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Aeodan

PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:09 pm


Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???

Sounds like they are. Ya know, sex tales.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:10 pm


Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.

tompins1988


Mith-calen

PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:13 pm


Black_Rain

::An embarrassed flush took over my face, as I turned you in my lap so you were inches from my face, sweeping you into and gentle embrace. Moving my mouth close to your lips before firmly pressing them against your, ravishing your tender lips.::


*closes my eyes and kisses you back, trailing my arms up to wrap around your neck, cheeks flushing slightly*
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:14 pm


tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.


It has taken me quite a while to figure that one out...but from my writing experience...I've decided to make it so that several people, the ones involved in the story, tell the tale. I write my final drafts on the computer, and so what I do is I'll color code the different perspectives. Like Cid's is dark blue, mine is dark green...stuff like that, and I instruct the reader on who's color is whoever is talking and that stuff. Does that sound okay?

Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really.

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tompins1988

PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:16 pm


Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.


It has taken me quite a while to figure that one out...but from my writing experience...I've decided to make it so that several people, the ones involved in the story, tell the tale. I write my final drafts on the computer, and so what I do is I'll color code the different perspectives. Like Cid's is dark blue, mine is dark green...stuff like that, and I instruct the reader on who's color is whoever is talking and that stuff. Does that sound okay?

Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really.
Intresting, like if you wanted to take several whitneses, Ive never tried that.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:18 pm


Jeriana

*closes my eyes and kisses you back, trailing my arms up to wrap around your neck, cheeks flushing slightly*


::My hands disappeared under the cloth of your shirt as I let my fingertips caress the tempting and smooth expanse of your stomach and back, I broke the kiss and allowed my kisses to flow down your neck stopping at the collar of your shirt before looking up at the other people in the room::

ujhhhhhhh.... xp

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:20 pm


tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.


It has taken me quite a while to figure that one out...but from my writing experience...I've decided to make it so that several people, the ones involved in the story, tell the tale. I write my final drafts on the computer, and so what I do is I'll color code the different perspectives. Like Cid's is dark blue, mine is dark green...stuff like that, and I instruct the reader on who's color is whoever is talking and that stuff. Does that sound okay?

Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really.
Intresting, like if you wanted to take several whitneses, Ive never tried that.


Well see...I tried third person since it covers anything...but I like having the people's opinions about the situation...which is easier and better...but if there's a situation with the enemy by themself with none of the characters present...what should I do?
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:23 pm


Black_Rain
Jeriana

*closes my eyes and kisses you back, trailing my arms up to wrap around your neck, cheeks flushing slightly*


::My hands disappeared under the cloth of your shirt as I let my fingertips caress the tempting and smooth expanse of your stomach and back, I broke the kiss and allowed my kisses to flow down your neck stopping at the collar of your shirt before looking up at the other people in the room::

ujhhhhhhh.... xp

*looks up from his gameboy* What? Is something going on?

Aeodan


tompins1988

PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:26 pm


Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.


It has taken me quite a while to figure that one out...but from my writing experience...I've decided to make it so that several people, the ones involved in the story, tell the tale. I write my final drafts on the computer, and so what I do is I'll color code the different perspectives. Like Cid's is dark blue, mine is dark green...stuff like that, and I instruct the reader on who's color is whoever is talking and that stuff. Does that sound okay?

Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really.
Intresting, like if you wanted to take several whitneses, Ive never tried that.


Well see...I tried third person since it covers anything...but I like having the people's opinions about the situation...which is easier and better...but if there's a situation with the enemy by themself with none of the characters present...what should I do?
the fact is that you must allways choose whitch narration fits the story, firtst person may be the best for my stories, there are not many characters, actually generally it is only one, stuck in his own universe. I also like to use a stream of conciusness, it helps get into the characters mind, but I dont use it much, it needs an omniceint writter, and it really takes a lot of work
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:27 pm


Aeodan

*looks up from his gameboy* What? Is something going on?

::Tosses Kingdoms Hearts Chain of Memories at you::

stare It's not going to play itself xd LOL

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Mith-calen

PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:27 pm


Black_Rain


::My hands disappeared under the cloth of your shirt as I let my fingertips caress the tempting and smooth expanse of your stomach and back, I broke the kiss and allowed my kisses to flow down your neck stopping at the collar of your shirt before looking up at the other people in the room::

ujhhhhhhh.... xp


*I shiver delightfully and kiss your forehead* Dang all these people...
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:28 pm


tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.


It has taken me quite a while to figure that one out...but from my writing experience...I've decided to make it so that several people, the ones involved in the story, tell the tale. I write my final drafts on the computer, and so what I do is I'll color code the different perspectives. Like Cid's is dark blue, mine is dark green...stuff like that, and I instruct the reader on who's color is whoever is talking and that stuff. Does that sound okay?

Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really.
Intresting, like if you wanted to take several whitneses, Ive never tried that.


Well see...I tried third person since it covers anything...but I like having the people's opinions about the situation...which is easier and better...but if there's a situation with the enemy by themself with none of the characters present...what should I do?
the fact is that you must allways choose whitch narration fits the story, firtst person may be the best for my stories, there are not many characters, actually generally it is only one, stuck in his own universe. I also like to use a stream of conciusness, it helps get into the characters mind, but I dont use it much, it needs an omniceint narration, and it really takes a lot of work

tompins1988


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:28 pm


tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
Taylor_Highwind
tompins1988
pretty classic aproach, if you ask me, are they like erotic tales or something?


Erotic???
well sex descriptions arent allways necesary, the fact that you have to descrive them really good makes catched my eie.
what narration stile do you generally use on your stories?
I like the first person, but sometimes I use a whitness.


It has taken me quite a while to figure that one out...but from my writing experience...I've decided to make it so that several people, the ones involved in the story, tell the tale. I write my final drafts on the computer, and so what I do is I'll color code the different perspectives. Like Cid's is dark blue, mine is dark green...stuff like that, and I instruct the reader on who's color is whoever is talking and that stuff. Does that sound okay?

Mokey does the same thing too...that's kinda where I got it but not really.
Intresting, like if you wanted to take several whitneses, Ive never tried that.


Well see...I tried third person since it covers anything...but I like having the people's opinions about the situation...which is easier and better...but if there's a situation with the enemy by themself with none of the characters present...what should I do?
the fact is that you must allways choose whitch narration fits the story, firtst person may be the best for my stories, there are not many characters, actually generally it is only one, stuck in his own universe. I also like to use a stream of conciusness, it helps get into the characters mind, but I dont use it much, it needs an omniceint writter, and it really takes a lot of work


Well...I was thinking...maybe...I could write in their perspective. Like say there's a part where Sleemo's by himself in his main hall...thinking about something or talking with a person who isn't a character...would that sound reasonable?
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:30 pm


Black_Rain
Aeodan

*looks up from his gameboy* What? Is something going on?

::Tosses Kingdoms Hearts Chain of Memories at you::

stare It's not going to play itself xd LOL


*runs over and smashes Kingdom Hearts*

STUPID STUPID STUPID GAME!!! scream domokun stressed

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PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 6:30 pm


Jeriana

*I shiver delightfully and kiss your forehead* Dang all these people...

Yep ...
::wraps you in the nitemare scarf and smiles gently poking your side::
... so how's the weather?? Still snowing? xd
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