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 Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 8:15 pm
Yorouichi is like....1483983048904328x better than this Koga!!! She's super witty, super awesome, and super sexay!!!
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Posted: Thu May 06, 2010 10:40 pm
Rpc Name: Akio Boutou
Village: Iwagakure
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Chakra Mouth
What you know about the clan/bl: There are 3 extra mouths on the bodies of bloodline members, two located on the palm on each hand and one in the middle of the chest, this mouth is sealed on Deidara (The character in Naruto who possesses the bloodline), and I'd assume it's sealed on every bloodline member. Using these extra mouths as well as their normal mouth, members of the bloodline can mold their chakra into specialized clay to create puppet-like explosive creatures. The creatures can also be used as flying transports, were the user is then free to bomb their opponents from long distances. Because the bombs are of a Doton nature, they can easily be neutralized with Raiton techniques.
Rp Sample:
(Because most of the techniques from the Chakra Mouth bloodline are chuunin+, I'm gonna pretend that Akio is a Jounin)
Akio was part of a task force sent on a mission to raid and destroy as much of Konohagakure as possible. His individual job was start the attack being one of the rare shinobi capable of flight through his techniques. He looked out over the side of the giant clay bird that he'd created using the Exploding Clay; Carrier Version. He was currently positioned high over the main gates of the Hidden Leaf, and figured it'd be best to take out first so the rest of the task force could gain easy entry. Akio pulled out a few lumps of clay from pouches on his belt and quickly got to work, preparing two C2 class bombs. They were ready in seconds, and were in the shape of falcons. Akio tossed them towards the gates and performed a quick series of hand seals, the birds grew ten-fold in size and flew towards the gates. One directly at them, and the other towards what looked like a guard post to Akio. "Kai." Akio said under his breath along with a simple hand seal, as the clay falcons exploded.
As the fires raged under him, Akio grinned and began to laugh. But to his surprise, he'd been spotted already, and unfortunately the ninja that spotted him happened to have a Raiton nature. A bolt of lightning shot out at Akio's carrier, causing it to crumble and fall apart, leaving Akio spiraling downwards towards the earth. With quick thinking, he created another carrier and managed to keep himself from going splat against the ground. Akio had his carrier land in a dark street and fly off without him to a nearby location and hide, giving him an option of escape if necessary. He then quickly prepared a self destructing clone and used Earth Military movement, and swam as far away as he could. When Akio surfaced in a nearby alleyway, he heard a large explosion that was from the clone he'd left behind. Akio heard multiple sources of footsteps coming near him, and hid himself behind an out cropping in the wall. "Are you sure someone's here?" a female voice said, which then a male voice replied in a quieter tone, "Yeah, I can see someone over there."
["s**t."] Akio thought as he realized the male must be a hyuga, one of the local clans he was warned about. Trying to reduce the amount of clay he was using, Akio grabbed two small lumps and made some simple C1 bombs in the shape of rats. "Get back! He's doing some kind of jutsu!" The male voice shouted to his companion. ["This better work."] Akio thought as he put the statues on the ground and performed to sets of hand seals in the chain, the first for activating the C1 statues and the other for the swift earth technique. The statues quickly raced forward out of the alley as Akio peeked from around the corner. He guessed that the enemy wasn't ready for an attack like this and with a quick hand seal, said "Kai."
The two Leaf shinobi were caught in the blast, Akio was right in guessing that they wouldn't know what they were in for. They appeared unconscious so Akio ran out of the alley way, not really sure where he'd go next until he realized that he was directly in front of the Hokage's building. "Oh s**t." Akio said, and without thinking started to make a C3 bomb. It was ready after a few minutes, and Akio tossed it in it's tiny form into a nearby alleyway. He then ran as far away as he could, headed in the direction of the hidden carrier. Somehow he'd managed to avoid detection and reached the carrier. It quickly toke off, and flew over where Akio had left the miniaturized C3 bomb, which was in the shape of a grinning fox, and activated it. The bomb was set to explode in just little over 3 minute's time, plenty of time for Akio to escape. When he was out of harm's way he turned around, to watch the C3 go boom, but much to his surprise it went off on top of the mountain that over looked the Hidden Leaf. The explosion had caused a massive land slide, but the village ended up taking less damage then it could have.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 12:22 pm
gregar828 You can make some custom jutsu for the Yamanaka clan and submit it, if you wish. There really arent that many canon Yamanaka jutsu, so we work with what we got. And jade, I didnt do it. No really, I didnt. Please stop pointing, I wouldnt hurt anyone :'( On a side not, your banner pales in comparison to Koga!  but on naruto wiki there are more than three. crying gonk
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 1:50 pm
Rpc Name: Stu
Village: Sand village
Rank: Academy
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: The Aburame clan uses bugs as a weapon during battle. The bugs hide in their skin and come out when needed. The bugs are injected into the clan member when they are very young. The bugs also feed off enemys chakra for exchange of doing the users bidding.
