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 Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:17 pm
RPC Name:Kingu Shisui
RPC Rank:Chuunin
Name of Jutsu: Mind Reading Technique
Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai
Element: Yin-Yang
Chakra Cost: C
Range of Jutsu: Personal
Description:
By placing a hand on the target's head, the user will be able to enter the target's subconscious and extract any information needed, even if the target has forgotten it himself or has had it blocked. The ninja able to do so by simply grabbing the top of their head and maintains full awareness of his surroundings by simply recording their findings for later study. Memories that have mental blocks on them will require longer periods of time to probe through and obtain.
To obtain Recent [That month Rp or RL] Information requires a single post.
To obtain Yearly Information requires two posts.
To obtain Blocked Information requires three posts or B rank chakra cost and two posts OR A rank chakra cost and one post.
NOTE: This is to be added to the Rinnegan Kekkei Genkai Post and NOT Autulearned by me
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:25 pm
Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Weak Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. This is restricted to Medical-class nins only.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to spread. There may only be medium-headaches, minor coughing, and a warmer body temperature.
Technique Name: Cellular-absorption: Minor
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, like a parasite, life energy is pulled from them. The affect is similar to cellular degeneration on the opponent. This has no lasting effect on life force. This is only a minor amount, thus healing only small cuts and bruising.
Technique Name: Trauma Relief
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be directly over the person. Can not perform to oneself. Anyone may learn this technique, of any classification.
Technique Description: Aaron developed this technique, based on what he had seen within the Sound dojo. There was more to healing, than merely closing wounds and making momentary sealing of pain. By performing a mere three handseals, one is capable of placing both hand on the patient's head. This allows them to soothe the patient's mental status. Clearing the patient of all sorrow, all pain, all anger, they may free them of insanity, and traumatic stress. This also relieves the patient of lasting genjutsu effects up to Jounin in rank, costing equivalent chakra to the genjutsu used, additionally.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Minor
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the weakest form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 15% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Chain Healing
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: 200 feet around
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must stand still, and be able to extend chakra over long distances. Any class may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron figured that he'd never be able to heal everyone. By rigorous training, he developed a way to heal multiple people. After performing three handseals, a beam of chakra is sent towards a person of his choosing, healing their heavier wounds, it then springs off of them to the next nearest person, and so on and so forth, until it returns to Aaron. After each jump, its healing ability is less.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Major
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the middle form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 35% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Cellular-absorption: Major
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, like a parasite, life energy is pulled from them. A larger amount is taken this time. The affect is similar to cellular degeneration on the opponent. This has no lasting effect on life force. This is an advanced amount, this time capable of healing heavier wounds.
Technique Name: Morphine-Adrenaline Jump-start
Technique Type(s): Support, buff
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Person must be able to handle stinging pain. It can be used on oneself. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique.
Technique Description: Aaron developed an ability to make use of advanced medicine. He wanted to be able to keep people going, even after they had fallen incapacitated in battle. Using a scalpel, preferably the Chakra Scalpel, one may create tiny incision. From there, morphine in the form of a medicinal powder is placed upon the open wound. It directly enters the bloodstream, and will awaken an unconscious patient. From there, their heart rate jumps, and they are able to function once more, for a short duration of five posts. This can only be done once, as over-usage of morphine causes cardiac-arrest.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Superior
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the max form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 45% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Deadly Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to rapidly spread. This causes severe inflammatory pain, potential convulsions, and heavy coughing.
Technique Name: Cellular Genesis
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Sannin/Kage
Technique Requirement(s): Must exert chakra and manipulate living cells, forcing mitosis and meiosis to double in division. Can not lose focus. Must have chakra control as main strength. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron was tired of seeing ninjas return home without limbs, or missing parts of their face. By delving deep into the study of cellular growth and division, he was able to create a technique that exceeds the laws of medical science, thus making him re-known in history forever. Breaking the barrier of cell fiction and fact, he found a way to grow back body parts. Performing a long series of handseals (roughly twenty-five), Aaron will pool a large amount of his maximum chakra over an area missing something. By knowing its genetic make-up, and having an envisioned appearance of it in his mind, he is able to rebuild the bone, then the cells, then the tissues, muscles, and finally the dermal layer of skin. The body will take time getting used to the new part, but it will not reject it. RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier.
