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LaLunaLupe

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:38 am


A few things I'd like to see in the next chapter or so:

A Zack moral delema
A teacher's meeting
The Moms reaction to Riku "cheating" on Sora
Aerith and Tifa getting together or Aerith having a fight with Tifa because of Tifa's foot-in-mouth desease
Kairi being a prep
And/Or
Axel, Demyx, and Roxas having a day of beauty (MAKEOVER!) to get ready for the dance.

Also, I'm looking forward to reading Wing-Chan's date!

I love reading this fic. Whenever y'all find a gap, I'll do another chapter.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:35 pm


LaLunaLupe
A few things I'd like to see in the next chapter or so:

A Zack moral delema
A teacher's meeting
The Moms reaction to Riku "cheating" on Sora
Aerith and Tifa getting together or Aerith having a fight with Tifa because of Tifa's foot-in-mouth desease
Kairi being a prep
And/Or
Axel, Demyx, and Roxas having a day of beauty (MAKEOVER!) to get ready for the dance.

Also, I'm looking forward to reading Wing-Chan's date!

I love reading this fic. Whenever y'all find a gap, I'll do another chapter.
LaLunaLupe that was wonderful *blows noise*

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Merines_Amara

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 3:59 pm


well I shall try to make those things happens lunalupe
PostPosted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 11:50 pm


XD Can't wait.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 5:46 pm


Neither can I.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 05, 2006 5:53 pm


*dies of waiting if posible* xp

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LaLunaLupe

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 5:58 pm


So, how much longer until we close it?
PostPosted: Thu Aug 10, 2006 10:03 pm


*shrugs* No idea. xD;

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 6:10 pm


I'm still not sure whose turn it is right now.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 8:50 pm


=/ I don't remember, either...

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 9:59 pm


Anybody want to step up? Doesn't look like anybody's working on the fic.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:38 pm


I'll step up to write the next chappy. ^ ^

*is alive* I'll step up indeed. If that's okay with y'all?
 

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:52 pm


I'm glad you're picking it up, I thought the thread was going to die on us.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:29 pm


It's been a looooooong time yes.
But I'm back and so....I present to all of you The Wing Chappy.

Now just to refresh some minds:

Amora is Riku's mother.
Yukita is Sora's.
Amora has told Axel to hurt Roxas.....
Riku has a plan to make Sora jealous.....

I think I said the BIG things now. So without anymore chatting I present the Chappy.


Chapter 9-1: [I Wish The World Would Die Now.......]

DING-DONG~~~~

Yukita was seated on the coffe table, watching a terrible Soap Opera called- Two Hearts- (which she watched so she could laugh), when the doorbell sounded. Sora was at school with Riku, and Amora was.....busy.

So who could that be now?

She walked towards the door, and said, " Hello! Who is it?"

The response she got was one she didn't expect....not yet anyway.
Axel.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"RIKU!!! You....god I'm so mad right now....!!" Sora shouted, seated in Riku's car and looking out to the houses.
He was beyond mad. He was burning or....seething.....hm is this what a killer felt before he killed his cheating spouse?

"Sora let me explain!!! I swear me and Kairi are-"

"NO!!! Aerith said you guys were seeing each other!!! You lied to me Riku!! I wish you would die.....!!"

Sora knew he had hit something. Those last words had done it, and Sora wasn't sorry for it. All those lies about 'you being my only one', or'I love you so much', and all that had been s**t. All of it....and what was worst was he had almost given up on Axel....And now he wouldn't have anyone.

Who would take him seriously? Who actually liked him enough to be his boyfriend....? No one. And reality was now happening.
Why hadn't he seen Riku was lying? Why hadn't he figured it was all a lie?

Riku bit his lip, determined not to cry. "Sora....."He tried, talking so gently that Sora wanted to hit him for it. For being gentle.....for sounding hurt...

"Riku don't. Nothing you say will make it better.....Just drop me off here."

