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Posted: Fri Sep 21, 2012 1:11 am
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:02 pm

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Shinji Inawa Nickname: a*****e
True Age: 310 Age Appeared: Appears About 19 Birthdate: 9/1 Gender: Male Ethnicity: Japanese Blood Type: O+
Sexuality: Straight
Height: 5'9 Weight: 130 Eye Color: Dark Green Hair Color: Short Dark
Life View: "It is more shameful to distrust our friends than to be deceived by them." Personality: Pretty Quiet Keeps to Himself One to Hold a Grudge, Although Not Openly Only Angry to fight against other if they starts
Likes: Water Fight Respect Peaceful Quiet Relax
Dislikes Annoying Hollow Vizard Quicny Childish
Division: Five Rank: Captain Side: Shingami
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In his human life, Shinji was alone and had to fend for himself. He often had to steal food and other possessions from wandering people that he came across. One day when he attempted to steal a man's money, the man followed through with his instincts and shot Shinji without hesitation. After that, Shinji's soul stayed near a graveyard, being stuck to his mom's grave through his soul chain. One day, a hollow came and tried to eat Shinji and kept run away from the hollow, but an unknown Shinigami killed the hollow and sent Shinji to the Rukongai. While there, He was approved from Academy Student, he developed very well skills with a katana along with progression in speed from. Shinji passed by Academy student by Higher Level. Soul Society recruited him as a lowest seat in One Division and Shinji was placed in a training session, becoming even better with swordsmanship, furthering his speed, and becoming exceptionally well in Kidou. At the very end of Shinji's second year, they were practicing in the Human World, fighting fake hallows as an exercise. One specific Shinigami couldn't control their Riatsu for some reason, causing it to leak out of their body and attract hallows. The non-seated Shinigami were ordered to retreat back to Soul Society immediately. On his way from running away from the Hallow, he noticed a Shinigami having trouble with a Hallow so Shinji remained in the Human Realm, staying away from the Hallow though. As the Hallow was about to kill the Shinigami, Shinji ran in front of the strike, taking the wound. The attack unfortunately pierced him all the way through, not hitting any vital points, and it also made contact with the Shinigami he was protecting. After being close to death without his Shikai After going to normal form, he fainted, losing consciousness. The 4th Division was sent to aid all who were injured and bring them back to Soul Society. After a few days, Shinji regained consciousness and after being told what happened, comprehended all of what happened. After this experience, Shinji had to learn how to call his shikai name but finally unlocked his new shikai after that. Soul Society recruit him who promoted and placed within the ranks of the 13 Gotei. He received a lower seating in the First Division. After years of training and becoming used to his Shikai abilities, he became the Fourth Seat of the One Division. As hundreds of years passed, Shinji used nearly all of his free time in attempting to obtain Bankai. It seemed that no matter how hard he tried, he seemed to never get any closer to his goal. Several hundred years later, Shinji, along with the 3rd Seat, Lieutenant, and Captain, was sent on a mission to gather information on an unknown source of Riatsu. It was faint and seemed like no threat; however, shortly after arriving, it seemed that the source was masking its true riatsu; it sent out a large blast of riatsu that surrounded the hallows body, being greater than an average captain. It seemed as if the hallow was, in fact, a Vasto Lorde; one in which Soul Society had little to no information about. The battle seemed like it was useless. The three lowest seats on the mission, being the Fourth Seat, Third Seat, and Lieutenant, seemed to have no effect on the hallow whatsoever. The Vasto Lorde ended up killing the Lieutenant and the Third Seat, leaving the captain and Shinji for the last. It decided that Shinji was of no threat, so it'd focus on the Captain. The captain was near death; if he was to take one more strike, whether fatal or not, he'd likely lose his life. Shinji received a huge adrenaline boost, increasing considerably in speed and reaction time. He ended up receiving a fatal blow to the stomach in an attempt to save his captain's life. He began fading into unconsciousness. In his last breath, or what seemed like it, Shinji once again prevailed ironically through his opponent's attempt to kill him. He obtained Bankai just in time. He and his captain would then eventually kill the Vasto Lorde. Once again, the Fourth Division sent help and Shinji was set to rest for several days, being five. After regaining consciousness, he received