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 Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:07 pm
Naruto glared at the Akatsuki. He growled as he saw that each of them smirk with lust in their eyes which were staring at him intently. "You'll pay for hat you done...I'm gonna rip your balls off and shove them down your throats!" Itachi's eyes gleamed with amusement. "Well isn't this going to be amusing."
All of a sudden a surge of red chakra started to glow brightly around them. "GET READY BASTARDS!" cried Naruto, who was gaining more features of the Kyuubi.
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 9:08 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 11:36 pm
(( crying Omg... Someone actually updated! *huggles you* I felt like a post whore.... So I'm gonna wait for others to post... If not, I'll post the next part.))
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:12 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:15 pm
Itachi smirked..."About time Naruto-kun." Kisame looked at the kyuubi vessel hungrily. "I'll beat you to the pulb and have my way with you my little kitsune."
"Like hell any of you will defeat me and diddle me! I won't kill you Itachi cuz thats Sasuke's job. But i'll let you live but barely!"
"Bring it on Naru-chan," said Sasori huskily.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 6:16 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:21 pm
THe surge of red chakra started to bind the Akatsuki. Shocked, the three of them tried to escape but to no avail. Naruto smirked and started to form a low level Rasengan. "Now I wouldn't want to mess Sasuke's apartment would I?" smirked the transforming blond.
Itachi glared at him and whispered," Magenkyou Sharingan."
His eyes turned red with a cycle around his dark pupils. He looked into Naruto's red feline eyes...but was shocked to see that Naruto wasn't affected. "Need I remind you that I have the Kyuubi behind me!" roared Naruto.
He dashed across the room and slammed his rasengan in the stomach of Itachi. Itachi's eyes widened and he sputtered out blood. He looked up to stare into the red orbs of evil. He gasp and passed out.
"Now whose turn is it?"
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:27 pm
((Wow, you're doing pretty well on your own... You could practically hold up this thread... Do you write fanfiction?))
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:13 am
i'm writing something up ^^....it's still a working progress
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:19 am
cooli writing you are doin good!! and yay fight scene!!
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:25 pm
sinful_ryuu i'm writing something up ^^....it's still a working progress
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:22 am
Thanks. NOW BACK TO THE FIGHT SCENE
o.o.o.o.o.o
Naruto smirked and began forming a new rasengan. Kisame chuckled and suddenly the red chakra that were binding him broke. Naruto widened his eyes and jumped back. "s**t!" He held his fully formed rasengan and waited to strike. Kisame wielded his sword and chuckled evilly.
"Awwww. I injured your weasel lover and now you're gonna try and rape me. BRING IT ON!" exclaimd Naruto.
"IN THE NAME OF YOUTH KAKASHI I ASK YOU OUT ON A DATE!"
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eek
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:32 am
"The hell," said Kisame," That sounds familiar... gonk "
Waltzing into the seen was the ostentatious Gai. Gai being the flamboyent lover of youth did his famous trademark. sweatdrop "Ah, Kakashi you passed out from joy that I, the all mighty Gai, asked you on a date."
"BAKA! Don't you see that he's beat up!" exclaimed Naruto.
"Nani? Oh, Shark-man. Nice to see you again, but as you can see I'm already taken so sorry we can't go out."
"BAKA! CAN"T YOU SEE THAT WE ARE IN THE MIDDLE OF A BATTLE!" cried the obnoxious blond.
"Oh. Then I"ll take shark man and you, blond youth, shall take the hot red head there," cooed the flamboyent green spandx wearing homo.
eek
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 10:34 am
BUMP N PLEASE SOMEONE POST SOMETHING UP
I DON'T WANT TO BE THE ONLY ONE TO POST BITS OF THIS STORY crying
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 1:27 pm
I will give it a go!
Naruto was really upset right now, since he was trying to have a serious battle when Gai burst in, in all his flamboyant and bright colored glory, so obviously had to take certain.... actions to quiet the man.
Naruto was about to run for Gai and kick him in the face, but Kisame got there first, swinging his giant sword at Gai. Gai flipped back though, just in time to dave himself from being cut into little peices.... though he did get a bit of his spandex suit scratched. Looking down in horror at the now slightly torn leg part, Gai gasped. "M-my spandex!!!!"
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