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ElladanKenet Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2005 4:47 am
Gaia Name: ElladanKenet Character Name: XDL- 006 "Anarion" Gender: Male Age: 20 Race: Human/Dug Spliced Clone Character Description: Okay, very awkward. Basically, you know that arm Anakin lost at Geonosis? Well, Palpatine had Dooku snatch it, and have it cloned, in case Anakin happened to die before he could become Darth Vader. Long story short, they cloned Anakin, but wanted to make him more powerful, so they spliced an embryo with a dug, and then added mechanical enhancements. The result was a creature that from a distance looked perfectly human, up close mostly human, and his structure was super-strong and flexible. Basically, he looks like Anakin. It's taken 1000 years to make the perfect clone. Home Planet: Kamino (He's a clone!) Starting Planet: Sith Temple Relations: Jedi Master Jorrus C'baoth Character History: Anarion was created from Anakin's lost left-arm and the genes of the Dug Sebulbu. It took 1000 years to make a perfect clone that could use the Force, pass for a human, weild lightsabers, and have the strength and dextility of a dug. There were 5 predecors to XDL-006, with 006 (Anarion) being the first to 'live normally', and be trained by the Sith. Alignment: Neutral/ Evil Occupation: Sith Skills: Piloting, Force Powers, Lightsabering Weapons: Twin, red lightstaffs, created for him Ship: The Genocide (a modified Empirial Shuttle esentially) Personal Belongings: a black lightsaber crystal, he keeps in his pants pocket. Roleplay Sample: The project was done. After a millenia of hard work, cloning, and researching, the XDL-006 would be the greatest of our projects- a weapon not even Palpatine or Vader could've contended with in sheer potential. Palpatine came to us first, Kamino, with the arm of a long dead Jedi. He convided in us his dependancy in the Jedi, and told us he wanted another, more powerful if we could help it. Cloning Anakin was no problem. Analogous with the time of Grand Admiral Thrawn, we had successully replicated him, and matured him in a month. He aged normally for 50 years after that, until he died. This first Anarion, XDL-001, was the prototype; just to see if we could do it. Using insturctions given to us from a rogue Jedi of the name Mal, we determined 001 could indeed use the Force, and was just as strong a Anakin. Also, due to Palpatine's orders, his mental structure was untempored. A perfect clone, in all senses. Next, we needed the skill that would make him stronger: power, speed/agility, and dextirity. As a jedi (or Sith), he would need these characteristics, but the best way to fo this would be to splice him. So, the question was, which organism would be best to splice with? The very one Anakin Skywalker hated most: Dugs. Like the one Anakin raced against on Tatooine, Dugs were extremely mobile, could use both arms and feet to do any number of things, and were proportionately, twice as strong. XDL-002 was the successful splicing. By combing Dug DNA with a cloned embryo, the result was exactly as we hoped. Dressed in the black tunic e gave him, he looked almost exactly human from a distance, and even as close as a few meters, seemed more 'human' than other homo sapiens. He was the first succesful Dug/Human hybrid. XDL-003 was more complicated. To make him 'the most powerful', even having dug and jedi strength would not be enough against an overwhelmingly powerful opponent, such as space slug. So, to further increase his strength, which already allowed him to lift 300 pounds and jump 12 feet straight up, we implanted some bio-grade inhibitor chips. A really fascinating work, borrowed from the Yuuzhan Vong, basically, a seperate organ that encouraged muscle effeiency. At adulthood, XDL-003 could lift 500 pounds on his own, and 700 with help from the Force. Of course, this was our major inhibiton: the force. We knew he could use it, we just didn't know how he could call on it, and without the help of other jedi. We knew the 'Dark Side' would bring out the most of his untapped power, but we also knew of its corrupting facets, and were forced to simply suffice with his offhand control of the Force. XDL-004 was thus instructed by the greatest non-jedi swordmaster of the age, Tian Kuran, to fight in all 7 of the known lightsaber styles, plus 40 other style, and 100 kinds of martial combat. We tarined our budding research into a weapon, complete with all but the Force. Now, just a century ago, we created XDL-005. 005's job was to prove his new strength, with all the knowledge and strength his predecors gained. First, he was givan a white lightsaber, and we had him fight off 10 duel droids in single combat, in one week; they didn't last. Then, we had him fight one droid with two lightsabers, and two droids at once; he prevailed again. Next, we gave him a second lightsaber, and pitted him against groups of four droids, each holding two lightsabers. He seemed unstoppable. Then, to test his Duggedness, we had him weild not one, but two lightstaffs, and fight four DRDs (Dug Replica Droids), each weilding two lightstaffs. These were harder, but he still mastered them. Next, we went for the unthinkable: weilding three lightstaffs. It was amazing to see how he did it, standing crouched on one leg, while he held a red lightstaff in the other foot, and each hand. We had him gight ten droids with two lightsabers apiece at once, but his power was astounding. Just for kicks, we had him fight the