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Fractured Moonlight Captain
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 Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:49 pm
Poems never have to rhyme. I can prove it. One of mine got published and it doesn't rhyme all the way through. And hall my other stuff hasn't rhymed lately either.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:50 pm
Time for me to create choas, the time has come for the devils to rise, and for the heroes to fall, for as much as as we love the image of a hereo raising his blood drenched sword in victory, we love it more when it is his own blood that he displays. The time has come for the hero to die, for he has lasted to long and has has grown stachned.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:51 pm
that was good, Azarieal, but the word Wishes knocks it off. it needs less syllables.
like...wants....needs...must..has.
it would keep it on track, and the rythym wont be screwed up.
xd
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:53 pm
That wasn't meant to be a poem.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:54 pm
I know, none of mine ryme, with an exception here or there. I w;rote a Bardic song once, that had to ryme, because of the music it wnet to. lol
YAY!!! wait....that means i have to decide wherether Shin is an antoginist or a protoganist...damnit. lol
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:55 pm
Now Elias is playing the poetic explanation game xd
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Fractured Moonlight Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:56 pm
Hey, you are write about the wording...
And no, don't make that choice, if you don't you can work for paladins and demons... It is more fun to have open ties to both sides of the life.
As for heroes dieing, that is far too common these days.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 8:58 pm
Dun like Paladins much. Dun like demons either. Dun work for no one but myself, thankies. I have my own agenda.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:02 pm
It was figurative.
They are the extremes of living, and if you can chose to follow whichever path suites your needs, you are more able to survive the trials which devotion can hinder.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:02 pm
Oh crap... is Elias going to go postal on me? Im not up for thought intensive situations...
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Fractured Moonlight Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:04 pm
He'll probably just find a dead animal to tack to my back door...or my windows. Who knows what he's planning.
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:05 pm
Azareial: Yes, I know it was. I always keep my optionspen, though it doesn't appear so.
Saradin: Yeah, postal...that sums it up.
Aurah: I DO!!! I DO!!!...But I ain't tellin'! 3nodding
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Fractured Moonlight Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:06 pm
You dare withhold information from the Post Goddess...*shrugs* Oh well...
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:08 pm
I think he has a plan then, and it is most likely going to be finite...
But then again, having th e god who "craved the tears of dead babies to encourage rain" inside your head will make you do some really strange things.
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Fractured Moonlight Captain
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Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2005 9:10 pm
That sounds like a horrible way to get rain...
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