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Unrelinquished Despair

PostPosted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 2:28 pm


@Chocolate: Well, please learn how to use the formats properly. The bold tags are meant to go only around what they've been put around, not extra text you put in there. The nation you're probably going for is Kranila.

I would approve this, but I think your sample is a ******** of "what the hell is going on." It doesn't flow, and it looks like a jumbled mess of actions. Please redo it.
PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:18 pm


Rpc Name: N/A
Nation: Sutami
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline applied for: Kiranu
What you know about the bloodline: They're cat-like creatures, being fast and naturally agile. Good senses, easily distracted, mood swingy, and my favorite: It takes half time to learn all skills
Rp Sample:

A small black cat hopped across the gap of the houses, landing on the other roof with a small thud. The cat padded along the rooftops, and suddenly came to a stop. Music was pouring out of a window directly below the cat, seemingly putting it in a trance. The cat's tail swished happily back and forth as it listened, closing its eyes and enjoying the sound. Then, the right ear twitched, the music had stopped. A strong scent was pouring out to the cat right now, and it was closing in on her. Before the wolf-man could smash the cat into the building, it jumped off. When the cat landed, it was almost as if the roof of the building was not that high at all. When the cat landed, it immediately rolled into a ball, and glided along the road very quickly. The wolf-man began to run after it, chasing it around as the cat rolled about quite easily. Another enemy joined the fray, landing right infront of the cat in high hopes of blocking its path. With ease, the cat veered to the left, heading into an ally way. The wolf-man entered the ally way just after the cat, forcing it to go straight at the wall. The cat bounced off of the wall, and slammed right into the wolf-man, channeling all of the static it had built up into the wolf's body.

Before the eyes of the enemies, the cat began to revert into its original state of a girl, well mostly. The girl was in a ready position, her claws already out, her little fangs bared in her smirk. "Ohiyo! Seems you guys have found me alot quicker than the last time eh? Let us see if you will catch me!" The girl's claws grew to their full length of 6 inches. Energy flowed through the girls body, entering her claws, enhancing them to the point where she could cut through iron with ease. The enemy behind the wolf-man pushed forth, revealing himself to be the bard she had to deal with. He had his violin ready, and was about to strike a note when the girl launched herself forward, using two furious swipes to slash the violin in half, and then attack the bard. The girl immediately leaped backward, avoiding a swipe from the wolf man. The girl smirked as her image began to fade, her mouth was the last thing visible before she blended in with the surrounding. The wolf-man stepped forth, taking a big whiff of the area. He launched out his fist, catching the tail of the girl, and giving it a sharp yank. All that was visible was her mouth opening wide as they bit into the wolf-man's neck. Her full body became visible as her right handed claws began to glow a bright yellow. She thrust her hand forth, digging her claws into the body of the wolf. The enemy's body went rigid, his body shaking as his insides were being electrified, his nerves being fried. The wolf-man fell to the ground, convulsing. The bard turned to run away, being rather defenseless without his main weapon. Usually, the girl would allow the enemies to escape, but she suddenly was feeling a strong urge to hunt down her enemy and kill him. That was exactly what she did.

With a burst of speed, the girl ran forth, her long legs carrying her over the ground easily. The man had climbed up on a building, and was headed towards the river in the middle of the city. The girl easily scaled the building, first jumping high and grabbing onto a ladder, and then using her claws to make it the rest of the way up. She spotted the man climbing over the various rooftop decorations, and decided to run on the guard rail in order to avoid all of the items. It was with great ease that the girl did so, her natural grace allowing her to keep her balance. The river was insight, and the man jumped, hoping the girl wouldn't follow into the water. Unfortunately for him, she did. When she jumped, she began to spin her body, using her claws to slash at the man in a tornado like fashion, driving him into an unconscious and bloody state.