rest of the hundred droid shipment (about 40 droids, each with two lightsabers), while weilding and juggling four lightstaffs. His attacks were so fast, we couldn't even record it longer than a second, even at slow-speed. We dubbed this new style "Kaminoan", after the famous, eternal-maelstroms of the water-world. And in our last project, who was born sixteen standard years ago was XDL- 006, codename- Anarion. All the power and research we had on him, collected into this last fruit. The plan was, he would be raised as a Sith, unknown to his cloned heritage. We deposited him at the world of their temple. And left him with red lightsaber and black clothes. His memory was wiped of all traces of genetic transession, so that he would have amnesia, and not even have a clue of his nature. he would be a weapon, to others, as well as himself. But at the same time...we couldn't help but wonder... what kind of creature did we unleash on the Galaxy? Front 1st page 9. Never relate to a movie or extended universe happening or person in your app. it's all far before your time that means you have to be born IN our timeline. No s**t with freezing and all, it's unoriginal, as is the whole being born during movie-times So this should have hint you enough that I don't think this should be accepted. Yes, it is very well-done and the plot is elaborated. But the last thing i want is ANAKIN! WHY! Forget him can you? T.T ~SK
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Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2005 12:56 am
Gaia Name: The Traveler Character Name: Odin aka The Traveler Gender: Male Age: 26 Race: Human Character Description: Odin is roughly around 5'7 and has brown hair and eyes. He wears blast proof armor that was made deflect blaster hits, but sadly, this armor was made years ago and the blasters of today can easily go right through it, so its now just for style. He wears white pants and brown boots.
Home Planet: Tatooine Starting Planet: Tatooine Relations: Odin has two younger sisters and a mother who lived on Naboo. He hasnt spoke to or heard from them in over ten years. Character History: Odin was born on a medical ship, the reasons why where never explained to him. Odin was raised on his parents spice freighter untill they had a second child. His parents settled down on Naboo and eventually had a third child. Naboo was never the place for him so when he was 16 he ran away and hid on a frigate heading for the Outer Rim. Along the way the ship ran into pirates, Odin escaped on a shuttle to Tatooine, where he was raised by Hurrga the Hutt, a crime lord in Mos Osno. When he was 19, he helped in a plot to kill Hurrga, it was a success, he got away with a small fortune and soon wanted more. He then got hired again and again to go eliminate enemies of his employers, thats when he became a bounty hunter specialising in assasinations. Now, at age 26, he lives on Tatooine and continues to work as a very succesfull bounty hunter. To system governments, he is known as The Traveler, because he can seem to jump from system to system very quick.
Alignment: Neutral Occupation: Bounty Hunter Skills: Piloting, Repairs and Bounty Hunting
Weapons: Two Blasters, Grappling Hook and Flame Thrower. Jet Pack for missions only. Ship: The Atlanteron Personal Belongings: A lightsaber taken from a job a few years back
Roleplay Sample: Two bright streaks of blue light vanished behind the tree line, the engines of a ship landing in the forest. The door to the small freighter opened, filling the dark wood with a light from within the ship. Slowly, a man stepped out of the ship, his shoes made contact with the moist ground. The man took out a pair of binoculars and looked through the wood, he spots something. With a pow a hook shoots from his wrist into a tree, he swings after something, the man vanishes into the darkness. After a few moments, two blasts can be heard, the man returns to the ship, a body slung over his shoulder. Small burnt marks show where the mans blaster shots hit the poor victim, one in the back and one between the eyes.
looks decent, accepted -MrM
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2005 10:19 pm
Gaia Name: KoRn Fedd Character Name: Khameir Sarin Gender: Male Age: 22 Race: Zabrak Character Description: Darth Maul's clothes, red eyes, 5'7. Black horns protruding from his head. Red and black tattoos all over his body (similar to Darth Maul) but slightly different.
Home Planet: Naboo Starting Planet: Dathomir Relations: All family members are deceased, or to be believed. Character History Born on Naboo, he was discovered as a young child as a force-sensitive individual. Not very social and very mysterious, it is said that he had a long lost brother. His whereabouts, unknown. Very skilled in sabre combat, acrobatics, and mechanics. Lacking in marksmenship skills. Farely well as a pilot, but could do with some more practice, if he wanted to be a fighter pilot. He grew up at the Sith Temple, and learned the ways of the force. One of his favorite things he did at the temple was taming wild beasts. His favorite animal was the highly intelligent nexus. After having many disputes over numerous things, he eventually left after being threatened by his master if he did not do as he said. One night he snuck out of the Temple, took his belongings and cruiser, and fled. He started rethinking his career. He was thinking about trying to become a Jedi, or maybe a bounty hunter. Currently took a bounty for some extra cash, on the planet Dathomir.
