce, whom they had summoned there. There was supposedly nothing wrong with it, but it kept shutting off for some reason. Rayce sighed and looked closer.
Just by thinking, his vision went into infared, courtesy of his optical implants. He scanned the tank, then smiled and let his vision zoom in. An infintesimal break in the wiring was causing a current to break as the wind shifted. Using a fusion cutter, he welded the wiring back together and stood up, pleased with his work. The heating cut back onn quickly, and everyone breathed a sigh of relief. Rayce smiled and relaxed, his vision returning to normal. The head approached him and shook his hand vigorously.
"Thank you, Mr. Farelle, thank you. You have saved numerous lives. Please, if you ever need aid, the station is open to you."
Rayce nodded and smiled, accepting the thanks from every person on the area. He had been working quickly because he had felt the cruel bite of the cold as well. He was just glad to be warm again. Smiling, Rayce waved to the station personnel, then boarded his ship and took off. Coruscant was his next destination, since there was word of something not working in a cantina somewhere on the planet. With a sigh, he flipped the hyperdrive and shot off into the stars.
Accepted ~SK
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Posted: Mon Mar 06, 2006 3:41 pm
I'm sorry i started the rp without posting this. I didnt notice it. Sorry...
Gaia Name: Elyane Anwarunya Character Name: Elyane Anwarunya Gender: Female Age: 13 Race: Human Character Description: Small, around 4' 10", and only around 90 standard pounds, she is very frail looking. Her long blonde hair done in a single braid that touches the floor as she walks. She has deep blue eyes full of innocence and youth. She wears a brown tunic and a brown cloak her father gave her. Her skin is a light tan, from all the farm work she used to do. She is fairly built for a 12 year old, also from all the work she had to do.
Home Planet: Dantooine Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: A father, mother, 2 brothers, and a sister; all on Dantooine. Character History: Elyane grew up on Dantooine as a farm girl. Since she was able to walk she had helped her father in managing their large estate on Dantooine. She is the second oldest, with one older brother of 16 years of age. She continued to work for her father until her and a friend, while adventureing, discovered the ancient Jedi enclave. There her friend fell into it, and got trapped. Elyane, at the time unaware she was force sensitive, then rescued her friend by pulling her up by the force. Her friend told Elyanes father this, and he sent her to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant to be trained, after her consent though. She now strives to become a Jedi, and to learn what power she really has.
Alignment: Jedi Occupation: Previous Farm hand, aspiring Jedi Skills: Skill with handleing animals of almost any kind, any type of farm work.
Weapons: None at the moment Ship: A modified ARC-170, The Light of Darkness, her father had pieced back together after it crashed on Dantooine during the clone wars. Personal Belongings: A diary, a picture of her old home on Dantooine, a picture of her family, and a few odds and ends. A R5 unit, nick-named Rocket that her father found with the ARC-170
Roleplay Sample: Elyane sighed, "Why do these things always happen to me?" She questioned as she hide behind the box.
"She went this way!" A stormtrooper captain called out as several white clad soldiers ran by the box Elyane hade hid behind. Elyane held her breath as they went by. She waited a minute before peeking up over the crate. No troopers in sight.
Elyane sighed again out of relife. "I guess it is okay to be small some times." She said beginning to smile. Right as she said that a laser blast slammed into the wall behind her. She ducked and began to run the other way. "Son of a Bantha, i spoke too soon!" She muttered as she began to sprint away towards the door right as she got there, two stormtroopers stepped infront of her. She hit them then fell backward. "Ouch..." She said rubbing her head then looking up at them.
"Found her! Call the Captain!" One said as the other grabbed her by the arm and lifted her up. "Thought you could get away little Jedi?" He questioned, and she could tell he was smiling under the helmet. She glanced down at their feet then got an idea. She focused hard and tried to pull both of their right feet to the right, making them both fall.
Unfortunatly, she didnt get their legs. Instead she grabbed two boxes to her left and flung them at the Troopers by accedent. Both hit and the stormtroopers flew a few feet and hit a few more boxes, making them all fall on top of the poor soldiers. "Ah!" Elyane said in suprise, but quickly realized this was the break she wanted. She quickly began to sprint out toward her ship, The Light of Darkness.
