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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:19 pm
[[*sighs* Why do these things happen why I'm gone? gonk
Ok, since I'm not on as much as some of you. I'll entrust RayneTree as my second in command. You've done an outstanding job so far. blaugh
Please, Guys, if you feel the story needs to be advanced. Use the gods, their NPCs, to be used however. If you need someone to help you along and have nothing to do, I'm not on -RayneTree will give you instructions to keep you going.
That is... if Rayne accepts the position. sweatdrop If not, I'll have to go think some more for another candidate.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:20 pm
[[GAH! Gimme a second to breath you guys! I had to mop the ENTIRE store.... crying ]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:23 pm
(( lol i dont think we are in that much of a rush ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:27 pm
((*salutes* I can well understand your pain of mopping, Saki. cry ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:31 pm
(( I accept! heart
And thats why I hate working jobs late shift. You have to do like ALL the cleaning just for the day shift to leave you another pile of crap. evil ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:34 pm
[[I understand mopping pains as well...I had to mop most of the house today
Iori - I can totally imagine our characters if they had to team up for some reason (dunno why they ever would, since my character's goal is to wipe out your entire race). Masaru would constantly be considering killing you, and they would have deathmatches over stupid things like who got to kill whomever they came across. lol *watching imaginary scenario in my mind* - End talking to Iori
But yeah...so should my char. meet up with Saki and Kind Stranger's soon?]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:39 pm
[[lol heart You are the best, Kind!!! WHEW! Thanks Rayne! It takes a HUGE load off my shoulders. I luvs you guys!! 4laugh Yeah! Come hang with us!!! -Oh yeah, by the way. My school's starting on Monday and I'll be trying to shove in my summer homework, so I might be on... not so much. Feel free to get ADD and up and leave if you feel like it.]]
"Don't worry," Sakeri said lightly, letting a wicked smile shine through her facade. "I'm sure there will still be a couple of juicy puppies hanging around for us." Amati walked heavily beside her, his head hung low, dreading the coming battles.
"Besides," she chirped, letting her arms swing wildly at her sides. "We can't let them destroy the mountain. All the birds and trees... I don't think the gods will be very happy about that." Soon the town came into view and Sakeri squealed in excitement and took off in a cloud of dust, quickly leaving the other two behind.
Amati started to run after her, only to find himself running at the slow pace of a mortal. He growled, his eye twitching in agitation. Sakeri had taken his speed.
"God, I'm slow," he grumbled to himself, while Sakeri twirled in the distance.
Sakeri took a breath to the cool mountain air only to have it mix with the dusty smoke, and a loud, disgusted cough erupted from her lungs.
"Eh," she twitched, shivering from the intake. "Good thing we're killing this place off."
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:39 pm
((Onamisaki is probably writing a truly meaningful post as we wait... 3nodding ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:43 pm
[[Gah... my brain is filled with dirty mopwater. crying gonk crying Oh, and I turned away that guy that posted his profile on my thread. It didn't look like he'd get along with any of you...]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:45 pm
((LOL too late! She already did! And what did I do again?))
"Hmm... the girl's making more of a point the more I talk to her, but meh, I don't really care about nature. Who cares if a tree or two gets cut down for the sawmill?" He raised his arms in an innocent gesture, leaving Sakeri a second of a headstart. He then crouched and dashed off at a remarkable speed as well, not wanting to lose, and indeed arrived a second before Sakeri did. He yawned loudly for her to notice, "What took you so long?"
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:46 pm
(Yeah, he was, something else. Im working on my post right now, but talking to my cousin at the same time. XD lack of concentration.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:47 pm
The air grew worse and worse as Masaru ascended the mountain. Finally she decided we would close her nostrils, only leaving her nose there for the purpose of aesthetics. "What in the world..." she wondered to herself, having slight trouble using her current set of lungs.
She made a face. Only humans could do things like this. It wasn't what she hated most about them, but it certainly irritated her to some small extent. She finally reached the town the fumes seemed to be drifting from. She wrinkled her nose in distaste, seeing a few humans walking in the streets. The perpetrators.
[[Geez, it takes me so long to write a post... stare meh.]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:59 pm
As it turned out Kin had popped up before she did and scattered her thoughts in moments.
"I? -Keep you wanting?" she inquired innocently, pointing to herself before turning the finger to the wolf, as he continued to pace down the road at the slow speed. Sakeri turned to him, tapping her foot impatiently.
"Come ON!!!" she shouted irritably. Then it occured to her, she had his speed. "Oh!!!" she said in realization and let the thin wisp of smoke return, across the expanse, to her partner.
"GAH!" a voice yelled as a gray blur blazed through the two and smashed into a nearby pole. The canine slid down it with a pained groan and lay still at its base.
"Geez, Amati," she pouted, folding her arms. "You should look where you're going." He stumbled to his feet and shook off the excess dirt, as he staggered over to her, incoherently.
"You..." he mumbled, wavering. "Are mean..." With that he fell flat on the ground before her in a puff of dirt."
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:05 pm
[[I'm soooo hungry... I'm going to go cook my some food.]]
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