Alignment: Neutral, at the moment. Leaning towards the Republic side though. Occupation Bounty Hunter Skills: Acrobatics, animal taming, and mechanics.
Weapons: Fathers double sided lightsabre. Black handle, with red blade. Ship Customized Solid Black, Republic Gunship (LAAT/i). Similar to the LAAT/i ARC Trooper model. Since it can be piloted by one individual, all the gun bubbles have been removed. Only the forward attack cannons remain. Everything else is the same. Can fit up to four people, and cargo room. Personal Belongings: Father's double sided lightsabre.
Roleplay Sample The cool Endor breeze swept through the forest. The borra's howls could be heard sweeping across the rocky cliffs. The nearby torch flickering in the dead of night as it shown down on the captured and weakened, condor dragon. Now finish it, young padawan. But master, I can't. It's defenseless, and weakened. Do it, finish it now! No! Then I shall have to do it for you. As he said this, he turned with a small smile on his face. His lightsabre flickered on and as it sliced down towards the poor creatures neck, I drew my own sabre and blocked my masters. So, you want to save this useless creatures life? Then try and stop me. He swung at my head, then for my legs, and finally for my torso. Then he leaped over me and cut down. The blade scorched my shirt and and sliced my back. I screamed in pain. I had to stop myself from instinctively grasping my back in pain. I switched on the other blade of my sabre, and began to fight for my life. I was severely outskilled, but not out maneuvered. I twisted and flipped through the air, frantically trying to dodge his sweeps, slices, and stabs. I jumped over my once-masters head, twisting in mid-air and landing behind him. Catching him off-balance, I brought my blade down in an arch, swinging towards his neck, but I stopped. Drop your sword. He gave me a frustrated look and I saw it in his eyes. He wasn't going to drop his sword. He spun the handle in his hand and went for a low stab, but I spun to the side and lerched my blade forward into his abdomen. As he slumped to the ground, his final words were- You never would have made a good Sith. I turned and cut the condor dragon loose. I swung onto his back and headed back for the Sith Temple, not to far away...
I'll accept you, but be sure not to use your sabers unless you enjoy any training here in the guild, that's just a rule we have, noone starts with force powers/saber skills right away...perhaps you 'forgot' them due to some event or something... -MrM
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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 1:59 am
I AM RESUBMITTING MY CHARACTER BECAUSE I WAS GONE AND I MADE A NEW BACK STORY! Gaia Name: Laodecea Character Name:Laodecea Gender: Female Age: 25 Race: Twilek Character Description: Skin is light blue on top and gets darker the further down you go. her eyes are emerald green, and she wears one lekku foward, and the other wrapped around her like a scarf. the lekku are traditionaly wrapped in leather. slim hour glass figure, is still present after bieng a dancer for the hutts. torture scars still remain on her body however faint, and a small black circular tatoo is located under her right eye as a reminder of her slave years. her clothing differs , but mainly she wears brown Nubian Gundarkk leather suits, sexy yet durable.
Home Planet:Tatooine Starting Planet: Tatooine Relations: No one, besides the pilots that work for her and her porotocol assistant droid. Character History: born in tatooine, asa slave for the hutts, her good looks and good moves soon brought her to be the head dancer for Doona the hutt, (a small crime lord aside form the main hutt ruler at the time). when her mother fell sick doona ordered her to be executed in front of her daughter, as a lesson. Outraged lao studied mechanics so she would one day be able to remove the slave homing beacon, that was in her side, and one day succeeded, and in the same night methodically slaughtered Doona, along with all his assistants and helpers. Doona then stole the million credits, from the vault, after aquiring the codes off of the dead guard, and baught the tantive for cheap. she started her trade, using the spice and weapons she picked out of the hutts manner, and has been expanding sense. she has a knack for getting what the costumer wants, and has even been know to take special rare orders, from mysterious figures that pay extremely handsomly. she has also recently taken up, droid alterations, as a hobby and might one day expand her company a bit and deal in that too.
Alignment: Nuetral, sells to either side, and whoever pays more Occupation: Ship Captain, and owner and founder of Ecosys ( a company thats deals in running bacta to hard to reach battle sites or remote planets, along with oxygen, nitrogen, water, and other gasses) a front company for her real money maker, which is dealing illegal arms and ship upgrades, along with rare material, and for the right price, literaly anything else. Skills razz iloting, electronics, and marksmanship. Weapons: Small modified hip blaster, modified stormtrooper rifle, with ion charges, 3 thermal detonators, on belt clip, and a madalorian wrist rocket launcher. Ship : personnel ship is a correlian tantive 4, black painted with white glowing circlet panels. modified with ion and laser turrets. (not to mention the small fleet of runner ships, assigned to the pilots working for ecosys) Personal Belongings:A modified old republic assasin droid with protocol capabilities, and self destruct.(loyal assistant to Lao) a small workshop in mos espa, where she conducts her weapon uprades, and a shipyard in mos espa, used to hide, modify, and store ships. she also is in the process of building a small docking ring above correlia, so she can further expand her trade buisness.
