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 Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 2:12 pm
Naito_Arekkusu7 i just wanna get to rping ready I half assed it here cause come on you want something super iron clad wtf seriously putting to much thought to one thing to the next over and over I'm human you and me have a way different way of looking things that's for sure you know that Naito_Arekkusu7 I'm just thinking of it like this I have something cover my organs, vital parts, and etc, so basically a living fire suit like a fire fighter, fire fighter are able to run through the fires like nothing so I imagine the metal that I'm using that is also charged by my own chakra like your fire should be more than able to compete with a fire that is spread out with the chakra doing the same while mine is concentrated only on me
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 5:03 pm
Deil Grist Naito_Arekkusu7 Cobra_X You SAYING you know the rules and limitations is one thing, but I want to SEE it. For Example, Who said this bloodline can create an armor of steel around them? I don't see that detailed anywhere. It's not like Kimimaru was able to make an armor of bone. (at least not in the way you are speaking about it)
...on the note of the fire, so all fire jutsu are useless unless they are a maintained blast which someone stands in? A fireball flying at you cannot simply be traveled through and not felt. it's not sjut the fire, but the chakra which has formed the technique. to say you can simply leap through it like you can a benign flame on the ground is ridiculous.
This isnt simply fire like you make at a campsite. It's concentrate, chakra enhanced fire that will burn you to a crisp if you simply take the attack head on without trying to defend or dodge it. It's not a detail bloodline just said you can manipulate your metal out off your body does it not???? So tell me where it says you can't use it like that???? You don't even know what level of Fire jutsu I even said yet your making such a big deal man?? i just wanna get to rping ready I half assed it here cause come on you want something super iron clad wtf seriously putting to much thought to one thing to the next over and over I'm human you and me have a way different way of looking things that's for sure you know that There is never said a fire jutsu is stronger like that I mean want me to state how fast to run through it or something???? I'm just thinking of it like this I have something cover my organs, vital parts, and etc, so basically a living fire suit like a fire fighter, fire fighter are able to run through the fires like nothing so I imagine the metal that I'm using that is also charged by my own chakra like your fire should be more than able to compete with a fire that is spread out with the chakra doing the same while mine is concentrated only on me As the clan head, I will handle this: For one thing, yes you can manipulate your bones, but nowhere near as well as of Kimimaru. Your bones do not regenerate like his, and they do not change shape as easily. Also, you only have a certain amount of metal in your body. If you shifted that metal to cover your entire body, your bones would turn into sewing needles. Also, the acid INSIDE your body has nothing to do with how fire affects your outside. You would lose your skin if you jumped through your fire like that. The only good I can see in the acid is if your opponent stabs you. The acid would gush on them and melt away their skin and muscle if left long enough. The acid is no defense against fire. And actually, using steel as a shield against fire would be a horrible idea, because the fire would heat up the metal quickly and you would scorch your insides once you tried to put it back in your body. And finally, there have not been any jutsu developed for this bloodline, so your "armor of steel" doesn't even exist. Yeah you might be the clan head but I probably seen it use more than you, like I said before I saw it a year ago and face people a year ago with it, I can't recall which guild though I remember it well It never said that there was a set of skills at all and well Metal you won't just have some skinny metal around your bones come on that would be weak you could probably get some metal from part of your body and stretch it as much as possible after all I should be able to have some mad chakra control with being Medical class as well and transporting chakra and managing it should be simple with it Though I said it was extending it through the front I just need so much if you just want me to say I was burn whatever it's an rp sample and even so if I would do this in RP i know how to just forget about my burns later but seriously you guys are making such a big deal of this is not even funny for reals why are you two acting so smug cause you think I'm new or something??? is that the way you act to people with disagreements you try to pick at everything that you believe is wrong??? Seriously as mods your not doing much of a good job for arguments So I bet you people get hit with fire attacks and brush it off or are you the type of people that never get hit??? I was just trying to avoid severe damage with a legit reason for now And about armor of Steel like I said you can at least manipulate your metal in some way right so you get creative with not my fault you guys put a bloodline with techniques really if you want I'll get to it
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 7:25 pm
Alright Naito... I'm getting tired of arguing this.
