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 Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:46 pm
As i got up i knew I had to stay calm not being so forcefull now that i got hurt a little bit I turned on my sharingan as my symbols started to spin seeing what this guy could do in his condition of such power "This gut packs alot just by using one move.... he could have broken me in two if he threw me hard enough.... I cant let this guy get close not by along shot." I ran at him now as I had a plan he just stood here clueless of what i'd do but from the smile he had on his face I could tell that he was ready for any counterattack he had planned out
3/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:49 pm
Running at him now I went low as I leaped forward doing battle roll infront of him I stopped and threw a kunai at his foot inbetween him as I then dissapeared running around him quick but just enough so other couls easily see me going around I passed him about 5 times tieing his feet up in a wire that was strapped to the kunai as I ran back to where I cam he then felt the tug of the wire pulling him back as he fell on his backside hard the ground shook because of his great weight I then dissapeared again as I reappeared in the sky coming down with one leg over my forehead
4/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:53 pm
Coming down on him now I had my right leg over my forehead as I dropped down like a rock I slammed my heel into his stomatch as I used the briusing sky leg it hit and then went into his stomatch like jello and the ground under his back broke in and dust and gravel came up as I came out of it landing back to see that I did and how it affected him I saw thw whole in the ground as it was kinda deep but still enough to see him he was getting up as my eyes widen I looked at him as he had a dint in his stomatch but he popped it back out like a dough boy as he laughed in triumph "Nice attack Leaf but it was'nt enough to get passed my tough skin, hahahahaha!!!!!"
5/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 3:57 pm
I looked at him with unease as this fight would be tough and sense this guy wanted it to the death he knew that he would have the advantage over me all along "Damn this might be a problem...." after that said he picked up a large boulder as he crushed it with his bare hands the size of car doors he opened them seeing tiny rocks and gravel in his palms as he went back with his body and shot them out at me like bullets coming at a wanted man I leaped into a corner ofa alley way as the the rock hit the corners of the buildings and destroyed them breaking te sides making even bigger pathways then before I looked back as he was waiting for me to come out with a grin on his face
6/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:02 pm
I the got out my bandages as I got the idea that I just might have to use that jutsu haveing no other objective I said to myself "Gai sensei.... Lee sensei..... pleased aknowledge this next move as I have no other choice but to use it against this fiend." As he waits getting ready to throw another batch of rocks I jump out of the corner fast as I roll on the ground I quickly spot him as he throws more rocks at me going as fast as major leauge baseballs I put my hands on the ground as I dissapear in thin air getting behind him using the shadow leaf dance justu he looks around as I go under him and then kick him in the chin with the cannon spike making the 90 degree angle he goes straight up as ny wraps are already undone in the leaf dance I can see that he only went up about 4 feet as I knew he was heavy so I had to use another move
7/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:21 pm
Now that I got him started in the air I started the forward lotus as I hit him up higher and higher into the air with constant kicks to his stomatch and with his amrs being so big and stubby he could'nt reach me as I had in the move completely with no way out but his weight made it tough for me to get any higher as we only got about 20 feet I already wrapped him around as I got him in the wraps I grappled onto him as I turned us both upsidedown I went into the first gate as I used the inital lotus and spun him around at a average speed as we hit the ground letting go at the last second I could tell he was surprised by my manuver as i looked back at him
8/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:21 pm
Yuri saw that Neoshin was too busy to talk so he set out and went to go get a snack feeling bored.
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:23 pm
As I looked back seeing the smoke of the dirt coming up i saw that he was'nt there as I was freaking out suddenly he popped out of the ground behind me as I looked at him coming up he had just enough power to withstand the lotus and still have something left as he hit my in the chest from behind but actally hitting my side as i went back he went back under ground like a mole then came up infront of me and again and knocked me in the air with a uppercutt as I went up he suddenly got there too as he grabbed my legs and then powerbombed me into the ground as I sunk in pain into the earth as I forced in complelty covered inside it now
9/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:28 pm
Coming out of the hole now I stood up as my legs were kinda limp he looked back at me as he laughed and grinned having a sick look in his eye "That was my Kubikari technuiqe.... but i'm impressed that your still alive, no one has ever survived one so maybe you strong enough to survive two of them.... how fun has this fight has gotten hahahahaha....." As he laughed at me in misfortune i ran at him again but then fell down from the strain of the first gate he came up to me slow but with not ie for me to move he rammed me as I hit a brick wall and fell on my feet but hanging onto the wall with much pain inside my legs and body "Ok then..... you freak time to take you out!" I put my hands infront of me as I started going into the first gate he looked at me now confused
10/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:32 pm
I then put my face inside my arms as my chakra grew higher and higher the ground shook as rocks came up around me I put my ahdns up as I went into the third gate immiediatly skipping the second in a rush of power "THIRD GATE LIFE GATE OPEN!!!!" I clutched my hands as my skin turned dark and my chakra exploded around me with my all white eyes covering my puplis now I looked back at him screaming as I took off in burst of speed at him I came at his front with a punch as he tried to block it I dissapeared coming behind him now in a incredible manuver of speed as i hit him in the back with konoha super strength whirlwind in his spine making him move forward he was asstonished by my new power never before seen in his eyes