Lao stared at the smear marks across her usually spotless floor, aboard her modified tantive 4. she regreted killing the trandoshian, in front of her deck officers and regreted even moor at the mess it left, but bribery followed by blackmail, just isnt the way to Laos heart... or her cooperation. she stared out her window, at the half finished construction that was going to be her new trading outpost. Her comlink flashed just as the robomaid, rolled into the room to clean up the mess. "She knew her crew too well to think that what they just say would ever leave the bridge. her officers were loyal even if thy were a frisky bunch, and they were well payed for it. in her personnel quartes a holo recording was already streaming in. "greetings Laodecea, captain of the "eclipse" i come to you in a desperate plea for help, see recently i began to become involved with the black sun syndicate, and i must say i hate every moment of it. as a direct competitor, maybe we share a common hatred. if you are interested in learning more about how we can direct our efforts to shall we say, calm ourselves of this menace, meet me on malastare, to the coordinates that are attached to this message." after laod recorded the coordinates, she leaned back in he chair to think... could this be a trap, or is this wreckless man, really seeking to bring down the black sun... either way it would be fun she dicided, so she set the coordinates to the nav computer, and away they went. lao watched the unfinished station get smaller, and smaller.
still looks good, go ahead -MrM
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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 5:38 pm
Gaia Name: Chocopyro Character Name: Kai Rogue Gender: Male Age: 18 Race: Human Character Description: Brownish red hair with bangs spiked down, blue eyes, and a somewhat muscular build, but pretty thin. His face is youthful, and he wears dark gray most of the time, with a tan vest, and Gloves.
Home Planet: Jivon IV Starting Planet: Tatooine Relations: Knows a lot of people from his secret village, but since he left the village, they might as well not exist. Also had a former crush on a female jedi. Character History Kai grew up in a secret settlement in Jivon IV. He is a member of a highly secretive clan of force sensitive martial artists that use to hunt sith jedi. He left his home at age 15, with a strong passion to help others, and explore the galaxy. Along his travels, his out of date star fighter (Which he "Borrowed" from his home) started to age and eventually fell apart. He met a female jedi that helped him recover from the crash landing, but she left shortly as he recovered.
Alignment: Chaotic good, But currently neutral in the war. Occupation Bodygaurd for hire Skills: Hand to hand, skilled with most melee weapons, and acrobatics.
Weapons: Vibroblade (Shaped simular to a Chinese Broad Sword) Ship Matters who he's working for. (Doesn't own one) Personal Belongings: He owns his sword, a blaster pistal that doesnt work, and a seal with a dragon on it.
Roleplay Sample Kai Woke up to another day. He was hungry as usaul, since he has had no work recently. He walked out of his Apartment room. The hallways were brightly lit.
" stressed Damn, Im hungry. If only that last client didnt seperate himself from the party." Kai said with frustration.
He kicked the wall and shrugged. Well, I guess I will have to find some other client. I desperatly need the credits. If only I wasnt so hungry all the time.
Walking past the lobby, Kai noticed the planitary news report. He walked toward the pannel. Several others watching the image with concerned looks on there faces.
"Another attack was made on the planet today as the unknown terrist faction is still at large. The bombing took place in early morning."
Thats about when Kai walked away. He thought to himself: Man, Im so sick of being here where the trouble is, and not being able to do anything about it. stare . I feel like a flame, running out of wood to burn... Which is the same reason I left home...
He walked back to his room and sat down at the couch. And waited for an idea to come into his head.
Looks good, altough I don't think many persons appriciate the use of emoticons in rp... perhaps you should avoid that Accepted -MrM
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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2005 6:40 pm
Gaia Name: ElladanKenet Character Name: Elladan kenet Gender: Male Age: 21 Race: Chiss Character Description: Similar to our fave Grand Admiral, but slightilly taller.
Home Planet: Chiss Starting Planet: The Imperial fleet Relations: A distant cousin of Grand Admiral Thrawn's family, but no real relation. Character History- He was born shortly a few decades after the Yuuzhan Vong Crisis. He was sent to the Imperial Academy wear he graduated as an officer, Lieutenant currently. He is skilled at espionage and Intelligence, as well as weilding any type of blaster, but he is a master tactician.
