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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:08 pm
Nero Ash " My name is Mura Kanahara. And you are in my way." Mura said as he continued walking towards the tough looking man. The man gave him a funny look, which Mura disregarded. He did not feel like fighting. He just needed to get back home. Them man continued to try to convince Mura otherwise, but he was stubborn as an ox. Not your usual ox, either. A big hairy highland ox. As Mura walked past the man and into the valley, he noticed some odd feeling in his gut. "Whaat..." Mura stuttered out when he saw the valley, "What happened here!!?? Something is not right!" Mura ran into the valley, starting slowly and finishing as quick as an antelope, as he saw what awaited him. " MY HOME!!!!" he screamed, as he dropped to his knees in anguish, "no, father... mother... no, no, NO!" He punched the dirt as hard as he could, and continued beating the ground until the grass was red with blood. "If only... If only I had gotten home sooner... I could have helped... I could have HELPED!!" Mura cried... he cried for hours, for days, he just kneeled there, until one day he just got up. He got up, and he walked to the burned down smoldering lump he used to call home. There, he picked up his fathers boots. Amazingly, they had been smoldered and were now a coal black, absorbing all light. And they had escaped any real damage. Mura put them on, knew revenge was pointless, and walked down the silk trade path to the nearest village. He swore he would create a great name for his family, no, for himself, and that he would become the greatest Ninja ever to walk this planet. "My name is Mura Kanahara. And NOTHING will get in my way." Pass. Very nice creativity. XD
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:10 pm
lol Ivory! We both passed him! >=D Great minds think alike!
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:10 pm
shizuka_kage lol Ivory! We both passed him! >=D Great minds think alike! Lol. That's what I just said in the Chatterbox....Lol....
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:11 pm
Oy! 'tis I! I will Rp Nara Ito. I'm part of teh Nara clan and I live in *a village I haven't decided but hopes that the sand village is still open*. mrgreen
~*~*~ Ito sprinted through the town. Her heart was racing. Aww man! What a drag! I can't believe I'm late for training! She rushed through the market street and disappeared behind the village wall into the training area. The meeting spot where her cell usually met up was completely and totally deserted. " Aw man!" Her whole being dropped, "They left without me?" SHe looked over the clearing again. On a tree was a note attached to the tree with a shurikan. "Sweetness!" She dashed to the tree with renewed strength.
100 laps around the village, NOW!!!
"What? You cheapskate! I bet no one else had to do something so stupid!"
~*~*~ I are finito 3nodding Hope it's good enough!
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:19 pm
Chaos Ai Oy! 'tis I! I will Rp Nara Ito. I'm part of teh Nara clan and I live in *a village I haven't decided but hopes that the sand village is still open*. mrgreen ~*~*~ Ito sprinted through the town. Her heart was racing. Aww man! What a drag! I can't believe I'm late for training! She rushed through the market street and disappeared behind the village wall into the training area. The meeting spot where her cell usually met up was completely and totally deserted. " Aw man!" Her whole being dropped, "They left without me?" SHe looked over the clearing again. On a tree was a note attached to the tree with a shurikan. "Sweetness!" She dashed to the tree with renewed strength. 100 laps around the village, NOW!!!"What? You cheapskate! I bet no one else had to do something so stupid!" ~*~*~ I are finito 3nodding Hope it's good enough! Pass! Very cute. ^__^ I like you.
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 1:52 am
OMFG I am ready to come back and help o_O long absence xD Loads of uberlit people appearing suddenly...
I don't think tense matters much though... although it's better if you do it in the tense that the RP is in. Kenk RPs in present does he not? O_o
Bleh... updated. Didn't have to ax much of November's people. xD I MISS TRUFFLES D:
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 6:54 am
Yay! I got praise! blaugh
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 8:39 am
kouri-chan_xx Bleh... updated. Didn't have to ax much of November's people. xD I MISS TRUFFLES D: I MISS HIM TOO! crying
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 7:43 am
ivory_vamp kouri-chan_xx Bleh... updated. Didn't have to ax much of November's people. xD I MISS TRUFFLES D: I MISS HIM TOO! crying ME, TOO!!! T_______T
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 8:20 am
Okay, here's something, but I plan to stay here for just a bit longer till I really get that D20 stuff in my brain XD. Anyways, her goes...
