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DENIED. That sample had nothing to do with the sharingan, and it wasnt even original. YOU have to be using it. And give us a damn good RP sample, this is the sharingan.

Ugh. What's with everyone wanting the Sharingan?

Im sorry, but i dont understand fully what you want? I read every thing on your clan page. And put it here in my own words?- i did put more in the description than just casting their spirit out. I dont fully understand what im doing wrong.

Rpc Name: Sparrow Yamanaka
Village: Cloud
Rank: academy student.
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Yamanaka clan
What you know about the clan/bl: They usually run a flowers shop in the leaf village, and they use their mind as their clan jutsu, they can send out their spirit to control another, and they can make an enemy kill its own kin. If used right, this clan can be very useful, then again all clans are <3!... 'and they can use the body and utilize their sensory information?'- that was all your clan description had for the Yamanaka clan.
Rp Sample: Row Yamanaka walk up to the base of the tower where all of the crew of POTS were located. She peered around the base of the tower making sure no one saw her on this warm sumer day. The sun light gave away her blonde hair like a beacon so she found a scarf to tie her hair up in. The heat caused beads of sweat to roll down her fore head. After several minutes of frantically searching for a door way, she gave up. "I know my target is up there, but there is no entrance to this tower, so how do i get-" just then as she was looking around she spotted a bird flying close to the top of the tower. "Man i hate it when i have a sick idea," just then Row jump into a bush at the base of the tower and hide herself among the leaves. She concentrated on the bird for several second concentrating her chakra. "Shintenshin no Jutsu - Mind Body Change Technique" she whispered as her mind was sent out of her body racing toward the bird, in seconds her mind took control of the birds weak mind. And now she saw with its eyes. She saw her body, slumped down well hidden in the bush. Looking up and gliding in a left banked circle she saw through the window at the top of the tower. She could see Lance sitting at a full office desk surrounded by servants. Lance was eating bon-bons and hundreds of cookies, maybe a blizzard from dairy queen or two.
The over confident and over weight Lance wont know what hit him. Using the bird, Row flew to pick up a mirror and placed it so the angled the window from Row's body position. After everything was set, Row let the bird back into its own mind as she went back into hers. The image in the small mirror was too tiny for Row to see so she would have to use a different plan. After she cursed for a few seconds, Row sprinted across the street to the tallest building parallel to the window Lance was at. Row sprinted to window found Lance still gorging himself with sweets but this was Rows's chance to complete her mission. "Shinranshin no Jutsu - Mind Derangement Technique!" (Shinranshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which is used to confuse the targets body into attacking a nearby ally. The ninja will form the needed hand seal and then send their spirtual energy of confusion at his opponent. Though the opponent is mentally aware of his action, he is unable to stop his body from carrying out the attack.) Lance jumped up from his desk, with his huge belly smacking into Jade-effectivly crushing her skulls, killing her instantly. Lance turned and drew his sword, slashing at Zane, cutting deep into his face, causing Zane's tiny brain to run out true the nose and mouth. The rest of the crew caught on to what Lance was doing so they started to fight back. And after several seconds of fighting, Lance (Row's Target) hung lifeless from his entrails out of the window from the tower.... <3!

Is this okay? Or do you want me to re-do my RP sample.

Alright the description is better Sparrow, though in the RP, when you use the Mind Derangement technique, the description of the technique says it it forces the opponent to attack a nearby Ally, not the plural form of allies. Call me a grammar natzi, but this means that you can force them to only attack 1 ally, and you had Lance attack me and Zane!

{Any particular reason you chose us two e.e?}

You know, based off of the description of the jutsu, I couldn't really say...I suppose you could shoot them off in rapid succession!

Tell meh who it is! I shall hunt them down with my Akatsuki character! No way my head wold be crushed so easily!!! Nor is Zane's brain small!!!!

{It was funny, just odd you picked us two, seeing as how I don't even know you e.e}

rofl I wish i could tell you, but maybe he is actually part of the Akatsuki... redface

So it is possible to shoot more than one?

does it mean , im accepted?

*Claps hands like a child!*
I get to use my awethum banner!~<3

{it's not my fault im that popular...I shall point fingers at...GREG!!!}

You can make some custom jutsu for the Yamanaka clan and submit it, if you wish. There really arent that many canon Yamanaka jutsu, so we work with what we got.

And jade, I didnt do it. No really, I didnt. Please stop pointing, I wouldnt hurt anyone :'(

On a side not, your banner pales in comparison to Koga!