Alignment: Empirial Occupation: Empirial Officer Skills: War Coordination, Slicing, Special Ops
Weapons: standard issue T-16 Imperial Rifle, an M-17 Imperial Blaster, and a miniature ion blaster. Ship: none yet, but he is hoping to gain his own Dreadnaught or Star Destroyer
Roleplay Sample
Elladan looked out the bridge of his Star Destroyer, the Wyvern, as a squadron a A-wings flew by, followed by five or so TIE Interceptors. He watched one of the As get blown apart by battery fire, then winced as one of the TIES was caught in crossfire. "Watch the fighters, lieutenant. We need to keep our own casualties minimized." "Yessir." Good. At least someone was paying attention to the smallfry. He looked to his aft, and found a similar dogfight going on, plus a squaffle between a Republic Cruiser and one of their assualt frigates. The frigate wouldn't last too long, in a staright out fight, but.. "Position the Wyvern on the Cruiser's port, and call our frigate to back down, and challenge the fighters. Deploy Squadrons 9 and 10." "Yessir." Elladan watched carefully as about 16 more TIES poured out of his Star Destroyer, and made for the last of the X and A-Wings. The battle was in their favor, but only just. Something caught his eye to his left, and he turned just in time to see two more cruisers come out of hyperspace and unload their fighters. "Captain, we have two new cruisers, Mon Calamari-class. Engage?" The Chiss nodded. "Engage the trap." "Yessir." Another perfect lure. Here he was, attacking a seemingly defenseless port, which he kne hid some forces, while he himself was but a diversonary to the real threat. "Sir. Star Destroyers Death and Vengeance have just exited hyperspace, and are releasing all TIES. Dreadknots Life and Mirth are doing likewise opposite us." "Excellant. Have both groups pin those two cruisers down, now." It didn't last much longer after that. The first cruiser was destroyed, along with a few dozen smaller craft and fighters. The other two were considerably damaged, and fled, surrendering the base. "Well done, men," the captain called to the bridge. "This is an Imperial Victory."
Well, if he's 21, it would be over a century, but that fact isn't really of any concern for your further story, so accepted -MrM
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ElladanKenet Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 7:58 pm
Gaia Name: Antisan Character Name: Lese Antisan Ma'ken Gender: Male Age: 16 Race: Kiffar Character Description: Lese is 5'10, lanky in build, with honey-brown skin, green eyes, long unkempt blue hair, wide features and large hands. His skin is covered with tattoos customary to the Kiffar, black markings all over, a Republic circlet on his shoulder, and a green band under his eyes. He also has various piercings, all of which have ceremonial importance to him, or at least his culture, as well as six silver rings, a set of middle, ring and index on each hand. His dress is simple, tunics and robes in dark greys to hide the grease from the engines, boots, gloves, one or two clean light ones to meet clients in, and piloting/welding goggles. Home Planet: Kiffex [world of birth], Nar Shadda [current occupation] Starting Planet: Nar Shadda Relations: None, at the moment. He has a girl he occasionally sleeps with, but no attatchment to her, so she barely counts. No family that he knows how to get in touch with, save some uncles and aunts on Kiffex that he doesn't contact. Maybe the closest he has is the older man in the shop next door, who functions a bit like a mentor to him, Gui'en, who is in his late 50s and starting to get a bit grizzled. Character History Lese was orphaned by his parents on Kiffex, and despite potential as a Clan Guardian he was given up to foster parents, nomads, who he didn't get along with terribly well, and was sort of 'let go' by on Nar Shadda at fourteen, and he's lived there ever since except for a trip he took once back to Kiffex to get his ceremonial markings. He's been making a living as a mechanic in the port, as he's skinny and can get into all sorts of tight spots, and and he's extremley handy. He doesn't really like the scum that make their way into Nar Shadda, he's still an honest and forthright young man. On the side, he's been working on his own ship designs, and weapon designs, and occasionally dabbling into upgrading his one droid, but he hates messing with other people's droids. Alignment: Light. With aspirations towards lightside Jedi, in a teenage obsession kind of way. He sees Jedi as heroes, still, and is sort of all fixated on them. Occupation Mechanic. Skills: Very good mechanic, as its all he does all day, decent blaster skills as they're required for survival, pretty decent lie detection, pretty hot pilot, but nothing to write home about. Weapons: Standard concealment blaster with a tendency towards being on 'stun', larger, more heavy-duty blaster, grappling hook (which is as much a toy as a weapon), and a couple prototype lightsaber casings with no crystal in them, built entirley out of curiosity. Ship A self-built small cruiser, mostly used for on-planet hopping, though its certainly seen inter-planetary travel. It would sit about three or four people if not for all the metal that Lese hauls around with him. Its design is very streamlined, though none of the exteriors are finished entirley the same way, so it looks a bit junky but it flies like an angel. Lese swears by