Technique Name: Master Manipulation of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin - S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Chakra control is main strength.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into further exploring of his clan's abilities. The clan user will perform ten handseals, from which they will focus chakra to a specific point on the body. Whether it be their legs, their palms, their fists, their chest, the chakra acts in an abundance of ways. It may be used to weaken the impact of attacks from taijutsu users, of attacks equal in rank to that of the chakra focused with the area. It can also increase the speed of the user, or their strength. One may even focus chakra to a wounded location, healing the damage, this still dependent on the chakra focused.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Field
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: 300 feet forward projecting from the user
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals, and form a electric-like field of his own chakra color, which negates the use of chakra for anyone within it. The clan member, is just barely outside of it, thus allowing him/her the ability to still perform techniques. The field lasts five of the clan member's posts.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Field
Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: 300 feet backwards, this time with him in it
Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. This field increases all jutsu techniques by 1 rank, as well as increase current chakra points +15, but only in the field. Any jutsus used will not drain from regular chakra. The field lasts five of the clan member's posts.
Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: 300 feet backwards, this time with him in it
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:56 am
havikthecold Username: Nicolasmatt RPC Name: Nikorasu Sutone (Nik) RPC Rank: Genin Name of Jutsu: Howling Flame Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu Element: Fire Chakra Cost: D-A Range of Jutsu: Close Range Description: The user performs hand seals and focuses on their hand. A Ball of fire will appear followed by the howling of a wolf. Rank D: The flame will look like a small red sun (for example: the size of a baseball). If you attack someone with this jutsu at this rate it will tear the skin of the opponent, leave minor burns around the area they were hit, and leave a small gash. Rank B: The flame will be purple and look like a medium size ball (for example: the size of a soft ball). The flame is wild at this rate. If you have good chakra control you can tame it, if you don't it will take three extra posts to learn this level of the jutsu. If you attack someone with this technique at this rate it will tear the flesh, leave major burns, and leave a big gash Rank A: The flame is black. It does not grow in size sense the last level of the jutsu (Still the size of a Soft ball). Smoke will come from the flame as well as flares. If you use this jutsu to many times in a row it will cause damage you your hand. If you attack someone now they will have major burns, rashes, and a huge hole in the area they were hit at. This technique can also tears the flesh and bone
Chidori was named as it was becasue the currents of electricity were high pitched and erratic, making it sound like birds chirping, but I fail to see how fire can make a howling wolf noise. Seems out of place.
This small note aside, I have no problem with the technique itself.
APPROVED!
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:13 am
Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Master Manipulation of Chakra Technique Type(s): Buff Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu Technique Range: Personal Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin - S-rank, Kage/Sannin Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Chakra control is main strength. Technique Description: Aaron delved into further exploring of his clan's abilities. The clan user will perform ten handseals, from which they will focus chakra to a specific point on the body. Whether it be their legs, their palms, their fists, their chest, the chakra acts in an abundance of ways. It may be used to weaken the impact of attacks from taijutsu users, of attacks equal in rank to that of the chakra focused with the area. It can also increase the speed of the user, or their strength. One may even focus chakra to a wounded location, healing the damage, this still dependent on the chakra focused. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Field Technique Type(s): Offensive Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu Technique Range: 300 feet forward projecting from the user Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time. Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals, and form a electric-like field of his own chakra color, which negates the use of chakra for anyone within it. The clan member, is just barely outside of it, thus allowing him/her the ability to still perform techniques. The field lasts five of the clan member's posts. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Field Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu Technique Range: 300 feet backwards, this time with him in it Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time. Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. This field increases all jutsu techniques by 1 rank, as well as increase current chakra points +15, but only in the field. Any jutsus used will not drain from regular chakra. The field lasts five of the clan member's posts. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra Technique Type(s): Offensive Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu Technique Range: 300 feet backwards, this time with him in it Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time. Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator.
