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 Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 9:25 am
Quote: otarius Wrote: OK here goes nothing! RP character Angelus Skrult still finding a village (hopefully Otogakure!) RP sample: 30 leagues from the city, in a heavily wooded area a young adventurer wanders, hoping that he will escape. His rage, held in for so many years, is mounting. He is worried that soon he will lose control over it. When he does it engulfs his body. A shadow so deep that you are affraid of falling in. His body will become cold, he loses his sense of humanity, his eyes turn a blank white. "no, NO, NOOOOOO!" Screams Angelus. The transformation has begun... p.s. umm could you help me with character creation and applying for a village because im still a little confused about it. Which comes first? Hm. What are you escaping from? Meh, I would make a character outline or something and then pm the Kage. Hmmm is this better otarius Wrote: OK here goes nothing! RP character Angelus Skrult still finding a village (hopefully Otogakure!) RP sample: 30 leagues from the city, in a heavily wooded area a young adventurer wanders, hoping that he will escape himself. Since he was five he has been uncontrolable, he has no limits on himself, he does what he wants, when he wants to. No one stands in his way. But becase of his actions he gets angry with himself. He never lets it out he keeps it bottled up. His rage, held in for so many years, is mounting. He is worried that soon he will lose control over it. When he does it engulfs his body. A shadow so deep that you are affraid of falling in. His body will become cold, he loses his sense of humanity, his eyes turn a blank white. "no, NO, NOOOOOO!" Screams Angelus. The transformation has begun...
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 10:06 am
This was orinally how I wanted to send in my application to the guild. However, I was allowed only 2000 characters X_x. So, I decided to use it as my submission for graduation. It was much longer so I edited it. Forgive me if it runs on so long. This also serves as my character's introduction. Please, let me know if I've done anything wrong. I will correct as soon as I check this post.
I haven't contacted a village yet. I wanted to graduate first.
A panel of mixed officials sat in the dark room regarding an application in front of them. The only light was centered in the middle of the room, shining brightly on a young woman standing there. She squinted her eyes to adjust her vision, but it would do no good. She could not see the board members in fron of her. The light had been purposefully set on her face.
"Well," a voice finally said, "why don't we start with your name."
The young woman nodded and answered, "My name is Miyabiyaka Yuukaku, sir.'"
One of the silhouettes motioned to a figure behind the panel. There was an exchange of words before the figure bowed and quickly left the room.
A woman spoke this time, "Well, as part of the interviewing process you are required to answer few questions. You understand this, yes?"
"Yes, ma'am," Yuukaku answered, nodding again.
"Now why have you come here?"
"I....," she began, "I've done a terrible thing." When she said this, a silhouette sat up. "My becoming a shinobi was my father's dream. He raised me to be a shinobi. When I became a Chuunin at sixteen, he was so proud of me." She looked to the ground where the light stopped short of the shadow. "Then nine years ago, my village was ambushed, ransacked, and destroyed. My father and I fought the enemy together. However, the enemy had the upperhand." A lump began to form in Yuukaku's throat as she fought hard to hold back her tears. "I watched them kill my father before me and I froze. As they killed him. I saw my mother's death. I saw her face. I became frightened and ran." She became tight-lipped and looked up at them. "Can you imagine what it would be like to die and the last thing you see is the one person you thought you could count on run away to save themselves? The last thing to know is that you've been shamed?"
No one answered. Someone from the panel clicked their toungue.
"If I were to be given one chance, just one chance to redeem myself, bring honor back to my family name, and know that he forgives me and is proud of me even in his death.... I.... I want to live my father's dream. I am a hardworker and I am willing to train. Even if it means starting from the beginning.... I will live my father's dream again," she finished.
No one knew the pain that built up in Yuukaku's heart. She carried it for nine years and for so long it felt as though it would claw its way out slowly. So slowly that her suffering was almost unbearable.
"Hmmm," the male voice said after awhile. "Interesting. Now moving on. How did you learn about us?"
She swallowed back the lump in her throat. "I read about you," Yuukaku answered, "in a guild registry. The name reminded me of my father's mantra."