notice that he was made the Lieutenant of the Tenth Division due to the current Lieutenant and Third Seat not being so current. In a private conversation, his Captain revealed that no one other than himself knew of Shinji's Bankai and that he'd keep it a secret. Eventually, being several hundred years later, Shinji secretly became very proficient in using his Bankai, likely being on par with his captain. As he got back from his training, he noticed a note for him, written by his Captain. The note informed him that if something was to happen to the Captain, Shinji would be made the Captain. Seemingly not so coincidentally, his Captain was, indeed, killed that day. For about two months, Shinji disappeared, resenting himself for not being able to save his Captain. He eventually regained composure and came back to Soul Society, stepping in as the new Five Division Captain, which is where he stands today; today only being about a ear after obtaining the position
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Reiatsu Color: Black and Dark Red Reiryoku Level: Great
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Expert Level • Air Dash: Advance Level • Shunpo: Master Level Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Expert Level Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Master Level • Kendo: Master Level Reiryoku Techniques: • Kido Spells: Expert Level • Reiryoku Gathering: Master Level Other Techniques: • Dashing: Expert Level • Jumping: Advance Level
Strengths: • Shunpo • Reiatsu Weaknesses: • Long Combat • Water Fears: • Death • Failure • Kiss by Girls
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ ▬▬┤|Sealed Zanpakutpo Zanpakuto Name: Narakuhouka Zanpakuto Location: On his hip, Right Handed Zanpakuto Appearance: Here. Zanpakuto Spirit Appear.: Here. Zanpakuto Sword Type: Katana Zanpakuto Element: Hell Fire
▬▬┤|Shikai Release Shikai Name: Narakuhouka Shikai Incantation:"Burn From Hell, Narakuhouka!" Shikai Description: A dragon mark forms around Shinji's right arm. It also continues the pattern upon his Zanpakutou. That is the only visual change the Zanpakutou has, besides at the bottom of the hilt, a dark red piece of cloth forms, about a yard in length and three inches in width. It's abilities allow itself to shoot flames from the blade in a similar fashion to how Toushirou Hitsugaya uses ice. Shikai Ability: Enkou Harou [Shikai] After swinging his Zanpakutou, the dragon mark on his arm and Zanpakutou will temporarily obtain a dark red light on the outside edges. A dark flame with then shoot out from the end part of the blade in a two meter diameter. The flames are stronger and hotter then normal flame and have a tendency to literally disintegrate any object in its path that is weak and fragile.
Enkou Matsudai Nenshou [Shikai] After swinging his Zanpakutou, the dragon mark on his arm and Zanpakutou will temporarily obtain a dark red light on the outside edges. A black flame will then engulf Shinji's Zanpakutou, stopping at the hilt, and only covering the blade. Anything the Zanpakutou or flame touches after wards will also be engulfed in flames. The flames are nearly impossible to extinguish and will burn until the target is completely gone. If the target is strong, the flame will stop sometime, but if it's weak and fragile, the flame will continuously keep going. The flame is not effected by anything such as water or ice, only by the spirit of the target and their will to survive.
Enkou Kenseiiku [Shikai] After swinging his Zanpakutou, the dragon mark on his arm and Zanpakutou will temporarily obtain a dark red light on the outside edge. A Dark flame will the manifest at the very edge of the blade. It will be sent flying at a target, being only half an inch in height, three feet in length, and half a foot in width. The flame can cut through basically any object and the damage done will be based upon the targets strength and will to survive; however, even the most willed people could receive tremendous damage due to the flame obtaining a cutting ability.
Kaen Blaze Flame [Shikai] This flame appears to be almost opaque in appearance. With a red at the center, then an inner area of a very pale red-white, and an outer spiking of deep red coloring. This flame is more for offensive use, able to weaken anything that touches to break down and corrode. If someone does in fact take this flame head on they can be burnt badly. This flame is consider to be more acidic then others
Enbu Waltz Flame [Shikai] This flame appears to have a constant yellow coloring throughout the whole flame, and circular "shines" of light emanating from it as well. This flame is a support, processes and speed them up at an incredible rate. Difficult to use offensively, the activation can be used effectively for healing and power up purposes. It's more of a soft flame then Kaen. If one were to touch the flame, they wouldn't seriously be hurt at all. In fact it would take time for one to sustain damage.
