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 Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 1:18 am
Stormold Guan Senju Rpc Name: Guan Yu Senju Village: Rock Rank: academy student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton What you know about the clan/bl: it is the ability to grow manipulate wood from around the user or even from the users own body. The ability was first made by the first Hokage who is said to have used it to conquer and tame a few demons with it. at first it is described as using ones chakra as a life source for plants but later it is said that it is performed by molding doton and suiton elements together. Rp Sample: Guan got ready to engage his opponent. this competition was supposed to be non lethal but he knew that neither he or his foe would hold back. The judge's hand dropped and Guan leap forward. His opponent braced for a head on impact and Guan smiled. Using his mokuton ability he raised a tree right in front of himself. he used the tree to change direction from forward to up and over. as he came down he made another small tree. This cushioned his landing and he sliding behind it for cover as he foe unleashed some flying rocks. the slammed into the trunk of the tree hard but even with all of their force could only make the tree shake. the second the stones hit the tree Guan was off running and in the opposite direction ran a wood clone. Both Guans both turned and shot wood spikes at the boy. The opponent was forced to dive toward one of the trees. As the foe rose to his feet one Guan wrapped the roots of the tree around the boys ankles trapping him. while the clone used two wood spikes to pin the boy against the tree. a third spike zoomed in and missed the boy's head by inches. "thats good enough." the judge said stepping in and ending the match. (sorry for the crapy post) I want to say approved, because you know what to do with it and how it works. But you need to improve your grammar in the posts, just remembering to use capitalization would improve it greatly. Revise it with better grammar. Id like to add a comment to that if I may, Due to being the first approved mokuton user, and im being nice cause i want more mokuton users ^^ since im in the process of creating many mokuton jutsus for others to use and not just ones for puppets. I suggest redoing you rp sample, show a better user standing of the true potential that mokuton has. Also you should show that you know of its weaknesses to. I only say this because iv read through this thread twice and many who accept people say this exact same thing. Thats all and good luck ^^ lemme know if you get accepted cause just because im akatsuki dosnt mean i wont teach another mokuton user a thing or two ^^ beside soon there will be many jutsus you can only learn from me ^^
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 2:30 am
Zhang Senju Rpc Name: Zhang Fei Senju
Village: Rock
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Iron Sand
What you know about the clan/bl: The Iron Sand is a special technique used by the Third Kazekage, in combination with his unique ability to convert chakra into magnetic forces. The Third studied a host of the One-Tailed Shukaku and learned to imitate the power to control sand. However, when he imitated sand techniques, he used iron powder instead, thanks to his special magnetic powers. He could use it to crush his opponents or even mold the sand into weapons. The Iron Sand can also clot up the joints of puppets, making them unusable in battle as long as the Third Kazekage's magnetic field is in effect.
Rp Sample: Zhang was ready for combat, his gorde of Iron sand slung across his back. I know this is not enough of an RP sample right now but my mom wants me so ill come back and edit this later. xd Please do add more. rofl rofl rofl
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 8:43 pm
Interest In Your Insides ((first and foremost, let me state that this will be the last character change for me. I found the first character shouldn't have had the Hiramekarei, and my second character could not be a taijutsu specialist of the eight gates when the two eight gates teacher are barely on. (no offense, it's just making my training incredibly hard, maybe if someone else learns it and can teach me, it'll be a back up character. Anyways, I still have my saved spot in konoha, and I've donated 20k to lance already, for no reason, so im sure that i don't need to throw in another k at the moment. i periodically donate around 20-30k to my favorite guilds.)) Rpc Name:Uchiha Taiji Village:Konoha Rank:Academy Bloodline or Clan applied for:Sharingan What you know about the clan/bl:The sharingan is said to be a descendant of the byakugan, but it was shown that the sharingan was actually known as the sages eyes,given to the elder of the great sages sons, when he had his children inherit his strength and will. The clans first member was spiteful towards his brother, whom was chosen by their father on his deathbed. The uchiha clan were mercenaries, who were hired whenever the senju clan was hired by an opposing clan. The rest of the clans history is commonly known by everyone, and I feel like i don't need to go into express detail about them joining the senju to make Konoha, and the policeforce, Danzo making itachi kill his clan and whatnot. The Sharingan has the ability to increase the users reaction speed, to create more fortified genjutsus, and to break through the genjutsus of others. It also can copy almost any technique that it sees, except for bloodline limits. The sharingan opens itself when the uchiha clansman is in a do or die situation. it starts red with one tomoe, and it evolves from a second, and then third time, become stronger each time. Then if the user meets special conditions, such as killing your closest friend, gains the Mangekyou sharingan, The techniques from the mangekyou makes the user lose their eyesight, until they take the eyes of their brother, who also has the mangekyou, and implanting their eyes to make theirs perfect. Rp Sample: WHAM!Body