The silhouette on the far left nodded and an older male voice spoke, "Do you have any skills? You may demonstrate it for us. However, please note that there are Anbu present even if you don't see them. Just so you don't make any ill-fated decisions."
She nodded. "I understand." She made swift jutsu hands signs. "'AKUMA NO TE NO JUTSU (The Hands of the Devil)!" Her hands ignited and became engulfed in the flames. She then performed a swift series of taijutsu before extinguishing the flames and standing still again.
This time the female spoke, 'Impressive display of combining ninjutsu with taijutsu, but is that all?'
"No, ma'am. The flames can be, uh, expelled from my hands and I know three other jutsu's as well, but as you said.... no ill-fated decisions."
"Indeed," the older male voice chuckled.
The silhouette in the middle stood, "Thank you, Ms. Miyabiyaka. You may leave."
Yuukaku bowed, 'Thank you for this opportunity.'
She left the room and started down the long hallway towards the exit. Her stomach growled. "Uuuuugh, so hungry," she grimaced. She fished her wallet out of her pack and peered into it. A few coins glinted back at her. "Enough for one pork bun."
Back in the boardroom, the officials deliberated.
'Well?' asked one.
The woman snorted, turning her head, "No. She's a deserter. A coward. She ran away from battle and let her comrades fall."
"Yes, but there are those who rise to become something great in the light of redemption," the old man insisted.
A ninja, the figure from earlier, returned. "Sir," he said as he bowed. "I have the file you requested for." He hand it to the old man.
He opened up the file and read it briefly. "If this doesn't help you come to a decision, I don't know what will." He closed it and slid it towards the woman sitting on the opposite of the table. She stopped it and flipped it open. The old man continued, "'Her father was Miyabiyaka Ashi a.k.a Chimei Teki No Yuukaku (The Deadly Orchid) and Honoo No Ran (Orchid of Flames)."
The main official stood, "Very well then."
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 11:20 am
Okay after researching half a day about the d20 system and the rules in these forums, i think i got the basics of character stats system now. I have to learn more about it before i actually start going into combat systems and such. But i wish to graduate from here first. I have mostly designed my character already but i havent posted him anywhere yet(This my first post in this guild actually). His name is Hanamura Ikkou. Okay, im gonna give sample of my roleplaying now: Quote: There was quiet on the roofs of Konoha, only faint voice of the swaying leaves in the autumm wind could be heard. It was a perfect day to relax after a hard day at academy, Ikkou thought as he sat down at the edge of the roof. For some reason this day was expectionally quiet, only a few people were walking on the streets below. This was Ikkous favourite relaxing spot because of the good smell it always had. It was not a miracle why the place always smelled so good, that building happened to be roof of the Yamanaka flower shop. It seemed like i crime to only relax on the roof of the flowershop everyday for free. That is why Ikkou bought a flower from the shop everyday, just before the shops closed. Even though the place was very peaceful, today Ikkou didnt feel very relaxed, because his mind was filled with thoughs of graduation exam, that was closer by the second. He was supposed to show his skills in front of his teachers tomorrow. He knew he wasnt perfect and stressing it out would probably make things even worse. But he couldnt take the exam out of his head and more he thought about it, the more he stressed about it. "Oh god, why cant i just forget about it." He mumbled to himself and took a look at the setting sun. "Oops, i have to hurry or they will close the shop." He said and stood up. After cleaning himself a bit from dust on the roof, he jumped down the roof searching for his wallet... I have hard time thinking up a random story, so im gonna leave it at that. Im not that experienced in roleplaying yet, so i might need to work on my writing in 3rd person(Its a bit harder than writing in 1st person).
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 8:41 pm
Kisa laying in bed, haunted by the memory of his parents death. Furious he gets out of bed and walks to his closet to get changed and go out. But after he gets his pants on he heres a scream in his head.
"Im comming out," the voice screams in a high pitched voice.
"NO, I wont let you," kisa yells to himself.
He falls to his knees trying to fight the voice in his head. As soon as he fell his hands started to turn black, he grows claws. It is his demon form comming out.
