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 Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:23 pm
"The user summons up the chakra that they want stored and then performs the jutsu."
I added that in the second line so that you can only put in chakra that you have at the time of creation. Now, if there are any other comments or questions other than "approved", please PM me with them. I don't want people to lose their applications in pages of this debating.
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:18 pm
Sorry for misreading your jutsu deil your approved
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:06 pm
Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier. This can only be maintained for three posts due to the amount chakra control required for its effect.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Touch
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals. The user will touch the opponent, and in a sense "stop" the movement of chakra in their body for two posts, or continually if the user maintains their palm on the opponent.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Touch
Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. Placing a palm on an ally, their chakra is augmented, increasing the rank of all chakra techniques by one. This can only go on for two posts if contact is disconnected, it will be maintained if the palm is held on them.
Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator. The balls of chakra are roughly the size of softballs, and burn to the touch with explosive effect. The dragon may fire a total of ten, before it dissipates. The dragon lasts for ten posts.Edited once more...
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 5:08 pm
Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Weak Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. This is restricted to Medical-class nins only.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent's wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to spread. There may only be very bad stinging pain.
Technique Name: Cellular-degeneration: Minor
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, cells are pulled from them. This has no lasting effect on life force. This causes moderate pain in the affected area.
Technique Name: Trauma Relief
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be directly over the person. Can not perform to oneself. Anyone may learn this technique, of any classification.
Technique Description: Aaron developed this technique, based on what he had seen within the Sound dojo. There was more to healing, than merely closing wounds and making momentary sealing of pain. By performing a mere three handseals, one is capable of placing both hand on the patient's head. This allows them to soothe the patient's mental status. Clearing the patient of all sorrow, all pain, all anger, they may free them of insanity, and traumatic stress. This also relieves the patient of lasting genjutsu effects up to Jounin in rank, costing equivalent chakra to the genjutsu used, additionally. This is only temporary, after five posts, they will have to deal with their mental instability once more.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Minor
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the weakest form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 15% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Major
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the middle form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 25% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Cellular-degeneration: Major
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, cells are pulled from them. A larger amount is taken this time. This has a minor lasting effect on life force. This is an advanced amount, this time causing severe pain.
Technique Name: Adrenaline Jump-start
Technique Type(s): Support, buff
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Person must be able to handle stinging pain. It can be used on oneself. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique.
Technique Description: Aaron developed an ability to make use of advanced medicine. He wanted to be able to keep people going, even after they had fallen incapacitated in battle. Using a scalpel, preferably the Chakra Scalpel, one may create tiny incision. From there, a unique salve in the form of a medicinal powder is placed upon the open wound. It directly enters the bloodstream, and will awaken an unconscious patient. From there, their heart rate jumps, and they are able to function once more, for a short duration of five posts. Must be used as soon as the ally had passed out.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Superior
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the max form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 30% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Deadly Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to rapidly spread. This causes severe inflammatory pain, potential convulsions, and heavy coughing.
Technique Name: Cellular Genesis
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Sannin/Kage
Technique Requirement(s): Must exert chakra and manipulate living cells, forcing mitosis and meiosis to double in division. Can not lose focus. Must have chakra control as main strength. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron was tired of seeing ninjas return home without limbs, or missing parts of their face. By delving deep into the study of cellular growth and division, he was able to create a technique that exceeds the laws of medical science, thus making him re-known in history forever. Breaking the barrier of cell fiction and fact, he found a way to grow back body parts. Performing a long series of handseals (roughly twenty-five), Aaron will pool a large amount of his maximum chakra over an area missing something. This is done, by using a previous tissue sample. If possible, a large clump would be even more effective. By knowing its genetic make-up, and having an envisioned appearance of it in his mind, he is able to rebuild the bone, then the cells, then the tissues, muscles, and finally the dermal layer of skin. The body will take time getting used to the new part, but it will not reject it. ((Editations for the 2nd set of techniques))
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:42 pm
Metal Psychometry:
Rank: D
Who can use it: Genjuu-Kinzoku Bloodline
Description: The user can touch something metal, and use this ability to look back in time and mentally experiences sound and light waves that the metal has been exposed to. So, if say an assassin has been caught, and the user can find something metal on the assassin, the user can then use this technique to look back in time to find out who gave them the mission to the assassin and who it was. It takes one post [a minute or so] to "download" and process a day's worth of information from an object. This technique can go back an unlimited amount of time, but it uses up a D rank of chakra every post it is used.
