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Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:16 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:26 pm
[[reposted as requested]]
As Mr. Howard held Gerard back, Phoenix jumped back to Lexi’s head as she followed Mrs. Howard. Lexi was happy to hear that Mr. Thatcher would be okay, and smiled a little herself as Mrs. Howard pointed out the similarity between her name and Alex’s. She had noticed earlier, but she didn’t think about getting confused because…well it’s hard to get confused on one’s own name. She then tried to answer the older woman’s questions “I don’t know for sure…” She started picking up silverware and setting it out, frowning as she thought out loud. “…He went into the tall grass, then I heard gunshots and saw sparks and he didn’t come back out. Then we were attacked by a pinsir and an electabuzz. Gerard was dealing with the electabuzz when he found a dead guy…he had the same forehead mark as Alex and had been on the bad end of something powerful...” Lexi grimaced at the memory of the body. “I think it was probably the dead guy…I don’t know if anything Jacob had could do that kind of damage, but…”
Rex was having a great time watching the plates fill with food as Lexi talked, his anticipation obvious, and Phoenix was helping out by carrying bunches of silverware The atmosphere was casual, but Lexi still felt like she was in the hot seat as she tried to continue explaining. “As far as where I found Alex…” She took a deep breath as she tried to find the right words again. Time to cross that bridge… She wasn’t going to lie but the truth seemed so…ouch “This is going to sound either really strange or really stupid…I’m pretty sure Jacob, or at least Gerard, already thinks I’m a total idiot for bringing her along after this…” With the table set, she walked over to where Mrs. Howard was standing. “But …I stopped for a stretch break, went to check out a noise, and she attacked me…I know it sounds stupid to bring someone like that along but a few things happened that made it make sense. At the time she was high on what had to be close to an overdose of heroin, and some people I count among my friends have attacked me after getting high…” She looked at Alex, who looked like she wanted to disappear, and tried to give her an encouraging smile. Yes the woman had tried to kill Lexi, but it was all over a misunderstanding and no one was hurt by it in the end…she didn’t deserve all the blame anyways…Lexi then closed her eyes and tilted her head down…She had been wondering about this next part for a while, ever since she had run into the two strange men in the forest. “and she told me a story that sounded rather familiar… Have you ever heard of a man who calls himself Reverend Beati?” With her last line, she looked up at the white-haired woman next to her, her head tilted and curiosity on her face.
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:27 am
((Here goes. Thanks again for patience during the crisis. As a reminder: we are down to three (3) days before Richard Allbrite's new writer is determined and have one (1) submitted post for him. Anyway, I got most everyone. Those I missed, I'll reach you tomorrow.))
Mrs. Howard listened carefully to everything Lexi said while she finally got food on the table, laughing appreciatively as even Phoenix did her part. She furrowed an eyebrow at Lexi's story of Thatcher's disappearance into the grasses and glanced back down a long hallway at where her husband was questioning Gerard. The old man met her eyes, there seemed to be some communication, and they both went back to listening. "Attacked you? This little thing?" Billie chuckled. "Oh, the things recreational drugs will do to people. Allen, do you remember the time-" she started to call, the cut herself off with a smiling hum.
When Alexis mentioned Beati's named, she froze. Very briefly. A pan of casserole almost fell from her hands, but she got it to the table in time. "Reverend Beati, you say?" she asked, loudly enough for her husband to hear. Immediately, Allen began pushing Gerard out the door and asking him to get rid of the radio, and then to come right back. Mrs. Howard was no longer smiling.
"That man almost had the two of us killed." Alex flushed a deep scarlet and backed into a corner of the kitchen, rubbing her arms nervously. "I think the man you found was sent to confirm we were dead. Luckily, we had some warning." She held a carving knife dangerously in one hand and sent a significant glance at Alex, who cringed, before beginning to cut slices of a hunk of ham and distribute them. "Dr. Terrian, in fact. Poor, poor man, but he saved our lives."
"Young lady, you be careful," Allen warned the emaciated girl. "I don't know what you're up to or why any of these young people trust you, but if you betray them, I will find you." The glint in his eye said that that was a promise.