RP Sample:
Naoko Kenji strolled down the shady woods to the nearby town of Amegekure. He was beginning to think that life as a Ninja would be so much better than to have to deliver peoples papers. All people want to do is live their normal lives and read the papers. "Papers.." he said quietly to himself, "..papers!!!! Oh no!" he gasped. Without looking he felt for his bag that he was supposedly carrying, but to his shock felt nothing on him. His eye twitches as he yells "How the hell did I forget the Papers!!!!" as he ran back home...which to his disappointment was miles away...
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:53 am
darkshadow92 Okay, here's something, but I plan to stay here for just a bit longer till I really get that D20 stuff in my brain XD. Anyways, her goes... RP Sample: Naoko Kenji strolled down the shady woods to the nearby town of Amegekure. He was beginning to think that life as a Ninja would be so much better than to have to deliver peoples papers. All people want to do is live their normal lives and read the papers. "Papers.." he said quietly to himself, "..papers!!!! Oh no!" he gasped. Without looking he felt for his bag that he was supposedly carrying, but to his shock felt nothing on him. His eye twitches as he yells "How the hell did I forget the Papers!!!!" as he ran back home...which to his disappointment was miles away... Pass. domokun
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:00 pm
Well I got into the VIllage Hidden in the Mist.
Kiyoko stepped outside into the outside world. In her gaze, the world seemed bleak and filled with death. For She had just lost the only person she loved... to the enemy.
She blamed herself for everything. I just couldn't protect him.., she thought. The cold snow stung her face, as it drifted slowly to the bloody ground. But there was something she knew for sure. They would be back, to kill the only one remaining. Her. It was no time to be stricken ill with grief. It was time to seek her revenge...
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 2:32 pm
Do...Do...Do... I hope I did this right.Quote: RP SAMPLE:
Tsai continued walking along the path, it seemed to be leading him onto a hill. His knees felt like they had been shattered from a fight from all the walking. He was getting tired. "Man, how big is this hill?" he asked himself silently as he continued to walk. He gained momentum and in due time reached the top of the hill. Before him was Konoha village, it was peaceful. The birds flew freely and people inside the village seemed to enjoy themselves. "I made it," he muttered quietly as he took a step down the hill heading towards Konoha.
Suddenly, he heard a pebble fall from the hill and suddenly he began sliding down the hill, his whole body began moving down the hill. He tumbled down and soon hit the floor of the ground with a bang. "Tsk, tsk! Ouch.." he said getting up while holding his head.
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:35 pm
Tears.0f.The.Fallen.Sky Well I got into the VIllage Hidden in the Mist. Kiyoko stepped outside into the outside world. In her gaze, the world seemed bleak and filled with death. For She had just lost the only person she loved... to the enemy. She blamed herself for everything. I just couldn't protect him.., she thought. The cold snow stung her face, as it drifted slowly to the bloody ground. But there was something she knew for sure. They would be back, to kill the only one remaining. Her. It was no time to be stricken ill with grief. It was time to seek her revenge... Passu desu. But don't over do the 'tragic past' things when making your character unless you really have a reason ^_^
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:37 pm
TsaiLin Do...Do...Do... I hope I did this right.Quote: RP SAMPLE:
Tsai continued walking along the path, it seemed to be leading him onto a hill. His knees felt like they had been shattered from a fight from all the walking. He was getting tired. "Man, how big is this hill?" he asked himself silently as he continued to walk. He gained momentum and in due time reached the top of the hill. Before him was Konoha village, it was peaceful. The birds flew freely and people inside the village seemed to enjoy themselves. "I made it," he muttered quietly as he took a step down the hill heading towards Konoha.
Suddenly, he heard a pebble fall from the hill and suddenly he began sliding down the hill, his whole body began moving down the hill. He tumbled down and soon hit the floor of the ground with a bang. "Tsk, tsk! Ouch.." he said getting up while holding his head. Pass 3nodding
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