The compressed chakra balls it fires has to be quantified before I can assess it further.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:22 am
Martin Spiralwave RPC Name:Kingu Shisui RPC Rank:Chuunin Name of Jutsu: Shinra Tense & Bansho Ten'nin Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Element: Yin-Yang Chakra Cost: B Range of Jutsu: All Ranges Description: Shinra Tensei: Shinra Tensei is the ability to manipulate gravity at the users will to repulse matter away. It can easily shatter wood, bones and stone. By using this technique as a defensive measure, all attacks directed to the user will be deflected, no matter the size or mass. The only downside to this technique is that there is a short period when it is unusable after being used, though only for roughly five seconds [2 posts]. This technique can be used on a large scale [A rank Chakra drain], creating wide spread wave of repulsive energies capable of easily annihilating solid steel structures in a single blast that carves a deep swath large enough to blow through a horde of ninja. Using this technique damages the users hand and cannot be used for a few minutes afterwards [5 posts]. Shinra Tensei can also be used on a larger scale for massive destruction [S rank chakra drain]. A massive gravity well is created above the target, crushing everything beneath in a titanic explosion. Using Shinra Tensei on this scale shortens the users lifespan and leaves him unable to use it for several minutes [ten posts]. Bansho Ten'ninBanshÅ Ten'in is a technique similar to Shinra Tensei in that it manipulates gravity at the users will, however instead of pushing objects away, it draws them close. It does not have the time restraint of Shinra Tensei but exacts pain in the wrist of the user. Supplying A rank chakra allows the user to draw all matter into a single overhead orb, forming a large sphere that crushes all within. It is only fifty meters wide itself but the concentration of matter reaches out an entire mile. Anything trapped within WILL be crushed to death in a very brief timeframe. The only thing capable of bursting through this prison (and with great diffulculty) would be a Jinchurichii at it's fourth tail or higher, requiring a burst of A rank chakra to lossen the matter around them and burst outwards.
If you want to tone down the techniques, and make them a single rank (not a range) as some kind fo gravity well/repulsion techniques, I'll take a look again, but as these are written they are overpowered.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:28 am
Martin Spiralwave RPC Name:Kingu Shisui RPC Rank:Chuunin Name of Jutsu: Mind Reading Technique Type of Jutsu: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Element: Yin-Yang Chakra Cost: C Range of Jutsu: Personal Description: By placing a hand on the target's head, the user will be able to enter the target's subconscious and extract any information needed, even if the target has forgotten it himself or has had it blocked. The ninja able to do so by simply grabbing the top of their head and maintains full awareness of his surroundings by simply recording their findings for later study. Memories that have mental blocks on them will require longer periods of time to probe through and obtain. To obtain Recent [That month Rp or RL] Information requires a single post. To obtain Yearly Information requires two posts. To obtain Blocked Information requires three posts or B rank chakra cost and two posts OR A rank chakra cost and one post. NOTE: This is to be added to the Rinnegan Kekkei Genkai Post and NOT Autulearned by me
We already have an A-rank wind jutsu that does this same thing. it's classified as an Oinin technique, which makes sense, and it doesn't really fit the Rinnegan concept to the pioint of being a Bloodline jutsu.
However, I like what you've done here as a description for the technique, so I'd like to add it to the current Oinin technique we already have. (this means however, you wouldn't be able to use it yet.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:03 am
Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Weak Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. This is restricted to Medical-class nins only.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent's wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to spread. There may only be medium-headaches, minor coughing, and a warmer body temperature. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Cellular-absorption: Minor Technique Type(s): Offensive Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent. Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, like a parasite, life energy is pulled from them. The affect is similar to cellular degeneration on the opponent. This has no lasting effect on life force. This is only a minor amount, thus healing only small cuts and bruising. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Trauma Relief Technique Type(s): Support Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin Technique Requirement(s): Must be directly over the person. Can not perform to oneself. Anyone may learn this technique, of any classification. Technique Description: Aaron developed this technique, based on what he had seen within the Sound dojo. There was more to healing, than merely closing wounds and making momentary sealing of pain. By performing a mere three handseals, one is capable of placing both hand on the patient's head. This allows them to soothe the patient's mental status. Clearing the patient of all sorrow, all pain, all anger, they may free them of insanity, and traumatic stress. This also relieves the patient of lasting genjutsu effects up to Jounin in rank, costing equivalent chakra to the genjutsu used, additionally. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Minor Technique Type(s): Support Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical class nins may learn. Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the weakest form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 15% of chakra may be given to a patient. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Chain Healing Technique Type(s): Support Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: 200 feet around Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank Chunin Technique Requirement(s): Must stand still, and be able to extend chakra over long distances. Any class may learn. Technique Description: Aaron figured that he'd never be able to heal everyone. By rigorous training, he developed a way to heal multiple people. After performing three handseals, a beam of chakra is sent towards a person of his choosing, healing their heavier wounds, it then springs off of them to the next nearest person, and so on and so forth, until it returns to Aaron. After each jump, its healing ability is less.
Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Major Technique Type(s): Support Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn. Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the middle form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 35% of chakra may be given to a patient. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Cellular-absorption: Major Technique Type(s): Offensive Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent. Only medical class nins may learn. Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, like a parasite, life energy is pulled from them. A larger amount is taken this time. The affect is similar to cellular degeneration on the opponent. This has no lasting effect on life force. This is an advanced amount, this time capable of healing heavier wounds. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Morphine-Adrenaline Jump-start Technique Type(s): Support, buff Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin Technique Requirement(s): Person must be able to handle stinging pain. It can be used on oneself. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Technique Description: Aaron developed an ability to make use of advanced medicine. He wanted to be able to keep people going, even after they had fallen incapacitated in battle. Using a scalpel, preferably the Chakra Scalpel, one may create tiny incision. From there, morphine in the form of a medicinal powder is placed upon the open wound. It directly enters the bloodstream, and will awaken an unconscious patient. From there, their heart rate jumps, and they are able to function once more, for a short duration of five posts. This can only be done once, as over-usage of morphine causes cardiac-arrest. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Superior Technique Type(s): Support Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn. Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the max form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 45% of chakra may be given to a patient.
On Minor: It was 15% of 25... which is about 4 Chakra points.
On Moderate: It was 25% of 40 ... which was 10 Chakra points
Major (as written) would be in the realm of 27 - 36 Chakra points. Which is a bit much.
...I would recommend putting it at 30%, which would transfer on average of 18 - 24 chakra points.Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Deadly Infection X Technique Type(s): Offensive Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. Only medical nins may learn. Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to rapidly spread. This causes severe inflammatory pain, potential convulsions, and heavy coughing. Defined By Spontaneity Technique Name: Cellular Genesis Technique Type(s): Support Technique Classification(s): Medical Technique Range: Melee-distance Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Sannin/Kage Technique Requirement(s): Must exert chakra and manipulate living cells, forcing mitosis and meiosis to double in division. Can not lose focus. Must have chakra control as main strength. Only medical nins may learn. Technique Description: Aaron was tired of seeing ninjas return home without limbs, or missing parts of their face. By delving deep into the study of cellular growth and division, he was able to create a technique that exceeds the laws of medical science, thus making him re-known in history forever. Breaking the barrier of cell fiction and fact, he found a way to grow back body parts. Performing a long series of handseals (roughly twenty-five), Aaron will pool a large amount of his maximum chakra over an area missing something. By knowing its genetic make-up, and having an envisioned appearance of it in his mind, he is able to rebuild the bone, then the cells, then the tissues, muscles, and finally the dermal layer of skin. The body will take time getting used to the new part, but it will not reject it.
Overall however I approve. the wording and requirements of the technique (on the physical side) need to be changed. You cannot magically make something from nothing... there has to be tissue there to grow.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:11 am
Martin Spiralwave RPC Name:Kingu Shisui RPC Rank:Chuunin Name of Jutsu: Blocking Technique Absorbtion Seal Type of Jutsu: Fuinjutsu Element: Yin-Yang Chakra Cost: B Range of Jutsu: 5 meters Description: A highly advanced sealing technique that is capable of absorbing any chakra, regardless of any spacial or nature transformation, and dispersing it within one's body by spinning the chakra within one's body in the opposite direction. As a result, this technique can absorb any ninjutsu based technique, regardless of power, without harming the user. The user then gains half the chakra from the jutsu but if used with an A rank amount of chakra the full chakra of the jutsu is absorbed for use. This technique also has an offensive use. Should the user get close enough to grab the opponent, the barrier can absorb chakra right out of an individual's body, effectively draining them (similar to the Chakra Absorption Technique). As a downside the user must be stationary when using the technique as movement disrupts the spiraling motion of the chakra absorbtion. If movement is attempted half the power of the ninjutsu seeps through the field. NOTE: This is NOT to be autolearned but instead added to the list of techniques in the Rinnegan Kekkei Genkai post.
