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 Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:19 pm
Really? Thanks! So then, what specific things make it good, in your opinion?
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:21 pm
I have to agree with Demonix it was a well done chapter. Nice work Masamune!
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:54 pm
Wow...You got me pegged in the character descriptions!
surprised
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 6:56 pm
Really? That's kind of wierd because Allwing said that I had his character just like him, in my other Cult Story. I just guess somewhat.
So, does anyone have any specifics as to what makes the story good or what could be improved?
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 7:35 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 8:06 pm
Neat-O.
And I'm kinda bad about telling why I specifically like a story. Idunno, your's is just interesting.
Also, I think Rom and I are going to meet up with Betman and the caravan people. Unless I am being stupid, we headed east and they headed west. Us from the Cult and them to the cult. =D
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Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 11:30 am
@ Akuyoko: Makes sense.
@ Maul: You among others are going to be in it later on. Be patient. But not everyone will have as important a role or be a complete badass like Zen.
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Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:17 pm
Masamune 5.0 Really? Thanks! So then, what specific things make it good, in your opinion? Sorry 'bout the late response. Like Aku said, it's kinda hard to describe. For me, I think it's the way you portray your characters, and your descriptions. They are very well done, and help to get you "into" the story.
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Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 2:24 pm
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 6:16 am
Sorry about the lack of update, but I hadn't gotten any real inspiration until recently. I'll try to get a new chapter up soon.
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2007 11:02 pm
Say sorry all you want.
But I need something to read, god dammit. D<
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Posted: Tue May 15, 2007 7:15 am
Betman Say sorry all you want.
But I need something to read, god dammit. D<
rofl rofl rofl rofl
Damn Betman, that sounded almost evil
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 12:36 pm
Seaphron Betman Say sorry all you want.
But I need something to read, god dammit. D<
rofl rofl rofl rofl
Damn Betman, that sounded almost evil Betman is a ZOMBIE! He has to be evil. Or hilarious. Or both.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:20 pm
Chapter Fourteen is up! Please comment, critisize, etc.
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Posted: Wed May 16, 2007 7:33 pm
Masamune 5.0 Chapter Fourteen is up! Please comment, critisize, etc. I see you like grotesque battles... well so do I xd Great chapter Masamune.
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