Both doctors let the threat hang in the air for a bit, before Billie said, "Well, let's sit down to some lunch, whenever Gerard gets here. She did so, and her husband followed suit. Alex did not.
"I... I'm fine, really, I'll just... I've already eaten, and I-"
"Nonsense!" Mrs. Howard exclaimed. "Get over here, sit down, and eat, young woman. Everyone deserves a place at the dinner table." While Alex began a slow, shifting path to an open chair, Billie took the opportunity to ask, "Alexis, about how far would you say the body Gerard found was from Mr. Thatcher?"
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Richard laughed. He actually laughed, and it sounded genuine. "Hah! Excellent point. And survival instincts, too - I think you'll be fun to babysit." The older man revved his bike and roared down the small, debris-littered streets, Abe in tail.
After a few seconds of biking through fire-blasted city landscape, Richard, inquisitive by nature of his profession, could not help but shout over his shoulder, "So what's your goal, anyway? I know you want to help that girl, but why?" Seeing a member of the Exterminant guard emerge from a building, he whipped out a pistol, fired once, and didn't watch his target fall. "Seems pretty much out of your way." As they went, a few more guards made their presence known. Richard called a few by name before decommissioning them. "We'll have a contingent after us pretty soon, by the way."
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Those standing watch in the base of the Exterminant hideaway stopped thinking about other things. Every last one of them was hanging on each individual syllable that left their Orcale's lips. They glowed as her reassurance washed through them; this was it. An affirmation that theirs was the proper faith. That their God was real. That their God knew about them. That their God cared about them.
When Elian "fainted," the asker's gun clattered to the ground and he hesitantly caught her, his face immediately going white as he held her. It was as though her were holding a piece of the finest of blown glass, her gently-colored robes draped across his stark, black uniform and armor, offering some kind of variation to the blandness they day-by-day ignored for their duty. And then, that very blandness became a target for the presence Elian had seen.
Elian was caught and encouraged to stand on her own by invisible pressures while the six watchmen crumpled to the ground. The one who had been holding her lasted the longest, a confused, pained look in his eyes as they met hers; but no one can fight the strength of a muted kadabra. Solomon, without a target audience to hide from, was revealed. He did not communicate. His only acknowledgment that Elian even existed was that his eyes followed her movements; there was little more.
A few moments later, a keypad on the door clicked six times. A complex series of deadbolts and other locking mechanisms could be heard coming apart between the double-doors. The black steel shuddered in response, and then another four clicks sounded, a last metallic clang echoed out into the hallway, and a wave of dark ether sent the three psychic-oriented creatures to the ground. Amidst the damping, oppressive force of this veritable hurricane of ether, Elian could see, in her blurred vision, an odd, triangular construct in the middle of what turned out to be a very small room. That room had a thick shell of ether holding it tight, locking out any further psychic activity.
The construct was relatively low to the ground, perhaps rising four feet at its highest point. More than that, it was white, and had three silver, almost blue protrusions near the center, where the three parts met, and three more on the outer edge of each piece. For a brief moment, her vision cleared enough to see that... the white portions almost seemed soft, and each portion was supported on four legs, almost like... they were animals.
After what seemed like an eternity, one of the guards that had fallen - in fact, the one that had caught her - stood up, and with a sense of mild urgency and possibly mild discomfort from the windy chill exiting the frigid room. He had no trouble moving about. When he was done, he very casually picked up his rifle and aimed it at the three. A close look, though, showed that despite the smooth, practiced movements, he was very nearly on the verge of tears. Elian, Solomon, and Aislin had no choice but to stay where they were - after an assault like that, it would have been a miracle for Aislin to stand.
"Impostors. Prove who you are. NOW!"
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:00 am
Gerard obeyed the doctor silently, going out the door, starting his motorcycle, and roaring down the road, past the house from the direction he had come. He switched the radio back on, leaving it open as he rode for about ten or fifteen minutes. A good ten miles from the house, he stopped his motorcycle and walked another half-mile into the tree, leaving the radio in a small hollow at the base of a tall sycamore.
That done, he came back to the road. He felt an odd shift in his backpack and opened it to find the paper-wrapped TM. Feeling oddly homesick, he unwrapped it and hefted it in his hand. It had the number 29 stenciled on one side. Gerard remembered his TMs; 29 was gave the ability to use a powerful psychic blast. Justice couldn't learn it, but...
