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 Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:14 am
Name:Evil Leo Boy
RPC's Name: Leo
Bloodline applying for: Mind's Eye of the Kagura
Why Do you want it: With this ability I can let people know when a ninja is coming
What will you do with it:Support my teammates by telling them how many ninjas will come and how far they are from attack.
What you know about it: I know that with this bloodline you can sense human and animal chakras , can tell how many people are coming from long rang and can sense when a person is lying from their dishonest emotions or can tell when a persons in a genjutsu
Rp sample:Leo was all alone leaning on a tree relaxing until he sensed 5 ninjas with a great amount of chakra heading 7 feet from him. He knew they was trouble so he dashes to the other side of the forest to avoid getting seen from the ninjas. One ninja had a Sensor ninja just like Leo and the ninja sensed Leo go right pass them. The ninja let the others know that he Leo went right pass them and they went chancing after Leo. Leo focused chakra into his feet then dashes really fast away from the ninjas. The ninjas went right after him without the use of any chakra and the was heading up behind Leo. Leo saw a tree right in his way so he dashes up on the tree then back flips off of the tree making the ninjas hit the tree. As Leo went to the other side of the forest he sensed 2 ninjas chakra disappear knowing that their dead. Leo forms hand signs then hides his chakra for the sensor ninja cant sense him. The jutsu worked and the ninja could'nt sense him anymore. Leo dashes to the hokages tower to inform the hokage about the ninjas
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Posted: Sat Feb 13, 2010 4:49 pm
Fraid' I'll have to deny you for now. Alright Leo, couple things, firstly, I am the RPing Nazigod in this guild, and I notice you have quite the... English there. If you don't mind, I'm going to have to recommend you to the RPing school. Post there immediately. It's not a threat or anything bad. I just need to touch you up on some things. It's all to make the RPing experience much smoother. People won't call you out on it either.
Also, I'm not seeing that you fully know the bloodline... make the RP sample a bit longer.
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Posted: Sun Feb 14, 2010 2:53 pm
Bloodline: Rinnegan
Why do you want it: Well I my akatsuki character was Killed so I thought I would make a Genin in the Leaf village
What will you do with it:Well Stuff >.>
What you know about it: Well I know that it is like the Byakugan in the fact that you can see allmost 360 degrees. Also if I remember right you get all 6 elements. If you have more then one body out you can see thought all the current bodies out. Making the best defense
RP Sample:
((Ok well I will rp as a really power character but I will only be a genin))
Cody walked into the building he could not see anything due to it being dark. So he walked over to the light switch and turned on the lights. Only to find himself surrounded by enemy's. Looking at the one that was walking out of the circle of enemies Happened to be the so called Nine tailed demon host. "So you are the Nine tails host" he said with a smile.
"Yes I am and why have you come here" the Demon host said as he grabbed his sword.
"I am here to capture you and take your demon like my Leader told me to do" he said as his akatsuki cloak started flowing in the wind. He then thought it would be smart to attack before the demon host could even speak. Grabbing his katana out and a few Kunai Cody threw five at him and he started dashing right at him.
The host then jumped up to dodge the attacks. Cody stopped right were the host was. The host had landed right behind Cody. They were back to back not able to see each other. "Well you will die by my hand" The host said.
Cody had his eyes closed as the host was talking his hand to his mouth making one single hand sign. Once the host finished Cody opened his eyes. He had smiled as the Rinnegan has shown. All the other enemies ran in fear of the Rinnegan. The host did not see the eyes. Cody formed one more hand sign and a Body of his appeared right above Cody in the rafters.
The host the pulled out a kunai and want to slice Cody neck. Cody smiled as he swung his katana up to his shoulder to block the attack. "Nice try but You are to slow" The host looked shocked as he thought he had the Byakugan.
Cody turned around with his eyes closed once mroe. "Well You shall see the Most powerful doujutsu in all of the ninja world." He said as he opened his eyes slowly. The host was shocked by the sight of the Rinnegan he could not move a muscle. "Well since your unable to talk I shall kill you right now." He said as he held his hand up to the Host and then he started to fly back into the wall. Cody had been using his Deva Realm the hole time. Then The deva relam jumped up and stood next to another Akatsuki member. Everyone thought that was his Partner. It turned out to be his other body.
