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 Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:32 pm
Taylor_Highwind tompins1988 Taylor_Highwind tompins1988 Taylor_Highwind tompins1988 Taylor_Highwind tompins1988 pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something? well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie. what narration stile do you generally use on your stories? I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.
Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really. Intresting, like if you wanted to take several whitneses, Ive never tried that. the fact is that you must allways choose whitch narration fits the story, firtst person may be the best for my stories, there are not many characters, actually generally it is only one, stuck in his own universe. I also like to use a stream of conciusness, it helps get into the characters mind, but I dont use it much, it needs an omniceint writter, and it really takes a lot of work hmmm, why dont you writte what hes thinking what goes through his mind, in the order that thouhgs come to his mind. talking to another character that doesnt really exist would fit your narrating stile, that way you could get more flow in the story. This is a you decide, it is intresting, it is always new to try something new
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:33 pm
Black_Rain Yep ... ::wraps you in the nitemare scarf and smiles gently poking your side:: ... so how's the weather?? Still snowing? xd Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:33 pm
tompins1988 hmmm, why dont you writte what hes thinking what goes through his mind, in the order that thouhgs come to his mind. talking to another character that doesnt really exist would fit your narrating stile, that way you could get more flow in the story. This is a you decide, it is intresting, it is always new to try something new
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:35 pm
Taylor_Highwind tompins1988 hmmm, why dont you writte what hes thinking what goes through his mind, in the order that thouhgs come to his mind. talking to another character that doesnt really exist would fit your narrating stile, that way you could get more flow in the story. This is a you decide, it is intresting, it is always new to try something new wait, a bit, I have to go, try those ones out. Seeya
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:36 pm
tompins1988 Taylor_Highwind tompins1988 hmmm, why dont you writte what hes thinking what goes through his mind, in the order that thouhgs come to his mind. talking to another character that doesnt really exist would fit your narrating stile, that way you could get more flow in the story. This is a you decide, it is intresting, it is always new to try something new wait, a bit, I have to go, try those ones out. Seeya
Okay see you! xd
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:38 pm
Jeriana Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:41 pm
Black_Rain Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying Sleet is never pretty... sweatdrop *smiles and kisses your hand* A Kingdom Hearts game? Isn't that...a sin? eek
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:41 pm
Black_Rain Jeriana Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying Blasphemy! Let's burn her! *ties up Taylor and carries her off*
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:41 pm
Black_Rain Jeriana Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying
Disney screwed up all of the Squaresoft characters in that game. Especially Cid. They made him a frikkin shopkeeper. CID ISN'T A SHOPKEEPER!!! And they screwed up the outfits. Yuffie doesn't wear tights, she wears a weird leg bracer. Cid doesn't wear blue pants, black boots and a white shirt...look at my siggy and that's what he's supposed to wear. Squall doesn't have long hair and he doesn't prefer to be called Leon (even though I could care less about Squall). Cloud doesn't wear Vincent's clothes. And why did they make Sephiroth's voice played by Lance Bass???
Yucky. And they also forgot Aeris's jacket thingy. stare stressed scream
Besides, who uses a key for a weapon? That's retarded.
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:43 pm
Aeodan Black_Rain Jeriana Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying Blasphemy! Let's burn her! *ties up Taylor and carries her off*
Oh shut up. Kingdom Hearts should burn in hell.
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:44 pm
Taylor_Highwind Black_Rain Jeriana Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying
Disney screwed up all of the Squaresoft characters in that game. Especially Cid. They made him a frikkin shopkeeper. CID ISN'T A SHOPKEEPER!!! And they screwed up the outfits. Yuffie doesn't wear tights, she wears a weird leg bracer. Cid doesn't wear blue pants, black boots and a white shirt...look at my siggy and that's what he's supposed to wear. Squall doesn't have long hair and he doesn't prefer to be called Leon (even though I could care less about Squall). Cloud doesn't wear Vincent's clothes. And why did they make Sephiroth's voice played by Lance Bass???
Yucky. And they also forgot Aeris's jacket thingy. stare stressed scream
Besides, who uses a key for a weapon? That's retarded.So some things changed, it was still a great game, hehe. I guess the characters weren't supposed to be exactly like their grown-up counterparts. Perhaps cause if they wore the same thing since they were little, might be a little wierd. And it couldn't be a sword or anything, cause, well, it's Disney. Although Disney is pretty evil now... But to the point, some of the keys get pretty wicked, especially after the Nightmare Before Christmas world, hehe
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:45 pm
Jeriana Sleet is never pretty... sweatdrop *smiles and kisses your hand* A Kingdom Hearts game? Isn't that...a sin? eek It sure is !! eek Nice and roasty toasty!! ::starts the fire for Aeodan and cooks a marshmallow:: Want one ... before she burns?
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:46 pm
You know, I have never played kingdom hearts.......
have never seen it played...
never had a desire to play/see it played......
But in other news.. I'M SNOWED IN!! YAH, BYOTCH! blaugh *does a happy victory dance* all 7 inches of snow and ice shoed up as they were supposed to! I can't wait to go sledding. heart heart heart
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:47 pm
Taylor_Highwind Aeodan Black_Rain Jeriana Mmm, nitemare scarf *cuddles in it and lays my head on your lap* No, it stopped snowing but it'll start back up soon enough 3nodding Yeah ... it's sleeting right now ... snow is pretty ... great for snuggling. 3nodding ::strokes your head (Like a kitty):: ::looks over at Taylorhighwind:: She broke ... a kingdom hearts game sad crying Blasphemy! Let's burn her! *ties up Taylor and carries her off*
Oh shut up. Kingdom Hearts should burn in hell.Hah! You're the one who's gonna burn, heretic! Oh, thank you Rain *takes a marshmellow*
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:49 pm
Oh...a heretic like Ramza in FF Tactics.
*goes and sits next to Ramza*
Fine. If you try to burn me again you'll feel my claws through your necks. stare evil twisted
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