Riku looked at Sora, and nodded. He dropped Sora off at a corner, nodded, and drove off. As soon as Sora left he felt tears fall, but he ignored them entirely. What had he done? Now Sora was lost.....Now he had lost him and Sora wouldn't let him explain things with Kairi.

"Sora...."

>>

"Riku.....? You awake?"

"Nope. What's wrong Sora?" An eight year old Riku asked, turnign in his bed to face Sora.

" I'm scared of thunderstorms...."

Riku chuckled. "Really? So the outgoing one is scared of a little rain, but not bullies....And me, the shy one is not scared of a big storm.....That's funny"

Poke. "Is not!! Riku I'm scared!!"

Riku stopped laughing, and smiled at Sora. "Hmmm....let us fix that then."
The first time Riku had wrapped his arm around Sora's little waist ahd been that night. And it had felt right.....even for an eight-year-old.

"better?"

"Yesh. Thank-You"

That night they both had cuddled, a memory that never left Riku.


"Sora..." Riku cried in his car, feeling hurt and wishing he was eight-years-old so all the conflicts could dissappear and he could cuddle with Sora once more.

Nothing was simple anymore. Nothing would ever be simple....And now Sora wasn't beside him to make the pain go away...

<<

"Mom you didn't have to walk with me......" Roxas stated grumbly, kicking a stone out of embarressment.

"Sweetie I want to meet this Axel? Your always writing about him, and sneaking off with me. Why, ever since the dance you've been seeing him every night. Sneaking into his car and god knows what you do in there?!"

Roxas and his mom were not perfect. Sure she was nice in front of everyone else, and sure she sounded like she cared but Roxas knew better.
Eversince his father had left, and his younger borther had died, IMa had never been the same. In fact, Roxas would bet his whole life savings that she had a mental disorder.

'She wants to meet Axel.....So she'll have more of a reason to yell at me, and beat me up.......'

Ima yelled a lot. And often she beat Roxas up. It wasn't so bad, but it made him hate her. Especially times like these when she talked sweetly like a good mother, when inside she was planning some evil scheme.

Because of this; they were distant.

"You can go now." Please go.

"Why honey? I said I'd come and I'm going to. I wanna meet this Axel...."

"Mom just go, okay? He's at the doctor's anyway....." Roxas lied, hoping that it sounded believable.

"Really? Oh if thats' the case then I'll head back home Roxie. But invite him for dinner, okay? Tomorrow night."

And with that she left, walking a bit harshly. Probably 'cause it didn't work the way she had planned.

'I hate you mom.....'

Invite Axel over? That would be hell. Everynight he snuck out to see Axel, and they'd head to his house, and well.....talk and kiss for a while. Nothing more had happend. Axel respected Roxas's wishes and so they had shared deep kisses but nothing more. It had been two days since the dance, and that had gone very well.

But inviting him over was different....with his mom?
That would only spell disaster.....and a grave for Axel...and.....

"Ouch!!" Dammit you jerk.......?" Roxas rubbed his forehead, staring at the person who had bumped into him. "Sora?"
Wow...that's interesting.

Sora was pouting slighty, and looked at Roxas, only a smile was on his face. "Sorry.....I was distracted and yeah. "

"So was I. Erm.....don't you usually get driven by Riku or your mom Sora? Axel stalked you once and told me....."

Stalked?! Just what did Axel know/do that Sora didn't know about?!
And for soem strange reason, an image of Axel browsing his drawers and realizing Sora wore boxers crossed his mind.

"Today i felt like walking....."

Roxas knew something was up, just by the fake-happy tone Sora tried to pull. He didn't like Sora, but.....if the opportunity of match-making Sora with Riku so he could have Axel all to himself came, he wasn't gonna lose it.

"Why don't we talk about it? I promise I don't bite or won't."

Sora wasn't so slow to realize something....was up with Roxas, but he had to tell someone! Anyone! He was desperate.

"Okay it goes like this....."

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Yukita I came here to talk about your "plan". Honestly I hate it, and I won't do it. Simple as that."

