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 Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 7:51 am
Queen Spazzy *is completely finished with Danny's art*
I have FINALLY gotten around to making the background! xD
I really like the way the whole thing turned out~
Which is rare for me to say, I usually hate my own work. >>;
ANYway.
It can be found here~
In all its beautiful colorful-ness. x3 Beautiful Brandy. I doth like it. I'm putting the revised one in my profile, also, your cursive writing is like mine surprised
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 7:54 am
It was already good before, but the color really added to it xD
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 8:58 am
ooohh pretty colors... i like spazzy ^.^
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:16 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:38 pm
I am unbelievably happy about this~
I'm so glad you like it!
And, uh, it took me five tries to get my signature right. xD
It's really hard on my tablet because of the way I write.
My cursive slants to the left, like a left-handed person's cursive, but I write with my right hand...
I'm odd~
And I didn't develop the curves at the end until I wanted to disguise my real handwriting a bit, which was only three years ago or so... >>;
I changed the color of it, though, because 1) the other color wouldn't show up well on the background and 2) I changed the color my posts are in from that violet color to this lime green. ^^;
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:47 pm
Queen Spazzy I am unbelievably happy about this~
I'm so glad you like it!
And, uh, it took me five tries to get my signature right. xD
It's really hard on my tablet because of the way I write.
My cursive slants to the left, like a left-handed person's cursive, but I write with my right hand...
I'm odd~
And I didn't develop the curves at the end until I wanted to disguise my real handwriting a bit, which was only three years ago or so... >>;
I changed the color of it, though, because 1) the other color wouldn't show up well on the background and 2) I changed the color my posts are in from that violet color to this lime green. ^^; Oh, I should mention, this is Captain on another account. Because I forgot to log out. It's just perfect the way it is. I AM a left-handed person xD
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:49 pm
I have the worst sinuses ever right now. My eyes are heavy, my head is heavy, my mouth hurts. T-T not good when you have 2 essays to do and another slightly long assignment on top of that. I haven't started yet (not that I usually do until night)
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 12:50 pm
oh snap crackle and/or pop LETS DO THIS THING!
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 1:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:01 pm
I'm sorry your sinuses are bothering you, Danny!
And I didn't know you were left-handed!
Ah, that definitely explains why our cursive is similar, then. ^^;
I got in trouble with my teachers when we were learning cursive because I absolutely couldn't write with a right-handed slant. :/
I write over top of my writing like a lot of left-handed people do... >>;
My boyfriend's mom says it's because I have the genetics to be ambidextrous and that's how they're displaying themselves.
It makes me feel special to think of it like that. >w>
Which explains why I only say I write with my right hand as opposed to saying I'm right-handed. ^^;
Oh geez, I ramble a lot... .__.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 2:04 pm
the saboteur oh snap crackle and/or pop LETS DO THIS THING! The only thing I can think of when you say that is calculus. o__o
Fourth, fifth, and/or sixth derivative is how that translates in my mind.
Because those are, honest-to-goodness, their names.
Snap, crackle, pop.
I'm not kidding, go look it up if you don't believe me!
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:14 pm
I DIDN'T KNOW CALCULUS HAD SUCH WEIRD ENGLISH ROOTS...haha roots. Yeah, wow. *writes that down somewhere*
On further examination, as my brain finally thought, I am a left-handed person who has RIGHT cursive slant. However, the way in which your and I's cursive looks is somewhat similar. Ah, so you're a right handed writer with a left slant and I'm a left handed with a right slant. I also use scissors for my right hand. I think I'm ambidextrous as well, for I feel I can only use one hand or the other for a certain thing, but not only one for primarily all.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:29 pm
Yeah, derivative names that I know, starting with first derivative, go in this order: velocity, acceleration, jerk, snap, crackle, pop.
My math teacher was greatly amused by them, and so am I. ^^;
Of course, before the first derivative is the actual function that is used for all the derivation, which is the position function. >w>
[/math nerd-ness]
And I feel the exact same way!
I can only use one hand for certain things, and one hand for other things.
People call me weird for it, but it's just my genetic disposition. xD
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 5:44 pm
Queen Spazzy Yeah, derivative names that I know, starting with first derivative, go in this order: velocity, acceleration, jerk, snap, crackle, pop.
My math teacher was greatly amused by them, and so am I. ^^;
Of course, before the first derivative is the actual function that is used for all the derivation, which is the position function. >w>
[/math nerd-ness]
And I feel the exact same way!
I can only use one hand for certain things, and one hand for other things.
People call me weird for it, but it's just my genetic disposition. xD You are an interesting character. Haha, character. ********* I'm in advanced topics of math. We're doing factoring. It's easy, but it's the details that can throw you off. I could be getting straight A's if I applied myself a bit more and didn't think ahead and thus make small errors. But I'm procrastinating changing my habits that would help me learn better, in general. I have an essay to do now. Expository. "Explain how disappointments can have a good side." Lol, makes me think of an unwanted baby.
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 9:04 pm
I submitted it into the system. It gave me a 6/6! Yay! Which corresponds to an A by the teacher.
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In an essay, explain how disappointments can have a good side.
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