"Ow, help me, anyone, help me," kisa yells as gets consumed by his demon form.
Eager to get the taste of fresh blood he sets out for a small house a couple miles away. As soon as he gets there he finds an old, lonely man laying in bed sleeping.
"Yes! fresh blood!" the voice screams in his head.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:55 am
otarius Quote: otarius Wrote: OK here goes nothing! RP character Angelus Skrult still finding a village (hopefully Otogakure!) RP sample: 30 leagues from the city, in a heavily wooded area a young adventurer wanders, hoping that he will escape. His rage, held in for so many years, is mounting. He is worried that soon he will lose control over it. When he does it engulfs his body. A shadow so deep that you are affraid of falling in. His body will become cold, he loses his sense of humanity, his eyes turn a blank white. "no, NO, NOOOOOO!" Screams Angelus. The transformation has begun... p.s. umm could you help me with character creation and applying for a village because im still a little confused about it. Which comes first? Hm. What are you escaping from? Meh, I would make a character outline or something and then pm the Kage. Hmmm is this better otarius Wrote: OK here goes nothing! RP character Angelus Skrult still finding a village (hopefully Otogakure!) RP sample: 30 leagues from the city, in a heavily wooded area a young adventurer wanders, hoping that he will escape himself. Since he was five he has been uncontrolable, he has no limits on himself, he does what he wants, when he wants to. No one stands in his way. But becase of his actions he gets angry with himself. He never lets it out he keeps it bottled up. His rage, held in for so many years, is mounting. He is worried that soon he will lose control over it. When he does it engulfs his body. A shadow so deep that you are affraid of falling in. His body will become cold, he loses his sense of humanity, his eyes turn a blank white. "no, NO, NOOOOOO!" Screams Angelus. The transformation has begun...
Much better, pass.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:57 am
Genville Marks This was orinally how I wanted to send in my application to the guild. However, I was allowed only 2000 characters X_x. So, I decided to use it as my submission for graduation. It was much longer so I edited it. Forgive me if it runs on so long. This also serves as my character's introduction. Please, let me know if I've done anything wrong. I will correct as soon as I check this post. I haven't contacted a village yet. I wanted to graduate first. A panel of mixed officials sat in the dark room regarding an application in front of them. The only light was centered in the middle of the room, shining brightly on a young woman standing there. She squinted her eyes to adjust her vision, but it would do no good. She could not see the board members in fron of her. The light had been purposefully set on her face. "Well," a voice finally said, "why don't we start with your name." The young woman nodded and answered, "My name is Miyabiyaka Yuukaku, sir.'" One of the silhouettes motioned to a figure behind the panel. There was an exchange of words before the figure bowed and quickly left the room. A woman spoke this time, "Well, as part of the interviewing process you are required to answer few questions. You understand this, yes?" "Yes, ma'am," Yuukaku answered, nodding again. "Now why have you come here?" "I....," she began, "I've done a terrible thing." When she said this, a silhouette sat up. "My becoming a shinobi was my father's dream. He raised me to be a shinobi. When I became a Chuunin at sixteen, he was so proud of me." She looked to the ground where the light stopped short of the shadow. "Then nine years ago, my village was ambushed, ransacked, and destroyed. My father and I fought the enemy together. However, the enemy had the upperhand." A lump began to form in Yuukaku's throat as she fought hard to hold back her tears. "I watched them kill my father before me and I froze. As they killed him. I saw my mother's death. I saw her face. I became frightened and ran." She became tight-lipped and looked up at them. "Can you imagine what it would be like to die and the last thing you see is the one person you thought you could count on run away to save themselves? The last thing to know is that you've been shamed?" No one answered. Someone from the panel clicked their toungue. "If I were to be given one chance, just one chance to redeem myself, bring honor back to my family name, and know that he forgives me and is proud of me even in his death.... I.... I want to live my father's dream. I am a hardworker and I am willing to train. Even if it means starting from the