Here's the deal. I'm a VC of this guild and I'm in charge of Bloodline approvals. If you want the bloodline, I need to see that you understand how to use it. here are the things I saw in your post that made me feel like you don't understand how this bloodline works. You can either redo your RP Sample making it cleaner, or not. It's up to you. I'm done discussing it.Naito_Arekkusu7 Though the young man wasn't paying to much attention at the moment as two giant logs came from the trees smashing together with him in between. As two men came out laughing with knifes they were talking in victory as they just believed that they had squash Arekku together. There was then a slashing sounds that made them step back in surprise as Arekku cut up the trees like butter as he stared at them with a smile, he started to run at them at full speed.
2. ASSUMING (which I shouldn't have to do) that you used your bloodline, you made no mention of hand seals to extend or mold the metal off of your bones and out of your body. Also assuming that you used your bloodline, you didn't mention at all that it hurt when you did so. (which projecting the metal through your skin would do)Naito_Arekkusu7 The men took a defensive position as they watch in fear at Arekku now though they soon buckle up and threw kunai's at the body only for it to be deflected as there was some armor appearing on Arekku's body from under his skin. Naito_Arekkusu7 Arekku jumped straight through as his body burned a little though the acid in his body was way more corrosive and would burn more than the fire engulfing Arekku Naito_Arekkusu7 Who after passing it just slammed into the rock wall tackling one of the men with a metal spear coming from his shoulder that he used to tackle the fire user.
6. Again, metal spear erupting from your shoulder, has no hand seals involved. Just because your bloodline allows you to manipulate the metal in your body, doesn't mean you don't need to mold chakra to do it, unless of course the bloodline itself says otherwise.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:27 am
You said you didn't really care about the RP. The RP is what we look at the most. A poor RP reflects poor understanding of the bloodline. [Which is clearly evident.]
If you want easy bone manipulation, use Kimimaru's bloodline. This bloodline favors durability over diversity.
I forgot to mention about the acid: It's best use is to kill parasites in the body.
Anyways, this is Cobra's topic, so I really hold no power here. But usually he enjoys my input.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 7:42 pm
Name: Cobra_X
RPC's name: Tsukiakari Hikaru
Bloodline Applying for: Ato Sakura No Ki No (Art of the Cherry Tree)
Why do you want it: I've built my character around this Bloodline, for the express purpose of using this bloodline. I feel that it has incredible imagery and adds a lot of intrigue to the battlefield. It also fits my character's image as princely royalty perfectly.
What will you do with it: Well, the main use of this entire bloodline is combat, so I plan to use it to give my character a sword of "Ace in the Hole" since as a Samurai, the jutsu he is allowed to know is rather limited.
What you know about it: the art of the Cherry tree is more or less a ninjutsu based adaptation of Byakuya Kuchiki's shikai (Senbonzakura). the bloodline allows the user to speak an activation command, 'scattering' his sword into hundreds of cherry blossom petals which they can use to attack and defend all at the user's command. The clan's abilities are based on royalty and tends to follow within royal families which have guarded the secrets for years. users also have the ability to etch their family crests into shurikan and kunai, allowing them to throw the projectile and activate it while in the air to scatter as their family swords are able to do, only on an obviously smaller scale.
RP Sample:
Hikaru raced through the field, kicking up the dirt behind him as he found himself once more running from unknown assailants. "The attacks are coming nearly monthly now... what is going on?" The young man's thoughts raced through his head as he charged through the high grass, still over 2 miles from the manor as his bodyguards finally caught up with him. "Young Master, continue on, we need to dispatch two groups, who are flanking from the side... be careful." Hikaru nodded as he watched his body guards move off. It was not that he was unacquainted with battle, his family had been under attack for almost a year now from bandits and mercenaries who seemed to attack their family more and more often.
Recently however, a large number of the attacks had been focused on Hikaru himself as he was recently named the next in line to the family's head on the announcement of his sister's death. As the only remaining child of the queen, he was to take over the family until the youngest sister was old enough to rule. As everything ran through his head, Hikaru was forced to react quickly, moving into a forward roll just in time as a man arrived on the field, swinging horizontally to remove his head. ducking under the blow quickly, Hikaru was quick to slide across the high grass and turn around, righting himself in his classic Iaijutsu position, with his right hand hovering over the hilt of Kazesenkou. "Not so bad princeling, but I'm afraid it's all over for you now. The flanks were a diversion... you die today."