Yukita tilted her head, and gave a smile. "I'd think you were an idiot if you loved the plan and wnated to do it. But your no idiot......Axel this is to help Sora understand his feelign sfor Riku....."

Axel stopped stiring his coffee. "I figured that's what it was....but I'm not hurting Roxas. I can't.....I want Sora to realize his feelings but not like this...."

"I undertsand Axel. Say Axel do you still like Sora?"

Axel blushes slightly, and nodded. "Yeah I do....."

"So who's this Roxas?" Yukita asked, amused.

"Roxas is my cute little going to be boyfriend.....We're dating and all. He likes me and I like him a lot. A lot with a capital "A". But I still have feelings for Sora....."

Yukita nodded, sipped a bit of her own coffee, and completely ignoring the fact that Axel should be at school. Oh well.

"Roxas is cute? Pretty? What's he like?"

Axel raised an eyebrow, wondering if there was a meaning to all these questions. If he was Sora, he would probably have known if there was a deeper meaning.

"Roxas is cute, rebelious, charming, flirtaous, dangerous-"

"I see," Yukita snickered, " Don't tell me everything now. I imagine he's molestable as well, ne?"

Wow.....Sora's mom was sure outgoing. That explained a lot.

"Yup. I can't say he's not."

Yukita smiled widely, and laughed a bit. "Makes me wnat to meet him.....Axel it sounds to me like you love Roxas......"

Axel's face went scarlett, and he wouldn't deny that he loved Roxas. How coudl you not, somehow, love Roxas? It was almost like saying you didn't love Sora? How could you not?

Yukita nodded in uderstanding, and glanced at the T.V. "Axel you don't have to do anything.....That was a test for you and Roxas to get together. If you weren't willing to hurt Roxas that meant something. And now you understand your own feelings more....."

"You were helping me?" Axel asked, a bit lost.

Yukita nodded. "I won't lie to you. I want Sora to be with Riku. I can't imagine anyone who would take care of Sora better; who could please him and love him so much. My husband deserted me a long time ago....I want to die seeing Sora happy. I want to die knowing he's with someone I trust and love as much as him. By helping you, I can now focus on him....I wanted you to find someone just for you if Sora wouldn't have you. You deserve the best too Axel"

Axel felt such warmth out of that. It was mother love, somethign he ahd never known. It was touching, and somewehere he trusted this women-Sora's mom- more than he had trusted his adopted mom. He smiled warmly, and placed his hand over hers.

"Wow....That's a lot of thinking...and planning..So what are you going to do about Sora? How will you let him realize that he has feelings for Riku?" Axel asked, "I wanna help you too"

Yukita smiled at him. "I was thinking of-"

RING-RING

"Oh wait a sec" Axel watched as she picked up the phone.

"Hello? Oh hi Amora!! Huh? ......What did you just do?!"

Axel listened attentively.

"No you didn't!! Amora...Oh My Gosh!!," Yukita broke into laughter nearly dropping the receiver out of her hands.

Hm? What just happend? Axel wondered....

About two hours of watching Cartoons did he get his answer.

"So.....Amora slapped Kairi. The preppy b***h right? Why?"

Yukita laughed again. "Well we got an interesting phone call last night by a girl named Aerith. She said Riku was seeing her and that they were together, but that it might not be the case because Kairi blabs like hell....so she wanted us to understand and tell Sora. Amora was boling with rage last night......and she won't ask Riku anything until tonight. So she wanted to get her rage out.....and the best person to do it too was-"

"Kairi. Nice." Axel commented, laughing as well.

"Yes I'm happy about that, but Riku's gonna get it........See I'm not mad because I trust Riku has a reason that has to do with my Sora. If he dated her and used my Sora well.......Let's just say he better prepare his grave. However Amora is furious. Like shaking with rage, but now she feels somewhat better. Having slapped her and all."

Axel snickered. "I'd be happy too. She's always eavesdropping and nosey. I hate her...but I try to charm her, and it works."

Axel looked at the time: 2:45.