Rp Sample: Stu walked down the forest following the path the insects told him to go. He walked further until he reached a point where the target was sitting down in front of the fire drinking something."Target affirmed." Stu said whispering into his headset. He then got up and walked out towards the man."Shiki tomano you are to follow me back to the village where you will get your punishment for your crimes." stu said with no emotion. The man looked up and jumped back grabbing his sword and pointing it at stu. "Great you are going to fight." He said before the man ran at him swinging violently. Stu formed a handsign and the blade went through him. Stu then turned into insects that then flew behind him to stu. Stu formed a handsign and he said."Angry swarm technique." Stu said before the insects flew to the man. The man swung his blade at the swarm but the insects just kept coming. The man ran away hoping to get away but the insecvts caught up and slowly suck his chakra away. Stu came up behind him and ordered the insects to come back. Stu felt the chakra flow into his body from the man. The man swayed and fell to his knees from exhaustation and loss of chakra. Stu grabbed him by the neck and dragged him across the forest to the village. He made the bugs keep eating his chakra so he wouldnt be able to move that well until they got to the village
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 2:59 pm
@Mayvine:
Well, despite the fact that Deidara had Three Mouths, the version of the Bloodline in POTS doesn't state that you must have three chakra mouths upon you! Also, keep in mind your guy wouldn't be good at close-combat. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with your RP, you showed good understanding of the kekkai genkai, even the weakness =)
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 3:02 pm
WhT bout mine? I sent the 10000 gold to the lance guy and i just need him to accapt. Can you approve mine?
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 3:06 pm
Denied:
Aside from some poor Grammar, from what you wrote in the What You Know section, I don't believe you fully grasp what exactly the Aburame Clan can do, nor how the bugs are even with them. As for the RP, if you got cut, you'd bleed...Now this may be just me..but nowhere in the Kekkai Genkai Description does it say that the bugs can eat people...though they can eat chakra. Not only that, you never used any of the clan jutsu...other than throwing your bugs at them
-Edit: I saw yours alright? i just like to post things in separate posts!
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 3:37 pm
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 3:46 pm
Rpc Name: Kay Ta-ichi Aburame
Village: Village Hidden in the clouds
Rank: Head
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Aburame
What you know about the clan/bl: I know that the Aburame clan is a more stealy clan in the leaf village, specializing in scouting, attacking, enemy detection, recon, and spying. They also rely heavily omn the insects in there body to help them fight. They are also quite sensitive to seeing insects stepped on.
Rp Sample:
Kay, who had been trailing enemy ninja, came to an abrupt stop as he found his targets resting fo a momnet. He adjusted his glasses, watching closely as they prepared to get moving once again. Right before they began moving, one of them threw a kunai directly at his face. Thinking quickly, he jumped and rose above the canopy of trees. "Take the bait fools," he whispered as they each jumped after him. The two of the three grabbed the leader and slingshot him towards Kay. "Perfect," he whispered as he was kicked in the stomach. Insects crawled onto his attacker as he fell back under the canopy. He then stood up and did handsigns.
"Ninja Art; bug clone," he said as two bug clones of himself appeared. They each dropped to the ground as the enemy ninja flew down towards him. He jumped back, avoid the attacks and then held out his hand. Insects flew from under his jacket and assaulted one of the two, biting and siphoning away his chakra, while rendering him unconcious. The two ninja did handsigns, exclaiming together, "Fire Style; Fireball jutsu!" Jumping to the side of one tree, then bouncing to another, he successfully dodges both attacks. The two clones come at the two ninja at once, each becoming destructive insects and swarming around them both.