The man instantly charged, as Hikaru moved forward himself, drawing his blade as wind engulfed his arm, his sword erupting out of it's sheath at incredible speed, only to surprisingly be stopped by the enemy's blade. Hikaru was shocked at the ease which with the man had ceased his blade, but then realized that the man's hand was bleeding, from the sheer force required to stop Hikaru's blade..."Heh... I've been studying you and that sword kid... impressive, but that's the best you've got, and I can see right through it." With a shove, the man pushed Hikaru back as his arm was twisted slightly, now also weakened as the Flash wind technique had temporarily slowed his arm. Staring down at the ground, things looked somewhat grim as the man's blade came down towards his head, but Hikaru simply smiled as he formed a single hand seal in front of him... "Scatter"
Hikaru's sword was instantly transformed as the blade began to deteriorate, the metal breaking off from the tip of the blade as wonderfully beautiful blue lotus petals began to flake off into the air. The sword edge was soon completely gone as the air was filled with the blue petals, which hovered in the air before moving in a coordinated effort, to act as a shield against the incoming attack as the assailant's blade crashed into the petals. a silence filled the air for a second as the attacker was stunned at the display in front of him. "It's too bad." Hikaru said as he stood up and composed himself... "I rather dislike the idea of killing my opponent's dumbest member... but I suppose arrogance must be punished at some point."
The lotus petals immediately dispersed into the air as they swirled around Hikaru and then flew directly towards the man, who in a panic raised his sword up to deflect the incoming petals, only to have them bounce off his sword and attack anew from another angle. The attacker's blade struggled to keep up with hthe hundreds of petals, but with each swipe, the petals would simply disperse to attack at a new angle, as others would slice forward, nicking his skin and clothing from all sides as the man must have suffered at least 20 cuts by now. Hikaru continued the assault, as the man became frantic, swinging his sword in all directions trying to swat the petals away, only to brought to his knees as he dropped his sword, his face, arms and body cut in a hundred places as he was bleeding all over, exhausted and in pain.
The lotus petals slow began to drift away from the man as they flowed back to Hikaru, who held the empty sheath of Kazesenkou up, collecting the lotus petals as they flowed together once more, reforming his beloved blade as he sheathed it looked down on the man. "I'd offer some form of future advice to you, but something tells me, it wouldn't do you much good." Removing a shuriken from his inner robe, Hikaru held it up to the moonlight as the crest of his family shown brightly in the soft glow. Without a second thought, he threw it at the man as it soared towards his neck. As it was about to strike, Hikaur held up his hand once more, forming the same seal as he had before... "Scatter" The shuriken dispersed in a second beautiful display of blue lotus petals, filling the man's last vision with that of a blue moonlight shimmer off the petals as they passed by him, quickly forcing him into darkness as he fell to the ground dead from multiple lacerations across his neck.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:01 pm
{Just felt the pic should be present}
Approved, Me likey!
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A faint smile Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:20 pm
I don't know... I think he looks prettier in other pictures.
Oh well, thanks Jade!
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 8:02 pm
Name: LordTares
RPC's name: Tares Demascus
Bloodline Applying for: Nara Clan
Why do you want it: I kinda of based my character off of it, i believe i can make some intense RP battles with this blood line plus i think it would be very enjoyable.
What will you do with it: Defend my village and my people.
What you know about it: The Nara clan use their shadows to bind their foes to them effectively disabling them so that other members of the squad can handle them, or so they can bind them so they can use a more effective technique on them more easily, such as the shadow neck bind technique. The techniques require alot of on your toes thinking as the weakness of the Nara clan is their shadow length, while there are ways of extending shadows, it can only go so far, and an opponent can easily counter a Nara by knowing how far they can extend their shadow and how long their shadow currently is, though with trickery and deception, a Nara can overcome theses problems.
RP Sample: LT jutted behind a rock as another exploding kunai flew past his proximity, exploding the base of a tree, falling down towards him.