Now unfortunate for the girl, they were both plummeting into the water, something she detested extremely. When they entered, the main awoke, and as a last desperate attempt to end the girl, dragged her down with him. The girl panicked, and went into a frenzy, slicing at the guy's face and hands until he let go. Even when he did, the girl had a hard time swimming back up, flailing about like a moron before resurfacing. She quickly made it to the edge of the river, and climbed out, shaking herself off as best she could. Already a crowd was drawing near; someone with a tail and ears easily stood out. The girl glanced around sheepishly, and then skulked off into one end of an alleyway, appearing on the other as the same black cat.

A faint smile

Dedicated Friend


Fist of the Bro Star

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:27 pm


iJwlz: Accepted
PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:01 pm


Rpc Name: Richard Ackles
Nation: Sutami
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline applied for: Cursed Soul
What you know about the bloodline: HERP DERP I KNOW EVERYTHING.

They're just immortals with a special darkness that flows around them, of which they can use in any way they want. Cursed, blah blah blah.
Rp Sample:

Richard yawned to himself, sitting on a chair, and adjusting himself into comfortable position. One of his arms was positioned behind the chair so that no one could see it, and he looked over the audience with his unique aqua eyes. His Kuro Kotogara began to swirl around his hidden hand as he began to talk: "So, my fellow followers, I believe we have had a successful try in converting the residents of Pronta to our faith, however, I am disappointed in seeing how you pay homage to our God. Very few of you have ever come to the temple to pray, much less even speak His name. You are lucky though, since he is not here to see what atrocities you all have committed, being happy with your lives. Did you forgot that despair was the only way to a just life? You all make me sick, and apparently, our Lord too." His swung his hand about from the back of the chair, and pointed it towards the audience before him. Fear crossed their face as soon as they realized what he was doing, they had been given a death sentence.

"Fear not! There is no Heavon, nor Hell for out faith, so when you die, you will just rot into the earth! Now despair! Your end has come!" Shouted Richard, releasing the giant black ball onto the masses. It hit the center, and exploded outward, instantly killing those inside of it, and severely injuring all of those around it, except for him. His eyes, laced with disgust, and wrath, viewed his new crowd. Crimson stained much of the interior now, bodies, entrails, limbs of every kind decorating it in a much more cruel fashion than before. The man sighed, a large circular shape forming in front of him from his Kuro Kotogara. Pausing for only a minute to let it establish, the man stepped through the portal, leaving the blessed temple behind.

Unrelinquished Despair


Fist of the Bro Star

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:24 pm


despair: Please try to take this more seriously and actually fill in what you know about the bloodline. And fix your sample a bit because none of the bloodline's weaknesses are even mentioned.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:43 pm


Rpc Name: TBD
Nation: TBD
Rank: Starting one...
Bloodline applied for: Gemini
What you know about the bloodline: Its one soul split in two and inhabiting two separate bodies. When together are are stronger than most, but apart they are weaker than most.
Tag team ability's mostly.
Rp Sample:
Can i use the RP sample from my talent?

Sindenky


Fist of the Bro Star

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:45 pm


sin: Nope. You have to make another sample. And the starting rank is trainee.
PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 6:52 pm


*grumbles*
Sindenky
Rpc Name: TBD
Nation: TBD
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline applied for: Gemini
What you know about the bloodline: Its one soul split in two and inhabiting two separate bodies. When together are are stronger than most, but apart they are weaker than most.
Tag team ability's mostly.
Rp Sample:
The two Gemini had come a long way since the attack of their village. Now they acted as defenders. Why are we doing this? We could simply kill them in their sleep.." said Shin. The boy was clad in all black, two sheaths on his back, but they were empty. He looked more like he belonged in the shadows, stalking someone. Not standing in the middle of a field, completely empty, sun high in the sky.

The girl stood beside him, clad in a bright armor. She too wore an empty sheath on her hip. "And take away all the glory? You have to fight head on! see the eyes of your enemy's!" Kni said. She refused to sneak and use dirty tactics in a fight. Unlike her brother who took every chance to cheat his way though a fight.

Their conversation was shut off as the bandits made their way out of the woods. The only thing standing between them and the town, were the two Gemini. "Whats this? come to pay early?" asked one of the bandits. He nasty grin came across his scared face. The others laughed at his stupid joke. There were 5 other bandits, and one leader.