The Animal Realm. He smiled as the animal realm started forming hand signs. A giant chameleon-chimera. The animal realm then jumped inside its mouth and the chameleon-chimera turned invisible. The animal realm did more hand signs to summon the Giant dog. The dog then ran up to the other body and it jumped on the Dog. "Well are you going to fight back Demon"
The demon got up he did not want to die but he did not want to have to use his demon power so he thought a Chidori would work. He did the hand signs and held his hand out. He started running at the dog and Deva Realm as fast as he could. He then yelled "CHIDORI" and hit the dog. The Deva Realm laughed as the dog just split in half. The Deva realm then just used the Gravity affect he had and Pulled the Host to him. "You are a useless host." He said as he threw him to his left into the wall.
The animal realm was hiding on the roof in the chameleon-chimera the hole time watching the fight. Cody then thought it would be best to use the Asura realm. So he summoned him. The Deva realm Would stay on one of the dogs as the Asura realm jumped on the other one.
The Asura realm had the missile technique. The Host then stood up he had the Nine tails Cloak on with one tails out. "Just one tail you think i am that bad of a Ninja You are the bad ninja here" The Asura realm said as he held his hand out and fired two missiles at the host. The host thought he could dodge them but sadly he miss took the missiles they were heat seeking. "Never under think you enemy." The Deva realm said as he jumped off the dog along with the Asura realm The Dog then combined and charged the host.
The host stood up and dodged the dog trying not to hit it. He then knew he had to avoid the Dog and go after the Deva realm. Since the Deva realm was not paying attention He formed a hand sign and made a Rasegan and charged the Deva realm. The animal realm seen this and Summoned the Hungry Ghost realm. He appeared in front of the Host. He opened his mouth and started to take in the Rasegan. The host jumped back and started turning to the four tails.
All the realms came into one spot the Animal realm was looking behind the rest and the other watched the Nine tailed demon. As he hit four tails the Hungry Ghost realm walked closer to him. The host started to form a Chakra ball in Front of the Hosts mouth. He then luanched the Chakra ball at the Hungry ghost realm He then opened his mouth and tried to take in the Chakra blast he took most in but the died and stopped the attack at the same time.
"Well you manged to take out one of me" Cody said as he summoned the other bodies. "We will end this now." he said as his attacked his own summoning the Dogs Splitting them into many other dogs they attacked the Host. The host tried to defend the all but ended up getting bit by all of them. Once he fell alseep the dogs turned back into and and Disappeared. The Animal realm then had the chameleon-chimera reappeared and they put the Hosts body in the chameleon-chimera's mouth. All the Bodies but the Animal realm disappeared. He then started walking back to the base.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:46 pm
Bloodline: Ranmaru Bloodline
Why do you want it: To protect the ones that mean dear to me and to track down enemies
What will you do with it:I'll tell my teammates or another person around me what persons chakra is near them, I will tell when a person is alive or dead and protect my teammates with the Red Life Force Phantom Jutsu
What you know about it: I know that this bloodline is more powerful then the Byakugan, a user can locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from medium range distances (200 yards), and notice changes in an individual's chakra
RP Sample: Leo was in a battle with two weak Ninjas. Leo activated his Bloodline ability making his eyes glow red. As his eyes was glowing red, He concentrates chakra all over his body, Releasing the chakra into the air and converts his chakra into millions of visible, bright red particles floating around his body. As the particles float around his body, the Ninjas was amazed very seeing anything like it before. The particles begins to float around the area, floating around him and the 2 ninjas, creating 3 invisible chakra phantom clones standing right next to the ninjas. Leo forms hand signs, causing all 3 of the phantoms to explode, unleashing millions of soil red chakra particles form as small needles, terribly stabbing the two ninjas with blunt force all over their face to chest area, killing both ninjas painfully. Leo deactivates his ability, causing his eyes to stop glowing red turning his eyes back to normal.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:48 pm
Evil Leo Boy Bloodline: Rinnegan Why do you want it: Ranmaru Bloodline What will you do with it:I'll tell my teammates or another person around me what persons chakra is near them, I will tell when a person is alive or dead and protect my teammates with the Red Life Force Phantom Jutsu What you know about it: I know that this bloodline is more powerful then the Byakugan, a user can locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from medium range distances (200 yards), and notice changes in an individual's chakra RP Sample: (I will do soon as possible) What is this? You want the Rinnegan or Ranmaru Bloodline?
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:54 pm
Gohan Uchiha92 Evil Leo Boy Bloodline: Rinnegan Why do you want it: Ranmaru Bloodline What will you do with it:I'll tell my teammates or another person around me what persons chakra is near them, I will tell when a person is alive or dead and protect my teammates with the Red Life Force Phantom Jutsu What you know about it: I know that this bloodline is more powerful then the Byakugan, a user can locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from medium range distances (200 yards), and notice changes in an individual's chakra RP Sample: (I will do soon as possible) What is this? You want the Rinnegan or Ranmaru Bloodline? Ranmeru Bloodline i edited it
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 5:02 pm
Death, I can see that you understand the basic premise of Rinnegan with all of the bodies and what not... but the post was somewhat confusing, albeit readable.