"Kid...you might as well give up. You know that you can't beat me." he yelled towards the man...he had been doing a good job of only alerting his opponent to just his general proximity, not to exact location. This open clearing in the middle of the forest was a good place to fight because of the shadow from the trees. I got to get to him..."Kagemane no Justu..." he whispered as his shadow stretches out...catching on to each other shadow along the way from the forestry. Turning around he made sure that he could see what was going on from behind a set of treeline, eventually his justu attaching onto one of his opponents's subordinants who was furthest away from him. LT always wore his weapons in weird places for this perticular reason. Covering his own mouth with one hand, the subordinate immitated; then he pulled a kunai from the subordinate's weapons pouch and walked over to the other subordinates, slicing each's throat. His opponent, too bothered with trying to find his target did not notice his own person killings his comrads. Eventually LT jumped into the air, using both hands to stab the man into the oppents back, then releasing them. The man ripped his own comrad off his back...vicously smashing him into the ground. Nows my chance..."Kage Nui no Justu"... he said a loud...knowing he had him. Tendrels of black shadow shot forth stabbing into three of his four limbs. Fighting back vigilantly he grabbed one and kept ahold of it. "This is not the end for me!!!" he yelled just before the three other tendrels streched around the back of him, stabbing into the place in his chest where his heart lyed. "No it is...your time is up...Time to head back to the village" LT whispered now heading back into the village after stopping the ninjas from entering his beloved village
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Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:20 am
LordTares:
I think I would have liked a bit more of a description of manipulating the primary ninja. I mean, to move him around, your character would have to get up and walk forward, slash the enemies and then jump and stab another in the back. I would think that this would reveal your location, maybe add a bit more to the RP, but I believe you understand how this bloodline works.
Just be careful not to mod with it and remember that it takes a lot of effort to hold someone in a shadow bind for a long time and that it can be very draining on someone's chakra.
Agreed?
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Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:46 pm
Name: XXX-Soren-XXX
RPC's name: Yamamoto Takeshi
Bloodline Applying for: Ato Sakura No Ki No (Art of the Cherry Tree)
Why do you want it: I want this bloodline because its awesome XD na i really want it because its a bloodline i made and enjoy using it.
What will you do with it: This Kekki Genki will allow me to eather hurt the ones i "love" or help protect the ones i "love" since i havent choosen what im doing with this RPC yet.
What you know about it: Well i know what 98% of the bloodline since i did make it then help revamp it to make it even more awesmazing.
RP Sample:
Yamamoto stood in the middle of the field with his sword in one hand hanging down at his side, he was beaten up and covered in blood from head to toe, he looked at the three remaining attackers, these random theives had attacked him and his two squad mates, one was badly wounded while the other was partly and trying to heal the other as best as she could, Yamamoto stood between the attackers and his friends. Yamamoto never was the best out of his squad, but he would give his life for his squad mates who had became his friends in a heartbeat. Yamamoto stood there with his stuiped childish grin as he always did, he then chuckled softly as he gripped the sword that was in his right hand, the sword he held was his fathers, he never knew his family but knew it was important to keep. In a sudden blur his three attackers disappeared and then reappeared one at each side of Yamamoto and the other infront of him each had there sword pointed at Yamamoto. Yamamoto quickly swung his sword straight up and cut the face of the attacker infront of him, he jumped up doing a back flip allowing him to dodge the attack from the two at his sides. Yamamoto heard a sudden voice in his head, speaking of a simple sentence, "Ato Sakura No Ki No" He repeated what he heard in his head, his sword began to glow a light pinkish color before bursting into many little sakura blossom leaves, each leaf began to fly around at the movement of the hilt of the sword. Yamamoto swung the sword down towards the man on the right, the small blades circled man and began to cut him. the man dropped to his knees a few minutes later yelling out in pain. the other man stood there surprised and unsure of what just happened, but he looked up at Yamamoto, Yamamoto came downwards with the hilt of the sword, the blade quickly formed back as he swung the blade threw the last remaining attacker. Yamamoto stood there loking over at the dead attackers and signed as he looked at his friends.
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SorenKurosaki Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:13 am
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Posted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 7:34 pm
Name:Mints_angel
RPC's name: Serina Gomez
Bloodline Applying for: Inuzaki clan
Why do you want it: it's a interesting clan and i'm a bit of a dog lover..