Sorry again i posted before i posted this. sad
It is okay. People make mistake. Accepted. ~SK
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Posted: Tue Mar 07, 2006 9:51 pm
Gaia Name: Gangrel614 Character name: Colpe Balco Gendar: Male Age: 20 Race: Human Character desciption: 6 foot 4. 250 lb. short spikey hair. dark blue eyes. Trained for combat and seeking the teaching of the sith. For now he is an ex republic soldier and carries a suit of armor that extremely durable and strong but hampers some extreme movement. Home Planet: Bastion Starting Planet: Korriban History: An elite soldier for the republic for 10 years, He quit when the imperials and the republic signed the treaty. He spent all the money he made over the time in the republic on his ship. He traveled the outer rim worlds and is now a dark Jedi. Allignment: Dark Side Occupation: Jedi Weapons: Double bladed krath war sword and 2 lightweight balsters(hoping for lightsaber when rank is decided) Ship: Spirit of Battle- A heavily modified J2 tpye 7 Nubian yacht. The whole ship is made from depolarized metal (ion immune), The shp is meant to be a home for Colpe. High luxury on the inside. 2 small shield generators meant to take a beating. 4 small anti aircraft rotary guns and 2 turbolaser cannons. It cost Colpe his entire life savings. Perosnal belongings: weapons, armor, and a small astromech droid for repairing the ship when needed. Roleplay sample: (here goes nothing)
Colpe sat at the bar having a drink. The night was young but he felt tired. He payed his tab and left. As he made his way back to the docks thinking of his days of glory in the republi, 3 rodian thugs with shock batons and a blastertake him by suprise
ROdian1: hand over your valubles. we outnumber you.
Colpe. You dont want to do this. It would eb unwise.
Rodian 2: YOu no have chance against us.
Colpe: REally no you dont want to do this. You dont have a chance.
Rodian 1: We take your money no. no more talk.
Colpe: 1
Rodian 3: Yes one of you.
Colpe: 2
ROdian 3: what he doing
Rodian 1 why he counting? 1? 2?
Colpe: 3
ROdian 2: yes three of us.
Colpe *punches teh first rodian in the face and takes out his double sword. He slashes at the rodian with the blaster first before the rodian can make a direct hit. The Rodian with the gun goes down and bleeds to death while Colpe kills Rodian 2 and impails Rodian 3. He slids the body of the dead rodian off his sword and walks back to the dock.
I think you meant your occupation as a Dark Jedi. ~.~ Bad setup. Bad rp. But considered accepted. Try not to use [Colpe: 3] nor actions as [*punches teh first rodian...*]. Read the RP sample before you for a guild as to how your rp should looks like. Learn from a good sample =3. ~SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 6:53 am
Gaia Name: Demonic Expert Character Name: HK-100 Gender: Male Age: 50 Race: Droid Character Description: HK-100 is a high-performance assassin droid who excelled and delighted in all manner of violence. He is roughy two point two meters tall, he is often mistaken for a protocol droid by many, and he used this to his advantage on more than one occasion, hiding his true nature. Though funnily enough, his primary function was known as his assassination protocol. He does however have a number of protocol functions in addition to his less legal ones, being fluent in Galactic Basic, Droidspeak, and many other forms of communication. The droids outer casing is made of cortosis, an extremely rare mineral that can resist lightsabers and sometimes short them out.
Home Planet: Unknown Starting Planet: Kamino Relations: Considers other HK droids to his brothers in arms. Character History HK-100 was one of the droid that was led by HK-47 on Mustafar although what happened after this and why he is not still with him, since then he has been aimlessly wandering the galaxy taking the odd bounty so he was able to pay for his maintenance and upgrades.
Alignment: His Owners (but has a disregard for all seniant life but his owners) Occupation Assassination/Combat/Protocol Droid Skills: Assassination/Combat/Protocol Functions
Weapons: Unspecified Blaster Rifle/integrated modular weapon mounts Ship None Personal Belongings: None
Role-play Sample Standing in the scorching Korriban suns Storm looked at the Valley of the Sith in the distance. A small breeze tainting this Holy Sith Planet, throwing light into darkness, weakening the Dark force on Korriban, it started ever since the damned Jedi settled here. Storms black cloak flapped in the accursed breeze, turning round Storms eyes burned with a hatred rarely seen even for the Dark Lord of the Sith, the breeze was a constant reminder that the Jedi had tainted this holy planet with their filthy foot steps! The breeze was beginning to pick up and threw a great deal of dust in the air, quickly the breeze picked up speed, soon the wind became a deafening, which reminded him of a woman he had known year and years ago.
Oh DE! Accepted ^^ ~SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 1:00 pm
Gaia Name:Kalcos Character Name:Talon Dekros Gender:Male Age:32 Race:Twilek Character Description: 5 foot 9 and 190 pounds he is skinny and has green eyes. Home Planet:Corruscant Starting Planet:Tattoine Relations:None Character History:Son of a dead Jedi. He became a jedi to becoem like his father. Although his father disobeyed jedi ruling, he still belive his father was a good man. He was trained very young and then his father was killed. He now sort of wants to avenge his father. He knows this is wrong, so he tries to stop such thoughts.
Alignment:Light side Occupation:Jedi Skills:He can work well with anything mechanic. Can understand multiple languages.