I could use a lot of work with its clarity, but this isnt a grammar lesson. You've proved you know the bloodline well enough. Enjoy!
APPROVED!
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 9:58 pm
Name: Naito_Arekkusu7
RPC's name: Arekkusu Morinaga
Bloodline Applying for: Genjuu-Kinzoku (Fierce Metal)
Why do you want it: Well just works for my rpc in the way I rp and his fighting style being close and attacking powerful I want to add more to that.
What will you do with it: Provide me with a balance rpc as well explain my rpc violent one moment and calm the next.
What you know about it: Hey what's up with shooting? This guild use to have some more respect for people =P
A strong will body made of metal, with almost no blood in there bodies instead acid with a control of there own metal.
RP Sample:
Arekku walking into the field looked around for a while before he set of in dreamland as he stepped forward into a dense forest when suddenly there was a snapping noise in the area. Though the young man wasn't paying to much attention at the moment as two giant logs came from the trees smashing together with him in between. As two men came out laughing with knifes they were talking in victory as they just believed that they had squash Arekku together. There was then a slashing sounds that made them step back in surprise as Arekku cut up the trees like butter as he stared at them with a smile, he started to run at them at full speed.
The men took a defensive position as they watch in fear at Arekku now though they soon buckle up and threw kunai's at the body only for it to be deflected as there was some armor appearing on Arekku's body from under his skin. The next man then did a series of seals while the other one set up a rock shield as there was a big fire ball coming from the first man. Arekku jumped straight through as his body burned a little though the acid in his body was way more corrosive and would burn more than the fire engulfing Arekku who after passing it just slammed into the rock wall tackling one of the men with a metal spear coming from his shoulder that he used to tackle the fire user.
The earth user looked stunned at the young metal user though it was short as after a while he also had a metal spear come through his eyes as Arekku looked at them both his metal covered in there blood he just retracted it back as he left them dead on the floor as he headed on his way he felt immense pain from making the metal retract his body the way he did though by now he was more than use to it.
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:02 pm
Evil Leo Boy Bloodline: Ranmaru Bloodline Why do you want it: To protect the ones that mean dear to me and to track down enemies What will you do with it:I'll tell my teammates or another person around me what persons chakra is near them, I will tell when a person is alive or dead and protect my teammates with the Red Life Force Phantom Jutsu What you know about it: I know that this bloodline is more powerful then the Byakugan, a user can locate and track others by sensing chakra, pick up chakra from medium range distances (200 yards), and notice changes in an individual's chakra RP Sample: Leo was in a battle with two weak Ninjas. Leo activated his Bloodline ability making his eyes glow red. As his eyes was glowing red, He concentrates chakra all over his body, Releasing the chakra into the air and converts his chakra into millions of visible, bright red particles floating around his body. As the particles float around his body, the Ninjas was amazed very seeing anything like it before. The particles begins to float around the area, floating around him and the 2 ninjas, creating 3 invisible chakra phantom clones standing right next to the ninjas. Leo forms hand signs, causing all 3 of the phantoms to explode, unleashing millions of soil red chakra particles form as small needles, terribly stabbing the two ninjas with blunt force all over their face to chest area, killing both ninjas painfully. Leo deactivates his ability, causing his eyes to stop glowing red turning his eyes back to normal. Denied, you must learn how to use the techniques correctly.Try again after you review the page a couple more times.
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:20 pm
Naito_Arekkusu7 Name: Naito_Arekkusu7 RPC's name: Arekkusu Morinaga Bloodline Applying for: Genjuu-Kinzoku (Fierce Metal) Why do you want it: Well just works for my rpc in the way I rp and his fighting style being close and attacking powerful I want to add more to that. What will you do with it: Provide me with a balance rpc as well explain my rpc violent one moment and calm the next. What you know about it: Hey what's up with shooting? This guild use to have some more respect for people =P A strong will body made of metal, with almost no blood in there bodies instead acid with a control of there own metal. RP Sample:Arekku walking into the field looked around for a while before he set of in dreamland as he stepped forward into a dense forest when suddenly there was a snapping noise in the area. Though the young man wasn't paying to much attention at the moment as two giant logs came from the trees smashing together with him in between. As two men came out laughing with knifes they were talking in victory as they just believed that they had squash Arekku together. There was then a slashing sounds that made them step back in surprise as Arekku cut up the trees like butter as he stared at them with a smile, he started to run at them at full speed. The men took a defensive position as they watch in fear at Arekku now though they soon buckle up and threw kunai's at the body only for it to be deflected as there was some armor appearing on Arekku's body from under his skin. The next man then did a series of seals while the other one set up a rock shield as there was a big fire ball coming from the first man. Arekku jumped straight through as his body burned a little though the acid in his body was way more corrosive and would burn more than the fire engulfing Arekku who after passing it just slammed into the rock wall tackling one of the men with a metal spear coming from his shoulder that he used to tackle the fire user. The earth user looked stunned at the young metal user though it was short as after a while he also had a metal spear come through his eyes as Arekku looked at them both his metal covered in there blood he just retracted it back as he left them dead on the floor as he headed on his way he felt immense pain from making the metal retract his body the way he did though by now he was more than use to it.
