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 Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:19 am
Awesome Tree Totagomi Quite an interesting beginning for a story yet it's traditional. I like it! 3nodding Thanks. I tried to be poetic on the whole rose thing. You did well on that part too, cuz that's one of my favorite parts to it. x3But, it may be too emphasized that it distracts from the picture that was being painted in the mind from before.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:25 am
Totagomi Awesome Tree Totagomi Quite an interesting beginning for a story yet it's traditional. I like it! 3nodding Thanks. I tried to be poetic on the whole rose thing. You did well on that part too, cuz that's one of my favorite parts to it. x3But, it may be too emphasized that it distracts from the picture that was being painted in the mind from before. Oh. Damnit. So it was bad then.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:27 am
Awesome Tree Totagomi Awesome Tree Totagomi Quite an interesting beginning for a story yet it's traditional. I like it! 3nodding Thanks. I tried to be poetic on the whole rose thing. You did well on that part too, cuz that's one of my favorite parts to it. x3But, it may be too emphasized that it distracts from the picture that was being painted in the mind from before. Oh. Damnit. So it was bad then. No, it wasn't bad at all. Just needs to be a little lighter on the poeticness, possibly. That's just me though, others might think differently.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:34 am
Totagomi Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi I know it does, it bites hard. One day though, one day. You may be waiting a while Hash. x'D You really had to bring that up? ;~;
I'm sorry. I wasn't referring to yu/trying to point yours out. I was actually referring to another friend's commission. Due to circumstances, it's been about 8 months. And I don't feel any negativity at all.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:34 am
Totagomi Awesome Tree Totagomi Awesome Tree Totagomi Quite an interesting beginning for a story yet it's traditional. I like it! 3nodding Thanks. I tried to be poetic on the whole rose thing. You did well on that part too, cuz that's one of my favorite parts to it. x3But, it may be too emphasized that it distracts from the picture that was being painted in the mind from before. Oh. Damnit. So it was bad then. No, it wasn't bad at all. Just needs to be a little lighter on the poeticness, possibly. That's just me though, others might think differently. I'll take that on board for next time. Thanks.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:39 am
Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi I know it does, it bites hard. One day though, one day. You may be waiting a while Hash. x'D You really had to bring that up? ;~;
I'm sorry. I wasn't referring to yu/trying to point yours out. I was actually referring to another friend's commission. Due to circumstances, it's been about 8 months. And I don't feel any negativity at all.Knowing you, you've probably asked him about it before. Did he say what was keeping him? @Tree: Not a problem. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:59 am
Goooood morning. :3
>.>
*gives Tota her magic carpet back*
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:02 am
Terara Drakon Goooood morning. :3 >.> *gives Tota her magic carpet back* xD Morning.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:03 am
Totagomi Terara Drakon Goooood morning. :3 >.> *gives Tota her magic carpet back* xD Morning. What's uuuup? :3
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:06 am
Terara Drakon Totagomi Terara Drakon Goooood morning. :3 >.> *gives Tota her magic carpet back* xD Morning. What's uuuup? :3 Nothing much. Hash disappeared on me again and Tree did the same so now it's just us.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:15 am
Totagomi Terara Drakon Totagomi Terara Drakon Goooood morning. :3 >.> *gives Tota her magic carpet back* xD Morning. What's uuuup? :3 Nothing much. Hash disappeared on me again and Tree did the same so now it's just us. I'll try not to disappear. > 3>
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:18 am
Terara Drakon Totagomi Terara Drakon Totagomi Terara Drakon Goooood morning. :3 >.> *gives Tota her magic carpet back* xD Morning. What's uuuup? :3 Nothing much. Hash disappeared on me again and Tree did the same so now it's just us. I'll try not to disappear. > 3> It's alright if you do. xD Really, I'm just saying it so they can see. xP
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:18 am
Totagomi Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi You may be waiting a while Hash. x'D You really had to bring that up? ;~;
I'm sorry. I wasn't referring to yu/trying to point yours out. I was actually referring to another friend's commission. Due to circumstances, it's been about 8 months. And I don't feel any negativity at all.Knowing you, you've probably asked him about it before. Did he say what was keeping him? @Tree: Not a problem. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:23 am
Totagomi Terara Drakon Totagomi Terara Drakon Totagomi Terara Drakon Goooood morning. :3 >.> *gives Tota her magic carpet back* xD Morning. What's uuuup? :3 Nothing much. Hash disappeared on me again and Tree did the same so now it's just us. I'll try not to disappear. > 3> It's alright if you do. xD Really, I'm just saying it so they can see. xP Well, I might go play Borderlands soon, but I'm here till then. So, uhh... Uhm... *nothing to talk about* ._.
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Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 6:24 am
Hashire Kazemeijin Totagomi Knowing you, you've probably asked him about it before. Did he say what was keeping him? @Tree: Not a problem. 3nodding I'm 16 and still don't have a cell phone...that's kinda sad. :/ You should probably get some sleep if you're tired. xP I don't want you to fall asleep on the keyboard and have imprints on your face when you wake up. xD
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