We should have just fought them in their camp last night." said Shin. Kni punched her older brother in the arm, "Shut up and become Excalibur for me." she said annoyed with his attitude. "OW! no way you become twin's for me. And for the last time I'm not Excalibur!" he said, just then he flipped around and punched one of the Bandits in the face. Kni was upset with his eager attack, and decided it was to late to give a speech.

As the fight went on, neither Gemini would become a weapon, and they had to fight almost back to back, not getting more than 10 yards away. The fight raged, the two doing tag team attacks.after nearly a half an hour of combat, both were covered in dirt and bruises. All the bandits were either out on the ground, or running into the woods.


There.......

Sindenky


BluewolfofMibu

PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2011 10:29 pm


Sin Approved
PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:56 pm


Rpc Name: May Wise
Nation: Nocturne
Rank: Adept
Bloodline applied for: Succubus
What you know about the bloodline: (If you put everything it will be denied on the spot) The more sex they have the more energy they get. They can easily seduce the opposite sex, but if they find someone attractive they run the risk of being the slave. They are really beautiful and fast and have bat wings and a devil tail. THey need to have a master to have full access to their powers and they become very jealous of the same sex.
Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL)
May was seething. That hussy, Lily, was all over her master. Why didn't the man see it? She was standing way closer than she needed too and was giving him an exellent look at her breasts. And was he....looking at them?!! May growled. That was it!

The succubus stormed over and pushed the other girl away. Lily looked shocked. "What was that for?" she asked.

"Back off! You don't need to be rubbing yourself against him just to talk!" May said back. She moved in front of her master. A series of name calling followed before a cat fight complete with scratching started. The man in question was still confused about what was going on, but knew girls+fighting+guy=bad.

That processed the man did the only logical thing. He pulled the girls apart and kissed May deeply. May submitted easily and kissed back. Before she could start taking energy the man broke the kiss.

"Calm down and I'll give you plenty of energy tonight," he whispered huskily in her ear. Then he licked it. May shuddered with delight. "Yes, Master," she whispered breathlessly back.

((Bah. I'm having an off day and I'm busy. Hope this is good enough.))

Zelici DragonSquire

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Fist of the Bro Star

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:37 pm


zelici: Accepted
PostPosted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 12:05 pm


I might have gone a little overboard.... sweatdrop
Rpc Name: Maria Setilan Berlinette
Nation: Yuran
Rank: Trainee
Bloodline applied for: Vampirism
What you know about the bloodline: They can regenerate and get a speed/strength boost. Light based attacks will burn and while in the sun speed/strength ad halved. I also have to drink blood after using my vampiric abilities and I gain energy from drinking blood.