First off, no... not exactly.
secondly, the way that Acid burns is SO INCREDIBLY different from the way that fire burns. the two are very different from each other. So your character cannot simply charge through fire. I know you can take more damage then most, but that doesn't exclude you from suffering from taking a fire technique head on.
Also, you said that you slammed into the earth wall, but said nothing of going through it... Did you?
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 2:53 pm
Cobra_X Naito_Arekkusu7 Name: Naito_Arekkusu7 RPC's name: Arekkusu Morinaga Bloodline Applying for: Genjuu-Kinzoku (Fierce Metal) Why do you want it: Well just works for my rpc in the way I rp and his fighting style being close and attacking powerful I want to add more to that. What will you do with it: Provide me with a balance rpc as well explain my rpc violent one moment and calm the next. What you know about it: Hey what's up with shooting? This guild use to have some more respect for people =P A strong will body made of metal, with almost no blood in there bodies instead acid with a control of there own metal. RP Sample:Arekku walking into the field looked around for a while before he set of in dreamland as he stepped forward into a dense forest when suddenly there was a snapping noise in the area. Though the young man wasn't paying to much attention at the moment as two giant logs came from the trees smashing together with him in between. As two men came out laughing with knifes they were talking in victory as they just believed that they had squash Arekku together. There was then a slashing sounds that made them step back in surprise as Arekku cut up the trees like butter as he stared at them with a smile, he started to run at them at full speed. The men took a defensive position as they watch in fear at Arekku now though they soon buckle up and threw kunai's at the body only for it to be deflected as there was some armor appearing on Arekku's body from under his skin. The next man then did a series of seals while the other one set up a rock shield as there was a big fire ball coming from the first man. Arekku jumped straight through as his body burned a little though the acid in his body was way more corrosive and would burn more than the fire engulfing Arekku who after passing it just slammed into the rock wall tackling one of the men with a metal spear coming from his shoulder that he used to tackle the fire user. The earth user looked stunned at the young metal user though it was short as after a while he also had a metal spear come through his eyes as Arekku looked at them both his metal covered in there blood he just retracted it back as he left them dead on the floor as he headed on his way he felt immense pain from making the metal retract his body the way he did though by now he was more than use to it.
First off, no... not exactly.
secondly, the way that Acid burns is SO INCREDIBLY different from the way that fire burns. the two are very different from each other. So your character cannot simply charge through fire. I know you can take more damage then most, but that doesn't exclude you from suffering from taking a fire technique head on.
Also, you said that you slammed into the earth wall, but said nothing of going through it... Did you?One it's one thing of standing there taking the fire directly over a course of time, while you can actually run through fire to not be affected as much as taking the heat, after all to melt down metal it takes constant heating up so I'm assuming as long as you are able to tackle it through instead of standing in one place till your melted down is two different things no???? You want me to be all iron clad for an rp sample seriously??? I know the rules I know the limitations though I'm just using the concept of metal person, one they will be heavier than most as well there probably could just slam and get through a rock wall if there charging like a bull, and two trying to pass the fire as fast as possible while the metal is just outside the skin as armor would make sense no???
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Posted: Sat Feb 20, 2010 3:28 pm
You SAYING you know the rules and limitations is one thing, but I want to SEE it. For Example, Who said this bloodline can create an armor of steel around them? I don't see that detailed anywhere. It's not like Kimimaru was able to make an armor of bone. (at least not in the way you are speaking about it)
...on the note of the fire, so all fire jutsu are useless unless they are a maintained blast which someone stands in? A fireball flying at you cannot simply be traveled through and not felt. it's not sjut the fire, but the chakra which has formed the technique. to say you can simply leap through it like you can a benign flame on the ground is ridiculous.