Acid Blood Poison Killer:
Rank: D [no hand signs]
Users: Genjuu-Kinzoku Bloodline
Description: The acid in the clan members has the ability to kill biological pathogens as well as disassemble the molecular structure of poisons. This technique will passively kill biological pathogens, but requires a D rank of chakra for the acid to bond to and break down toxins. This technique will immediately kill and destroy poisons of enemies of lower rank than the user. If the enemy is the same rank as the user, this technique will cause the conditions not to worsen that are caused by the poisons and pathogens, and takes 3 posts to terminate them. If the enemy is of higher rank, this technique will cause the poisons to take twice as long to affect the body.
Oxygen Efficiency Technique:
Rank: C
Limited to: Taijutsu and Weapon Master class with Fuuton element as primary
Description: This technique lets the users to increase the oxygen efficiency of the muscles in the body. This allows the users to operate in conditions where oxygen is scarce, and to make themselves one rank stronger and faster where oxygen is plentiful. However, if the amount of oxygen in the air is close to 100% of the composition of the air, the users can make themselves two ranks stronger and faster.
This technique lasts for 2 posts, and has a 5 post cool off.
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Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 8:47 pm
havikthecold _Manpish_ Jutsu Name: Paper Teleportation technique Jutsu Rank: C Use: Restricted, only members of the Oragami no Dara bloodline can learn this. Range: one-two miles Type: Ninjutsu Element: Paper Description: After forming the needed hand sign the user will suddenly be engulfed in swirl of paper then they will disappear from sight and re-appear wherever they wish within a one-two mile radius as long as they can imagine the location they wish to go to. This jutsu is a rather basic one and can only be used when not in battle (cannot be used in a fight). ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jutsu Name: Paper Summoning: Paper Snakes Jutsu Rank: D-S Use: Restricted, only members of the Oragami no Dara bloodline can learn this. Range: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Summoning Element: Paper/Chakra Description: After making the required seals the user will be able to summon several different sized snakes to attack their opponent/help them in battle. These snakes have a small chakra system so that they can preform any one paper jutsu that the user knows (large snakes may preform up to three paper jutsu). The most seen Paper Snake is one that Hana Tsuchikage summons to his aid which looks like the boss snake summon Manda. this snake can use up to four paper jutsu that Hana knows before he disperses in a burst of smoke and paper. (This Jutsu does not count towards a Summoning jutsu but is instead a regular technique that is unique to the Oragami no Dara bloodline and is only usable by the members of the bloodline.) The first one is fine however it cant be learned until you become Chuunin. The second is iffy, you should be able to summon papper snakes with Chakra sytems and the ability to use Jutsu unless its a summon. You could always make a papper snake summon that can only be used by the Paper clan tho. So you can either edit it so its not so powerful or you can creat a papper summoning application alright ill learn that at Chuunin... Alright ive edited the second one a little bit so its not as powerful. but if it is too powerfull then ill edit it more.