her, and calls her the Seralee II. Personal Belongings: A lot of scrap and spare parts, enough to be notable, his prized ship, a few sets of clothes, and not a whole lot else. He's not much for attatching to stuff. Also, he has a cute little astromech, not really an R-class unit, that he mostly just refers to as 'bot. Roleplay SampleLese's eyes glittered for a second, and when the man on the speeder was long enough gone, he looked both ways before darting into the street. Crouching low, to make sure anyone else on their way would miss him, he scrambled for a way to even carry the thing, finally locking his fingers under the outer rim of the second engine and pulling, tugging the damaged part to safety. That, he reflected with a grin, was the best part of having a workspace so close to the ground- any low-flying traffic could leave him an absoloute bounty of free supplies. He studied the part for a second, once he had it back beyond the hatch-door of what amounted to his triple-sized garage, and determined that the welding of the part to the ship body had been poor, and when the speeder had banked upwards, it had jarred the part loose, finally. Which meant... he peeked to check, touching the innards, feeling them out carefully. YES! The part was in perfect working order. He tugged it back further, unaware that his back knocked over a stack of hull plating he'd stacked aside for the next day's work. The clang drew Gui'en to the door between their shops, and 'bot whistled. " That's a mighty good catch, kid." Gui'en grinned, and eyed the part, almost envious. " Isn't it? Its perfect. Just the kind of engine you said I should get." Lese called over his shoulder, grinning up at his friend. " Need any help installing it?" " Nope, I've.. erp!" Lese collapsed backwards further onto the stack of hull plating as he tugged the engine over further. " Well, maybe I could use a little help getting it over there. And a hand up..." Also: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0903/darkestshadow6/lese/lesehelm.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/0903/darkestshadow6/lese/makenpreview.jpg which isn't finished. looks very good, accepted! -MrM
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 8:02 am
Gaia Name: JohnPT Character Name: Arnath Khalgat Gender: Male Age: 15 Race: Human Character Description: 5'8, blue eyes, short cropped brown hair, & tall but thin. Arnath wears a ragged & well patched pair of khaki trousers but no shirt. He carries a sack to put stuff in.
Home Planet: Coruscant Starting Planet: Coruscant Relations: None. Orphaned Character History Arnath was born to Waden and Jubille Khalgat, outspoken citizens of Coruscant. His parents owned a diner & motel in the lower levels of coruscant - The Khalgaton was where the lower class, the middle class and the rogues from all over the galaxy who stops at Coruscant rubbed elbows as they go about their business. Business was booming at the Khalgaton diner & motel - Since the Khalgats charged reasonable prices, customers keeps returning & these customers also introduced the place to their families & friends. Unfortunately this did not last long. One night when Arnath was 6, there was a fire at the Khalgaton. Jubille escaped with Arnath in tow. Waden who had originally led his wife and son out of the burning building went back in to save some customers. He perished in the fire, the cause of which was never found out. But due to the Khalgats' political activism, the fire was believed to be an attempt at silencing them permanently. With only the clothes on their backs, Jubille and Arnath went to live on the slums of Coruscant. Two years later Jubille died & at age 8, Arnath became an orphan. Wandering around Coruscant, the young orphan sometimes wandered close to the Jedi temple. Something about the Jedi Temple draws Arnath towards it like a magnet & he wishes to become a jedi.
Alignment: Good Occupation None. He's an orphaned kid who lives on the streets. Skills: Force Sensitive
Weapons: A staff Ship None Personal Belongings: The well patched rags he's wearing, a staff, and an item carrying sack which doubles as a blanket.
Roleplay Sample RP sample from the Storming of the Jedi Temple thread:
Tomas was meditating in the quarters that he shares with his jedi master, General Jerec Kriegor. As usual he was unable to meditate too long and took breaks between meditations. But of all his efforts, today's attempt at meditation yielded the most mediocre result. Tomas became increasingly frustrated, as a result of which he was unable to properly attune to the force. Tomas is trying to meditate on his strange visions of a cloud of red lightsabers converging on a multicolored cloud of lightsabers which lacks red sabers in it. He had been having this strange vision for about a month now, but had not yet informed his Master or any other Jedi about it.
Master Kriegor left for the mission to the outer rim shortly before Tomas got the visions. Unfortunately Tomas was not taken along on the mission - At 14 he was deemed as much too young to join his master on missions. It's a good thing Master Jerec Kriegor is currently away on a mission somewhere in an outer rim planet. Master was always onto Tomas about how he should be mindful of the future but not worry too much since the future is always in motion. He would have said Tomas' worries about the strange vision were clouding said padawans attunement to the force.