hit cold, hard ground, as a maniacal laugh left the lips of the unknown persons assailant. The figure on the floor scrambled desperately to get up off of the ground, and get away from whomever this person was. The silhouette that was standing in the darkness clapped his hand, and candles all around the room lit up instantly. "you're probably curious about how you ended up here in the first place. You're gonna give me those eyes of yours kid. Whether you like it, or not." The boy on the floor couldn't have been any older than fourteen, sweat streaming down his face, as his teeth stayed clenched tight, from all of the pain he was feeling. He pounded a fist on the floor as he cursed these eyes of his. People hunted him like he was some sort of prize, and he hadn't even unlocked their power yet. Something that very moment, inside of the boy snapped. Maybe it was the fact that he could see his kidnapper standing in the corner, delicately picking up tools for his makeshift surgery. Maybe it was that the boy was tired of always being targeted by everyone who lusts for power, or maybe he figured that if he was going to die, he wouldn't die without a fight. Whatever the cause, the boy wrenched himself up, as his head drooped towards the floor. "you won't be taking anything from me. Nothing, at all." As he lifted his head and made direct eye contact with his attacker, it became apparent that his desperate situation, had turned out for the better. His eyes were now a sharp crimson, and a single tomoe could be seen in the lower left hand corner of his eye. He made several basic hand seals, before leaning back, chest puffed out, before releasing his flame on his own hand. "Katon: Hi Shinten no Jutsu!" A bright flame covered his his hand, as he ran, fist cocked back, at the man. His enemy quickly dropped the surgical knife, and took defensive stance, while the uchiha leaps through the air, launching a jumping roundhouse with his right foot. The foot almost hit the neck of his enemy, but the man caught it in his hand, and with his unlit right fist, he threw a punch, which was caught by the other hand. Tai smirked as the flame on his fist, wasn't at his fist anymore.He twisted his whole body to the right, bringing his left leg up, for an axe kick. His leg made a sickening crack as it connected, flame covered, on the top of his assailants head. The man let go, and felt to the floor, as the Uchiha limped his way out of the room he was in. "F***ing power hungry imbecile, and it was such a low-level genjutsu that led to your demise." APPROVED!!! sorry I'm to lazy to find my banner right now
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Posted: Thu May 13, 2010 9:18 pm
Lance, I already approved him. lol
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 11:41 am
Rpc Name: Zhang Fei Senju
Village: Rock
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Iron Sand
What you know about the clan/bl: The Iron Sand is a special technique used by the Third Kazekage, in combination with his unique ability to convert chakra into magnetic forces. The Third studied a host of the One-Tailed Shukaku and learned to imitate the power to control sand. However, when he imitated sand techniques, he used iron powder instead, thanks to his special magnetic powers. He could use it to crush his opponents or even mold the sand into weapons. The Iron Sand can also clot up the joints of puppets, making them unusable in battle as long as the Third Kazekage's magnetic field is in effect.
Rp Sample: Zhang was ready for combat, his gorde of Iron sand slung across his back. he knew for a fact that by walking into this saloon, some one will die. but he had too, the murder was in there, this was hi mission to find the murder and to bring him to justice, though that fact that he would go willingly was minimal if non existent at all. "Here we go", Zhang sighed as he ran his hand through his hair and making sure his hair was tied bak before entering. On his way walking in from the heat of the blazing outside desert, Zhang Fei loosened the cap off of his gorde and tilted it ever so slightly so that a little by little tiny iron dust particles poured out into the sand. To notice it would take the trained eye of a master whom owned eagle eyes. As Zhang reached the door way he tilted the gorde a bit more allowing more to fall out then he straighten it back up in its normal position. Zhang estimated that about 4 pounds total were on the ground. He opened the door to the bar to find few people starring back at him, two or three tops not including the bar patron. Immediately someone moved in behind Zhang, blocking his exit through the door he just entered. Another person stood up in front of him drawling a katana, and Zhang can hear the man behind him take out a weapon as well. Unfortunately this fight would be too easy, just one jutsu would make this fight over. "Hagane Ame no Jutsu" (Metal Release - Steel Rain Skill) was all Zhang Fei had to mutter as the iron particles from out side 4 pounds worth formed into small rain droplets and all the bar tender could see was iron raining and hailing sideways and the two opponents turned into red mist as a hail of iron poured into and through their bodies. "Mission complete." Zhang Fei muttered.
how is it now? xd
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 5:48 pm
Zhang Senju Rpc Name: Zhang Fei Senju
Village: Rock
Rank: Academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Iron Sand
What you know about the clan/bl: The Iron Sand is a special technique used by the Third Kazekage, in combination with his unique ability to convert chakra into magnetic forces. The Third studied a host of the One-Tailed Shukaku and learned to imitate the power to control sand. However, when he imitated sand techniques, he used iron powder instead, thanks to his special magnetic powers. He could use it to crush his opponents or even mold the sand into weapons. The Iron Sand can also clot up the joints of puppets, making them unusable in battle as long as the Third Kazekage's magnetic field is in effect.
