Welcome to Gaia! ::

I've checked up on it three times today - it still comes up as "currently checking this website for malicious content. This redirect will be removed once we will finish manually checking all files on this account." I looks like a routine thing, so I'll keep refreshing it tomorrow as well until it decides to come up. I'm excited. heart

Spoilerssss for those who haven't tried it yet~

For my first time through, I chose to be a fox. :3

The only issue I had was about one third of the pages took much longer to load than the others, and occasionally bounced me to a google "this link is broken" page - refreshing fixed the problem though. o_o

You spelled afraid as "afriad" on this page. And here, here (last sentence), here, here, here, and here, you used "it's" where you ought to have used "its," as "its" indicates ownership and "it's" represents "it is" (as shown here.) The only reason I notice that is because my English teacher made fun of me in high school for mixing them up X3 On this page you forgot to place an apostrophe in "raptor's."

I effing LOVE that when you get up to him, you get to pet him, and he PURRS. heart heart "You can't help but smiling, the raptor making a cooing, almost purr of a sound deep in its throat as you continue to gently stroke its feathers," is probably my favorite sentence in the entire adventure.

When I went back and tried going to work instead, "Maybe next time you get a day off you'll do something more exciting. Like watching the grass grow." made me laugh out loud. X3 As did "turning your brain to mush by watching reality show re-runs" though if I wanna watch America's Next Top Model for eight hours, I think that's a fine way to spend time >:3

I'm pretty sure I tried every option as the fox (I kept choosing to run away anyway XD) so.. now the raptor. heart

"The smell of the muck fills your nostrils - like death on the air" is a great description. It definitely draws you into the raptor's environment. There's a typo on the page, though: you probably meant to make feather plural.

I cooed when the raptor encountered the fox. "When you are only a few feet away you stop as well, tilting your head to one side" is nice imagery as well. *Snuggles the raptor*

I was afraid when I chose the "attack the fox" option I was going to hurt him. @_@ I'm glad I didn't. heart

In this adventure, you made the "its"/"it's" mistake here and here.

I definitely enjoyed it. I loved the concept of a society where hybrids are still looked down on, but in places like his workplace, it's a little easier to go about your business because of others like yourself. Sounds like an awesome roleplay concept too. heart (Nny needs to just leave his job and go live in the woods though X3)

Eeek, wow, thanks for all the input, I'll fix those typos ASAP. I KNEW I was making the its/it's mistake a lot, just didn't go through it as thoroughly as I should. x3 I'm really happy you enjoyed it, yay! I'd love to do an anthro roleplay again. Outside of Harry Potter I do anthro roleplays all the time with my furry friends. :3

Nnyraptor is my favorite thing ever. I roleplay as him all the time. <3 Murrrrr.

But yeah, thanks so much Naz! biggrin

heart Pshaw. It was fun. *Rolls around with the purring Nnyraptor*

I love the word "murr." When I was on Furcadia, it wasn't very popular in the places I frequented, so until I started lurking on Fur Affinity I didn't even know anyone used it. X3 Everyone said "mew~" to indicate the same kind of contentment. XD

Luuuuurv furries. XD I ALSO didn't know that there was such thing as.. babyfur.. stuff. Furry shota, who'da thought? X3 I'm afraid to touch that portion of the site though because there's some odd stuff in there >>;;


*Musing on possible plots*



WATCH OUT IF YOU CHOOSE TO BE NNYRAPTOR, CASSY! I was hungry when I chose that route, and my hunger influenced my choices crying I kept having to go back xd

Stress stress stress. >w<

Yup. Staying out of that section of the website. Too each their own, and a majority of the content is just not 'my own.' xp

Otters are nice. My mother roleplayed as an Otter furr who was captain of a river cargo ship. She spent months researching for the role xd

No plot ideas. None at all. Grr. ><;;

My gandfather is dying so my father (who lives in CT) is having a meltdown, and my uncles are no better. He probably won't make it through the night so I'll have to fly up there for a funeral. And there's a lot of drama over his will. My head's killing me even thinking about it. @_@





Diapers are something that Nazzy does not like. crying





I SHOULD MAKE MIKE THINK OF SOMETHING. HIMS IS OUR RESIDENT FURRY EXPERT PERSON.

EDIT: Kitty has two days off. heart

Oh crap, that blows. sad

D: It's much easier when your relatives are poor, then you get to have nifty things like a drawing on felt of a bull, and try to avoid your step--grandmother trying to pawn off this huge ugly ceramic duck on you.

Then again... there can be enough drama over silverwear and old wooden clogs as well..

Aaah..... a weird and crappy business all around. D:

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But at least you got NAZZYFOX, and Kitty has two days off! biggrin

xP Eeew, diapers.

Aaaah...... Mike should be good at thinking up furry things to do.

Maybe you could make it that your furry people just wake up in a forest some place, and it seems like there's nothign around. xD

OR THEY COULDS ESCAPE FROM A FACILITY WHERE THEY WERE MAAADEEE.. OOOH.

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