Weapons:Double Sided Enchani Ritual Brand Ship:A ship that looks quite a bit like the Ebon Hawk that has solar power cells on the outside and many more laser cannons and turets. The main turet is also located on teh left side of the ship. It has hyperspace capablities. Used to carry republic soldiers and weaponry. It was sold to him. Personal Belongings:Jedi robes that his father wore and his fathers green lightsaber crystal,
Roleplay Sample:
Talon: Master I will take this mission. It shall be in trustfull hands.
Jedi Master: Good, get to your ship right away and help the Jedi on the ship. They will open the hangar to leave your ship in.
Talon: Shall I load it with additional weaponry master?
Jedi Master: Yes if you can. I know your ship used to carry around soldiers, so im sure you can carry a load more.
Talon: Anything else master?
Jedi Master: Your master is on that ship. That is all.
Talon: Thank you master.
Talon heads to his ship. He starts it and finds the locational systems are bugged.
Talon: Ok time to fix this.
Talon takes out tools to fix it. He finds a wire disconected and fixes it. He puts everything back together and leaves for the ship with his master on it.
R5D7 beeps
Talon: Get ready R5
R5D7 beeps back a few times.
Talon: Ready old friend?
R5D7 beeps in comply.
Erm... Accepted. But change your RP tyle to: Something like LindL.Tailor/Elyane/Wild Cards(all found above you), try to like... Learn. Yeah. Put some effort in improving. ~SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:11 pm
Gaia Name: Fishboy0 Character Name: Just known as 13th (other side called X13th) Gender: Male Age: 26 Race: Human Character Description: 13 is roughly 5'7" and 155 lbs. He wears a dark green cloak with a brown hood (which he never removes) covering his face, except for his eyes, one bright green and one blood red. His skin is a silvery grey colour and he has a scar from the tip of his middle finger on his right hand down to the middle of his palm. At some times, he seems to be another, eviler person.
Home Planet: Unknown Starting Planet: Kamino Relations: None known Character History: Not much is known about him. He seems to have had his memory wiped, now he remembers things only from the point when he woke up after having his memory wiped. He found himself with a disruptor pistol, a silver-bladed lightsaber and an unusual lightsaber crystal. He went to other planets, doing odd jobs for crime lords. Eventually, he felt drawn to an unfamiliar planet, where he landed.
Alignment: None Occupation: None Skills: Use of weaponry, piloting skills, swift
Weapons: lightsaber, blaster rifle, ion carbine, vibrosword Ship: Modified NB-1S Bomber which the operators apparently gave him. Personal Belongings: Remote Droid
Roleplay Sample: A man woke up with an enormous headache. He looked around, confused and feeling drained. "Who am I? Where am I?" A metalic voice came through a speaker in the ceiling "You are a human male. You are currently in our operating room above the surface of Tatooine." He got up and walked around the confined space. He saw he was in a glass room and outside the glass, there were several droids looking like they were created for operations. "What am I doing in an operating room? "We're testing our system for wiping memories. So far it's working, and you're the 13th, so you'll be called 13th There's just one problem." Suddenly, the expression on 13th's face changed drastically, making him look more evil. He rammed into the glass wall over and over again. "Let me out!" Suddenly, his expression changed back to normal. "What just happened?" "That was the problem. It gave you an other personality. We'll just call him X13th." Suddenly, a little panel opened at the base of one of the walls and a gas started leaking in. After a while, 13th started to feel sleepy, then he suddenly fell asleep.
Well accepted~ SK
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 6:47 pm
Gaia Name:Blank_Grey_Haze Character Name: Krixar Marlie Gender: Male Age: 22 Race: Twi' lek Character Description: 5'11, 195 ilbs, green eyes, purple skin, brighter blue tiger stripe pattern on his lekku, lekku tied up together with a leather bond, wears different clothes but usually wears a white labcoat.
Home Planet:Dantooine Starting Planet:Tatooine Relations: His R5 droid his kinda like a little brother to him and his older brother Nirnar Character History The love for stealth started when his father took him out to hunt Dewbacks for their hides at age 7. He began to take up hunting even more when his father bought him his own rifle and he began to sneak out to hunt even more dangerous prey. At the age of 13 he was killing his prey with vibroblades. Call it an insanity, but he loved to see the shock in the creatures eyes when they relize they're weak. At 16 he was taken away from home. Due to stress his father basically went mentally insane along with his mother. He was raised with his brother on the mining outpost so they had to learn about to computers and slicing so they could help with construction. He worked there for 6 years and eventually left to become a freelancer.
Alignment:Nuetral OccupationFreelancer Skills:Slicing, Stealth, Assasination
Weapons:A BlasTech DL-44 pistol with a customized silencer, a vibrosword and knife. Ship Dunelizard Medium Fighter Personal Belongings: 80,000 credits in his bank, an R3 droid unit, a datapad containing a black market list of weapons.