Rp Sample: Zhang was ready for combat, his gorde of Iron sand slung across his back. he knew for a fact that by walking into this saloon, some one will die. but he had too, the murder was in there, this was hi mission to find the murder and to bring him to justice, though that fact that he would go willingly was minimal if non existent at all. "Here we go", Zhang sighed as he ran his hand through his hair and making sure his hair was tied bak before entering. On his way walking in from the heat of the blazing outside desert, Zhang Fei loosened the cap off of his gorde and tilted it ever so slightly so that a little by little tiny iron dust particles poured out into the sand. To notice it would take the trained eye of a master whom owned eagle eyes. As Zhang reached the door way he tilted the gorde a bit more allowing more to fall out then he straighten it back up in its normal position. Zhang estimated that about 4 pounds total were on the ground. He opened the door to the bar to find few people starring back at him, two or three tops not including the bar patron. Immediately someone moved in behind Zhang, blocking his exit through the door he just entered. Another person stood up in front of him drawling a katana, and Zhang can hear the man behind him take out a weapon as well. Unfortunately this fight would be too easy, just one jutsu would make this fight over. "Hagane Ame no Jutsu" (Metal Release - Steel Rain Skill) was all Zhang Fei had to mutter as the iron particles from out side 4 pounds worth formed into small rain droplets and all the bar tender could see was iron raining and hailing sideways and the two opponents turned into red mist as a hail of iron poured into and through their bodies. "Mission complete." Zhang Fei muttered. how is it now? xd Much better: approved
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 6:44 pm
Rpc Name: Yun Sung
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Yamanaka Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: First introduced to the series during the chuunin arc by Ino Yamanaka, the Yamanaka have the ability to send their soul into the body of another ninja. While they are able to control the body, theirs is immobile and defenseless. It is a great skill for gathering information or entering compounds using a ninja from that area. The weakness is that if the enemy has a strong enough will, it can kick out the Yamanaka. Also, there needs to be a second ninja who can guard the Yamanaka's body.
Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan)
"So the prisoner has said nothing yet?"
Yun walked down the hallways of the intelligence district of Iwagakure. Now appointed to jounin rank and head of the Iwagakure Tactical Combat Division, he must create plans of attack on other villages and rogue groups. But, he also has another job in his division. He is incharge of interrogation, due to his new found skills. He enters the room to see a man tied up and unconcious, covered in special seal tags.
"Alright, time to get started. Mind read!"
Yun placed his hand onto the ninja's head and closed his eyes. His surroundings became black as a door appeared. He opens it. He was now in the mind of the enemy. He walks through the halls, looking at doors with words on them. At the end, he stands infront of a large door with the secrets to the rogue group that was hiding outside the walls of Iwagakure. Yun laughs at the poor protection of such information. He opens the door and enters it. About an hour later, Yun opens his eyes and releases the man. He turns around.
"Scatter the troops into the forests. The enemy is planning on trying to dig through the mountains to reach the village with a sneak attack. If we move now, we can stop them for good."
Turning around, Yun walked out of the building and towards the Tsuchikage's office to turn in his findings. He grins as he thought about the victory that was soon to come. Without warning, a voice begins to speak in his head. It was one of his clanmates who was on the frontline.
Yun, rogue units have infiltrated the village. They are coming after you!"
A presence is felt behind him as he formed his handsigns.
"Stone weight jutsu!"
The earth below the rogue, immobilizing him. Yun then turns around and forms his handsign and holds his hands out.
"Mind Body Change Justu!"
Yun enters the rogues body as the now controlled body laughs. He watches as the rocks break below him and he walks back into the interrogation room. Yun then releases his technique and returns to his body. The door slams shut as blood currdling screams are heard as a bloody hand falls down the window on the door. Yun laughs. He uses his telepathy to communicate with the other Yamanaka.
"Threat eliminated, continue with the plan."
