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 Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 8:58 pm
Aivi-chan... *goes and huggles*
Eno was all alone ;~;
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 8:59 pm
-Huggles back-
My senses were tinkling, felt like i was needed? XD
Eno is very good at Art =]
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:01 pm
That's funny. =w= *snuggles* Eno's been in a bad mood for the past hour or so for some reason and he doesn't know why...
Thankies dear...
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:02 pm
xD -snuggles back-
Did anything happen that affected Eno's mood?
Your welcome =]
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:04 pm
I don't even know dear...
Now wanna critique my writing? I talkeded to the other people about an rp idea and would love your opinion if you haven't given it yet...
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:06 pm
I'm sure you'll figure it out xD
Sure xD I haven't given my opinion xD
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:08 pm
I knew it... dimensional rift. God damn it, this is why it's dangerous to be cut off...
Ahem, ignore that previous comment, it only barely makes sense to me.
The characters are actually characters for a theme week idea. But Sanny said they sounded like roles for an rp, and Silent told me to make that rp... so yeah.
Dead Prince - Ghost Princess - TARTARUS, LAND OF THE DEAD
Doll Princess - MARIONETTE, LAND OF THE LOST
Prince of the Night - Thorn Princess - NOCTURNE, LAND OF SHADOWS
Princess of Drag - Prince NOT Charming - KHAOSU, LAND OF MISFITS AND MADMEN
(Rogue Prince)
Prince of Peace - VITAE, LAND OF LIGHT
Princess of Pain - WYVERN, LAND OF PLEASURE
A long time ago in a realm of fantasy... There was a strong empire composed of six kingdoms; a strong and powerful union of Kings and Queens headed by Rex du Sol, King of the land of Vitae and ruler of all. For centuries the six lands had continued in harmony, with each kingdom keeping limited autonomy and power. However, the trouble began only a few years ago. Now, each kingdom had produced its heir save for Rex du Sol. As the oldest monarch, he was desperate for children and afraid he would become infertile before an heir was produced. In a single great act of foolishness and depravity, he impregnated a woman beyond his own concubine/wife. Literally a month later, his wife was pregnant with a true heir, and his infidelity forgotten. x years later, a mysterious man claiming to be a Prince appeared in Vitae. Merciless and cruel, he swiftly brought about the fall of Rex du Sol. With his collapse, the rest of the kingdoms swiftly fell to ruin, their Kings and Queens being destroyed in a massive rise up from the lower class. However, the various Princes and Princesses escaped by running into the Lost Wasteland. Several years later, the princes and princesses return to discover that their kingdoms have become ruins, abandoned saved for a small group of people in each. Vowing to restore the empire of Sol, they go to one of the castles and begin their plot.
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:21 pm
That's really good Eno! I like it! =]
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:23 pm
Thank you. ^^ *depression cleared up now*
Here's a refined version I just did...
A long time ago in a realm of fantasy... There was a strong empire composed of six kingdoms; a strong and powerful union of Kings and Queens headed by Rex du Sol, King of the land of Vitae and ruler of all. For centuries the six lands had continued in harmony, with each kingdom keeping limited autonomy and power.
However, the trouble began only a few years ago. Now, each kingdom had produced its heir save for Rex du Sol. As the oldest monarch, he was desperate for children and afraid he would become infertile before an heir was produced. In a single great act of foolishness and depravity, he impregnated a woman beyond his own concubine. Literally a month later, his wife was pregnant with a true heir, and his infidelity forgotten. Many years later, a mysterious man claiming to be a Prince appeared in Vitae. Merciless and cruel, he swiftly brought about the fall of Rex du Sol.
With his collapse, the rest of the kingdoms swiftly fell to ruin, their Kings and Queens being destroyed in a massive rise up from the lower class. However, through the sacrifice of the servants and their parents, Princes and Princesses managed to escape, running into the Lost Wasteland.
Several years later, the princes and princesses return to discover that their kingdoms have become ruins, abandoned saved for a small group of people who have collected within the realm of Marionette. Taking these remnants of the great age previous, their only loyal subjects, to the now ruined Palatsiin Nukkeja (palace of dolls), the now forsaken Royal Families plan their revenge on the Rogue Prince and the restoration of the Sol Empire.
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:27 pm
Yay =]
I like that one too =]
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:30 pm
^^
Better? Or worse?
*waiting for Silent to pop up so he can get her opinion*
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:34 pm
Hmmm
I think I like the other one better,
Hmm
Ehh
it's hard for me to make up my mind..
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:40 pm
I'm trying to make everything clear... I'm going to have to run that by everyone first. But Silent's the biggie 'cuz she's the one that actually wants the roleplay...
Hey, dear. Would you join that roleplay? o.o
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:44 pm
I see
How literate is it?
It's always the 1st thing I ask xD
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Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 9:45 pm
Pretty straightforward: Use proper grammar, no text talk, etc. etc.
So no retards.
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