...You cant have a single seal be a one fits all situation, and on top of that you can't have it absorb the chakra into you. A B-rank seal cannot neagate a B-rank jutsu of ANY element automatically, and MUCH LESS so any RANK OR ELEMENT. That'd just be massively broken.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:36 am
RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier. This lasts three posts
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Touch
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals. The user will touch the opponent, and in a sense "stop" the movement of chakra in their body for five posts.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Touch
Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. Placing a palm on an ally, their chakra is augmented, increasing the rank of all chakra techniques by one. This lasts five posts.
Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator. The dragon may fire a total of ten, before it dissipates. The dragon lasts for fifteen posts.
((Editations, for the first set of techniques))
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:47 am
RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Weak Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. This is restricted to Medical-class nins only.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent's wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to spread. There may only be very bad stinging pain.
Technique Name: Cellular-degeneration: Minor
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, cells are pulled from them. This has no lasting effect on life force. This causes moderate pain in the affected area.
Technique Name: Trauma Relief
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be directly over the person. Can not perform to oneself. Anyone may learn this technique, of any classification.
Technique Description: Aaron developed this technique, based on what he had seen within the Sound dojo. There was more to healing, than merely closing wounds and making momentary sealing of pain. By performing a mere three handseals, one is capable of placing both hand on the patient's head. This allows them to soothe the patient's mental status. Clearing the patient of all sorrow, all pain, all anger, they may free them of insanity, and traumatic stress. This also relieves the patient of lasting genjutsu effects up to Jounin in rank, costing equivalent chakra to the genjutsu used, additionally. This is only temporary, after five posts, they will have to deal with their mental instability once more.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Minor
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: D-rank, Genin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the weakest form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 15% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Major
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the middle form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 25% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Cellular-degeneration: Major
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Must successfully place one palm on an opponent. Only medical class nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron delved into cellular theory, and study after his father had begun to teach him. Using this knowledge, he developed a unique ability, similar to that of chakra absorption. Reaching an opponent, and placing a palm on their torso, cells are pulled from them. A larger amount is taken this time. This has a minor lasting effect on life force. This is an advanced amount, this time causing severe pain.
Technique Name: Adrenaline Jump-start
Technique Type(s): Support, buff
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chunin
Technique Requirement(s): Person must be able to handle stinging pain. It can be used on oneself. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique.
Technique Description: Aaron developed an ability to make use of advanced medicine. He wanted to be able to keep people going, even after they had fallen incapacitated in battle. Using a scalpel, preferably the Chakra Scalpel, one may create tiny incision. From there, a unique salve in the form of a medicinal powder is placed upon the open wound. It directly enters the bloodstream, and will awaken an unconscious patient. From there, their heart rate jumps, and they are able to function once more, for a short duration of five posts. Must be used as soon as the ally had passed out.
Technique Name: Chakra Pooling: Superior
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must be over the opponent. Must be able to handle the siphoning of your own chakra. Medical classified personnel are the only ones capable of manifesting this technique. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron knew with his scalpel's ability to drain chakra, there might be a time, when he would have to do the opposite and give back. One must perform five handseals to begin. By placing both hands on the center of the circulatory system, one may drain their own chakra into the patient. Being the the max form of Chakra Pooling, a maximum of 30% of chakra may be given to a patient.
Technique Name: Deadly Infection X
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Must place one's hand on an open wound of the opponent. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron had a plan to debilitate and weaken an opponent to the point of no return. First, performing four handseals, one must be within melee distance of the opponent. They will then grip an opponent wound, and use their chakra to destroy the immunity barrier there. Air carries different bacterial and potential viral infections. From that moment, something will enter the opponent, and begin to rapidly spread. This causes severe inflammatory pain, potential convulsions, and heavy coughing.