Gerard let Guts out of his Pokeball. The poliwag was at first excited, but tried to act aloof when it realized that Gerard had let it out. Still, he came over to it and placed the TM beside it. He hit the small button to activate it, and it began to glow brightly. Guts looked at it briefly before leaning over and nudging it with his nose - and then the glowing was done. Gerard knew that Guts had now absorbed the ability from the Technical Machine.
The excited poliwag danced about before stopping before Gerard, who watched in silent amusement. After a few seconds where Guts' expression was unreadable, the little water-type nodded once, letting Gerard know that it thought he was all right. Laughing, the young man picked the pokemon up and let it ride with him as he took his motorcycle back to the Doctors' house.
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 7:30 am
She saw the older woman's questioning eyes and replied, "My mother's favorite flower was the rose. She had a rose bush in the backyard a long time ago. But there was an attack..." she admitted painfully, "so to see this rose...it means a lot."
She tried to busy herself by reaching out for two plates and adding food onto them; it was not that she was a hungry girl, but that she was making a plate for Evie. Evie barked her thanks as Juno set the plate down where the little pokemon could reach. "Hope you enjoy, Evie," she murmured. The two females were eating the same food that the Light of the World was eating - Juno was sure that the food the leader was eating was the food that was the safest for the strangers to eat.
Before she could take a bite of her own food, the Indian woman had asked the two travelers a question. Eh. I don't know if it's right to tell. However, Paul had answered the question easily, so Juno would have to do the same. "I live in Glenville. I was asked by the Oaks to go to Riverdale to send some information to Dr. Bogdan and then return to Glenville with whatever he had to give back." She chuckled nervously, "I'm just a plain ol' gofer."
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 6:11 pm
Lexi had chuckled a little when Mrs. Howard just missed saying something that was likely rather embarrassing, but hearing about what had happened while she was gone made her freeze solid…he tried to have them killed?!... When she had asked the question, Lexi was expecting, at worst, to bring up some worn out argument between theories, like those that had often littered scientific debates in the past--especially when religion got involved. She had been thinking about the arguments she had heard went on about Instead she had opened up a real can of weedle. The girl was shaking again as she stared with wide eyes at the knife in the older woman’s hand. The Reverend hadn’t seemed threatening when she had met him on the road, and his fight with Dr. Terrian had almost seemed like a joke, but he was most definitely a threat…
She was glad to hear about Terrian helping the Howards too because that was another strike against the troublesome hypotheses Beati had put forward earlier, thought she wondered why Mrs. Howard said he was a ‘poor, poor man.’ Her wondering was cut short when Mr. Thatcher then turned on Alex and Rex started growling. “Rex…” Lexi warned, shaking her head. The houndour slowly backed down, but still glared at the older man from under the table.
In the awkward silences that followed the threat and the move to the table, Lexi too was wondering why the man had suddenly become much more aggressive towards Alex, not to mention how he had been acting differently ever since she had come back, but she had only been around him for an hour, so she knew she shouldn’t be so surprised. Even after sitting down, the girl stared off into space, thinking about how crazy this day had been and trying to sort out the stories. She was pretty sure by this point that she was incredibly lucky to still be in one piece. I’ve lost track of how many times over I should be toast by now and it’s only lunch time A small, slightly sarcastic smile crossed her face as she realized how much that sounded like some characters she had seen in Sci-fi books, then the smile left quickly as she remembered that real life wasn’t like any book.
Buried in her thoughts, she didn’t hear Mrs. Howard’s question so much as realize everyone was looking at her for an answer and think back to try and figure out what question she had heard. “huh…oh…umm, about 7 meters..” She answered, blinking as she tried to get back to the present.
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:35 am
As her body was held up, Elian knew that Solomon was managing to take care of the guards, but as the woman opened her eyes, she met a stare that instantly weighed her heart in guilt. She didn't have long to speak, but she managed "You're going to be okay..." Before the man fell to the ground, and Elian straightened to support her weight. Carefully, she knelt down to check the man's pulse, fearing the worst, but she was pleasantly surprised to see that the man was simply knocked unconscious, or put into some state of rest, which, ushered a small smile from Elian as she turned towards Solomon.