What will you do with it: errr i have no clue o.0
What you know about it: the clan members each have thier own dog pal or animal buddy like a brother and are able to do some things with the animal
RP Sample:
Serina and her dog jumped through the trees together with thier new squad of much older Genin. They all stopped at once. "Have you got a scent?" Asked the lead Jounin. "If I got a scent, I'll tell you........" Serian replied a bit soft sicne she rarely spoke and some people would try anything to make her speak. She kneeled by her dog and pet it softly as the other genin wait impatiently for the answer. "Ruff ruff!" Serina smiled at her pal she had named Olivia. "She found the scent!" Serina said to the others. "It's west!" The minute she said the direction the other two genin raced past her. "Come back here!!" The Jounin yelled racing after them. Serina rolled her eyes and followed a little bit later. Serina and Olivia jumped through the trees as the genin and jounin ran on ground. After awhile they all got about tired, this target was really moving fast. She sat down exhausted as the other genin were still hyped up like monkeys chasing the golden banana! It was already nighttime as they rested, only the Jounin was up on guard duty. Serina kept her eyes open but pretended to be asleep. She started to hear the murmure of muffled screams nearby as she sat up quickly looking around the area and at the two genin who were motionless, probaly asleep. She slowely krept up with Olivia right besdie her as she jumped into the tree quickly. Serina did a few hand seals and created a clone that went back down like she was still asleep. "I know it wasen't a nightmare like before, I had my eye open and was still awake.." She thought. Her dark complexure helped with blending into the shadows and her black alaska huskey pal could blend with her too. When she noticed the clone suddenly poofed away she looked about for who did that. A senbon went right past her face cutting her cheek and landing in the tree behind her. She sniffed the air with Olivia tryign to find the scent of the attacker the noticed. Each genin below had a kunai in thier neck: they were dead! And the Jounin was gone! Where was he? Did he do this? It all raced through her mind like a rollercoaster. "Ruff!" Olivia found his location! Serina took out a shuriken that was usually strapped to a back but this was a folded one she kept at her side. She unfolded it and threw it directly infront of her hearing the sounds it made.fwoosh...shing as it made it's way through the air at caught the pants of the Jounin and trapped him on the tree by catching his leg too below the knee. "Ahh!" The jounin held his leg with the shuriken's point in it. "Gotcha!" She started to do some hand seals for Juujin Bunshin (Beast-Man Clone) and took out a pill she plopped into her mouth. Olivia soon looked like Serina perfectly like a substitution. She grinned at Olivia as they both held the end of a thick long rope. They both raced off the tree and landed on the side branches of where the Jounin was then they both started to jump around passing each other ducking the other's rope. By the time it was tight anough they both stopped infront of the Jounin holding it tight as Serina took out the shuriken and threw it on the ground. She never saw the Jounin do hand seals before they got the rope around him for the bushin justu. "Guess your too weak too be Jounin." She said hearing something behind her as she quickly swished around to find a kick to the face, flying backwards by a clone of the jounin.
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Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:10 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:58 pm
Name: Havikthecold
RPC's name:Nair Blood
Bloodline Applying for:Kuri blood art Manipulation
Why do you want it: To make a bad a** assasin
What will you do with it: So I can kill every one
What you know about it:I have read it threw and belive I kknow it rather well
RP Sample:
I will be useing a chuunin level RPC, who is entering a village.
Nair came to the gates of the Leaf village, befor the the gurads would be able to see him he took out his pen and a scroll of blank paper, he drew two moles one for each of the guards. He made a singal hand seal and molded chakra into the two pictures and enough so they would be fast enough to cut the guards, he then took out a vile and poored a pit of the poison on the moles claws.
They then jumped up a bit and dove into the ground digging underneath so they could surprise the guards, He stepped into his stealth and and ran behind the moles that were under the grounds. He got ten feet from the guards before they noticed him however it was to late
The moles spung from the gound slashing their legs, they were caught off guard by the pitch black animals and then struck toward them with kunai they picked from their holsters. As their blades met with the animals the melted back into lifeless ink. The poisen of their claws started to take effect as Nair came upon the guards, their legs felt numb and heavy as they trid to react but he was to fast, he slash one of their throats with a Kunai and then threw another Kunai at the second ones forhead, it met dead center.
Nair drug the body to hide under the desk of the guard posts, he then took out a second blank scroll and drew a copy of the two dead guards, he then molded just enough chakra to bring them to life. The guards steped out of the scroll and took a seat at the desk. Nair then got back into stealth mode and ran forwad into the village to take out as many ninja as he could.
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Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 6:37 pm
Havik:You suck...err...I mean,YOU ARE APPROVED!
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