could someone... edit my poem please?
When love hits my beating heart
it hurts, but it will not part.
I feel it living deep within
often I wonder if it's a sin.
Knowing that her love is for him
she also loves me, the chances are slim.
Often I find myself thinking of her
wishing someday I can be her lover.
Wanting to love her everyday
dreaming to be and starts to pray.
Loving her even more and more
she's the one I truly adore.
Silently keeping the feelings inside
it keeps getting harder and harder to hide.
Letting it out is what I must do
now... you know that I love you.
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