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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:05 pm
And by the way, I can easily explain why any of the races I mentioned would be considered unholy to Red. If you wish for an explanation. Anyways, I gotta go, so if you want explanations, they are gonna have to come tomorrow.
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:06 pm
xXx-Wulf-xXx Fool it's a name nothing that can change a world or anything so just forget about this okay. Truly the name is fine. It's misleading. That's all there is to it, and that's the only thing I've said about it.
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:13 pm
A City Of Fools Mayvine SorceressJacklyn A City Of Fools As for the two races brought up. 1. They are called Reapers..... Sounds unholy to me... 2. Kakurenbo.... They summon demon weapons.... They go clinically insane... And they attack people with blood. Unholy as ******** class="clear">
Reapers sound unholy but really aren't. Kakurenbo would be though since they gain power through eating other peoples hearts. But they don't attack with blood. That's Black Bloods. That just makes them predators, and not unholy. A City Of Fools Why add a number.It's purely an in RP sort of thing. If I make it into some sort of custom then I'll do it, but that is not happening in the foreseeable future. Because that means the weapon has a real weakness to owning and using it <.< Something it needs. Trust me. If you give me that, it will only aid me. As it is, he will shoot off some extra energy from time to time. If you give me a time limit to get rid of energy or let it compound until the sum of my energy implodes the area around me.... Well.... s**t's gonna get messy for everyone..... Not putting something like that onto it is a blessing to you all. Well, actually it'd only get messy for you, the timer would reset every time you use a skill.
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:46 pm
Sounds good Yo, approved.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 4:18 am
Mayvine A City Of Fools Mayvine SorceressJacklyn A City Of Fools As for the two races brought up. 1. They are called Reapers..... Sounds unholy to me... 2. Kakurenbo.... They summon demon weapons.... They go clinically insane... And they attack people with blood. Unholy as ******** class="clear">
Reapers sound unholy but really aren't. Kakurenbo would be though since they gain power through eating other peoples hearts. But they don't attack with blood. That's Black Bloods. That just makes them predators, and not unholy. A City Of Fools Why add a number.It's purely an in RP sort of thing. If I make it into some sort of custom then I'll do it, but that is not happening in the foreseeable future. Because that means the weapon has a real weakness to owning and using it <.< Something it needs. Trust me. If you give me that, it will only aid me. As it is, he will shoot off some extra energy from time to time. If you give me a time limit to get rid of energy or let it compound until the sum of my energy implodes the area around me.... Well.... s**t's gonna get messy for everyone..... Not putting something like that onto it is a blessing to you all. Well, actually it'd only get messy for you, the timer would reset every time you use a skill. That would make it absolutely pointless as a weakness, because it would no longer be a weakness. Trust me on this. You would not be limiting it or weakening it by putting some sort of timer on it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:34 pm
If I may interject for a moment, I think maybe that this should be resolved very soon. Wood, remember that you're putting up your creation for approval, this isn't a discussion so much tweaking it to make it acceptable. May is generally easy to please, so if he's telling you something needs to get nerfed a bit then it usually does.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:42 pm
I understand that. I'm honestly helping him, because giving me that sort of thing is only going to help me in the long run. I'm honestly trying to make this LESS OP by not giving it a timer.
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Posted: Thu Sep 08, 2011 7:54 pm
RPC Name: Darius J. Fitz RPC Rank: Journeyman RPC Bloodline: Draconian RPC Class: Berserker RPC Element: Earth Name of Weapon/Armor: Graviton (War Hammer)Description:
Forged from a unique material known solely as 'Element Z,' Graviton was granted a very special ability. Element Z was a type of mineral that contained within it the prowess to control gravity, but only when grouped into large quantities. All of the only known Element Z was used to forge Graviton, making it a one-of-a-kind weapon. So because of this material, Graviton w gifted with slight Gravitational Control. By giving C-rank energy, the user is able to activate this mystical hammer's abilities, though it only lasts 8 posts before it needs another dose of energy. However, this special element isn't weightless. Once activated, the item gains 100 pounds, slowing most by a great deal. However, if the user has good upper-body strength ( Must have more than 8 strength ) then they will not be effected as much ( -1 speed if strength is over 8. -2 speed if strength is less than 8 ). Note: Graviton only gains it's weight once it is activated. Also, the user can only use the weapon's skills if they have activated it's gravity abilities.Rank: BPassive Ability(s): When activated, whatever the Graviton hits will have slight gravitational relief for two posts, basically paralyzing the target. If it hits NEAR the target, however, they only become weightless for one post (Must be in a 5 ft radius to take effect).Skills:
Super Jump Rank: D Description: By submitting an additional D-ranked amount of energy to the hammer, the user is able to hold the hammer so it's head faces below them, and as they jump, they release the stored energy, allowing them to leap 20 ft high before falling back down.
Burst Rank: D Description: By charging additional D-ranked energy into the hammer, it gets stronger. The next object to be struck by the hammer will be hit with a sudden burst of energy, and fly 20 ft away.
Gravitational Distortion Rank: C Description: By submitting additional C-rank amount of energy, the next impact Graviton has, it will change the direction of gravitational pull on that object/thing for three (3) posts. Note: Only can make the object/thing get pulled into another object/thing. Can't have them pulled into, say, the sky unless there's something up there they can be pulled into other than the moon/sun.