Enkou Tama Tate [Shikai] Using the dragon that is manifested from Enkou Daha Doragon, instead of attacking, the dragon will completely surround Shinji, causing a shield of flames to protect him from nearly anything, depending on the aspects of the attack.
▬▬┤|Bankai Release Bankai Name: Flame Arm Narakuhouka Bankai Incantation: Bankai Bankai Description: In Bankai form, Shinji's body will have a dark-colored, sinister riatsu build up around him. Despite the look, Shinji himself can remain in control and does not change in any subconscious form. His Zanpakutou also turns black, though having a shimmering effect on the blade. He will now be able to use advanced, elemental, sword techniques with his katana. He also gains a few techniques that aren't based around his Zanpakutou.
Bankai Ability: Enkou Matsudai Nenshou Purasu [Bankai] This technique is simply a larger and stronger version of Enkou Matsudai Nanshou. After swinging his Zanpakutou, the dragon mark on his arm and Zanpakutou will temporarily obtain a dark red light on the outside edges. A black flame will then engulf Shinji's Zanpakutou, stopping at the hilt, and only covering the blade. Anything the Zanpakutou or flame touches after wards will also be engulfed in flames. The flames are nearly impossible to extinguish and will burn until the target is completely gone. If the target is strong, the flame will stop sometime, but if it's weak and fragile, the flame will continuously keep going. The flame is not effected by anything such as water or ice, only by the spirit of the target and their will to survive. This techniques is three times harder to extinguish along with it being able to destroy an object three times faster than the Shikai version.
Enkou Kenseiiku Purasu [Bankai] This technique is simply a larger and stronger version of Enkou Kenseiiku. After swinging his Zanpakutou, the dragon mark on his arm and Zanpakutou will temporarily obtain a dark red light on the outside edge. A Dark flame will the manifest at the very edge of the blade. It will be sent flying at a target, being two inches in height, five feet in length, and a foot in width. The flame can cut through basically any object and the damage done will be based upon the targets strength and will to survive; however, even the most willed people could receive tremendous damage due to the flame obtaining a cutting ability.
Genwaku Flame [Bankai] During Bankai state, Shinji's speed will increase considerably. Using the black flames that surround his body while in Bankai state, along with a tremendous speed, a flame will remain temporarily in the location where Shinji moved from. It will leave a trail behind him. Although most think that leaving a trail behind hm to follow would be considered a disadvantage, it actually helps Shinji. Due to Shinji's body being engulfed in flames, the flames that trail him look identical, making it difficult to know the actual location of Shinji. Many would confuse the trails of flames behind him for Shinji.
Teiryuu Hidame-ji [Bankai] This is not really an ability, but more of a useful effect. Due to a fire constantly being around Shinji, engulfing his entire body, he will gain a somewhat invulnerability to all fire. Normal fire without Riatsu within it won't even come close to having an effect on him. If any type of fire has Riatsu within it, it can possibly cause damage to Shinji while in his Bankai state; it depends on how much Riatsu is built into it along with the strength of the User.
Enkou Daha Doragon [Bankai] A dragon will manifest from behind Shinji, using the flames around Shinji as a source. It then becomes eight feet in height, six feet in width, and about thirty yards in length. It has the ability to completely disintegrate steel within seconds. If the body of another is in direct contact with the flames for a prolonged amount of time, the skin and bodily fluids will begin to melt and evaporate literally. This by far is Shinji's strongest attack if he places it at full potential.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|Known Kidou Spells ▬▬┤|Hado Spells • Hadou #1 – Rank D – Sho Pushes the target away from the caster.
Hadou #4 – Rank D – Byakurai Fires a concentrated bolt of lightning from the caster's forefinger. Incantation: Guardians of war lend me your strength, god of the storm Susanoo lend me your magic, and break my enemies!
Hadou #31 – Rank C – Shakkahou Fires a ball of red energy at a target. Incantation: Oh ruler, mask of flesh and blood, all creations of the universe, fluttering of the wings, ye who bears the name of man! Scorching heat and disorder evolve the transposition of the southern sea barrier.
Hadou #33 – Rank B – Soukatsui Fires a burst of blue spiritual energy at a target in a similar manner to 31, but over a wider area and with more power. Incantation: Oh ruler, mask of flesh and blood, all creations of the universe, fluttering of the wings, ye who bears the name of man! Truth and temperance, strike but slightly your claw upon this wall, which feigns ignorance of sin!