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Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 12:10 pm
Ok man your approved
Good luck RPing
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:34 am
Deil Grist Metal Psychometry: Rank: D Who can use it: Genjuu-Kinzoku Bloodline Description: The user can touch something metal, and use this ability to look back in time and mentally experiences sound and light waves that the metal has been exposed to. So, if say an assassin has been caught, and the user can find something metal on the assassin, the user can then use this technique to look back in time to find out who gave them the mission to the assassin and who it was. It takes one post [a minute or so] to "download" and process a day's worth of information from an object. This technique can go back an unlimited amount of time, but it uses up a D rank of chakra every post it is used. Acid Blood Poison Killer: Rank: D [no hand signs] Users: Genjuu-Kinzoku Bloodline Description: The acid in the clan members has the ability to kill biological pathogens as well as disassemble the molecular structure of poisons. This technique will passively kill biological pathogens, but requires a D rank of chakra for the acid to bond to and break down toxins. This technique will immediately kill and destroy poisons of enemies of lower rank than the user. If the enemy is the same rank as the user, this technique will cause the conditions not to worsen that are caused by the poisons and pathogens, and takes 3 posts to terminate them. If the enemy is of higher rank, this technique will cause the poisons to take twice as long to affect the body. Oxygen Efficiency Technique: Rank: C Limited to: Taijutsu and Weapon Master class with Fuuton element as primary Description: This technique lets the users to increase the oxygen efficiency of the muscles in the body. This allows the users to operate in conditions where oxygen is scarce, and to make themselves one rank stronger and faster where oxygen is plentiful. However, if the amount of oxygen in the air is close to 100% of the composition of the air, the users can make themselves two ranks stronger and faster. This technique lasts for 2 posts, and has a 5 post cool off. Could I get a look at this? I also sent an application to use my bloodline.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:31 am
The first jutsu makes no sense... and is denied
The second jutau is fine and approved
The third should be at least a B rank jutsu, it has the ability to make a Genin as strong as a Jounin, a Chuunin as strong as a Kage, and so forth and so on. (BTW I know this is RPing and what not and this is more of a stament and hold no real meaning behind it but your RPC Deil is the one that this jutsu is for Correct? If you increase his muscles over and over again with the Gates and this jutsu he would be almost cripple by the time he is 20-25 depending on how much you use it.)
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:47 am
1. Psychometry: The paranormal ability to discover information about an object's past, and especially about its past owners, merely by handling it; The use of psychological tests to measure intelligence, abilities, attitudes, and personality traits.
Does this help explain what the jutsu does? Basically that bloodline would be able to touch metal and see/hear events that the metal experienced.
2. Okay
3. Yeah, I'll go ahead and do that. Hey, cripples can fight too XD just look at yoda!
I don't plan to use it too often, just against fire users or when I don't want to open gates.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 1:57 pm
Martin Spiralwave RPC Name:Kingu Shisui RPC Rank:Chuunin Name of Jutsu: Shinra Tense & Bansho Ten'nin Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Element: Yin-Yang Chakra Cost: B Range of Jutsu: All Ranges Description: Shinra Tensei: Shinra Tensei is the ability to manipulate gravity at the users will to repulse matter away while negating it's mass. It's power is dependent on the size and the mass of the object is it affecting. For example using Shinra Tensei to break a wooden door would use a different amount of force than when trying to break a stone door. By using this technique as a defensive measure, all attacks directed to the user will be deflected, no matter the size or mass. The only downside to this technique is that there is a short period when it is unusable after being used, though only for roughly five seconds [2 posts]. Shinra Tensei can be directed into a wider blast to compensate larger or more numerous targets. Shinra Tensei can also be used on a larger scale for massive destruction [S rank chakra drain]. A massive gravity well is created above the target, crushing everything beneath in a titanic explosion. Using Shinra Tensei on this scale shortens the users lifespan and leaves him unable to use it for several minutes [ten posts]. Bansho Ten'ninBanshÅ Ten'in is a technique similar to Shinra Tensei in that it manipulates gravity at the users will, however instead of pushing objects away, it draws them close. It does not have the time restraint of Shinra Tensei but exacts pain in the wrist of the user.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 2:49 pm
Like I said it doesn't ake sense for a Taijutsu clan to be able to gather Inormation better than a assasin class. This in my oppinoin is denied however you cand seek out the point of veiw of another Mod and have my verdic over ruled.
Yoda is so awsome lol but you still have to bump it up to a B rank. and the would be tired from the over use of there muscles right for a post or two after they used the ability?
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Martin I suggest you contact Cobra about that jutsu.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 3:22 pm
Its not a taijutsu bloodline, it is a bloodline of people with durable bones that love to fight period. Havik, YOUR character loves to fight. Does that make him a taijutsu class?
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 4:03 pm
Like my verdict or my point of veiw or not I have given you your option, if you want you may seek the point of veiw from another mod and we can debate this but I see it as a OP ability that should not be used on a clan that is best suited for taijutsu users.
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Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 4:36 pm
I get that you have given your opinion, I was just trying to figure why you think that it is best suited for taijutsu users.
By the way, what is OP?
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