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Have you read Maximum Ride?
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Tesunie
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 08, 2008 10:14 pm


((For one, we do want to see you join this role play. I mean that. We really do. However, you aren't exactly working with us. I actually like the sounds of your character, a Morph that has escaped and established himself as a master thief (somehow). I just find some of your acts to be a little... unrealistic. Your doing things that, as a real thief you could do to some extent, you probably shouldn't be doing... yet. I'm not saying you shouldn't go sneaking into buildings and such, however it is your way of doing it.
Then again, your also posting as though you know the other people, and seem to somehow have a reason for breaking into a dangerous place. I am just asking what your reason is for breaking these people out, if they even want to be set free. I just am not seeing how you even know them to need to set them free. Maybe someone is paying for you to break them out? If so, your probably dealing with the Anti-school agency, which is controlled by Lordess of the Purple (A.K.A. Jake). PM her (or him) for more information on what your contract might actually be.
Then I have a problem on how your doing things. You say you snuck into Brazil by jumping onto a plane. Alright, understandable. How you did that would be great information for your character. Maybe just saying you snuck into the wheel well of the plane's landing gear and leave it at that? That would be all I was asking for. You leave out such important details, like right now you left out how you know that the school (which is controlled by me unless Locopedestrian says something otherwise) operates its facility. Maybe they really do check their security every Sunday? Maybe they don't even HAVE any security?))

((All I ask is that you work with us for your character's introduction into the role play. We can find a much easier way for you into here than you going on your own. If you want, you could pose as a 'captured' morph from a different school, but have voluntarily come back to the School, as in they didn't have to track you down. Then you would be working from the inside like how Red (my real character) before hand worked within the group to get most of them captured and brought back in (which worked much better than I had hoped, and I think everyone enjoyed the betrayal).
Basically, be willing to compromise with us and give us some time to find your character's niche in this role play. I can think of several jobs for you, and if your interested, I'll PM some to you for your 'thief for hire' to accomplish. Right now, I would be talking to Lordess of the Purple, for it sounds like your pulling a job for the Anti-School agency right now, under his (or her) control.))
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:05 pm


Jake sighed, letting his head fall back so that he was looking up. Why did females make life so difficult? He grunted as he straightened out again, since his shoulder was still annoying him and his side. He looked at Chance who was deseperately trying to hide her feelings and Twila who was making no effort to hide hers. "And this isn't just another fight about nailpolish, is it?" He hissed.

Lordess o Purple


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:24 pm


Twila scoweled at Jake's blatant insensitivity, "You should talk man jewelry. I see why you want to know what's going on because you're Chance's friend but I have no reason to tell you. So I don't see what concern of it is yours about me."
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:43 pm


Jake snarled then, his vibrant yellow eyes narrowing down on Twila. Anger rushed through him, and he gritted through his teeth, "Shut it, Fox. I should be ripping you apart right now...but I won't. I'll just let you escape. You know something about running from dangers? You only have to faster then the others." He hissed, practically saying that he would fight only for Chance's life, it it came down to it.

Lordess o Purple


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:15 pm


Twila growled back at Jake her tail flicking furiously, "I would be able to survive. And if not, oh well. It wouldn't make a difference either way now would it? And what reason do you have to rip me apart? I haven't done anything to endanger you or anyone. Simply making my own life decisions. But if you want to so badly just try me."
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:10 pm


Jake smirked, crossing his arms. "Foxes. Sly pests, aren't they?" He said mostly to himself before he stalked over to Twila. She would be able to inflict some damage, but barely enough to get Jake really injured. "HOw far you willing to go, before you know you're going to die?" He asked in a dark hiss.

Lordess o Purple


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:21 pm


Twila glared at him, "As far as I can." She growled as fierce as she could.
She stepped back, "You can get the first shot. Then we'll see."
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:55 pm


Jake snickered darkly. "Who said I was going to hurt you driectly?" He said, straighting up from his hunch over her as she backed up. "Besides...I'm done with blood for today." He said, almost too softly, crossing his arms. "And you have been digressing. Why were you running from the room in a fit of tears and anger and why is Chance trying to hold back tears herself?" He demanded, getting back to where they left off.

Lordess o Purple


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 5:57 pm


Twila scowled at his sudden subject change, wanting to test herself in battle.
"That still isn't any of your concern. It doesn't matter why I was running out. I just had an epiphany of some sort. I realized things I probably shouldn't have... Thanks to Chance's comments."
She didn't want to tell him but figured there was no way around it.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:10 pm


Jake rolled his eyes, and then focused back down on Twila. "Well, acutally, since it was my foolish mistake that got us into his prision. If it wasn't for me, you wouldn't've made the realization of life when Chance made the comments. So I'm always concerned." He said, locking a stare with her eyes. Timid Twila has gone pyscotic. Jake mused in his thoughts.

Lordess o Purple


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:13 pm


Twila stared back at him thinking everything through in her head.
She finally looked away and down at the ground, "I just don't know what to do anymore. Everything's different now. I feel like I've changed completly in the course of a few hours. And it's difficult... Everything's just so messed up in my mind, I can't even think straight!"
She wanted to just let everything out not caring about anything anymore.
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:17 pm


Jake raised his eyebrows, and he stepped back to lean against the door. As she finished Jake sighed. "And this was triggered by what exactly?" He said, looking towards Chance, but his words were driected towards Twila.

Lordess o Purple


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:22 pm


Twila hesitated but finally was able to stutter out the words, "She told me I should just die. And it made me realize that it didn't matter to anyone if I did or didn't live. And you've just proved that point even further."
PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:26 pm


((This is what I get for going around my town aimlessly for hours XD Wow I missed a bunch lol ))
Chance looked over at Twila after she spoke.
"You think I ment that?! I never ment it! It just...came out!!"
You sure it just came out???
Not now...
Chance looked away she was unsure of what to say at this point, she just wanted to leave this room and leave everything behind but she remained where she stood.

XxChibiCutiexX


DazzledTwilightRose

PostPosted: Tue Dec 09, 2008 6:31 pm


Twila's head started hurting so she rubbed it a little before speaking, "Something like that doesn't just come out. You said the same thing before. 'I didn't mean it. I didn't mean it.' Words all the same. Doesn't make a difference if you meant it or not. What it triggered inside me was the truth. And there's no changing what was said or done. There's only moving ahead with it."
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