11/12
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 4:36 pm
As he fell forward he was thinking to himself how could I have gotten so strong as he could'nt even move being stunnded by my atack to his back maybe even broken now becasue of it I came infront of him now as I went low and then sent a rising leaf whirlwind to his chin as he flew up into the air fully now having enough leg power to get him up I grab his legs quickly as he looks back at me with my red eye and no pupil he freaked out as he screamed I came down now slamming him into the ground stealing his move with my sharingan eye "Kubikari!!!!" and I slammed his body into the dirt as I instantly went out of the gate I looked back at him as the smoke cleared and saw that he was sunk into the dirt in his grave as his feet stuck out and up they fell down bending out he did not move as I finished him off not dead but just enough to knock him out fora few hours as I took him out of the hole and then layed him out now picking my stuff up and looking at all the villagers and nin as I walked off
12/12
Kubikari mastered^^
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Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2006 10:08 pm
Neoshin walked off as the villagers stared at him in mystery of who he was being so strong to knock out such a large man so fast bu t he did'nt care as he went through them making a pathway for him to the entrance as the guards looked at him in fear he walked off into the forest to return back to konoha but he had to pass the docks first
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 6:03 pm
((Bullrush trainning))
Neoshin got to haze village as he came in looking around at the sky and the area to see that the old place has'nt changed one bit he walked around the village seeing all the villagers remember him from the last time he came around he they all stepped back and looked around pretending they did not notice him when he looked at them he walked passed them all as they all looked back at him in disgust of when he killed one of the villagers most powerfull protectors
1/10
Neoshin came around the corner and saw a large ninja that looked kinda cool to him practiceing taijustu on a wooden target that was nailed onto a steel plate he kicked and punched the target and even used some technuiqes from hidden haze village that Neoshin already knew but nothing new that he could see but once he started to walk away from him the man yelled out loudly as he stepped back and pulled his fist back and his body was sweating very hard as he punched at the wooden target as fast as he could
2/10
His punch broke through the wooden target and even went through the hidden metal target behind it as his fist went completely threw the tagret it fell to the ground as he took his fist out he looked over at Neoshin and stared at him long and hard as he walked up to him Neoshin was still stareing at the target as he focused on the man now he said what was he doing here but Neoshin just stared at him and then pointed to the target speechless he was too amazed by his strength but the ninja just told him it was only a punch
3/10
Neoshin just stared at the devastation and asked him that if he could teach him that even though it was just a normal punch it seemed strong enough to be a whole new technuiqe so the man said yes in a annoyed but sort of promsisng way as he took him over to the target he told neoshin to try the strongest normal punch he had as Neoshin took his fist back like he did and struck it hard making his fist dint the metal but not much happen as Neoshin stood there for good while and then felt the pain of the cold metal
damage his hand as he brought it back started blowing on it in much pain
4/10
The man kind of laughed and then told him to stand back and then copy his stance as he was going to show him step by step Neoshin stepped back and turned his sharingan on and watched him as he copyed his same movements and and got in the same stance immideatly he put his fist up and then put his fist to his sides as Neoshin copyed it exacally as he thought to himself once he leanrs this technuiqe he would be much stronger
5/10
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Posted: Sun Nov 19, 2006 7:02 pm
Neoshin got into his stance as he did the same thing he did to the exact point the ninja told him to bring out his right fist as he put it infront of him Neoshin did the same as he started pulled it back passed his back he put his arm passed his spine and outward backward as it was like doing a overhand strike Neoshin did the same as he bent his arm quickly and told him transfer all the chakar in his arm to his fist Neoshin started it as his arm got bigger he was sweating from the rush but Neoshin did'nt as he had alot more chakra in him
6/10
As Neoshin does the same his arms expanding faster than the ninja as he waits for him to finish he struggles much more as he tells him that once your at your max then thrust it into the metal and see what you can do to as we both strike and then hit the metal as his fist goes completely threw it as my fist hitds the metal again and he tells me that he probly just has more physical strength than me and it's just a natural diffrence but as he walks off I get a quick idea
7/10
Neoshin sits down and thinks to himself that he would have alot more strength if he used the gates having even more power than before and with his great power he knew that it would work well and he would be nearly unstoppable with usch strength behind him and he decided to try it out "Ok then... this has to work and what do I got to lose because this is a flawless plan." Neoshin now walked infront of a new metal plate as he got in a stance to go into the heal gate
8/10
He focused his chakra into the gates as he put his arms up over his eyes he started the gathering of his great chakra to release it into the second gate he instanly turned the first gate on going into the second quickly as he looked at the plate the rocks and dust kicked up from his chakra as the air around him rised and his hair came up his power was increased highly and he had a good chane now to break through it as he put his arm back and got ready to finish it
9/10
Now that he was in the second gate and his arms was all the way back he put all the chakra he could into his right amr and bent it as he started to sweat and his mucsle expanded on last time he through his amr out at the metal plate and busted right threw it as his fist went completley threw it he pulled his fist out as the plate also broke in half Neoshin smiled by his great strength going out of his second gate his hair goes back down and he feels his hand as it is undamaged he gets his stuff and heads out away from the nin into the village to rest up
10/10
((Bullrush mastered^^))
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