Weightless Rank: B Description: By submitting additional B-ranked amount of energy into the hammer, the user can then swing the hammer hard onto the ground. Upon impact, the hammer releases all of it's energy into a 20 ft. radius of it's impact spot. Everything within this radius, with an exception to the user (Graviton also uses it's stored energy to keep the user glued to the ground) becomes weightless and will begin to float. Note: Flying objects/objects not on the ground won't be effected by this ability.
Burden Rank: B-S Description: By submitting additional B to S-ranked energy amounts to the hammer's thirst, the next object the user strikes with the hammer will be overcome with weight. At B rank energy, they'll simply gain 50 pounds, and lose 1 speed point. However, with A rank energy, the object will gain 100 pounds, and lose 2 speed points. At S rank energy, the object will gain 200 pounds, and lose 4 speed. Only lasts for 5 posts.Rp Sample: Darius stood defiantly, facing the towering beast in his wake with great valor. As the beast held up it's hand, it's elongated fingers outstretched towards it's prey; Towards Darius. The Draconian was able to feel slight fear as he watched the talons on the creatures giant paws closely. It's claws would surely tear through his beefy body like a bullet cuts through the air as it hurtles towards it's target. Darius slowly lifted his hand up until it was hovering just above the handle to Graviton, energy surging up into his hand; charging. Then he waited, watching the whole of the creature before him. And then, it lunged. It's arm darted towards Darius' location, and Darius swiftly and firmly gripped the handle of the mallet, his energy now pulsing into the weapon. Swinging it over his head, and down hard into the ground, the energy Darius as fed into the Graviton causing a large shock wave of energy to sound burst outwards in a 20 foot radius (Weightless). Then, swinging his hammer up, Darius bashed the claw of the beast upwards and away from him. Because of the skill he'd performed previously, the creature would find itself weightless as it's arm, and eventually body would begin to linger upwards. Rushing forward as fast as his legs could take him, Darius then, when he was but inches from the belly of the confused beast, spun on his heel, charging energy into the hammer as he did so, and managed to strike the abomination in it's gut. As the hammer made impact, a burst of energy rocketed outwards and cause the beast to fly a good twenty feet (Home Run). As it reached the limit to the gravitational field Darius had caused, it's body weight returned and caused the creature to hit the ground. Hard. As it dizzily stood from the previous attacks, it shook it's head to push away the confusion. Seeing Darius running towards it, the creature refused to let him get any closer. It quickly slammed both it's arms hard into the ground, causing a small tremor to knock Darius off his feet. He was too slow to get near the beast normally. But fright filled him when he saw a a greenish-whitish color radiating from it's mouth. It was charging up an energy blast. Quickly getting to his feet, Darius knew he was too slow to attempt to simply run out of the direction of the blast. And at the last minute Darius knew what he had to do to survive. Surging his energy into the hammer quickly, he let the energy burst outwards below him as he jumped, and the hammer carried him a good 20 feet into the air, he narrowly escaping with the skin still attached to his bottom (Super Jump). As he seemingly floated in the sky, he looked down to see the creature below him. Charging more of his energy into the hammer, he then fell fast as the hammer gained weight. As he neared the creature, he moved his arms up so the hammer would be above his head, then he swung downwards with full force, cracking the creature dead in the head and causing it's head to suddenly gain 200 pounds of weight (Burden Rank S). However, as he struck the beast, his falling speed failed to lower as he then crashed hard into the ground. Slowly prying himself from the rock, he stood and gripped his hammer, strapping it back over his back, his body all bruised and cut. He then slowly walked away from the scene of the battle.
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:21 am
@Hero: I'm gonna have to deny this, gravity control is too powerful a tool for a weapon.
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Posted: Fri Sep 09, 2011 6:26 pm
Mayvine @Hero: I'm gonna have to deny this, gravity control is too powerful a tool for a weapon. I figured as much. I was simply hoping someone could tell me what parts are over powered, but gravity is a sticky subject. Guess I'll have to think up something else then? >.<
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Posted: Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:12 pm
A City Of Fools I understand that. I'm honestly helping him, because giving me that sort of thing is only going to help me in the long run. I'm honestly trying to make this LESS OP by not giving it a timer. Okay, how 'bout this then, that energy that needs to be released is uncontrollable and effects Red as well <.<
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:09 am
Mayvine A City Of Fools I understand that. I'm honestly helping him, because giving me that sort of thing is only going to help me in the long run. I'm honestly trying to make this LESS OP by not giving it a timer. Okay, how 'bout this then, that energy that needs to be released is uncontrollable and effects Red as well <.< It was already like that. o3o It wouldn't affect him as badly as it would anyone else, but it sure affects him.
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:27 am
A City Of Fools Mayvine A City Of Fools I understand that. I'm honestly helping him, because giving me that sort of thing is only going to help me in the long run. I'm honestly trying to make this LESS OP by not giving it a timer. Okay, how 'bout this then, that energy that needs to be released is uncontrollable and effects Red as well <.< It was already like that. o3o It wouldn't affect him as badly as it would anyone else, but it sure affects him. No it'd effect him all the same because the energy is "granted by the gods" and not his own <.<
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Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:08 pm
Mayvine A City Of Fools Mayvine A City Of Fools I understand that. I'm honestly helping him, because giving me that sort of thing is only going to help me in the long run. I'm honestly trying to make this LESS OP by not giving it a timer. Okay, how 'bout this then, that energy that needs to be released is uncontrollable and effects Red as well <.< It was already like that. o3o It wouldn't affect him as badly as it would anyone else, but it sure affects him. No it'd effect him all the same because the energy is "granted by the gods" and not his own <.< Not that it matters. I'd consider that sort of thing an instant kill or defeat for anyone his rank or lower.
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