beginning.... I will live my father's dream again," she finished. No one knew the pain that built up in Yuukaku's heart. She carried it for nine years and for so long it felt as though it would claw its way out slowly. So slowly that her suffering was almost unbearable. "Hmmm," the male voice said after awhile. "Interesting. Now moving on. How did you learn about us?" She swallowed back the lump in her throat. "I read about you," Yuukaku answered, "in a guild registry. The name reminded me of my father's mantra." The silhouette on the far left nodded and an older male voice spoke, "Do you have any skills? You may demonstrate it for us. However, please note that there are Anbu present even if you don't see them. Just so you don't make any ill-fated decisions." She nodded. "I understand." She made swift jutsu hands signs. "'AKUMA NO TE NO JUTSU (The Hands of the Devil)!" Her hands ignited and became engulfed in the flames. She then performed a swift series of taijutsu before extinguishing the flames and standing still again. This time the female spoke, 'Impressive display of combining ninjutsu with taijutsu, but is that all?' "No, ma'am. The flames can be, uh, expelled from my hands and I know three other jutsu's as well, but as you said.... no ill-fated decisions." "Indeed," the older male voice chuckled. The silhouette in the middle stood, "Thank you, Ms. Miyabiyaka. You may leave." Yuukaku bowed, 'Thank you for this opportunity.' She left the room and started down the long hallway towards the exit. Her stomach growled. "Uuuuugh, so hungry," she grimaced. She fished her wallet out of her pack and peered into it. A few coins glinted back at her. "Enough for one pork bun." Back in the boardroom, the officials deliberated. 'Well?' asked one. The woman snorted, turning her head, "No. She's a deserter. A coward. She ran away from battle and let her comrades fall." "Yes, but there are those who rise to become something great in the light of redemption," the old man insisted. A ninja, the figure from earlier, returned. "Sir," he said as he bowed. "I have the file you requested for." He hand it to the old man. He opened up the file and read it briefly. "If this doesn't help you come to a decision, I don't know what will." He closed it and slid it towards the woman sitting on the opposite of the table. She stopped it and flipped it open. The old man continued, "'Her father was Miyabiyaka Ashi a.k.a Chimei Teki No Yuukaku (The Deadly Orchid) and Honoo No Ran (Orchid of Flames)." The main official stood, "Very well then."
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 8:02 am
jariroth Okay after researching half a day about the d20 system and the rules in these forums, i think i got the basics of character stats system now. I have to learn more about it before i actually start going into combat systems and such. But i wish to graduate from here first. I have mostly designed my character already but i havent posted him anywhere yet(This my first post in this guild actually). His name is Hanamura Ikkou. Okay, im gonna give sample of my roleplaying now: Quote: There was quiet on the roofs of Konoha, only faint voice of the swaying leaves in the autumm wind could be heard. It was a perfect day to relax after a hard day at academy, Ikkou thought as he sat down at the edge of the roof. For some reason this day was expectionally quiet, only a few people were walking on the streets below. This was Ikkous favourite relaxing spot because of the good smell it always had. It was not a miracle why the place always smelled so good, that building happened to be roof of the Yamanaka flower shop. It seemed like i crime to only relax on the roof of the flowershop everyday for free. That is why Ikkou bought a flower from the shop everyday, just before the shops closed. Even though the place was very peaceful, today Ikkou didnt feel very relaxed, because his mind was filled with thoughs of graduation exam, that was closer by the second. He was supposed to show his skills in front of his teachers tomorrow. He knew he wasnt perfect and stressing it out would probably make things even worse. But he couldnt take the exam out of his head and more he thought about it, the more he stressed about it. "Oh god, why cant i just forget about it." He mumbled to himself and took a look at the setting sun. "Oops, i have to hurry or they will close the shop." He said and stood up. After cleaning himself a bit from dust on the roof, he jumped down the roof searching for his wallet... I have hard time thinking up a random story, so im gonna leave it at that. Im not that experienced in roleplaying yet, so i might need to work on my writing in 3rd person(Its a bit harder than writing in 1st person).
