*randomly appears out of nowhere*"Hmm the beach does sound fun.." *holds up a sheet of paper*
Rc wrote:
MISSION- Night Raid on Devon
Any Team Aqua member is asked to go to Devon Corporation and steal 50 PokeNAVs. But you must not be seen be anyone. Beware there are 10 guards in the building. You must enter the building. Then make your way to level 3 were the PokeNAVs are. But get them quickly and return back. All the PokeNAVs are in one box.
Pokemon you may run into on the mission (you may only run into one):
Zigzagoon
Voltorb
Duskull
Funds upon completion: 1000
Rc walked towards Rustboro, ..Devon.. Returning both Light and Synn, he went behind the closest house and he changed out of his aqua uniform and put on a black cloak, hardly being able to see his arm Rc was satisfied with this, and he walked to the back of the corporation, .. ahhhh a Duskull.. “Light go and use thunderbolt on that ghost Poke’mon!” he whispered so that no-one could hear him. The super charged lighting attack hit Duskull, and Rc threw one of his poke’balls at it. Roll Roll- ding! hmmm. My first one caught! Someone looked out the window and all the person could see was a Pichu fighting a Duskull. So the person turned around and was minding his own business. …hmmmm…Ahhhh…his name will be Chaos He walked over to a poke’mon center “Hey nurse can you heal Chaos for me,” Rc asked handing her the poke’ball. “Sure, I will be glad too, why are you out at such a night?” she asked.
“Umm, I am here to challenge the Gym tomorrow!”
“Oh do you need a room?”
“No I prefer to sleep outside, its more refreshing.” Which was true, when he left home he always slept outside, till he joined Aqua, he slept at their base for two nights before leaving out again.
“Very well,” Nurse Joy said to Rc.
When Chaos was down being treated, Rc walked out side, “Go Chaos,” he muttered when he was a good distance away, “Hey buddy, I want you to fly up to the all the gaurds and use confuse ray on all of them.” Chaos just looked at Rc then went off to do his command. When Chaos came back Rc asked, “Did you get all of them!” Chaos nodded.
Rc ran to the door of the company, and walked just inside and he went to the third floor grabbed the box and then he left, unseen and not noticed. He left the building, and there stood a guard, “Hmmm, Go Synn!”
“Go Zigzagoon!”
The two poke’mon stared at each other. “Scratch!” Rc yelled at Synn. The hit barely hit, because Synn fell face first. “Get up and try again!” Synn stood and this time it was a direct hit. And then the Zigzagoon tackled Synn, leaving him on the ground unable to move. “Return Synn, go Light!” And the small Pichu stared at the Zigzagoon. “Volt-tackle!” The move hit on the first try, and when he returned his poke’mon, Rc ran with the box in his hands
((I can't seem to find the sent message with my grading in it but I had him fix it once before this and i can't help but go leanient on first time missions))
"I just found it floating around HQ hope no one minds if i graded it... It was okay for a first mission a little short but it had no grammer or battle mistakes that were very noticable so i gave him a pass on it, just to let everybody know"
((Sorry if i did it over Pm, I was just worried it will get lost in all the commotion if it gets posted with everyone deciding to show up at once anymore..))
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