Rp Sample: A group of soldiers sat around their fire, resting after a long journey down the mountains while 2 went on patrol. Their captain was in his tent examining a map of the area, trying to decide on which of the many routes they could take to reach the city. Suddenly the 2 soldiers that were on patrol hurried into the captain’s tent, along with a beautiful young girl. ”Captain, we found this girl out on the northern path. It looks like she was attacked but she hasn’t said a word” one of the scouts said. ”I see. Now bring her some food and something to wear.” the captain said as he turned around and looked at the young girl as the 2 soldier left and brought back what he had asked for. The girl did not eat and drank very little, clearly still afraid of whatever had attacked her. ”Don’t worry, you’re safe here. What is your name?” the captain asked as the girl looked up at him. ”Maria…” the girl answered in a pretty, innocent voice. ”What happened to you? Where is your family?” the Captain asked again. ”Monster…..die…All die…” she said as she started to cry. The captain hugged her softly and lulled her until she stopped crying, then she seemed fell asleep, exhausted. He laid her on the bed and decided to let her rest as he stepped outside, the red light of the setting sun lowering behind the mountains as he called for his sergeant. ”Sergeant, raise a tent for the girl and double the guard tonight, the girl spoke of a ‘monster’ it seems her family was killed and she is the only survivor.” he said as night fell.
The captain was awoken abruptly by a terrible scream that pierce through the darkness. In a moment the captain was outside his tent, his sword ready. Where are the guards? And why had they let the fire get so low? he thought as he headed for the tent his men were sleeping in. He entered the tent cautiously as a swarm of bats flew out and by the dim light of the fire he saw he was too late. His men were dead, everything drenched in blood. Some soldiers were still in their beds, their throats ripped open. Others scattered the blood covered ground, their bodies torn apart. ”What could have done this!?” the captain said in horror. He wondered what could have slaughtered all of his trained soldiers before a thought hit him like a hammer. ”The Girl!” he said rushing to the girls tent, almost tripping over the corpse of his sergeant. He reached the tent but found it empty. ”Where is she?” he said as he suddenly heard a new series of cries at the edge of the nearby woods. He saw a small torch burning in the distance as he headed for the light, almost trampling over the lifeless body of a guard. The girl was leaning against a tree, an arrow protruding from her shoulder, her clothes were covered in blood, but she was alive. The girl looked at the captain with hope and relief as he approached her, but then her eyes focused on something over his shoulder and she shouted ”Behind you!” The captain quickly spun around, ready to fight, ready to give his life to protect that innocent girl form the creature that slaughtered his men. He scanned the darkness for any trace of a monster when another voice whispered in his ear, sending a chill down his spine. It was a languid, sensual voice of a woman, with an evil, ironic hint in its tone ”I told you it was behind you…” A hand burst through the captains back and through his chest as he felt a pair of lips kiss his neck before feeling the girls fangs sink into his throat. As she dropped the nearly dead captain to the ground the girl removed the arrow from her shoulder, the wound healing almost instantly. ”I’m so glad I found someone to ‘play’ with…”the girl said with a laugh as she headed off into the woods, her hunger for blood satisfied for the moment.

Evil Medusa-Sama


rusbob13

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PostPosted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 3:00 pm


Medusa: You didn't really rp any of the vampire's weaknesses in it. But you seem to have a pretty good grasp on the bloodline, so it's accepted 3nodding
PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:17 pm


Rpc name: Srin Arzo or Mask
Nation:Nocturne
Rank:Trainee
Bloodline request: Dreadnought
What I know?. They are creatures of power and strikes fear in his enemies. They arnt full demons but half breed clan. They have an armor ability called carapase. They can shed and regrow after awhile They are smelled by vamps and werewolves. Other nations can sense them.
Rp sample: Moon shines down on barren ground, bodies litter the ground. Some alive goarning for help and others lay there bleeding. Werewolves run over them crushing bones and making the scream in pain. A shot rings out catching one between the eyes. They skid to a stop they sniff the air looking for the creature. They smell it and before they can move again shot rings though the one to the far left head.
He postions rifle on a dead body and refocuses shot. He aims for the alpha leading them. The spot him and start running at him on all fours. He fires again catching the alpha in shoulder making it spin out. The other 6 come charging. He gets up and fires twice missing once and hitting another in the eye. He had 45 secs intil they got there he thought. He raises his mask sightly. His casepace forms and he forms second rifle, he loads it and fires 5 shots, making them brust into gore. Thank god for Terror shot he thinks laughing. The other getting ready to jump at him. They jump and he blocks using rifle. He hits in the side of the head and pulls out pistol killing the one coming from side. The dazed wolf charges and he pulls out second and fires it point blank. He spins pistols and looks at his kill for the day. 9 werewolves and a few humans, kool. He starts to walk away. The alpha comes from behid and slashes him with it's one arm. He rolls on ground and his arm was bleeding slightly. His glow as he gets up. It charges him and slashes downward. He blocks it with forearm, a shield blocking it. His body armored he glares at werewolf and smashes his fist though it's body. Srin pulls it out and walks away wiping blood off.

Great Lord Wulvengar

Enduring Prophet

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Fist of the Bro Star

Shirtless Seraph

PostPosted: Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:39 pm


Rain: Denied. Dreadnoughts cannot regenerate, they just shed and regrow their carapace. Also I need to see some use of the bloodline's skills in your sample, maybe Terror Shot and Carapace Shield for example.
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