A long time passed as Tomas struggled to meditate and finally he was able to become properly attuned to the force. For a while he swam in the river of the force, feeling at peace. Suddenly the peace is shattered as he felt a great disturbance in the force. Jedi and sith were dying as the Sith attacked the Jedi Temple. There were shouting and sounds of lightsaber battles going on in the corridors. Tomas picked up his training lightsaber and activated it. He thumbed the door panel to the quarters to open the door so he could go out and join the fray.
Tomas felt lucky when he came upon a Sith apperentice who isn't as skilled as he is in lightsaber combat. The sith apperentice put up a good fight, but padawan Tomas disarmed him and used the force to summon the surprised sith's red lightsaber. Unlike Tomas' blue training saber which would only hurt, the sith apperentice's red saber was set to kill. Using the red lightsaber, the padawan dealed the apperentice a killing blow.
Unfortunately the inexperienced padawan didn't expect the Sith apperentice's master to appear in search of his apperentice. Tomas was feeling very proud of himself and lets his guard down. This was his first real taste of battle and he winds up victorious!! The blood covered padawan was in the middle of a comical and silly victory dance routine in the empty corridor when the Sith Lord appeared around the corner. Master Kriegor usually reprimanded Tomas who rarely took anything seriously. But on this, Tomas failed to listened to his Master's reprimands. Today would be the last time Tomas clowned around. Upon seeing the body fo his dead apperentice and a jedi padawan nearby, the Sith Lord flew into a rage and attacked Tomas.
Tomas fought hard against the sith lord but this was no apperentice. The last thing Tomas saw before sith lord's red lightsaber cleaved his head off at the neck was the tattooed sith lord's evil grin. As Tomas failed to block the lightsaber which swings towards his neck, there was maniacal sith laughter. Through the force the sith master said, "Now you die, young jedi". And then the world went black - Tomas had become one with the force.
Accepted -MrM
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 10:24 am
dudettes, shall go trough it in a sec
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 4:29 am
Gaia Name: The Creator X
Character Name: Harlot
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Race: Human
Character Description: Looks like Auron from FFX but looks a little younger and muscular
Home Planet: Tatooine Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: Real mother and father was killed during a mission they was on. He never really got to know them, he was only three at the time. His Uncle and Aunt raised him with his two cousins.
Character History: He was rasied by his Aunt and Uncle they both were serious Politicians and did not take crap from nobody. His cousins joined the Army and he wanted something more. So he trained to become a Sercet Agent for the Government. He has various of duites Assignations, Stealth Missions and sometime ordered to Steal
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Secret Agent for Tatooine Government
Skills: Martial Arts, Various of Ninja Styles and good with Swords
Weapons: Daggers, mini bombs, Various types of Guns, smoke bombs and a Samurai Sword
Ship: Justice Personal Belongings: None
Roleplay Sample: Harlot received his New orders, he was to Spy on any Jedi roaming on Tattoine and gather any information about them. Also learn how use a Light Sabar so the Government can secretly train their Agents to become Jedi.
" I understand looks like another long mission." Said Harlot to his Superior and left the building and hopped into his Vehicle while he was driving he tried to think of places where Jedi could be hanging out. He has heard Rumors that Jedi love to hang out in Bars. So Harlot makes his way to Bar near by " HQ I am entering the first bar, it s uncle Joe 's Bar. Do you have any wire taps or hidden carmeras in ths bar
HQ " Yeah that is a dangerous place be careful. "
" Roger that HQ " Whispered Harlot and he walked towards the drinking area slowly. Then suddenly a fight broke out then some one tap him on the shoulders and he quickly pulled out his gun and the person had a Knife aimed his Heart. He did some quick Martial Art Moves and broke his arm
Everyone was yelling Cop and he quickly ran out the Bar " HQ I did not see in Jedi there, going to another Bar. " Said Harlot
How is this, is this good enough be accpeted?
yeah, try to make it longer please
Does Tatooine have a government? o.O ~ Seffi
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 4:33 pm
Well? Yes or no? Every planet has to have Goverment, it has people in it. How could it not have a Goverment?
Because it is run by Hutts, which I would assume doesn't actually class as "government" ~ Seffi
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 5:12 pm
The Creator X Well? Yes or no? Every planet has to have Goverment, it has people in it. How could it not have a Goverment? Because it is run by Hutts, which I would assume doesn't actually class as "government" ~ Seffi it has not one government, but many, like how earth is, or how feudal europe was, but with gangster hutts, blaster rifles, and bounty hunters instead of bows, arrows, and knights.