"Thank you." Elian spoke softly as she stood up straight, then, snapped her gaze to the door as the series of locks started to lift. Unable to do much but step back, she took a moment to glance down at Aislin, who, also backed away, still appearing as tired and drained as Elian felt.
"Solomon... Do you know what's-" Elian silenced as the final -CLANG- echoed through the hallway, signaling that the dark door had finished unlocking. Elian moved about one step, before suddenly, the door threw itself open and the air suddenly felt as if it were crushing her. Just as Solomon and Aislin had, Elian collapsed to the ground, barely catching herself on her hands and knees, but with the weight of the ether she even found that holding herself up was a challenge. Eventually, she settled to rest on her elbows, practically laying low to the ground as if that would shelter her from the terrible feeling of the dark ether. Elian's vision started fading, blurring and going dark as Aislin started to feel weary under the strain. Unable to even speak, Elian simply squinted her eyes at the strange shapes beyond the door, her mind reeling to understand what it was she was seeing. Only when the recognizable sound of a loading rifle rang in the air, did Elian look up at the barrel pointed at her. The sight nearly froze her in fear, but this was no time to meet this man with silence. Elian couldn't see the man's tears, but the patterns in his voice were enough for the blind woman to read, he was distressed, regardless of his calculated movements.
"I... I'm sorry." Elian started, having to pause to allow herself a breath or two, each word feeling as if it were stealing the precious air she needed to withstand the weight of the ether.
"I needed to know... What was behind the door..." A frustrated breath left her lips as she paused once more, wishing she could just explain herself in one go, but such an effort would have been futile.
"I follow the things that tell me to follow... I never know what I'll be lead to next, but I do know that if I ignore the things that call out to me, I'll lose something important." Elian paused once more, taking a desperate breath as she allowed her body to calm. Only when the dizzyness faded, did she dare to speak again.
"I know you're scared of all of this... Truth is, I'm scared too."
Elian couldn't muster the strength to say anymore, tears gathering in her eyes at the horrendous thought of death, meeting the three of them, just like that. What had she done? They may have discovered something important, but at what cost? Feeling her mind start to fade, Elian tried to beg, to plea for their lives, but no words left her lips as she laid her head down, slipping into unconsciousness.
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Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:39 am
Abe stayed on Richard's tail, watching as the bodies fell around him. He pulled up beside Richard so that he could hear him shout. "No kidding!" He thought about it for a second. "Truth is...she interests me! No! Not like that! Not to mention the fact that if she fulfills her purpose, lots of people will die, the Ether may go back to the source, and the source may explode! So there's a chance we could all die! I kind of enjoy living!" An Exterminant pulled up on Abe's other side on a motorcycle and began to draw a weapon. Abe whipped his cane out and brought it down on the guy's other hand, causing him to let go of the handle and spinning the bike into a wipe-out. "If you want to look at it humanely, though, she saved my life! Least I can do is return the favor!"
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:10 am
((One (1) day until Richard is judged. JUDGEMENT IS NIGH. Anyway. Happy Saturday! (kind of) ))
Jñan nodded appreciatively when Paul answered, well understanding his fear. She seemed confused when he mentioned the Minutemen, though that confusion was overridden when she heard Juno's explanation. Her eyes expanded to roughly the size of the plate off of which she was eating. A range of emotions flickered across her face, from shock to awe to adulation to admiration to fear to uncertainty to determination to her warm, caring smile of before.
"It is an honor to have with us a member of the great professor's admirable work, Juno." She tilted her head slightly to the girl in a bow. "A great honor, I assure you."
McFadden, meanwhile, after laughing heartily at Paul's attempts to intimidate him, had placed himself at a seat from which he could watch the three speak with one another. He was by no means an experienced lip-reader, but he knew enough to make out "professor" and connect it to "oak" from earlier. That meant... He grinned and hardened his eyes. The Light would not be able to detain this girl, if she was on a mission for the "esteemed" professors Oak. It was time to take this place down.
