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 Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:31 pm
I suck. The only amazing time i was good when me and ciara battled and the torture I caused made me soooo happy ><
I mean the battle rp
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:33 pm
-huggles David-
I will be finished with it in a moment, could I get some feedback maybe from you guys?
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:34 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:35 pm
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:36 pm
Natures Radical I suck. The only amazing time i was good when me and ciara battled and the torture I caused made me soooo happy ><
walk into a village alone, and threaten the entire village
Kage included, and people would back down. If you'd quit being
lazy, you could be the same Corey I remember from SY
I use to look up to you bro...
Jason - Boi don't be snapping your fingers at me! Is you crazy?!
-eye roll-
-huggles Dallas-
By the by; I didn't quit either. I'm sure you'll win, but I
sent a request anyway. -shrugs-
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:37 pm
*gets ready to j*zz my pants from Dallas's RP* xD
COREY GET THEM PEOPLE PRONTO! We need a damn good and ACTIVE akatuski.
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:42 pm
Everyone, I did not know to send it in, so I posted in the actual forum, so if you want to read it, it is there.
-huggles Daivd-
I am really happy that you are still trying! I hope you do your best and I hope you are proud of your post. biggrin
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:47 pm
... it's double the length of my post. emo
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:47 pm
Lmao, all the Boxing applicants should post their sample...
COME ON HARU, LETS POST OUR SAMPLES TOO!
-runs around chat flailing arms wildly-
Naw jk lol.
I was proud of mine... Until I read you're sample... crying
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:48 pm
Erm. Sorry guys.
I thought it was a good sample.
Emotion, Pain, loss, anger, revenge.
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:50 pm
*sits in corner with back to everyone* I'm never gonna be club captain...
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:50 pm
It was an awesome sample...
Your sample put mine to shame. I should post it just so you
can see what I mean... crying
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:52 pm
What might be worse is that, that was my first real post feeding off of only myself. I am used to feeding off of others posts in fights and Rp's because I always RP with other humans. That was my first time doing one that large alone, that was not training to learn a technique like in HV.
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:57 pm
This was my post...  Geez, didn't these guys give up? Louise felt like she had been running forever down these hallways and she could hear them still coming. Okay, so perhaps charging at a group had not been the smartest thing to do but what else could she do? Those dang eggheads in the science club would have probably been content to think up a plan and wait around to get noticed. A sharp turn came up ahead, Louise of course skidded and fell right on her a** trying to make it. That was actually probably a stroke of good luck since a Hunter soared above her, right where her head and body would have been. Of course the damn thing landed on it's feet but Louise quickly scrambled up. With one good punch and the nearby wall, all that was left of the thing's head was a smashed green smear and shattered bone. Infection was not a big problem with punching, her lucky leather gloves had not failed her yet whether through bite or through slime. No time to gloat over her victory though, she could hear more of those Hunters screeching and others coming down the way. Sighing, quite annoying and wishing she could just stand her ground, Louise darted for the nearest staircase and ran up them. If she had the time, she might of been able to bring the staircase down and slow down a few of them. Slowly and almost tipping over, she ran into a class room and locked the door. Of course since that would not work, she easily moved large metal cabinets and tables in front of the door to bar it. That might work for a little while until a tank came along. This room had windows so the best option was to either jump down or climb up. Grabbing a chair, she smashed the glass and looked out below. Seemed like there were a couple but they just looked like Strikers. Grinning, she got on the ledge of the window and jumped out, doing her best to aim. Of course, it was easy to fall and luckily she landed right on top of a Striker and smashed his head open with her fist. Two more, they had their weapons out but no way was Louise worried. Still grinning, she ripped out the dead Striker's leg bone just above the knee. "Oh, leg bone's connected to the... head bone!" sang Louise, going in and smashing the thick bone against one Striker's head. Then the other one came in with a plank of wood and hit her on the head. "Ow! Mother-!" that earned him a femur bone right upside the head and her fist smashing it to paste. Panting, quite angry at being hit, she started running, knowing she had to keep moving.
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Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:59 pm
-RP Sample- Raoh sprinted down the dark corridors of Kyoto High School, swiftly cutting to the left, following yet another hallway shrouded in darkness. 'The hell are all the lights when ya' need em'?' Raoh contemplated to himself. The horrid moans of the undead were just behind him now, as he dove into an open classroom door and closed it behind himself. He breathed heavily, in and out, at a vigorous pace, pressing his entire body weight against the door. He knew it would be but a matter of time before the zombies tore through the wood and came in after him, but what could he do under such circumstances?