Hadou #54 – Rank A – Haien Fires a blast of purple spiritual energy that will incinerate a target completely when it makes contact. Incantation: Lord of the underworld, grant me power of sin, and fire. Scorch the floor, burn the fire, shine bright, scorn the light!
▬▬┤|Bakudo Spells • Bakudou #1 – Rank D – Sai Locks a target's arms in place behind their back. Incantation: Chains of eternity, bid my call, obstruct!
Bakudou #2 - Rank D - Tsume no Neko A sealing skill that binds a users feet to any surface. Like a wall, or ceiling. Incantation: Tread where I am not. Feel what I have not. This is the goal of the greatest, and I shall be their pawn in this goal.
Bakudou #4 – Rank D – Hainawa An energy rope entangles a target's arms.
Bakudou #5 - Rank D - Shinobiashi Morphs the ground, making it softer, and malleable. Allowing for two skills. The first allowing the user to shift the ground, making the enemy loose their footing. And making them fall. The mud then grows over them, and binds them in place. The other skill, allows the ground to be used to make a wall for defense. Incantation: The earth bends to the will of those with the strength. The demonstration, of this is at hand. Welcome Armageddon.
Bakudou #7 - D Rank - Aegu Forms a sealing of air around the user, allowing them to breathe in areas of dangerous air, or underwater. Incantation: Go where not, be what you aren't. The gods bestow you this gift.
Bakudo #8 - C Rank - Seki Creates a round shield that seems to temporarily paralyze and repel whatever strikes it.
Bakudou #9 – Rank C – Geki Surrounds the target in a red light that restricts movement. Incantation: Disintegrate, black dog of Rondaniini. Look upon your burning soul and sever your throat.
Bakudou #15 - C Rank - Kinbaku The enemies’ arms loose usage. The binding lasts three posts. Incantation: Your souls sword loses use. And weeps at it's spawner's pettiness.
Bakudou #58 – Rank C – Kakushitsuijaku Tracks and locates any spiritual force the user focuses on. To activate it, the user must draw a circle on the ground, cut into four parts with a specific character in each. The incantation animates the circle, causing various numbers to appear within until the specific set is found. The number set seems to be a variation on longitude and latitude. Incantation: Heart of the south, eye of the north, fingertip of the west, heel of the east, gather by wind, and scatter by rain.
Bakudou #75 – Rank C - Gochuutekkan Summons six thin, but wide, beams of light that slam into a target's midsection, holding them in place. This also appears to immobilise the target's limbs, as Kuchiki Byakuya used it to prevent Rukia from moving her sword without directly binding her arms. Incantation: Wall of iron sand, pagoda of priestly form, shimmering fireflies of iron, fill until the silent end.
Bakudou #77 – Rank B – Tenteikuura Transmits messages to anyone within Soul Society. In addition to reciting the spell, the user must draw specific markings on their arms, which are animated by the spell to convey the messages. Incantation: Net of black and white, 22 bridges, 66 peerless domains, footprints, distant thunder, crest of the mountains, volatile earth, enshroud by night, sea of clouds, blue formations, rise into the towering circle and charge across the heavens.
Bakudou #81 – Rank A – Danku Creates an energy barrier in the form of a rectangular wall. According to Byakuya, it is capable of stopping destructive spells up to #89.
Bakudou #94 - Piercing Paralysis Barrier It traps the target(s) in a barrier which temporaily paralyzes them from the neck down. If the final part of the incantation is said, the barrier is pireced with over a thousand thin white spikes. The downfall of this Kido is if the user is caught in the kido, they suffer the same effects. Incantation: Let the light of eternal damnation ensnare it's hopeless prey, shackle their abilities and remove their energy. Let the lances of heaven pirece and purify the dark souls which threaten to destroy the world.
▬▬┤|Other Spells • { Captains Only, If not a captain please remove. This section is for kido only they can learn which is listed in the, Learning Kido topic. }
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:19 pm
Okay,
- I see no issue with your profile you are approved.
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:24 pm
Diablo en Musica 92 Okay,
- I see no issue with your profile you are approved.I'm revoking this. Reasons why: - He has his age listed as 30. - He doesn't have a bankai name - He doesn't have a bankai incantation. - He has too many bankai abilities, his total count is 7 he is only allowed 5.