Jñan was by now chatting amiably with Juno, attempting to extract from her and Paul what the upper world was getting to be like. Apparently, reports from her own scouts were littered with oddly connoted wordings about the "Darwinistic idiocy" of the cities, although the disappearance of the monetary system was a tremendous plus. She became so interested in Juno that she appeared to forget entirely about Paul - this was evident when Willam, who had meandered a curving path to get behind the veteran, whispered in his ear, "You know this place is a lie, don't you? Come on - I'll show you your guns." Jñan took no notice - it was up to question whether she had noticed at all. Willam pulled his head away and began walking away, heading towards one of the pathways away from the main "room."
Lowering her voice a bit, though it was by no means a reaction to Willam, Jñan leaned a little closer to Juno and asked, "Would you mind accompanying me somewhere less crowded? I have questions that are not suited for all ears, the answers for which I would be ever grateful to you."
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Demanding more and more from the engine, Richard grinned widely, far more than his static smile. He laughed again. "Makes sense to me. And you're not too much older than she is! Though I guess it'd be tough to hide things from a telepathic woman!
"As for the explosion, the Reverend believes wholeheartedly, and this is scientifically based, so don't doubt it - the Reverend believes that all those 'may's' are 'will's.'" The number of guards was reaching uncomfortable densities as they began virtually pouring out of holes in the ground, some getting a chance to fire before one of the two bikers could take them down.
Richard turned his head all the way over his shoulder to meet Renwald's eyes. He had a strange twinkle in his own. "Abe, my boy, do you like things hot?" As he spoke, Allbrite reached a hand inside his pants pocket and squeezed something within. A pulse of warmth radiated through those present when he did.
At first, that was all. The Exterminant military continued to arise. A bullet went through Richard's leg. A few glanced off the bikes, nearly tipping them over. More on motorcycles were appearing, as though a swarm had been released from a nest; all of them were wearing black. They appeared to want Abe alive, although they didn't seem to have any preference for his physical condition. Richard, who might have winced at the wound (perhaps) was the bigger target. He threw away his first gun, making sure to knock out another gunner with it, and drew another from his pants leg, then took another bullet, this one to his arm. He grinned through the pain; a wicked grin. "This isn't over. This'll never be over." He patted the pokéball at his belt, as though reassuring David, somehow. "We aren't ready to die, Reverend," he whispered.
Then, Richard took both hands off the handles and thrust his arms to either side of him.
The place erupted in fire. Screams and shrieks dominated the soundscape as people were charred in seconds, munitions detonating in their clips or on belts, gas tanks exploding; but in a circle of protection around Abe and Richard, there was merely a warm, soothing heat. Embers drifted down from above, Richard's wounds closed up after the slugs popped out of them, and any fatigue felt lifted from the two of them.
Then, it was over. The screams, the roar of flame, the obscuring walls of seemingly sourceless infernos; gone. Richard, face turned away from Abe, bowed his head and closed his eyes briefly in thanks before opening them and swerving to avoid a chunk of debris.
"Well, you'll get your chance, looks like. Today's our lucky day, Abe," Richard called, seemingly unaffected. No one else surfaced. There was movement now and then from the customary holes in the ground, but no one dared surface; it was possibly some underground had also been killed, if the blackened arms hanging out of the occasional manhole were any indication. In a few short minutes, they were out of the blasted city, and on the open road towards Glenville.
((Sorry I didn't get to everyone. Gonna try something new - more frequent, shorter posts. If I start to neglect a particular party, let me know immediately. Doing all I can to make sure that doesn't happen, but circumstances can dictate misfortune at times. AP is updated!))
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 1:17 pm
Gerard entered the house as they were speaking, seating himself discreetly and listening with interest to the conversation. He politely helped himself to a bit of food as he waited to be brought into the talk.
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:33 pm
Paul had to physically resist the urge to curl his lip. "I'm not an idiot," he replied. "I know what you are, but I'll take the offer all the same." He stood quietly, glanced at Jñan to ensure she wasn't paying attention. If she was, he'd offer some cheap explanation, or allow McFadden to. Paul pursued McFadden, mentally preparing himself to defend himself, either by his own hands or by those of his charmander.
This was interesting. The thief had come to him first. How would this play out?