"Your a bad little boy Axel, skipping school to hang-out with your ex-crushs mom....."

"Oh you wanted me too, and you know it...." Axel said, in a winking tone.

Yukita poked him. "I think you want me Sir Axel."

Axel stared at her. Sir Axel? No she couldn't have known about his dream.....

YUkita grinned and said nothing more. "You should go now and pick Roxas up. Come here if you wnat to, okay?"

Axel got up, and nodded, before he left in his own car to pick up Roxie-Poo.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Sure Roxas had wnated to listen.....but three hours wasn't funny.

"Sora did you let him explain? There might be a reason to why he dated Kairi...." Roxas offered.

"I didn't let him explain. What's there to explain?! I mean, why would he date Kairi? Give me one reason...."

"He wants to kill her."

"Why he replaced me?"

"He wants to kill her to show he loves you a lot."

"How would that prove he loves me?"

"He'd kill anyone for you...."Roxas sang, hoping this would help Sora.

Sora blushed slightly. "A better eason that doesn't have to do with any killing......"

Now he had to think. "Maybe he wanted to make you jealous......."

"Why? That's stupid."

"So....you would be jealous and maybe get so tired and enraged that you'd tear your clothes, kiss him passionately, and ....have a sweet night."

Sora was blushing like crazy. The idea of jealousy kinda worked, but that....that.....

"And don't tell me you don't like that idea. You blushign just means your thinking and embarrssed 'cause you like it. So now....that your all red I think I'm scared of you......"

Sora punched his arm, and pouted. "That's so not ture...."

"Riiight. Anyways I'd let Riku talk and explain before jumping to your "Angry" state or doing anything drastic...."

Maybe I should Sora thought, feeling a bit guilty now that there might be a slim chance that Riku hadn't used him. He doubted it, but...a slim chance was there.

He looked at Mr.Cloud who was busy talking to Mr.Leon. The rumour was those two were interested in one another and Sephiroth wasn't happy. They liked each other. Mr.leon kept coming in the class asking for something, and then Cloud would chat a bit with him (in other words flirting) and the cycle would happen each day. Everyone knew it'd happen, but no one really cared because that meant no homework for the night.

Suddenly the phone rang, interrupting the conversation the teachers were having.

"What's up?" Cloud said, and listened. "Oh okay then. I'll tell him."

"Sora. The office wnats to talk to you. Sounds urgent"

Sora panicked now. Why woudlt he office talk to him? He hadn't done anything wrong as far as he knew....unless they discovered the-Riku sucks!- sign in the boys bathroom was written by him.

"Luck Sora....Hope they don't, like, like, suspend you....." Roxas teased, and waved.

After a few agnosing minutes Sora made it. "Hi I'm Sora, I was called here for something urgent....."

He could see it now: Mother died, Grandma died, Aunt died.

"In there sweetie." The office lady pointed, smiling.

Sora walked inside, but froze the minute he saw what he did.

His half-cousin , Rikku was seated on a leather seat with his mom, and Riku's mom. Oh no someone did die.......

"Sora, honey soemthign has happend......" his mother was whispering.

"W-What?" Tears were already forming.

"I'll tell him," Rikku said silently (which was beyond her way of talking), and hugged him. "Little cousin...it's Riku."

"Riku?! What happend to him.....?"

Sora bit his lip.

"He was in a car accident......"

"I wish you would die!!"

I wish the world would die now.....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


There you go. It was long I hope, and satisfying? Good?

Do I get cookies? *puppy-eyes*

The date. That will be coming up in my next Chappy I swear. As well as other events.

A lot more has been introduced but I do hope you liked it, and that this Chappy was as good as the others.

I plan to write a mini chappy to this. which explains the 9-1 at the beginning. A 9-2 will be done as well.

So did you like it? Love it? I hope the first part fot his Chappy was good.
 

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LaLunaLupe

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:13 pm


Oh... My... Gosh. Trama much? Yes, indeed. Rivetting as usual. I'll do the next one after your part two. I've got some thoughts.
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