Technique Name: Cellular Genesis
Technique Type(s): Support
Technique Classification(s): Medical
Technique Range: Melee-distance
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Sannin/Kage
Technique Requirement(s): Must exert chakra and manipulate living cells, forcing mitosis and meiosis to double in division. Can not lose focus. Must have chakra control as main strength. Only medical nins may learn.
Technique Description: Aaron was tired of seeing ninjas return home without limbs, or missing parts of their face. By delving deep into the study of cellular growth and division, he was able to create a technique that exceeds the laws of medical science, thus making him re-known in history forever. Breaking the barrier of cell fiction and fact, he found a way to grow back body parts. Performing a long series of handseals (roughly twenty-five), Aaron will pool a large amount of his maximum chakra over an area missing something. This is done, by using a previous tissue sample. If possible, a large clump would be even more effective. By knowing its genetic make-up, and having an envisioned appearance of it in his mind, he is able to rebuild the bone, then the cells, then the tissues, muscles, and finally the dermal layer of skin. The body will take time getting used to the new part, but it will not reject it.
((Editations for the 2nd set of techniques))
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 9:59 am
Jutsu's name: Elemental tag
Rank confused ?
Use: Restricted only for those who have intelligence for primary or secondary strength.
Type: Ninja tool.
Element: All
Description: These tags were originally created by the Brashugan family seeing as though the the tags were very complex, and hard to make on the fly. Though as more and more intelligent people began to try their hands at this tag it became in some what of the public eye. The tags work in a similar fashion than your normal explosive tag. Writing several complex kanji the tag will explode with that certain element.
Fuuton: This tag is very different than the others. It doesn't explode at first instead it implodes gathering the winds in to a tight ball, but one must be careful for this can drag you or an opponent closer to ball of wind. After a few seconds this ball will explode with the power of a Kaze Bakuhatsu.
Hyouton: This tag is simple in function and in form. When it is writen the tag is cold to the touch. When it explodes it seends several shards of ice flying in all direction.
Raiton: This tag is used more for stunning than to actually inflict damage. When this tag explodes bolts of lightning shoot off in all directions.
Suiton: This tag is the most difficult to use for the reason that when the tag is written it becomes very wet. When it explodes the tag sends a three foot wave in all directions sweeping most enemies off their feet.
Doton: This tag works like an earth quake generator shaking the ground violently the tag opens up three large fissures that spread about five feet in length and four feet deep. making it great for any occasion.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:34 am
Defined By Spontaneity RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
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Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier. This can only be maintained for three posts due to the amount chakra control required for its effect.
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Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Touch
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals. The user will touch the opponent, and in a sense "stop" the movement of chakra in their body for two posts, or continually if the user maintains their palm on the opponent.
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Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Touch
Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. Placing a palm on an ally, their chakra is augmented, increasing the rank of all chakra techniques by one. This can only go on for two posts if contact is disconnected, it will be maintained if the palm is held on them.
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Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator. The dragon may fire a total of ten, before it dissipates. The dragon lasts for fifteen posts.
1. I would reword the technique to say "The user can only maintain this technique for 3 posts due to the amount of chakra control required to create the effect."
2. 5 posts is a bit much, I'd go with 2 posts. Its a B-rank jutsu, yeah, but there is NO side effect for the user. Sai can disable someone's chakra for 3 posts... but can't use his arm during that time.
3. 5 posts is again too long. It should only last for as long as contact is maintained, or for one post (mayeb 2) after contact is removed.
4. 15 posts?... really?... that's way overkill. At the very least make it something that can be attained ina normal fight... like maybe 7-10 posts.
Also, you need to describe the chakra balls they shoot, as "like Rasengan' isn't good enough.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:00 pm
RPC Name: Aaron Rakatsui
RPC Rank: Genin
Technique Name: Chakra Disguise
Technique Type(s): Defensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Personal
Technique Chakra Cost: C-rank, Chuunin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Aaron sought to expand the range of abilities within his clan. He already had a profound use of chakra control, and figured it was time to take it the next level. Instead of merely suppressing chakra, or just sensing it, he wanted to be able to do something else. After performing ten handseals, a Mind's Eye of the Kagura bloodline user had the ability to mimic the chakra signature of anyone they had come in contact with. This could act as a diversion, or merely a way to sneak past guards easier. This can only be maintained for three posts due to the amount chakra control required for its effect.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersal Negation Touch
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: B-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: In order to quickly disable the opponent, Aaron developed an advanced chakra control ability. The clan member would perform five handseals. The user will touch the opponent, and in a sense "stop" the movement of chakra in their body for two posts, or continually if the user maintains their palm on the opponent.