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:53 pm
As Elian spoke, the man with the gun trained on her shook vividly, tears forming at the corners of his eyes and beginning to track down his face. To see the Oracle in pain... but what if it wasn't the Oracle? She could be an impostor, but what impostor could have walked down here unimpeded? What impostor could have Solomon's assistance?
And she... "I never know what I'll be lead to next." She was as much caught up in this world as the rest of them. She was as much human as the rest of them, and the guard could see- he could see it! The struggle within her to reconcile her godliness with her humanness had to be a suffocating one. Only the real Oracle could feel that - and no one could fake her fatigue. To be sure, still keeping the gun trained on her unconscious body, he reached one of his sleeping comrades and released a xatu from within. Solomon's dead gaze never left the barrel of the gun while the stately bird scanned as well as it could in the oppressive environment and ensure Elian was unconscious. Satisfied, he recalled the bird and approached Elian's limp form.
He then knelt down and relinquished his gun before carefully, so as not to startle her, reaching his hands out to Aislin. "I won't hurt you. I need to get you two somewhere safe. Trust me." He smiled, hoping that his having just had a gun pointed at Aislin's mistress's head would be overridden by his genuine desire to help and no longer having the gun with him.
Solomon continued to watch, somehow maintaining his footing. Suddenly, he whipped his head up, having felt a pulse of ether from far above them. At roughly the same time, the two-way radio in the guards' ears began squawking with static and screams. The one kneeling winced. "What the hell was that? Are we under attack?" he demanded from his headset.
"Allbrite has activated an unknown ether source; it's gone now. So are the men sent to retrieve him."
"All of them?" he demanded. His military training was warring with his need to help Elian. His fellows were slowly getting up.
"Affirmative."
"Orders?"
"Stand fast. Oblivion will find them."
The guard grinned. So... they had released the Oblivion. "I thought that was to be reserved for Terrian himself."
"We have decided to send the good doctor a warning."
"Understood." With that, the guard gently rolled Elian over, picked up Aislin, and placed her on Elian's limp body before picking up that body and carrying her away.
Asleep, Elian once again felt herself drifting, as though among stars. The connection was more tenuous this time, as though at any moment, she may awaken. Once more, the greater, pulsing light of the mew was evident, still so far away that it seemed dimmer than the rest; this time, though, she felt she recognized it. As she floated, Aislin by her side, a second, also familiar presence made itself known; it was much closer, and seemed - if one could describe the other forms as spherical, for the sake of the visual - to be cut in half. It was a strange existence; an unnatural one, that was out of sync with the rest of the dreamscape.
"Elian? M'lady Elian, is that you?"
It was...
"This is Dr. Terrian; I know I don't seem it, but it's me, I swear." He sounded ecstatic. "I knew it! I knew there had to be a channel out of there; I was watching - that one psychic-type got out! I thought it was impossible; he should have died transporting the others, but he didn't, and it's because you-! Elian, you have contacted the Mew, haven't you? You have! I know you have! Tell me everything! Please." He seemed to sober, and with a shimmering of the odd plane they were in, his form could be seen, although it flickered steadily, as though he were fighting to stay there. "I've been waiting for a way to contact you. What have you learned?"
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"Seven meters?" Mrs. Howard confirmed, starting in on the meal and signaling the others to do the same. When Gerard entered, she showed him a plate and invited him to sit down with smile. "That's rather far away for Mr. Thatcher to have been knocked out, don't you think?"
An uncomfortably silence reigned for a few moments. The Howards ate and tried to pretend nothing was wrong while Alex did her best not to tear into the food in front of her. Her eyes flicked with lightning speed from either scientist, to Lexi, to the food, to Rex, back to the food while she began eating.
All of a sudden, Mrs. Howard set her silverware on her plate with a clang and folded her hands in front of her. "I want to offer my apology for both of us, Alexis, Alex, Gerard," she said, nodding at each of them in turn. "I know we appear less hospitable than we ought to be. An hour ago, Dr. Alex Terrian appeared in our house, picked up the four packs of dynamite that had been taped around our house, and told us goodbye, and that the dynamite was a gift from the Exterminant. Allen?"