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 8:06 am
tresmoon Kisa laying in bed, haunted by the memory of his parents death. Furious he gets out of bed and walks to his closet to get changed and go out. But after he gets his pants on he heres a scream in his head. "Im comming out," the voice screams in a high pitched voice. "NO, I wont let you," kisa yells to himself. He falls to his knees trying to fight the voice in his head. As soon as he fell his hands started to turn black, he grows claws. It is his demon form comming out. "Ow, help me, anyone, help me," kisa yells as gets consumed by his demon form. Eager to get the taste of fresh blood he sets out for a small house a couple miles away. As soon as he gets there he finds an old, lonely man laying in bed sleeping. "Yes! fresh blood!" the voice screams in his head.
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 9:27 am
Thank you, now I have to really research this D20 gaming system. I never realized how techinical RP-ing can be X_x Which means building my character and her background, developing jutsus, and learning about 20 sided dice! Hijou ni attou suru ne sweatdrop It seems like I'll have to wait before putting in a request to a village.
I will still post tho'. I haven't given up yet. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 7:13 pm
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 10:46 pm
My Character’s name is Takari Siren, and I’m shooting for Amegakure…
Here goes nothing…
RolePlay sample:
Siren sat lazily under a grand oak as a soft cool wind blew over her, making the pages of her book dance at its whim. The waters of the mighty waterfall lightly sprayed over her bare feet as she hummed a quiet tune. A twig snapped in the distance, alerting her quickly since she was very sure that the deer were in a different part of the forest. She started to pack her things as a quiet morning soon turned into a haze of sliver, a kunai flew from the bushes grazing her right shoulder and she took to flight threw the branches. She looked back to see whom her pursuer was, seeing nothing she made haste to return to the safety of the village. Before she reached the gates, she found the only path blocked by enemy ninja. She was cornered like an animal about to be slaughtered, what could she do?
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 8:01 am
Mecha.Angel My Character’s name is Takari Siren, and I’m shooting for Amegakure… Here goes nothing… RolePlay sample: Siren sat lazily under a grand oak as a soft cool wind blew over her, making the pages of her book dance at its whim. The waters of the mighty waterfall lightly sprayed over her bare feet as she hummed a quiet tune. A twig snapped in the distance, alerting her quickly since she was very sure that the deer were in a different part of the forest. She started to pack her things as a quiet morning soon turned into a haze of sliver, a kunai flew from the bushes grazing her right shoulder and she took to flight threw the branches. She looked back to see whom her pursuer was, seeing nothing she made haste to return to the safety of the village. Before she reached the gates, she found the only path blocked by enemy ninja. She was cornered like an animal about to be slaughtered, what could she do?
Pass. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:32 pm
My characters name is Takanashi, Kazuya. I am shooting for Otogakure...
Rp example:
Kazuya had been out for days looking for some place to train. Sure he could have stopped here or there, but he wanted it to be perfect so he could be accepted as a ninja of The Sound Village. He began constantly panicing when he heard a noise behind him. He quickly jumped in the trees looking for a body. He looked in his weapons bag and remembered he forgot to get money for weapons. So awaiting a battle, Kazuya prepared to fight, with only his fists as his weapons.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:39 pm
As i walked through the gate at the end of the woods I relized that it was about time for me to do my evening training. I started out with some basic jutsu. "SHADOW CLONE JUTSU"I yelled and suddenly five shadow clones were all around me, yet something didn't feel right. I looked around and relized that i had a visitor. Standing behind me was a a shinobi from the sound village looking at me with extreme hate. I decided it was time for me to put my training to use. suddenly all my clones disappeared and I took a fighting stance that i preferred. I had one hand over my back on the handle of my katana. and then i charged.
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Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 2:42 pm
Copycat Kakashi Hatake As i walked through the gate at the end of the woods I relized that it was about time for me to do my evening training. I started out with some basic jutsu. "SHADOW CLONE JUTSU"I yelled and suddenly five shadow clones were all around me, yet something didn't feel right. I looked around and relized that i had a visitor. Standing behind me was a a shinobi from the sound village looking at me with extreme hate. I decided it was time for me to put my training to use. suddenly all my clones disappeared and I took a fighting stance that i preferred. I had one hand over my back on the handle of my katana. and then i charged. always speak in 3rd person dude. Like "he realized" or "(characters name) realized"
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