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 Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:45 pm
Fortenra Askasa Quote: Thankfully, he weighed a bit more than the girl, and the fact that this sword was quite heavy also helped. No. No, wrong. Weight doesn't matter. D:< Wind resistance does though. So if he went all arrow like he could have caught up. But not cause of weight.
MY WORLD, MY RULES. GRAVITY DON'T MEAN s**t FOR ME.
OR FORTENRA DIES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.
... Nah, he doesn't. I need him until the end. XP
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:59 pm
Zepia Eltnam Oberon Fortenra Askasa Quote: Thankfully, he weighed a bit more than the girl, and the fact that this sword was quite heavy also helped. No. No, wrong. Weight doesn't matter. D:< Wind resistance does though. So if he went all arrow like he could have caught up. But not cause of weight.
MY WORLD, MY RULES. GRAVITY DON'T MEAN s**t FOR ME.
OR FORTENRA DIES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.
... Nah, he doesn't. I need him until the end. XP*decides not to point out other plot holes*
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:34 pm
Fortenra Askasa Zepia Eltnam Oberon Fortenra Askasa Quote: Thankfully, he weighed a bit more than the girl, and the fact that this sword was quite heavy also helped. No. No, wrong. Weight doesn't matter. D:< Wind resistance does though. So if he went all arrow like he could have caught up. But not cause of weight.
MY WORLD, MY RULES. GRAVITY DON'T MEAN s**t FOR ME.
OR FORTENRA DIES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.
... Nah, he doesn't. I need him until the end. XP*decides not to point out other plot holes* Yeah, don't even mention the sword in the wall thing! ^____^ Then again, Shoy's so badass, he can do that... and probably didn't even have to! o.o He'd hit the ground, and the ground would move out of the way so that it wouldn't get hurt... ^_^ Sibby needs to get more badass... >_>
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:40 pm
I hope the Omake turns out to be something that a character is watching. Just like the Epic Tales of Kimberly. XD
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:44 pm
 ******** I had known you'd updated while we were IMing, I would've paid more attention when you mentioned who the characters in this were. One of the VERY FEW times I wish I had logged a conversation. Cause I want to know who these characters are. >_<
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 10:55 pm
HAH! I have that conversation logged, so I know who those characters are. TRIUMPH FOR MAGGEH!
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Posted: Thu Apr 17, 2008 11:50 pm
It might be shoy, but it seems like this takes place before the current events. I was banking on Ezzy at the beginning when she mentioned penguin and like an angel descending from heaven. But i'm not quite sure yet.
xd
I'm caught between thinking the woman is a) Ezzy b) Fort's mommy (because of the white hair) c) Toastie's mommy(the attitude seems like Toastie), or d) someone else.
And for the man, i'm stuck between a) Shoy b) Fort's daddy (to match with fort's mommy.) c) Toastie's daddy (the traditionality/the fighting skill, etc.), or d) someone else.
(someone else is stuck in there in the event that Toastie is wrong xd yay failsafes.)
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:00 am
Toastie's dad has red hair. And red eyes. XD
The Toastie clan utilizes bare-fist fighting with fire to destroy their enemies.
I don't know why in hell it's called the Toastie clan, though. XD
I mean, Toastie is the only one in her family with the name Toastie. How in hell does it become the Toastie clan? Unless people somehow knew that there would be a child named Toastie in the future, and that she would be the result of a man named Bread and a woman named Toaster.
Seriously.
And hint - this story takes a hell long time before current events. Of course, time depends on a person's perspective. So it could be like one day or fifty-billion years.
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:45 am
Zepia Eltnam Oberon Toastie's dad has red hair. And red eyes. XD
The Toastie clan utilizes bare-fist fighting with fire to destroy their enemies.
I don't know why in hell it's called the Toastie clan, though. XD
I mean, Toastie is the only one in her family with the name Toastie. How in hell does it become the Toastie clan? Unless people somehow knew that there would be a child named Toastie in the future, and that she would be the result of a man named Bread and a woman named Toaster.
Seriously.
And hint - this story takes a hell long time before current events. Of course, time depends on a person's perspective. So it could be like one day or fifty-billion years. Yarr, i was right about one thing. :3 I only thought about the Toastie thing because of her attitude XD totally didn't think about appearance. And as for the Toastie clan, what if the person who started it were named Toastie and then the name got switched because all the had one generation were women, and then Toastie was named after the person who started it surprised oooh, intricate. biggrin
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:02 am
Zepia Eltnam Oberon HAH! I have that conversation logged, so I know who those characters are. TRIUMPH FOR MAGGEH! You WROTE the story, you don't need to have the convo logged! crying
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:04 pm
I SAY THAT BOTH PEOPLE ARE FORT AND FORT.
PLOT TWIST! eek
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 12:58 pm
[Q] Zepia Eltnam Oberon HAH! I have that conversation logged, so I know who those characters are. TRIUMPH FOR MAGGEH! You WROTE the story, you don't need to have the convo logged! crying
TRIUMPH FOR MAGGEH AGAIN!
Still, if you do read the notes I sent you for the first time around, you should at least be able to guess who they are.
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:51 pm
Hint: Reread Chapter 5.
^___^
Shoy is definitely badass... and lucky... o.o
Backstory is f'ing awesome! n_n
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:06 pm
For you information, I have Sibby's back story fully planned out. Hell, I have his entire role worked out.
Amigo and Roy, on the other hand, I've not finishing creating. I have the basics, but not all the information. Roy probably won't get a flashback omake, though. Whoot.
Shoy's a bit hard to work out too, since I'm not really sure what the hell he's going to be in the story. Meh.
The second part of Omake #3 won't come out for a while, though. SHAZAMA ALABAMA IN YO MAMA, BITCHES!
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Posted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:25 pm
Poor Roy... Oh well... being a "Mad Scientist" is pretty schweet too... o.o And Shoy's giving you issues? Ran out of characters for him to beat the crap of? o.o LOL! And cliffhangers are
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