The older gentleman mimicked his wife's movements and looked at the three children. "We don't know Dr. Terrian very well. We know of him. We know of his contributions to the scientific community. But we don't know him. So we could not trust that he wasn't lying to us. And then, once he had left, a small contingent of Exterminant assassins reached our home, apparently to ensure we had been 'taken care of.' Luckily, we have benefitted from the steady march of science, and were well prepared." He did not elaborate. "Even so, we were not unscathed. Billie very nearly lost Janis, and her dugtrio is in critical condition. So we wondered why Dr. Terrian would save us from an explosion, only to allow the Exterminant to kill us in a more personal manner. In short, we don't know who we can trust.
"I'm surprised that one fellow was left. I think he was back-up. I think there're people under the Exterminant left in layer over layer to make sure that we are all killed. That's why I think we need to get rid of Miss Alex as soon as possible. But she can certainly eat with us, first." He nodded at Alex with a purposeful stare, and she meekly dropped her eyes to her meal, her fork frozen on her plate. Billie was glaring at her from red-rimmed eyes. It was clear why she had handed the conversation over to her husband, now. "Based on what I've seen and what you have said, I think Mr. Thatcher killed your attacker as a ruse, knocked himself out with that gun he has, and assumed the pinsir and electabuzz would take care of you children. Luckily, he was wrong."
Alex seemed like she wanted to say something, but couldn't bring herself to open her mouth again. Mr. Howard noticed, and didn't react to her.
His wife dabbed at her eyes with her napkin before finally returning to eating while Allen finished with, "So please forgive us for sounding so formal all of a sudden. We're frightened for our lives, and for yours. If I were you, I would trust no one but the two of you and the Oaks." He looked significantly at Lexi and Gerard before he, too, went back to his meal, but didn't seem very interested in it. Instead, he looked at Gerard. "Mr. Gerard, why don't you tell us something about yourself? How's Glenville these days? I used to work there."
"We know you did, Allen; you tell everyone," Mrs. Howard muttered, clearly trying to make herself recover from her bitterness towards Alex and what the X on her forehead represented. He smiled at her, then turned his attention back to the boy.
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((One hour left to submit for Richard Allbrite; he currently has two (2) sample posts for judgment. Final judgment will be given tomorrow, when I am clear-headed enough to make the right decision ^^
Now then, I have a few comments that are, unfortunately, not directed at everyone, but nonetheless are best said through this medium. I want to start by saying that I am thoroughly impressed by the level of RP-ing you have all wielded during your time as Cinders. Having never been a part of a "literate/third-level/whatever" RP before, myself, I've been very happy with what I've seen thus far.
However, I want you to grow in this, and the best way is critique. I want to remind some of you that this is a third-level RP. As such, there are things you need to pay attention to.
First, you need to at the very least scan through every post. Don't read every one in detail if you don't want to, but you need to have some idea of what the other players are doing and what has happened to them so that you don't end up overriding one another; we're all better than that, here.
Second, your character represents an entire life, and a psyche; as such, (s)he needs to be developed. Some of you are very good about this; some of you are not. You don't need to explain why your character scratched his butt; but (s)he is a thinking creature. Let us -see- that.
Third, and perhaps most importantly, is that this is a group role play. Some of your characters are isolated; some are not. Those who are in groups: no one on this Earth totally ignores someone who is right next to them without really, really good reason. Being dead would be a sufficiently good reason to not at least think about those in your immediate proximity. Talk to one another. If you are all fighting the same enemy, you don't walk out of the battle and forget about it.
Fourth and finally, something that a lot of RP-ers suffer from: believability. Your characters are not infinitely experienced people. When an army attacks a city, when holograms show up - these are not everyday things. React accordingly.
Those are my comments. Thank you for reading them - paying attention to them will lead to AP, will lead to cool awesome things, will lead to fantasticness of epic proportions. You are all, honestly, really, really good writers. Show me more than that of which you are capable. And thank you all so much for playing thus far ^^ ))
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 1:21 pm
Lexi chewed her lip for a second, thinking about the distance between the body and Jacob. Yeah 7 meters was a ways, but he had been closer to the edge of the grass than the body was. “A little far, but it’s possible he didn’t pass out right away… He could have…”But she trailed off, sensing she was speaking into a black hole of sorts, and took a bite of her meal. It was the same food as last night, but this time around it wasn’t as good, and it had nothing to do with the food being a day old. She kept eating though the silence, not willing to turn down free food, but it was forced.