He looked around the room frantically for any weapon he could use, fore there were far too many of "Them" piling up on the opposite side of the door for him to simply fight. He scanned the room, his vision shifting from left to right, yet unfortunately unless the boy could turn chalk erasers into a weapon he was s**t out of luck. Through the small, square shaped Plexiglas window, Raoh could see the outline of well over ten zombies cluttered at the door. "s**t!" He cursed to himself in a panicked manner. He was completely shut in, completely trapped, and completely surrounded...
It was at that moment Raoh realized what he must do, and it was at that moment that he knew he wouldn't make it out alive. He inhaled a breath of air, before exhaling deeply. As he did so, he buried his right and left hand's into his pockets and withdrew two roll's of hand wraps. A single tear ran down his face, as he quickly applied a roll of wraps to each his hands. With that he turned to the door, it was time to end this once and for all. He backed himself to the opposite end of the room, pressing his back against the wall.
Then without warning, Raoh sprinted toward the door in a burst of speed, bringing his right fist back as he moved gracefully across the hard tile floor. He thrusted his fist forward with immense power, making direct contact with the surface of the wooden door. Upon collision, Raoh's fist managed to shatter the door into nothing more than a pile of toothpicks on the ground. Raoh winced in pain, fore his hand was now broken in three places; his wrist, and his middle and index fingers. This would have surly been the end of any ordinary person, but Raoh was far from ordinary...
As his clinched hand went through the door, Raoh stumbled into the hallway, and into a horde of the undead, mainly those of the "striker" type. Suddenly he was overcome with a surge of energy, as his eye's widened, and the pain in his hand numbed. He had boxed long enough to know he was experiencing an adrenaline rush, though at that moment that was the very least of his concerns. Raoh brought both his right and left hands to eye level, placing them just before his face. He then began to swiftly bob and weave between the creatures. He counted a total of ten zombies.
Without another thought, Raoh moved his head laterally and beneath the initial zombies grasp, followed by him bending his legs slightly, as he simultaneously shifted his body just to the left. He was running on pure boxing instinct now. As he moved beneath the zombies clutches, he extended his legs, and brought his right fist up and forward, as he delivered an overhand right cross to the side of the creatures temple. This caused the monstrosity to fall to the ground and begin to shake violently. He swayed right and left, through the horde constantly delivering anywhere between three to six combination strikes in rapid succession. 'Left hook, knockout. Right hook, knockout. One, two combination. Right hook knockout...' He mentally repeated to himself.
The final striker zombie grabbed the back of Raoh's shirt as he stood over a different creature, using his left hand to hold the creature up, while smashing it's face with his right fist. "AHHAHH!" He screamed, as he instinctively thrusted his left elbow backward. His elbow collided with the creatures chin, knocking it high off the ground. Raoh then turned swiftly and took his forearm into the zombies midsection, thus taking it to the ground with impressive force. He fell to knee's, completely exhausted, but he had done it. He stared at the bodies on the ground in utter disbelief. He struggled to stand, and began limping down the hall. Suddenly the ground began to shake beneath him...
Raoh turned and peered down the shadowed corridor. Just then a "Charger" type sped around the corner at the far end of the hall, slamming into a wall as it did so. Raoh sighed, he knew it wouldn't be that easy. He began to run in the opposite direction, the sound of the creature literally running through solid brick echoed throughout the halls. The "Charger" emitted a bloodcurdling howl, almost ear shattering. Raoh soon came to a dead end, as he turned to face the monster. Sure enough it came charging directly through a wall only but a few feet from the boy. He couldn't run, nor could he hide, his only option was to buy himself some time to escape...
Raoh sprinted toward the beast at full speed, as it slammed it's large club into the ground. Luckily Raoh barely evaded by sliding between the zombies leg's. Confused, the monster looked around unaware of his current position. From behind, Raoh jumped onto the creatures back, which in return caused the beast to begin to buck wildly. He hung on for dear life with his left arm, while simultaneously striking the back of the monsters head continuously with his right hand. Finally after a few moments of this, the creature bucked hard enough to send Raoh flying into the air. He hit the ground with a hard thud. This was his chance. As the "Charger" looked around slightly stunned, Raoh took off running. Problem was that at this range Raoh would be unable to outrun the beast. At the far end of the hall was a large window. 'It's my only chance...' He convinced himself. Raoh continued toward the third story window, the "Charger" right on his a**. Then without warning, Raoh made a desperate leap for the window, as he crashed through the glass...
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