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 10:58 am
Rpc Name: Guan Yu Senju
Village: Rock
Rank: academy student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton
What you know about the clan/bl: it is the ability to grow manipulate wood from around the user or even from the users own body. The ability was first made by the first Hokage who is said to have used it to conquer and tame a few demons with it. at first it is described as using ones chakra as a life source for plants but later it is said that it is performed by molding doton and suiton elements together.
Rp Sample: Guan got ready to engage his opponent. This competition was supposed to be non-lethal but he knew that neither he or his foe would hold back. In the back of his mind Guan considered the chances of the boy glaring at him to possess the elements of Fire of Lightning. If he did this match would be a hard one but if not then Guan had nothing to fear. The judge's hand dropped and Guan leap forward. His opponent braced for a head on impact and Guan smiled. Clearly this other boy was filled with fear! Using his mokuton ability he raised a tree right in front of himself. He used the tree to change direction from forward to up and over. As he came down he made another small tree. This cushioned his landing and he sliding behind it for cover as he foe unleashed some flying rocks. The slammed into the trunk of the tree hard but even with all of their force could only make the tree shake. The second the stones hit the tree Guan was off running and in the opposite direction ran a wood clone. Both Guans both turned and shot wood spikes at the boy. The opponent was forced to dive toward one of the trees. As the foe rose to his feet one Guan wrapped the roots of the tree around the boys ankles trapping him. while the clone used two wood spikes to pin the boy against the tree. A third spike zoomed in and missed the boy's head by inches. "Thats good enough." The judge said stepping in and ending the match.
(Is that good enough?)
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 1:54 pm
to be honest? no >.> you do not just randomly grow a tree with mokuton. There are only 2 jutsus that allow u to grow a tree and that a jounnin rank and kage rank. Jounin level jutsu drains opponents chakra useing the tree. Kage grows a forest. (was the first kages jutsu that grew the forest in front of konoha) There is no wood manipulation jutsu that allows you to control wood like that.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 7:11 pm
Cain the Blade Rpc Name: Yun Sung Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Yamanaka Clan What you know about the clan/bl: First introduced to the series during the chuunin arc by Ino Yamanaka, the Yamanaka have the ability to send their soul into the body of another ninja. While they are able to control the body, theirs is immobile and defenseless. It is a great skill for gathering information or entering compounds using a ninja from that area. The weakness is that if the enemy has a strong enough will, it can kick out the Yamanaka. Also, there needs to be a second ninja who can guard the Yamanaka's body. Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan) "So the prisoner has said nothing yet?" Yun walked down the hallways of the intelligence district of Iwagakure. Now appointed to jounin rank and head of the Iwagakure Tactical Combat Division, he must create plans of attack on other villages and rogue groups. But, he also has another job in his division. He is incharge of interrogation, due to his new found skills. He enters the room to see a man tied up and unconcious, covered in special seal tags. "Alright, time to get started. Mind read!" Yun placed his hand onto the ninja's head and closed his eyes. His surroundings became black as a door appeared. He opens it. He was now in the mind of the enemy. He walks through the halls, looking at doors with words on them. At the end, he stands infront of a large door with the secrets to the rogue group that was hiding outside the walls of Iwagakure. Yun laughs at the poor protection of such information. He opens the door and enters it. About an hour later, Yun opens his eyes and releases the man. He turns around. "Scatter the troops into the forests. The enemy is planning on trying to dig through the mountains to reach the village with a sneak attack. If we move now, we can stop them for good." Turning around, Yun walked out of the building and towards the Tsuchikage's office to turn in his findings. He grins as he thought about the victory that was soon to come.
