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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:44 pm 
 
 
                        
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 Crzycziri you will be trained as well.
 
 I will make you two an elite formation of melee combat. Using suck martial arts as Pentjak Silat and Krav Maga.
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:46 pm 
 
 
                        
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 Humbra and Crzy, here is a hint what seperates me as another literate fighter. I post details about combat, down to the placement of my thumb and my foot. While they post thoughts, and things going on inside of their head, thus.
 
 They fill their posts with nonsense
 I fill my posts with details pretaining to the subject.
 
 Thus 99.9% of my post is related to the attack.
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:49 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Ertai Vexic I am going to ******** Crawly up in this next post.*Is seen with laying down with his back towards the camera, watching tv* *camera comes around and zooms in on his face where he is seen digging up his nose and rubbing the boogers in the carpet.* *Then he looks up at the camera, finally noticing it is present* Huh..? *He goes back to watching tv* (I wish people would spell my name right.  If you were here.. and you spelled my name without an E.. I'd punch you in the face.  I expect people to ******** up my first name.. But my last name?)         
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:50 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Ertai Vexic 
 Humbra and Crzy, here is a hint what seperates me as another literate fighter. I post details about combat, down to the placement of my thumband my foot. While they post thoughts, and things going on inside of their head, thus.
 
 They fill their posts with nonsense
 I fill my posts with details pretaining to the subject.
 
 Thus 99.9% of my post is related to the attack.
 
 
Man.. do you listen to yourself?         
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:51 pm 
 
 
                        
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 Just take your beating. And actually make your posts worth reading, than just some unscripted dribble with no fluidity, no details and no posting logic or skill.
 
 Dont bother to respond to this.
 
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:52 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Only 10% of your post is related to the attack Ertai.
 The other crap is unimportant.
 
 If I wanted to know the actual attack portion of your post
 
 It'd probably be summarized in three sentences or less.
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:52 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Crawleymang~ Ertai Vexic 
 Humbra and Crzy, here is a hint what seperates me as another literate fighter. I post details about combat, down to the placement of my thumband my foot. While they post thoughts, and things going on inside of their head, thus.
 
 They fill their posts with nonsense
 I fill my posts with details pretaining to the subject.
 
 Thus 99.9% of my post is related to the attack.
 
 
Man.. do you listen to yourself?
 How about you shut the ******** up and post.
 
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:54 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Crawleymang~ Only 10% of your post is related to the attack Ertai. The other crap is unimportant. If I wanted to know the actual attack portion of your post It'd probably be summarized in three sentences or less.
 Than do it and stop your bitching.
 
 You keep doing it and you will keep getting your a** kicked by me each and every post.
 
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:55 pm 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:56 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Angry people everywhere.
 Your fighting in the guild, big deal. Please try to refrain from bringing fighting in character to out of character.
 It makes it a pain in the a** to read things that are actually interesting/important. If you wanna fight OOC go PM it.
 
 I think most of the people here don't want to hear a bunch of name calling, it ruins the mood.
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:57 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Ertai Vexic 
 Just take your beating. And actually make your posts worth reading...
 
 
=( Your posts aren't worth reading. In fact .. you know what.  I'm gonna dispell this idea that a good writer includes tons of detail. A good writer includes important detail.  If our fight was put into a book.. No one would care where the ******** your thumb was unless you were using it to dig it into my eye.  No one would care about over half the s**t you put in your post. When you are describing a set of actions you do not  write a page on them.  Unless there are so many that they fill up the page.  Read a book, what you do is not amazing in the least bit.  It actually shows how much you DON'T know about writing. The action of running to the store with no significant events between the starting point and the destination is not worthy of an essay.         
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 4:58 pm 
 
 
                        
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 Read my digital lips
 
 Shut the ******** up
 
 Clear?
 
 Now ******** post and spare me your speech on how you are ******** wrong.
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 5:01 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            ::waves his arms about in a melodramatic and corny fashion, viewed through a slow-motion camera lens::
 Safe!! Crawely wins....have a biscuit... xP ...Deity's off to chase kittens on his bike, monkeys. =O Bye bye, and don't kill yourselves...
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 5:01 pm 
 
 
                        
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 I am just humoring you and your posts, because who actually posts such dribble as you do. I have more respect for Gelmax, at least Gelmax knows more about combat than you could ever hope to know.
 
 So post and let me chop it all up and manipulate it as I see fit because you dont have any importance in your posts, no details. Each detail I post lets me dodge, block, counter and attack with such fluidity and perfection that the odds of you striking me are very low.
 
 
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                     Posted: Sat Jun 10, 2006 5:02 pm 
 
 
                        
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			            Crawleymang~ Ertai Vexic 
 Just take your beating. And actually make your posts worth reading...
 
 
=( Your posts aren't worth reading. In fact .. you know what.  I'm gonna dispell this idea that a good writer includes tons of detail. A good writer includes important detail.  If our fight was put into a book.. No one would care where the ******** your thumb was unless you were using it to dig it into my eye.  No one would care about over half the s**t you put in your post. When you are describing a set of actions you do not  write a page on them.  Unless there are so many that they fill up the page.  Read a book, what you do is not amazing in the least bit.  It actually shows how much you DON'T know about writing. The action of running to the store with no significant events between the starting point and the destination is not worthy of an essay.It actually could be if the runner can intepret the life around him as memories. And if it takes place on a different planet, blah blah blah I now play my DS. RPing isn't about writing a book. My story style and battle style are different.         
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