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:27 pm
I have been overruled therefore please follow the directions of the Admin(s) that have overruled me. - Sorry my brain is friend from 5hrs of studying...
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:33 pm
- You have to be older then 30. - You need to fix your background. [ See below ] - You have to have a bankai name. - You have to have a bankai incantation, even if it is you just saying Bankai. - You need to remove 2 of your bankai abilities, there is a limit of 5.
Your background doesn't make any sense. If a hollow were to find you, your soul would've been eaten, they don't turn you into hollows. The correct term is Seireitei, and no they wouldn't recruit you. You'd apply for the Shinigami Academy and hope to be accepted into it. You train for your shikai, you don't magically unlock it because you'd have to learn your zanpakuto's name. AND if you were in a training situation you'd have the Asauchi, not your own zanpakuto. The Asauchi has no name, making your background null from there on. Please redo it.
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 2:34 pm
Enzio Kageryuu Diablo en Musica 92 Okay,
- I see no issue with your profile you are approved.I'm revoking this. Reasons why: - He has his age listed as 30. - He doesn't have a bankai name - He doesn't have a bankai incantation. - He has too many bankai abilities, his total count is 7 he is only allowed 5. LOL I forget about Bankai Name.. Oops.. I thought Shikai's total is 5 and Bankai's 7 I must have switched them by mistake. I will remove 2 bankai's abilities. Alright, what about his age listed as 30? Want me change his age up?
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 3:05 pm
Enzio Kageryuu - You have to be older then 30. - You need to fix your background. [ See below ] - You have to have a bankai name. - You have to have a bankai incantation, even if it is you just saying Bankai. - You need to remove 2 of your bankai abilities, there is a limit of 5. Your background doesn't make any sense. If a hollow were to find you, your soul would've been eaten, they don't turn you into hollows. The correct term is Seireitei, and no they wouldn't recruit you. You'd apply for the Shinigami Academy and hope to be accepted into it. You train for your shikai, you don't magically unlock it because you'd have to learn your zanpakuto's name. AND if you were in a training situation you'd have the Asauchi, not your own zanpakuto. The Asauchi has no name, making your background null from there on. Please redo it. Done ^_^ anything else?
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Posted: Sat Sep 29, 2012 3:08 pm
Haseo Hitsome Enzio Kageryuu - You have to be older then 30. - You need to fix your background. [ See below ] - You have to have a bankai name. - You have to have a bankai incantation, even if it is you just saying Bankai. - You need to remove 2 of your bankai abilities, there is a limit of 5. Your background doesn't make any sense. If a hollow were to find you, your soul would've been eaten, they don't turn you into hollows. The correct term is Seireitei, and no they wouldn't recruit you. You'd apply for the Shinigami Academy and hope to be accepted into it. You train for your shikai, you don't magically unlock it because you'd have to learn your zanpakuto's name. AND if you were in a training situation you'd have the Asauchi, not your own zanpakuto. The Asauchi has no name, making your background null from there on. Please redo it. Done ^_^ anything else? Unless someone else has issue. Approved
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 10:30 am
It was perfect, up until the zanpakuto releases. Could you please expand upon your attacks >.< Also, I'll talk to Diablo about your stats so don't worry about being all the way down there.
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 10:38 am
Known Foot Techniques: • Air Walk: Adept Level • Air Dash: Adept Level • Shunpo: Adept Level Known Hand-to-Hand Styles: • Hakuda: Expert Level • Jeet Kundo: Expert Level Known Swordsmanship Styles: • Zanjutsu: Expert Level • Kendo: Expert Level Reiryoku Techniques: • Hollow Control: Novice Level • Kido Spells: Advance Level • Reiryoku Gathering: Advance Level Other Techniques: • Dashing: Advance Level • Jumping: Advance Level
Feel free to PM me with anything on here you'd like to change I'll take it into consideration.
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:21 am
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 11:57 am
No. Add in more detail to your shikai attacks. Look at mine for an example of what I mean XD
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Posted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 12:22 pm
Enzio Kageryuu No. Add in more detail to your shikai attacks. Look at mine for an example of what I mean XD emotion_donotwant Now? emotion_donotwant
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