A few more handsigns, and then he calmly states, "Ninja Art Insect Sphere." As the insects become a sphere, the two ninja inside are bitten and drained of there chakara, as well as defeated. He then retrieves the stolen scrolls and restrains them all. "Hardly a B-rank mission, but it's com[leted." He then heads back to his village to declare mission complete.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 8:39 pm
Rpc Name: Kuza kalomi
Village: Konoha akatsuki
Rank: gennin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Mokuton
What you know about the clan/bl: Mokuton is wood release which is a combination of earth and water releases. Wood Release unlike others can be produced from anywhere including the users body. In history only 2 have had this release, the first was born with it and the other was cloned from the firsts blood by orochimaru.
Rp Sample:
Kuza smiled under her robe as she slide across the ground after taking the remainder of the force from a blow to her puppet infront of her. She quickly desided that this fight could not be won with her puppets alone so she quickly dismissed them and did multible hand signs, "Mokuton: Moku Bunshin!" The wood clone quickly formed from out of her right shoulder and charged towards her opponent. With her opponent focused on the incoming wood clone she preformed more hand signs. "Mokuton: Soutei Hashira!" Various branches emerged from the ground in to pillars in attempt to bind the opponent as they wrap around him. She smirked lightly as the branches took hold of her opponent as the clone grew closer to him.
Kuza watched the opponent try and figure a way out of the trap that he laid within. She knew she had to finish this as quickly as possible so she did even more hand signs, "Mokuton: Moku Keiteki Denka no Jutsu!" A large rhino quickly formed from the ground, being approximately four and a half feet tall and six feet long, with a large horn that is about three inches in diameter and three feet long. The rhino charge blindly after the clone which was now in attacking range of her opponent. The clone swung a few punches at the guys face and stomach, seeing how he was trapped in the branches. The rhino quickly arrived at kuza's opponet and aimed his horn at the back of the clones in which the opponents chest was on the other side. The enemy suddenly pulled off Katon: Karyuu Endan, which sent a large strem of fire shaped like a large dragon from the guys mouth towards the clone and rhino. Useing this jutsu in close range of wood, besides just quickly turning it into ash from the intense flames it hurt the user with bad burns over his body but allowed for him to become free from the branches. Kuza quickly let out a sigh and rolled to the left quickly to get out of the way of the dragon, doing so she caught the end of her robe on fire but quickly put it out. "you burnt my robe!" She yelled at the guy who simple smiled back now that he had found out the weakness to the weird jutsus kuza was using against him. She knew that this would but a tough fight now but she was sure she could do it with Mokuton alone but only if she watched herself. She then quickly grinned, she had no choice but to weaken her opponent before taking him down. She quickly turned around and started to run hopeing the other ninja would follow her in which she noticed that he quickly did, as she ran she form many hand signs. "Mokuton: Chakra Akyo Ki no Jutsu!" This was one of her most powerful jutsus and one of her funnest, a very large tree suddenly grew ahead of them. She quickly ran up it without any effort due to not having the need for any chakra to run up it. Just as she planned, the other ninja ran up the tree behind her and which each passing step and second more and more chakra was being pulled from the opponents feet.
(hope thats enough i can put more if you want )
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 9:26 pm
Orchid, before I do anything, what is your current RPC's element?
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 9:27 pm
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 10:09 pm
Orchid: Ok then, you will start out with Wood and earth elements, then get water at chuunin, but you will not get a third element at jounin due to the bloodline. Also, since your RPC is premade, make up a reason that makes sense for he to suddenly get Mokuton. st96ss: Sorry, but no. You cannot turn into bugs, the bugs fly out of you. You can make a kikai bunshin, but thats about it as far as bursting into bugs. And the chakra the bugs suck away is not given to the clan member, that would be OP. That, and your story doesnt really show a lot of RP skill. It's just "the bugs sucked away his chakra, and I win." You need to give us a better element of storytelling. Also, although this is not required, its traditional to use the japanese jutsu name when RPing. That, and to put the jutsu description (or a link) at the bottom of the page General note: Who is the official bloodlines acceptor? Jade and I are not gonna pick up for your slack forever, whoever you are.
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