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 Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:21 pm
((never mind. my mother has decided that we will go to the audition another night stare ))
Izzy murmered a quick 'thank you' and stood up. She retrieved her knife, from the dummie that was still laying on the ground where it had falllen, and looked around at the field. There was someone that seemed to have just fallen from the sky, quite literally, and another who just showed up at the edge of the field. Ryn was headed toward the person at the edge of the field and the other didn't look like he was concious.
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:22 pm
((To be honest, I never really understood the point of the whole "order of posts" thing. What I do is, right before I post, hit the "Preview" button and see everything down there. It works pretty well. But since nobody else is doin' nothin... I won't do nothin' either, 'cause I can't.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:29 pm
((Having an order keeps things organized.
We have been going in an order since we started posting with one another. So when someone just jumps in with a radom post, it throughs everyone off, and posts no longer make any sense.
Especially now since theres like 5 people RPing together.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:32 pm
((Hello, speedposters! wink What has happened so far while I'm gone? And by that, I mean since 5 to 6 pages ago lol.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:44 pm
((Kind, Ill PM you with a recap.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:45 pm
((Hey Rayne, what is the order?))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:52 pm
[[I think it was posted a page ago]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 4:52 pm
((Bayer, there isn't an order anymore. We need to establish a new one. But since IM not posting, and Sauron isn't here, you, Pen, and the other guy, Book Sage, can go ahead and do what you want.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:11 pm
OOC: Ok sure...that worked conveintly
BIC: The skeleton was having issues. Whatever it was fighting had somehow copied him and was besting every move he had. With no one to issue orders, it din't take long for it to lose enough power and returned to it's earthy grave.
Meanwhile, the doll melded it's shape into a rathery skinny guy (probably to it's dissapointment,) and walked toward the limp body on the ground.
OOC: So...uh, can someone help me here? sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:32 pm
((If you insist.))
Mark's eyebrows drew together. It looked like the most recent arrival was in danger from the dummies, and so he decided to take action. He raised his arm, aimed it directly for the dummies, and subconciously pulled the trigger.
Bursts of yellow-orange energy ripped from his forearm, slamming into the doll and knocking it sideways into the car, and doing significant burn and impact damage.
((It's yours, I'll let you decide how badly damaged it is.))
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:38 pm
Masaru's angry grumbling steadily increased in volume until she suddenly stopped in the middle of the road. She breathed in. She breathed out. Well that accomplished zilch.
She gently scratched the back of her head and continued walking. Geez, I never knew it was possible for a road to be this deserted and boring. How aggravating.
[[More Masaru Filler]]
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 5:42 pm
((Thank you very much peoples! Now I can... er... catch up! ^^))
"Hm..." Kin stood for a while as he pondered on the girl's point of view. It was sure enough convincing, and the logic of things was truly smooth. "Sakeri's right! It IS much more enjoyable to have a little breaking of sweat in dealing with those that are more powerful than in merely squashing the little jellybags."
"Come on, you two!"
Sakeri's voice popped into Kin's trail of thought. He looked up and saw her way off in the trail towards the mountain where the mines were. Filled with new spirit, he gleefully jumped up and began to run, disappearing in mid-air to reappear back beside her, the wolf on the other side. "Hey Sak," he cheerfully asked for her attention, "I thought the fun part is destroying the traitors? Why attack the weaklings now?"
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:18 pm
(( yeah sry about leaving like that i would of honorably fought until defeat but i was almost late for work so >< also is there any way to regain health or do i run around half dead for the rest of eternity)
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Posted: Thu Aug 16, 2007 6:20 pm
[[I'm not sure I'm going to go see if it says anything about that *didn't bother to check*]]
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