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 Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:52 pm
Obliviator24 Copycat Kakashi Hatake As i walked through the gate at the end of the woods I relized that it was about time for me to do my evening training. I started out with some basic jutsu. "SHADOW CLONE JUTSU"I yelled and suddenly five shadow clones were all around me, yet something didn't feel right. I looked around and relized that i had a visitor. Standing behind me was a a shinobi from the sound village looking at me with extreme hate. I decided it was time for me to put my training to use. suddenly all my clones disappeared and I took a fighting stance that i preferred. I had one hand over my back on the handle of my katana. and then i charged. always speak in 3rd person dude. Like "he realized" or "(characters name) realized" sorry bad habit I know I have been trying to change but I am used to doing first person rps like the ninja academy I am running in santa's secret service and santa's army
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:28 pm
This is the story of Rage a swordman of Darkness seeking the thrown of a deserted kingdom. His purpose for wanting to become a Ninja is to prove himself worthy of the throne of Migrantia. His destiny is to rule Migrantia but first he must prove himself worthy.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:42 pm
Rage333 This is the story of Rage a swordman of Darkness seeking the thrown of a deserted kingdom. His purpose for wanting to become a Ninja is to prove himself worthy of the throne of Migrantia. His destiny is to rule Migrantia but first he must prove himself worthy. I'm not one of the approvers, but I'd heavily suggest you go back and look at some of the RP samples that were passed.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:48 pm
The Darkness Makuta Rage333 This is the story of Rage a swordman of Darkness seeking the thrown of a deserted kingdom. His purpose for wanting to become a Ninja is to prove himself worthy of the throne of Migrantia. His destiny is to rule Migrantia but first he must prove himself worthy. I'm not one of the approvers, but I'd heavily suggest you go back and look at some of the RP samples that were passed. i did have a better one but it wasnt in third person so it didnt pass
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 5:59 pm
Kisa was laying in bed, haunted by the memory of his parents death. Furious he got out of bed and walked to his closet to get changed and go out. But after he got his pants on he heard a scream in his head.
"Im comming out," the voice screamed in a high pitched voice.
"NO," kisa yelled to himself. "I wont let you,"
He falls to his knees trying to fight the voice in his head. As soon as he fell his hands started to turn black, he grows claws. It is his demon form comming out.
"Ow, help me, anyone, help me," kisa yelled as gets consumed by his demon form.
Eager to get the taste of fresh blood he sets out for a small house a couple miles away. As soon as he got there he found an old, lonely man laying in bed sleeping.
"Yes! fresh blood!" the voice screamed in his head
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:27 pm
Obliviator24 My characters name is Takanashi, Kazuya. I am shooting for Otogakure... Rp example: Kazuya had been out for days looking for some place to train. Sure he could have stopped here or there, but he wanted it to be perfect so he could be accepted as a ninja of The Sound Village. He began constantly panicing when he heard a noise behind him. He quickly jumped in the trees looking for a body. He looked in his weapons bag and remembered he forgot to get money for weapons. So awaiting a battle, Kazuya prepared to fight, with only his fists as his weapons.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:28 pm
Copycat Kakashi Hatake Obliviator24 Copycat Kakashi Hatake As i walked through the gate at the end of the woods I relized that it was about time for me to do my evening training. I started out with some basic jutsu. "SHADOW CLONE JUTSU"I yelled and suddenly five shadow clones were all around me, yet something didn't feel right. I looked around and relized that i had a visitor. Standing behind me was a a shinobi from the sound village looking at me with extreme hate. I decided it was time for me to put my training to use. suddenly all my clones disappeared and I took a fighting stance that i preferred. I had one hand over my back on the handle of my katana. and then i charged. always speak in 3rd person dude. Like "he realized" or "(characters name) realized" sorry bad habit I know I have been trying to change but I am used to doing first person rps like the ninja academy I am running in santa's secret service and santa's army
Right, has to be in third person, so fail.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:29 pm
Rage333 This is the story of Rage a swordman of Darkness seeking the thrown of a deserted kingdom. His purpose for wanting to become a Ninja is to prove himself worthy of the throne of Migrantia. His destiny is to rule Migrantia but first he must prove himself worthy.
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:33 am
ivory_vamp Obliviator24 My characters name is Takanashi, Kazuya. I am shooting for Otogakure... Rp example: Kazuya had been out for days looking for some place to train. Sure he could have stopped here or there, but he wanted it to be perfect so he could be accepted as a ninja of The Sound Village. He began constantly panicing when he heard a noise behind him. He quickly jumped in the trees looking for a body. He looked in his weapons bag and remembered he forgot to get money for weapons. So awaiting a battle, Kazuya prepared to fight, with only his fists as his weapons. Yes!...now what do i do haha
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:40 am
I'am Nagaharu Ishikawa of Kirigakure. Sorry about my spelling in advance
Sample RP: The sun is just setting as he sits down before a small pond. He bends over admiring the cool, clear water. Slowly putting his hands in the water and making a cup with his hands. He raises his hands to his face and drinks all the water held in his fists. He thinks to him self "Dang it, tomorrow I have school..." Realizing what he just said, he runs off in a hurry. His mom won't like him home late!
