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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:20 pm
IoriYagami00 (( yeah sry about leaving like that i would of honorably fought until defeat but i was almost late for work so >< also is there any way to regain health or do i run around half dead for the rest of eternity)) ((You could go to the hospital lol.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:25 pm
((also i might not be able to post for a bit so this last post before i leavea gain ><))
Iori walks back along the broken Road he came from his hand dripping blood all over the pavement. He thinks to himself that if someone were stalking him they wouldn't have a hard time, as he thinks this he quickly checks behind him if Masaru is following him, but sees the she is not. He laughs under his breath as he continues to walk back towards his broken apartment.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:26 pm
[[...yeah I've got nothing for my character to do. Her pride is wounded, and she's really, really bored. XP]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:35 pm
(( 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh ill be back later i think))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:41 pm
((cooking dinner is rather annoying.))
Izzy's eyes widened as yellow-orange... stuff, flew through the air. She looked over to see that the person at the edge of the field shot that from his arm. She relized that she had invalintarily(sp?) held her breath. She slowly breathed out, "Is there anything else I'm gonna want to know?!" she asked no-one in particular. She was tired of all these crazy 'surprises',
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:04 pm
((I don't know what to post. Theres tooo much going on. Don't be surprised if my character just up and leaves or something.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:49 pm
IoriYagami00 ((also i might not be able to post for a bit so this last post before i leavea gain ><)) Iori walks back along the broken Road he came from his hand dripping blood all over the pavement. He thinks to himself that if someone were stalking him they wouldn't have a hard time, as he thinks this he quickly checks behind him if Masaru is following him, but see the she is not. He laughs under his breath as he continues to walking back towards his broken apartment. ((Sp = involuntarily. Gah! Iori! It is just weird for the RP to have a present tense post along with the past tense ones! And Duckie, you could go into the mines and meet up with us, and by us, I mean Saki and I.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 7:56 pm
Something yellow-orange in color shot past Ryn from the being whom he was advancing upons arm. He roared in surprise, jumping forward in a great leap, to land beside the being, and dropping down to its height, put his snarling, scale covered, face directly infront of his, growling,"Who in the name of all unholy things are you, and what are you doing here?"
His sword was held loosely in his left hand, ready to strike at any second, his right hand inches from the beings throat. His wings spread wide, as he did his best to quickly intimidate the being into an answer, his anger at being wounded getting the better of him.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:07 pm
Name: No one really knows, he only goes by the mysterious term "Traitor," given to him long ago by a misguided trial.
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Species: Human/Balrog
Personality: Cold, calm, calculating, ruthless, has lost the ability to love, all due to a terrible event in his past. Hopefully someone can remind him.
Weapons: Twin Katanas known as Keiros and Keiras.
Armour: A black hood, a facemask with an insignia of two flames running up both sides, a longcoat made from Onyx Dragon scale, and black platelegs.
History: None that anyone but he knows. And none he ever wishes to relive.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:08 pm
((Your supposed to send the message to Saki. And you really need to add more about your character anyways, cause with that we know almost nothing about your character.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:09 pm
((That's the point, Sherlock. =P ))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:11 pm
((Thats a stupid point. If we know nothing about your character how can you know anything about it? And how could we possibly interact with it correctly? And what is the point of posting it without sending it to Saki who is the person who is supposed to put up you RP character profile.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:13 pm
((Here's a revolutionary idea: shut up and let my character be my character. Got that schutta?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:20 pm
Kind Stranger ((The guy's probably posting it here and PMing Saki at the same time. Since Saki is not on, he chose to do so so that he could RP. If not, then he probably does not hold respect for roll playing and the RPers.)) What the funny person said.
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