Then the couple began to explain and Lexi leaned back in her chair to listen. A can of weedle was right, she realized as Mr. Howard told them of the attack: A tangled mess that would wriggle out of your hand as soon as you thought you had a good hold and that was embedded with very sharp, very toxic spines. She breathed in sharply through her teeth hearing about Mrs. Howard’s pokemon, remembering Janis from earlier. That definitely explained why she hadn’t heard from either of the psychics earlier: with Janis hurt, it would probably take all of Sixlet’s capabilities to maintain the complex fire illusion, though Lexi wondered what the second blue form on the image had been if it wasn’t Janis…an effect of the dome maybe?
Lexi had been sending the occasional bite of food under the table to Rex’s waiting mouth, knowing the appetite she had at the moment wasn’t going to let her eat it all anyways, but as the conversation went on, the fire-dog became less interested in the food and started pacing back and forth between his two owners, pausing only to nuzzle one or the other. He eventually settled down, but only to lie under the table giving off low whines until the conversation switched. Is there room for two down there? Lexi couldn’t help thinking. She too had seen Alex wanting to say something, but she wasn’t sure what to say to give the woman an opening, and Mrs. Howard was in tears already about this…She didn’t want this to turn into a full blown argument with everyone so stressed out already, and did she really know enough to think she knew more than the Howards about this?…ugh…she would have banged her head on the table, but there was food there, so she settled for the back of the chair instead. Can of weedle is right. Phoenix then decided to hop over to the girl’s lap and push herself inside the girl’s tightly crossed arms. Lexi started scratching the creature’s back-feathers. Thanks ‘nix. The bird could be a pain, but seemed to understand when she needed encouragement more than pranks. She was still glad the conversation was shifting however.
[[0.o Wow this is your first time? You are doing an amazing job yourself Siber! I've been having an awesome time here.]]
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:12 pm
Juno felt herself relaxing in Jñan's presence, though she tried to keep her guard up. It's hard to feel tense around this kind of person, though. Jñan was chatting with such enthusiasm and curiosity that Juno almost felt guilty about being so paranoid. Almost. I haven't been here long enough to really know this lady.
When Jñan lowered her voice, Juno's hands clenched under the table. Go with her? Alone? She'd unconsciously looked at Paul, but found that he had his own conversation going on with a teen. He doesn't seem much older than me. It almost brought comfort to Juno; she wasn't the only kid in the bunch. Juno felt a light scratch against her leg. Evie was apparently trying to get the young girl's attention.
After petting the pokemon's head, Juno turned to Jñan and smiled. "I would have no problem with that at all. Please lead the way, and I will try to answer as best as I can." That said, she stood up and picked up her fox-like friend. "And would you mind too terribly if I brought Evie along? I'd hate to leave her out here by herself."
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:21 pm
Gerard took a sip of water before he responded to the rather weak attempt at small talk. Not only to wet his whistle, but to give himself a bit of time to think.
He was by no means a genius. His thoughts, deep as they might be, were rather on the slow side. Still, this was perhaps for the better as it made his long thoughts more developed than the rather frenetic, rapid-fire thoughts of more absent-minded people.
Gerard had always been the big brother figure to everyone but his loving older sister. He was used to helping without needing an explanation, doing things outside of his own comfort zone to help others, and believing the best until proven otherwise. As such, he had an extremely difficult time believing what the Howards had to say about Thatcher - the man had saved both him and his family, after all.
Still, those thoughts were rolling along slowly. There was something before him now.
"Glenville as actually under attack," he said in his calm, soft voice. It was not a voice fit to deliver such news. "I'm not sure if you heard. The Pack has led an assault of massive proportions. The Oaks and the others in the town have teamed up to repulse them, but it doesn't look good." Another sip of water. "My family's shop is running fine, and I hear that the Drs. Oak are doing great in their research."
He smiled slightly as he waited for feedback. His mind was programmed to focus on the task in front of him, but in the back of his mind, the subconscious, he was working calmly and persistently through the problem of Thatcher, the Exterminants, the attack on the Howards, and his mission's involvement in all of it.
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