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 Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:44 pm
[Jack sweetie if you want people to read things please don't go under size 9 font xOx]
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:47 pm
I wouldn't, Brother >.>" I'd just keep it in my photobucket for all to see...
Explain what, Maddy? o.o
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:47 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:48 pm
So confused.. x.x -head explodes-
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:48 pm
-Blinks- Okay, then.
(Thank you for going back and spacing that, hon.
The size was a problem in itself, but without spaces? Are you trying to kill us?)
That was quite good, dear. Your style has a nice flow, and your descriptions are lovely.
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:50 pm
[-gluing maddy back together-]
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:57 pm
I didn't want to stretch the page, Hun.
And Eno it came from your concept but it's not nearly as good.
If I had actually plagiarized your idea, I think I'd have had my teacher ready to publish me.
That would hardly be fair to you, would it?
If you need any help with your roleplays feel free to ask me, but I'm telling you now. You are far better than I am. You have a gift. I read twilight and now how a book Shouldn't be written. That's about it.
And Anne Rice is quite inspirational.
Edit: Kelbel; I like using words that you wouldn't see daily.
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:57 pm
*sigh* *goes to poke Silent who wanted to help again*
Well, thank you Jack... I love Anne Rice.
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:58 pm
[-crushes Jacks shoulder in his grip-
What book did you say? ^_^#]
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:00 pm
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:00 pm
Thank you Cheshire. -gives out cookies to all-
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:00 pm
Anne Rice~~~
-Slides onto the floor, curls up in a ball; yaaawns-
Nn..
Thanks, Kaddy!
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:02 pm
-throws blanket over kelbel and curls up next to her; gnaws on cookie-
[Kelbels icon is purty. ]
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:02 pm
*noms cookie* How's Silent supposed to help me make her roleplay wait less if she's not even here to give advice? All of you, thanks for the compliments, but I need to refine the story a bit and I can't do that with everyone telling me it's so good...
Kelbel's icon's cute. =w=
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Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:05 pm
[I did not say it was good xD
But I'll use ten percent of whatever emotion you got from Jacks speech he still owes me for his elegant coat.]
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