Roleplay Sample My eyes slowly opened as a Twi' lek next to me nudged me. "You were out for a while, but we're home." he said. When my eyes adjusted his facial features became clearer and my brothers face appeared. "Wha- oh, so are you ready to head back?" I asked him while blinking a few times to get the blur out of my eyes. A small thud came from outside the ship as it landed. The other people began to slowly leave the shuttle and Krixar with his brother were at the end of the line. After about two hours of waiting we finally got off the shuttle and out of the mining post. We found farmer and bribed him to take them to their destonation. The farmer (being poor) of course accepted this offer and started to drive us to their homestead. We reached a small yet deep river and asked to stop for a few minutes. When we got out Nirnar walked to the river and waited. I walked behind the farmers speeder and obeserved my position. Flash and bang. I had drawn my blaster and shot the farmer in the back. He fell out of the speeder, completely limp, and Nirnar quickly tied the farmers tools to him and sunk him to the bottom of the river. This was too personal for observers. We drove to the homestead and drew our vibroswords. Our parents were the reason we had to leave...they had gone insane and were too dangerous for us to be around. Now we came to end their suffering. Slowly we snuck up to our old home and entered. It was awful. We cleared the cowbwebs out of the way so we could enter without getting tangled up in webs and meeting the spider that formed them. We found it, and we were shocked. The seal to the cellar was broken and our parents were free. Suddenly, we were alert and our blades were ready to kill. As we investigated the house a team of bounty hunters closed in around it. They readied for a raid and counted down from ten. When I heard the yells I ran towards the entrance only to find a team of seven new bounty hunters infront of me. My bro fell for it too. Blaster shots erupted and flew everywhere. My blade crossed the chest of one of the hunters sending him backwards; I turned to the next one and cut out his knee; The third one went at me with his fists as I drew my blade up to cut through his skull. My brother came in and through his knife into the throat of one of the hunters and drew his two blasters to the chests of the last two. Bang. They dropped dead with shock on their faces. This battle remineded me how I couldn't let emotional ties get in the way, like my parents...and finally I said "We get to live another day". (like it?)
Accepted. But suggestions include paragraphing. =3 ~SK
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Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 3:54 pm
((Character in development: Subject to minor changes. Also: I will add more to the History as I think of it. xp )) Quote: Gaia Name: Archmaster_Garn Character Name: Darth Hass Gender: Male Age: 29 Race: Zabrak Character Description: Darth Hass stands about 6'3", with a good physique. His bright white skin is covered from head to toe in a multitude of both Zabrek tatoos, and Sith tatoos, both black in color. His robes are as white as his skin, and are covered in a patern similar to his tatoos. Arround the top of his hairless head, six horns protrude from his skin. His eyes are a deep black, though weather this is a sergical alteration, or sheer corruption from the darkside, is unknown. Home Planet: Iridonia Starting Planet: Tatooine Relations: None Character History: As a child, Hass's parents were sluaghtered before his eyes. He was rescued by the Sith Lord, Darth Leiden, and raised, only to later find out it was Darth Leiden who ordered his parents execution. In a fit of rage and confusion, Hass nearly killed Leiden, but ultimatly failed. Leiden barely escaped with his life, and now is at locations, unknown. Hass searches the gallexy for his old master, so that he may have his vengence. Alignment: Neutral Occupation: Sith Skills: Talented Lightsaber Technition, Exceptionally Skilled Lightsaber Duelist, and Skilled with and Force Move Type Powers Weapons: Custom Dual Bladed, "L" Shaped Lightsaber Ship: The Bladewing  Inside the ship is a small hover speeder, big enough for two passangers, and a small amount of cargo. Also there are 4 recon droids, and an interigation droid. Mounted in front of the cockpit, is a small turbolaser, which Hass uses to destroy enemy cruisers. Along the bottom of the ship there are two missle launchers, and on the back of each wing, there is a mine despencer. The Bladewing's lack of firepower, is greatly compensated for, by its incredible manuverability, and un fathomable speed. Personal Belongings: Nothing Roleplay Sample:Hass strides through the Tusken camp, his lightsaber in one hand, and a gaffi stick in the other. As three more sand people charge him, he flings the gaffi stick at one, hitting it square in the jaw, and knocking it out cold. As the other two aproach, Hass activates the first blade on his lightsaber, swings, and severs the head, and right side of its torso. When the other raises his gaffi stick to attack, Hass activates the secound blade of his saber, and punctures the Tusken's throat. After he had dispatched the two of them he beheaded the one with the now broken jaw, and collected as many gaffi sticks as he could find. These should fetch some money in town; he thought to himself, and he loaded them into his speeder, and zoomed off through the desert. Hass has a old Master? Isn't Leiden his first and only? But anyway, you might want to improve on that.
Accepted. ~SK
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