This isnt simply fire like you make at a campsite. It's concentrate, chakra enhanced fire that will burn you to a crisp if you simply take the attack head on without trying to defend or dodge it.
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:23 am
Cobra_X You SAYING you know the rules and limitations is one thing, but I want to SEE it. For Example, Who said this bloodline can create an armor of steel around them? I don't see that detailed anywhere. It's not like Kimimaru was able to make an armor of bone. (at least not in the way you are speaking about it)
...on the note of the fire, so all fire jutsu are useless unless they are a maintained blast which someone stands in? A fireball flying at you cannot simply be traveled through and not felt. it's not sjut the fire, but the chakra which has formed the technique. to say you can simply leap through it like you can a benign flame on the ground is ridiculous.
This isnt simply fire like you make at a campsite. It's concentrate, chakra enhanced fire that will burn you to a crisp if you simply take the attack head on without trying to defend or dodge it. It's not a detail bloodline just said you can manipulate your metal out off your body does it not???? So tell me where it says you can't use it like that???? You don't even know what level of Fire jutsu I even said yet your making such a big deal man?? i just wanna get to rping ready I half assed it here cause come on you want something super iron clad wtf seriously putting to much thought to one thing to the next over and over I'm human you and me have a way different way of looking things that's for sure you know that There is never said a fire jutsu is stronger like that I mean want me to state how fast to run through it or something???? I'm just thinking of it like this I have something cover my organs, vital parts, and etc, so basically a living fire suit like a fire fighter, fire fighter are able to run through the fires like nothing so I imagine the metal that I'm using that is also charged by my own chakra like your fire should be more than able to compete with a fire that is spread out with the chakra doing the same while mine is concentrated only on me
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:27 pm
xX Death Soldier Xx What will you do with it:Well Stuff >.> What you know about it: Well I know that it is like the Byakugan in the fact that you can see allmost 360 degrees. Also if I remember right you get all 6 elements. If you have more then one body out you can see thought all the current bodies out. Making the best defense 1. Come on, fill out the form with all serious answers 2. Wrong, it does not give you 360 degree vision. It allows you to see though all the other bodies at the same time, so if you look at one body and the other looks at you, then it's like a 360 degree field of vision.
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Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:38 pm
Naito_Arekkusu7 Cobra_X You SAYING you know the rules and limitations is one thing, but I want to SEE it. For Example, Who said this bloodline can create an armor of steel around them? I don't see that detailed anywhere. It's not like Kimimaru was able to make an armor of bone. (at least not in the way you are speaking about it)
...on the note of the fire, so all fire jutsu are useless unless they are a maintained blast which someone stands in? A fireball flying at you cannot simply be traveled through and not felt. it's not sjut the fire, but the chakra which has formed the technique. to say you can simply leap through it like you can a benign flame on the ground is ridiculous.
This isnt simply fire like you make at a campsite. It's concentrate, chakra enhanced fire that will burn you to a crisp if you simply take the attack head on without trying to defend or dodge it. It's not a detail bloodline just said you can manipulate your metal out off your body does it not???? So tell me where it says you can't use it like that???? You don't even know what level of Fire jutsu I even said yet your making such a big deal man?? i just wanna get to rping ready I half assed it here cause come on you want something super iron clad wtf seriously putting to much thought to one thing to the next over and over I'm human you and me have a way different way of looking things that's for sure you know that There is never said a fire jutsu is stronger like that I mean want me to state how fast to run through it or something???? I'm just thinking of it like this I have something cover my organs, vital parts, and etc, so basically a living fire suit like a fire fighter, fire fighter are able to run through the fires like nothing so I imagine the metal that I'm using that is also charged by my own chakra like your fire should be more than able to compete with a fire that is spread out with the chakra doing the same while mine is concentrated only on me As the clan head, I will handle this: For one thing, yes you can manipulate your bones, but nowhere near as well as of Kimimaru. Your bones do not regenerate like his, and they do not change shape as easily. Also, you only have a certain amount of metal in your body. If you shifted that metal to cover your entire body, your bones would turn into sewing needles. Also, the acid INSIDE your body has nothing to do with how fire affects your outside. You would lose your skin if you jumped through your fire like that. The only good I can see in the acid is if your opponent stabs you. The acid would gush on them and melt away their skin and muscle if left long enough. The acid is no defense against fire. And actually, using steel as a shield against fire would be a horrible idea, because the fire would heat up the metal quickly and you would scorch your insides once you tried to put it back in your body. And finally, there have not been any jutsu developed for this bloodline, so your "armor of steel" doesn't even exist.
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