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Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 7:50 pm
Cain the Blade Rpc Name: Yun Sung Village: Iwagakure Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Yamanaka Clan What you know about the clan/bl: First introduced to the series during the chuunin arc by Ino Yamanaka, the Yamanaka have the ability to send their soul into the body of another ninja. While they are able to control the body, theirs is immobile and defenseless. It is a great skill for gathering information or entering compounds using a ninja from that area. The weakness is that if the enemy has a strong enough will, it can kick out the Yamanaka. Also, there needs to be a second ninja who can guard the Yamanaka's body. Rp Sample: (at least 2 paragraphs of at least 10 lines using said BL or Clan) "So the prisoner has said nothing yet?" Yun walked down the hallways of the intelligence district of Iwagakure. Now appointed to jounin rank and head of the Iwagakure Tactical Combat Division, he must create plans of attack on other villages and rogue groups. But, he also has another job in his division. He is incharge of interrogation, due to his new found skills. He enters the room to see a man tied up and unconcious, covered in special seal tags. "Alright, time to get started. Mind read!" Yun placed his hand onto the ninja's head and closed his eyes. His surroundings became black as a door appeared. He opens it. He was now in the mind of the enemy. He walks through the halls, looking at doors with words on them. At the end, he stands infront of a large door with the secrets to the rogue group that was hiding outside the walls of Iwagakure. Yun laughs at the poor protection of such information. He opens the door and enters it. About an hour later, Yun opens his eyes and releases the man. He turns around. "Scatter the troops into the forests. The enemy is planning on trying to dig through the mountains to reach the village with a sneak attack. If we move now, we can stop them for good." Turning around, Yun walked out of the building and towards the Tsuchikage's office to turn in his findings. He grins as he thought about the victory that was soon to come. Without warning, a voice begins to speak in his head. It was one of his clanmates who was on the frontline. Yun, rogue units have infiltrated the village. They are coming after you!"A presence is felt behind him as he formed his handsigns. "Stone weight jutsu!" The earth below the rogue, immobilizing him. Yun then turns around and forms his handsign and holds his hands out. "Mind Body Change Justu!" Yun enters the rogues body as the now controlled body laughs. He watches as the rocks break below him and he walks back into the interrogation room. Yun then releases his technique and returns to his body. The door slams shut as blood currdling screams are heard as a bloody hand falls down the window on the door. Yun laughs. He uses his telepathy to communicate with the other Yamanaka. "Threat eliminated, continue with the plan." edited
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Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 1:57 pm
Rpc Name: Naito Nara
Village: Leaf
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Nara Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: They can manipulate their shadows to do really awesome jutsus, and they originate in the Hidden Leaf Village.
Rp Sample: Naito sighed as he approached the bandits' camp. 'For crying out loud, these guys don't even have guards... and this is a B-Rank mission?' he thought.
Suddenly an alarm sounded as Naito got close to the camp, and several bandits came out and attacked him. He just sighed and made a handseal. Suddenly several tendrils shot out of his shadow and skewered the bandits as Naito said, "If you're going to attack, you might want to make it less obvious." Several more bandits lunged at him, but he just sank into a strange pool of shadow as he chuckled. Then he re-emerged several feet away and went through a series of handseals before his shadow turned into a large dragon and ate the bandits. "All too easy," Naito said in amusement as his shadow returned to normal.
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Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 4:07 pm
Rpc Name: Kari Ushio
Village: Mist
Rank: Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Ushio
What you know about the clan/bl: They originate in the MIst village and have their set of water jutsus. They have the power to perform jutsus without reciting the incantation or performing the seals. They are a very studious clan as well ^^
Rp Sample: Kari dashed through the forests, using chakra to propel herself upwards as she jumped from tree branch to tree branch. She looked up, staring into the full moon as she hoped it would be a good night. As she leapt out of the forests and unto a prairie, she spotted her quarry. Two shinobis that stole precious scrolls from the village library, it was her mission to take them back. Her reward...their blood.
As she approached the two, her hips swayed from side to side as both shinobis unsheathed their swords. “Well look at what we have here…such a pretty thing like you so far away from the village…” Gregar laughed as they saw that she was a mere woman. “You should just turn around and walk away, wouldn’t want a pretty little thing like you to get hurt now would you?” the other, Lance commented.
She continued walking forward; unsheathing her sword as it shone in the moonlight…the silver blade reflected her fiercesome blue eyes. She didn’t respond…not saying a single word. Not that she didn’t want to, it was simply that she couldn’t. Whoever heard of a mute shinobi? But then again, she wasn’t just any normal shinobi. As she continued walking forward, with her right hand holding unto the sword, she began going through handsigns with her left. Thanks to her blood, she not only had the ability to use jutsus with one hand, but she had the power to manipulate both water and wind simultaneously. Breathing out, the temperature decreased drastically, her breath showing in the night as several mirrors formed around the three of them. Using double the amount of chakra it would take for a normal shinobi, she had formed the Demonic Ice Mirrors without uttering a single word. The Lance and Gregar lunged at her as she merely jumped back, merging into one of the mirrors. As she stood there within the world of mirrors, she jumped to the one at the very top, using incredible speed to do so.
Lance and Gregar were simply bewildered at her abilities, trying to find her within the mirrors since she was moving too fast for their normal eyes to keep up. Seeing them from above, the girl landed between them on the ground, twirling her blade in such a swift and fluid motion, that she cut through them like butter. Sprays of blood erupted from their bodies as they tainted not only the ground, but her as well with their crimson tinge. As their blood curling screams filled the night sky, the mirrors melted into water as she looked up into the moon, licking the blood of Gregar and Lance from her fingers. It was indeed a good night...now she hoped to kill the other two...Jade...and Zane.
(Note I am applying for Ushio, I just thought I'd use Hyoton for fun)
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