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 5:53 pm
Gaia Name: eika_star Character Name: Eika Star Gender:Female Age: 17 Race: human Character Description: Eika looks like my avi. She is 5.10 and weighs 145. She is thin ,but still has well developed muscles. She has a leave shaped tatto on the back of her neck. Home Planet: cornellia Starting Planet: Relations: she only knew her mother and father, both are dead. Character History: She was the child of two jedi. They were both hunted down and killed
Alignment: neutral Occupation:Jedi Skills: pilot,jury rigging, blasters Weapons: heavy blaster pistol, vibro sword Ship: skipray blast boat Personal Belongings: mothers lightsaber
Roleplay Sample: Eika was listening to her mother talk about the old days before the jedi started to be hunted down. " Now those days are just a memory" her mother said. They were living in a old space yacht that would never fly again. They had patched it up so that the rain that courusant had every now and then wouldn't leak in. "Im going to go wait for dad outside" eika said. "thats fine dear" her mother said
She steped outside and sat down agansit the dented hull of the yacht. She herad the whine of repulsor engines in the distantence. She looked in the direction of the sound and could just make out two vechiles. They were closing rapidly. About a klick off the one in the back started to fire on the front one which she could make out as a speeder bike.
Eika ran back inside to tell her mom but found that her mom was already packing in a hurry. She pulled out a repeating blaster rifle and her light saber. As she started to walk to the observation level of the ship she said" go to the bedroom and lock the door." Eika turned and ran to the bedroom without a word. She spent 20 minutes waiting.
She bent over on her knees and hands in pain. Some how she knew her dad was dead or dying. The ship shuttered from something hitting it. The door opened and her mother ran in grabed eika and ran to the secondary exit from the ship. A gun ship was landed and troops were run into their home. Her mother wispered"We have to get to that ship. On three well run for it. one...two...three." They both ran to the ship but one of the soilders spoted them and started to fire on them. Just as they were almost their her mother cried out in pain. She fell to the ground with a hole in her chest. "MOM" eika screamed. "Eika go with out me..escape while you can."her mother coughed out. "No, never" eika cried. She draged her mother into the ship then jumped into the copit.
She reconized enough of the controls to lift off and fly to a safe area. As soon as she sit down she went to care for her mother. She cradled her mother's head. "Eika...i going to die here" her mother said in a raspy yet calm voice. "take my lightsaber and swear to never give up helping the inoccent and dont take revenge for what they did today". She died in eika's arms and disappered. Only her lightsaber remained. She cried for hours in the same spot.
Accepted. But take note that all JEDI ARE LIGHT SIDERS! So no neutral. confused ~SK
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Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 2:50 am
The Creator X Gaia Name: The Creator X
Character Name: Harlot
Gender: Male
Age: 25
Race: Human
Character Description: Looks like Auron from FFX but looks a little younger and muscular
Home Planet: Tatooine Starting Planet: Tatooine
Relations: Real mother and father was killed during a mission they was on. He never really got to know them, he was only three at the time. His Uncle and Aunt raised him with his two cousins.
Character History: He was rasied by his Aunt and Uncle they both were serious Politicians and did not take crap from nobody. His cousins joined the Army and he wanted something more. So he trained to become a Sercet Agent for the Government. He has various of duites Assignations, Stealth Missions and sometime ordered to Steal
Alignment: Neutral
Occupation: Secret Agent for Tatooine Government
Skills: Martial Arts, Various of Ninja Styles and good with Swords
Weapons: Daggers, mini bombs, Various types of Guns, smoke bombs and a Samurai Sword
Ship: Justice Personal Belongings: None
Roleplay Sample: Harlot received his New orders, he was to Spy on any Jedi roaming on Tattoine and gather any information about them. Also learn how use a Light Sabar so the Government can secretly train their Agents to become Jedi.
" I understand looks like another long mission." Said Harlot to his Superior and left the building and hopped into his Vehicle while he was driving he tried to think of places where Jedi could be hanging out. He has heard Rumors that Jedi love to hang out in Bars. So Harlot makes his way to Bar near by " HQ I am entering the first bar, it s uncle Joe 's Bar. Do you have any wire taps or hidden carmeras in ths bar
HQ " Yeah that is a dangerous place be careful. "
" Roger that HQ " Whispered Harlot and he walked towards the drinking area slowly. Then suddenly a fight broke out then some one tap him on the shoulders and he quickly pulled out his gun and the person had a Knife aimed his Heart. He did some quick Martial Art Moves and broke his arm
Everyone was yelling Cop and he quickly ran out the Bar " HQ I did not see in Jedi there, going to another Bar. " Said Harlot How is this, is this good enough be accpeted?yeah, try to make it longer pleaseDoes Tatooine have a government? o.O ~ Seffi Uh do I need redo this or what? I think they mean, to be slightly more elaborated in your applications in the character history... And your character discription. Not everyone know who the hell Auron is... Althought I do. ~Sk
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