Technique Name: Chakra Dispersion Expansion Touch
Technique Type(s): Defensive, buff
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: A-rank, Jounin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only. Only one field can be up at any time.
Technique Description: Performing handseals, a dispersion field is formed using raw chakra. Placing a palm on an ally, their chakra is augmented, increasing the rank of all chakra techniques by one. This can only go on for two posts if contact is disconnected, it will be maintained if the palm is held on them.
Technique Name: Dragon of Chakra
Technique Type(s): Offensive
Technique Classification(s): Mind's Eye of the Kagura Bloodline/Clan Ninjutsu
Technique Range: Melee
Technique Chakra Cost: S-rank, Kage/Sannin
Technique Requirement(s): Clan members only.
Technique Description: Mind's Eye of the Kagura members will perform a long chain of handseals (roughly 50), in a very fast succession. After doing so, chakra will begin to come from the head, the arms, and the legs and all combine into a swirling vortex of chakra. It will then mold, and become a dragon, at least 50 feet high, and 10 feet wide. It can sense chakra, as well as fire a ball of chakra, similar to a rasengan, costing C-rank chakra from the original creator. The balls of chakra are roughly the size of softballs, and burn to the touch with explosive effect. The dragon may fire a total of ten, before it dissipates. The dragon lasts for ten posts.
Edited once more...
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:46 pm
Cobra_X Martin Spiralwave RPC Name:Kingu Shisui RPC Rank:Chuunin Name of Jutsu: Shinra Tense & Bansho Ten'nin Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Element: Yin-Yang Chakra Cost: B Range of Jutsu: All Ranges Description: Shinra Tensei: Shinra Tensei is the ability to manipulate gravity at the users will to repulse matter away. It can easily shatter wood, bones and stone. By using this technique as a defensive measure, all attacks directed to the user will be deflected, no matter the size or mass. The only downside to this technique is that there is a short period when it is unusable after being used, though only for roughly five seconds [2 posts]. This technique can be used on a large scale [A rank Chakra drain], creating wide spread wave of repulsive energies capable of blasting a Boss Summoning of titanic proportions into the distance while simultaneously incapitating it. Using this technique damages the users hand and cannot be used for a few minutes afterwards [5 posts]. Shinra Tensei can also be used on a larger scale for massive destruction [S rank chakra drain]. A massive gravity well is created above the target, crushing everything beneath in a titanic explosion. Using Shinra Tensei on this scale shortens the users lifespan and leaves him unable to use it for several minutes [ten posts]. Bansho Ten'ninBanshÅ Ten'in is a technique similar to Shinra Tensei in that it manipulates gravity at the users will, however instead of pushing objects away, it draws them close. It does not have the time restraint of Shinra Tensei but exacts pain in the wrist of the user.
If you want to tone down the techniques, and make them a single rank (not a range) as some kind fo gravity well/repulsion techniques, I'll take a look again, but as these are written they are overpowered.The only reason Shinra Tensei has different levels of damage is because Pain displayed about three different bursts of force. The first is capable of pushing two full grown Akimichi utilizing their Meat Tank technique. The second level displayed flung Gamabunta, a Boss Summon of titanic proportions, miles away and shatter 'nearly every bones in his body'. The strongest level destroyed Konoha Also I accept the ruling on the Mind Reading Technique and Blocking Seal Absorbtion. Both were copied from Peins Rinnegan arsenal, along with the incoming few jutsu I'm trying to develop such as 'Soul Stealing' and 'Body Rebirth'.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:54 pm
Jaded_Propaganda Flurry - For the telepathy, this doesn't, in anyway, allow you to read another person's mind right?
Mint - Approved
Havil - Approved I'm so sorry, I was waiting for a while so I totally forgot this was here. No it does not allow me to read another person's mind, this is merely a way to communicate with someone via telepathy, ie someone who is in the village but not in the same thread or a team mate whom I don't want the enemy to figure out what I'm saying
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