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 Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2005 10:47 pm
Lasreaine I was wondering about the mum thing as well. I get the impression of a british maid trying to serve Japanese tea in a fantasy castle... That about sums it up.
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Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2005 6:44 am
Quote: "Well, As long as the blademaster isn't in the practice yard," he amended. The extra capitalization on As. And WOW. I have a pocket-clan! That is beyond....wow.
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 4:48 am
Mad Queen Amy.
There is nothing in that phrase I don't like.
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 3:34 pm
Mmm, nice updates.
As villains go, I like Gendou, particularly because he's believable. Also reminds me of another quote, "Knowledge is power. Hide it well." Romuel, also, plays the role of a seer very well, also believably.
I guess Ruevian really wants to follow Mory with or without pay because she suspects it's Gendou who has kidkidnapped her, which makes good sense.
The dialogue is definitely well monitored and brilliant, as are the careful introductions of characters.
Also, I'm a, "sir!" 4laugh heart
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:16 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:33 am
Aww, come on, Raa ! I can't be tricky now, with so many people watching. You can talk to me...
Fine. Maybe Pink will, if I ever meet her. Hmph.
I love the characterization and interaction in this one, even if it was a bit shorter.
Graye keeps getting lighter and lighter a character. She seemed to be skipping around in this chapter. xd
I hope poor Calmer's able to play the diplomat the whole time he's with Amy ... and Pink. But maybe the one I should worry about losing his mind is Deep, hmm?
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 4:23 am
We Kitsune respect royalty, even if they are on the eccentric side.
Great chapter as always, Gendou. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 6:15 am
Your writing keeps getting better and better. And I will always love the little lines like "It had always annoyed him that she could do that without tripping."
*fangirls madly*
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 7:18 am
Hooray! Crazy Amy!
This is consistently a delight.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 10:21 am
Morythought: "Pink? Who the heck is Pink? Do we even have a Pink in this guild?...wait, there IS no Pink. YAAAAAY Mad Amy! domokun "
Seriously, awesome story, as usual, can't wait to read more. *tries to bribe writer!Gendou to write faster with some nice tea* ... *realizes it doesn't work like that* ... *tries to bribe chara!Gendou to let her go with a shiny apple* ... *fail* ;-;
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 8:15 pm
Wow! So many new characters have been introduced since I left! There's Solens, and William, and Las, and Calmer, and Amy, and Kia, Natas, and......
....a lot of us. I really like it. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:10 pm
Congrats, Gendou! You captured my personality flawlessly! heart heart heart *much love for you* heart
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:28 pm
Initial reactions:
~Pink? Pink?! Who in the world is Pink? She's off her rocker. whee heart
~HAH. Serves you RIGHT, Grayed.
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Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:44 pm
Kyraa Initial reactions: ~Pink? Pink?! Who in the world is Pink? She's off her rocker. whee heart Amy's predicitons. One of the following phrases will describe my character: 1) Incredible destructive power 2) A force of unspeakable evil 3) Tea Party, with sun Bonnent for Deep.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 4:43 am
New chapter. Please be sure to comment if you're still reading this.
And if you're not reading it, would you mind telling me why?
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