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 Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:27 pm
madara got up his chin healing he changed bak into tobi  "u made my eye bleed again riyu!" obito held riyu bak naruto nodded "....."
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:29 pm
Riyu- Growling at tobi.
Tor- (I'll have to live on my own...Start a different life...Or..) Tor turned back to normal and started to cry..but it wasn't normal..Tor was crying blood.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:35 pm
tobi laughed a little
"ur gona try and fight me arent u?hehe"
he poofed away and appeared behind tor he transformed into the tobi she new
"tor r u ok?"
kiki got up
("u have to stop orochimaru and the yazekage!there plan is to bring out madara's power and tobi's corruption with iruko they can destroy any village they want!")
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:38 pm
Riyu- ("It's to late kiki...Tors gonna kill herself..thats why she wanted to be written down as a rouge...because she didn't want anyone to know that she died..and if tor dies..iruko goes with her..")
Tor- Turned around, still crying blood. She didn't talk. She had cuts and bruises all over her. In the spot were madara punched her there was a huge gash. Tor had fear in her eyes, When she remembered what madara said. She backed up a few steps.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:45 pm
tobi looked at her  "wats rong tor?hehe.." kiki got big eyed ( "she wont kill herself cau...") kiki looked around and saw the yazekage "....." orochimaru appeared behind riyu "ur sister is smart isnt she?to bad she wont live long anough to see u die!"
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:49 pm
Riyu- Punched through orochimaru and grabbed hid soul. Instead of the normal blue lysangun his was red this time. "He hand signaled with his other hand. "Ninja art: SOUL DETERIORATION JUTSU!" He crushed and completely destroyed orochimaru's soul and his true from killing him.
Tor- Turned around. "I'm gonna get rid of iruko..today me and her leave this earth!" Tor began to run again leaving behind dabs of blood.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:52 pm
he laughed and appeared infront of her punching tor in the stomach
"now now tor thats my job!"
he pulled his hair out of the way showing his bleeding sharigun eye looking into her eyes
((play yazekage!!!!!!))
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:55 pm
Yazekage- Walks up to kiki and picks her up stabbing her nails into her neck. "Say good by-" Riyu's hand in shoved into her.
Riyu- "LET MY LITTLE SISTER DOWN!!" His lysangun was still red and giving off a gastly chakura.
Tobi's hand went through her stomach and she doubled over coughing blood onto his arm.
Tor- "to..bi..." She started o get wobbly.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 10:59 pm
tobi looked up at her
"hehe...this is one thing i will never regret of my corruption is killing my sister..then my brothers!"
he took his hand out of her and took out his katana
"not even iruko will save u now"
kiki looked at riyu the blood went down her neck
"r--riyu"
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:03 pm
Riyu- Snapped the yazekage neck and made her drop kiki. He caught her and healed her neck. "You ok?"
Tor- Drops to the ground. "It was all an act...Wasn't it tobi..The friendship..everything..?" Tor struggled to get up but couldn't. "Who would have that that the person i looked up to the most..would kill me in the end.."
(" Obito..rin..riyu..kiki..everyone..I dont know what tobi's going to do with me...but if it comes to the worst..goodbye..") Tor closed her eyes.
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:08 pm
tobi held his katana in the air but couldnt move his arm he bit his lip
"....no"
kiki nodded and smiled
"go save tor riyu.."
obito grabbed sasuke
"sasuke u need to help tor tobi is gona kill her!"
itachi poofed behind tobi
"u cant kill her can u tobi?she was the one who made u smile and care for things...if she was gone u would go insane"
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Posted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 11:11 pm
Riyu- Nodded and poofed away.
Tor- Coughing out blood on the ground. "Go ahead tobi..kill me..wasn't that what you wanted to do all along..was to make sure i died in the end."
Sasuke- "WHAT?!?!" Poofs away.
((Dude I just imagined that in my mind..the whole destruction of kohona thing from tor transforming up to this and it seriously made me cry..>.<))
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:54 am
((you back feeling any better?)
saku was walking when tor and tobi and he ran over to tor "hey are you ok?" saku asked his eye back and forth from tobi to tor
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:54 am
((ya i did imagin that and had a dreama bout that i was like O.O))
tobi brought his sword down but stopped right above tors head a black shadow was on his arm
itachi smiled
"good thing i brought shikamaru with me.."
shikamaru sighed
"...ya"
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Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 10:58 am
Riyu- appears and picks me up and sees the huge wound in my stomach. "I didnt think it would go this far..."
Tor- Starting to pass out. Laughs a little. "Your really determined to kill me arent you tobi..."
Sasuke- Appears and runs up to riyu and me. "Riyu we need to get her to the hospital she's losing to much blood!"
Tor- Turned her head to shikamaru. "thank you shikamaru...I'm in debt to you for saving my life.."
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