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Oh that storm.
D: We kind of got lucky that it decided to miss
us and just showered us with some rain.
I hope it blows off soon.

Sorry about that. I keep forgetting I haven't finished
typing up all the places in the map yet. XD
/easily distracted

Basically it's like a skeevy place that is somewhat
similar to large cities of today where the redlight district
holds sway, lots of flashing neon lights with casinos,
creepy people at streetlights from hookers, flashers
and muggers every which way. Lady Vivi basically almost
gets a cut out of everyone, and those she doesn't are probably
too small time to be heard about. Basically dark underbelly of crime.
There's also a big mall as well as the huge Coliseum there
where the Gladiators fight.

Thanks Mii. XD
Had to look at so many ref pics!

Sexy sexy Eku ;D

If you have finished anything you're free to post them here or create
another thread in the main forum.
Subforum new threads should only be created by me at this time.

Also if you have a better idea for the world conflict XD
would be good to mention it to me here.
Quote me as well cuz I might forget to check.

(pssst...might be busy starting tomorrow to Monday and
not be online)

I was fine in PMs until we reached the point where we have to discuss
heavily on the work/writing stuff of the guild. XD

Thank you very much.
Although this is a lot of work. XD
Any way I can compensate you?

Honestly, I always need gold for getting art of my characters, but we can figure that out once we get to that point.

Also, crap. I was going to ask if it was okay if I wrote it in second person. Hmm, I guess I'll just play around until I find what fits best. Have a good night!

Yeah, I figured that too. When looking at the first list item, detailing how the human gets to Nocte, I was thinking it would be an interesting way to introduce, but it obviously starts making less sense, given that the person isn't going to see all these different places in the city immediately. xD

Yeah, but being in second person, would make it fairly applicable to everyone. Anyway, I'm super distracted by some RL s**t, so I haven't gotten to any writing yet.
Also, a second note, you would not want to start a novel with so much exposition. xDD /friendly neighborhood creative writing major advice.

No worries, dear. I'm patient. Plus, it's not like I need the money nownownowrightnow. c:
That seems fair, I can work with that. Partly, I just want to be part of something of this nature. Whenever I've come across B/C shops that sounded cool, I always think "I could do this!" Then I remember that I can't draw.

1st part:
Well this isn't meant to be a novel so I don't have to adhere to the cut and splice writing of novels. XD It's more like those pamphlets you get for world building where people can RP in the world. So gotta have all the details with what makes up the world so people won't be all confoozles mid-RPing.

Well I'm the exact opposite! I'm like: DRAW DRAW DRAW...
Oh gawd I really cannot write for shiz. OTL
So so happy to see you interested in this.
Aye...just tell me what's a fare rate you think? OvO

But thank you for understanding!
I hope your RL business won't be all consuming like mine D:
/haven't been able to make inroads with Nocte since....

2nd part:
Told you I can't write. All I do is rough rough outline.
Which is why I totes wanted to IM since it would be faster
to answer questions that way.

.........hmmmm....
the 1st paragraph makes it sound like rifts happen all the time and everywhere. XD Which it doesn't. It's a very rare thing for a portal to open
and usually sucks a person into it so quickly if you weren't watching for it you'd probably miss it. Since it also open up anywhere along the timeline...
it's not really recorded human history since it also opens up in the possible futures...as well as possible pasts. (i.e. parallel earths-ish in way although still all in earth.) Only humans can be sucked in as well. (so no half-vampire or half-whatever can get sucked in...only pure humans.)

Also aim of this shop is adults. So having your 2nd part of the paragraph mostly about children might lead to misunderstandings that people will commission their characters as kids. (Where majority should be already teen-adults at least. Children rare.)

There's also more information HERE about what people have heard about when it comes to portals opening. It's more a myth and there are super few confirmed sighting that it's mostly just myths and rumors. Also...it's more individuals that get sucked in. Rarely would a portal suck more than one person, much less a family, into the portal.

Sorry OTL.
Outline is too rough.
Any questions you can totes ask me to prevent more misunderstandings.
I really appreciate you doing this though.

Anything you're unclear with...confoozles ask me.
You can even make an itemized question list for me to fill up. XD
/need to write down so many things but has horrible thought organization hence...why cannot write well.