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 9:41 am
@Obliviator: Finish your profile and then apply to a village by pming the Kage with your request. (Make sure you read the announcement in this subforum about requesting to join.)
@Nagaharu: Fail, your verb tenses are all off. Instead of "The sun is setting just as he sits down before a small pond." it should be "The sun was setting just as he sat down before a small pond."
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 2:37 pm
As The last of the hatake clan walked through the the forest he relized that it was about time to do some training. He did a rapid series of hand signs then several shadow clones appeared. he ran at each one fighting them with all his might suddenly he hit one and it didn't disappear. he backed up a couple of steps and relized that he had an unsuspected vistior. He desided that he needed to tell who he was so he did something that his trainer had forbidden him to do lift the ninja head band from his right eye. The other ninja was so shocked at what he saw that he lost concentration and exposed himself. It was a sound ninja. "Damn it" He thought. He performed only one hand seal. The rat seal was all he needed. he ran toward the ninja with lightning fast speed then thrusted his hand right through him. The ninja fell over dead instantly. "ha"He said " this is the power of the lightning blade jutsu."
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:17 pm
" My name is Mura Kanahara. And you are in my way." Mura said as he continued walking towards the tough looking man. The man gave him a funny look, which Mura disregarded. He did not feel like fighting. He just needed to get back home.
Them man continued to try to convince Mura otherwise, but he was stubborn as an ox. Not your usual ox, either. A big hairy highland ox.
As Mura walked past the man and into the valley, he noticed some odd feeling in his gut. "Whaat..." Mura stuttered out when he saw the valley, "What happened here!!?? Something is not right!"
Mura ran into the valley, starting slowly and finishing as quick as an antelope, as he saw what awaited him.
" MY HOME!!!!" he screamed, as he dropped to his knees in anguish, "no, father... mother... no, no, NO!" He punched the dirt as hard as he could, and continued beating the ground until the grass was red with blood.
"If only... If only I had gotten home sooner... I could have helped... I could have HELPED!!" Mura cried... he cried for hours, for days, he just kneeled there, until one day he just got up. He got up, and he walked to the burned down smoldering lump he used to call home. There, he picked up his fathers boots. Amazingly, they had been smoldered and were now a coal black, absorbing all light. And they had escaped any real damage. Mura put them on, knew revenge was pointless, and walked down the silk trade path to the nearest village. He swore he would create a great name for his family, no, for himself, and that he would become the greatest Ninja ever to walk this planet.
"My name is Mura Kanahara. And NOTHING will get in my way."
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:07 pm
Copycat Kakashi Hatake As The last of the hatake clan walked through the the forest he relized that it was about time to do some training. He did a rapid series of hand signs then several shadow clones appeared. he ran at each one fighting them with all his might suddenly he hit one and it didn't disappear. he backed up a couple of steps and relized that he had an unsuspected vistior. He desided that he needed to tell who he was so he did something that his trainer had forbidden him to do lift the ninja head band from his right eye. The other ninja was so shocked at what he saw that he lost concentration and exposed himself. It was a sound ninja. "Damn it" He thought. He performed only one hand seal. The rat seal was all he needed. he ran toward the ninja with lightning fast speed then thrusted his hand right through him. The ninja fell over dead instantly. "ha"He said " this is the power of the lightning blade jutsu." Pass. Watch your spelling and capitalization. Otherwise, you're good to go.
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:08 pm
Copycat Kakashi Hatake As The last of the hatake clan walked through the the forest he relized that it was about time to do some training. He did a rapid series of hand signs then several shadow clones appeared. he ran at each one fighting them with all his might suddenly he hit one and it didn't disappear. he backed up a couple of steps and relized that he had an unsuspected vistior. He desided that he needed to tell who he was so he did something that his trainer had forbidden him to do lift the ninja head band from his right eye. The other ninja was so shocked at what he saw that he lost concentration and exposed himself. It was a sound ninja. "Damn it" He thought. He performed only one hand seal. The rat seal was all he needed. he ran toward the ninja with lightning fast speed then thrusted his hand right through him. The ninja fell over dead instantly. "ha"He said " this is the power of the lightning blade jutsu."
Pass. You know, since I've been here no one has ever created a Hatake character. I don't recall it being banned at all, but meh, whatever.
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