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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:00 am
Go with the japanese and english. If thats how it was originally you should leave it plus it seems more exact with the japanese right?
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:04 am
psh! you stole the first post yuu D< no faiir! anyway I'll post them now
This is the last section of this story where, after Tifa's brillant rescue of Cloud from an afterlife with a spookily nice Hojo, the party discusses and explains what the hell was going on earlier. This is realitively close to the finished game but there are still a few interesting changes
I just thought it was really interesting that this was originally supposed to be in the game. I'm not sure whether I would have liked it better. After all, Tifa made a mistake, a bad one (which she really should have owned up for) but it was really understandable too if you think about it. Well, what do you guys think?
[here is the site:http://community.livejournal.com/adventchildren_/781912.html]
ミディールでパーティーに復帰後 After the Party returns to Mideel
ティファ「なぜ、村に帰ってきたよきに私にさまっていたの」 Tifa: Why did we end up back at the village after I woke up?
クラウド「自分が情けなかった。 ソルジャーになると言って約束して出ていったのに、俺はだの一般兵。 故郷の人にそんなみじめな姿は見せたくなった」 Cloud: I acted so shamefully. I said that I had kept my promise to go join SOLDIER, but really I was a normal trooper. I didn't want everyone back home to see me in such a miserable condition.
ティファ「そんなことはないわ。 ソルジャーになれなくとも一生懸命やったならば」 Tifa: That's not the issue here. I'm sure you gave it your all to try and get into SOLDIER.
クラウド「でも、そんな自分がイヤだったんだ。 そして、それを隠そうとしている自分もよけい情けなった。 俺の存在はセフィロスが消してのではない。 幼なじに自分の姿を隠しているときから、せに俺の存在などなったのかもしれない。 セフィロスはただそれに付け人ってきただけだったんだ……」 Cloud: But still, it was wrong of me. And, hiding everything about myself really was shameful. But Sephiroth couldn't erase my true self. However having a childhood friend lie to be about my true self, that might be why I lost it. Sephiroth could only do what he did because he had an assistant......
(Oh! PWNED! Cloud finally tells Tifa that it was partly her fault for not facing up to him. I always thought that she was partially to blame.... >>;;; Too bad that her response was cut off... I bet it would have been a massive guilt trip.
And yay for Cloud using "ore"! That's back to your real self.)
~中略~ ~Omission~
ユフィ「さっき、クラウドはセフィロスに精神を乗っ取られた、と言ったわね。 そんなオカルトの世界が本当にあるの?」 Yuffie: So some time ago, Sephiroth captured Cloud's heart, like we said. Does that mean there really are occult things in the world?
ヴィンセント「思い出したよ……クラウド……その名前。 キミはジェノバ覚醒セフィロス・プロジェクトの実験台……」 Vincent: Remember......Cloud......that name. You are an experiment in the Jenova Awakening Sephiroth Project......
(Now there is something interesting. In Japan, the Niblehiem Incident is refered to as "Sephiroth's Awakening" so this is probably where the term originated.)
クラウド「そうさ……。俺はソルジャーを夢見てミッドガルのきた。 そして宝条の実験の洗礼を受けた……。 それがジェノバ覚醒セフィロス・プロジェクト」 Cloud: That's right....... I left for Midgar with the dream of being in SOLDIER. And I recieved my baptism as one of Hojo's experiments. That was the Jenova Awakening Sephiroth Project.
ヴィンセント「セフィロス・プロジェクト……それは僕が昔調査した事件」 Vincet: The Sephiroth Project......That was the case I was formerly investigating.
(In the original version, Vincent was a paranormal investigator who went undercover to investigate Hojo's work which is what he's refereing to.
And he's using "boku!" How cute is that. ^o^ (Boku is a rather cute male pronoun, usually used by younger guys.))
クラウド「ソルジャーとは魔晄のエネルギー注入されるだけではないんだ。 ジェノバの遺伝子をも合成される」 Cloud: Someone in SOLDIER isn't simply exposed to Mako energy. They are also combined with Jenova's cells.
ヴィンセント「ソルジャーなみな、なんらかの形でジェノバのエネルギーを注入されるんだ。 その完全な成功例がセフィロスなんだ。 でも我々は猛反対した。人の生命をもてあそぶことに…… そのためセフィロス計画は表向き中止となったが、神羅は秘密裏に実験をつづけていた。 それは成人した人間にジェノバ遺伝子を組みこむというものだった」 Vincent: All members of SOLDIER, take in some of of her characteristics when injected with Jenova's energy. The perfect example of this is Sephiroth. But we savagely faught against her. Even though our lives were treated like playthings..... For some reason even though it seemed like the plan with Sephiroth had been stopped, Shinra was continuing to experiment in secret. And as you said, that was why they were combining Jenova cells with adult humans.
クラウド「それがソルジャー。俺もそうだった。 だが、セフィロスとちがい、すでに人間の成人の身体になっていたため、 セフィロスほど完全なジェノバ生命体はできなかったんだ。 どうしても人間の精神が打ち勝ってしもうんだな。 だから俺の心のなかにセフィロスと同じ心が潜んでいたのだか、 クラウドの人格によって押さえつけられていたんだ。 でも、コンプレックスがいまのクラウドの人格を覆い隠した。 そこで昔の記憶……セフィロスが俺の意識を支配し出したんだ」 Cloud: That is SOLDIER. And me too. But Sephiroth is different, he was already experimented on before he grew up, but not to the extent that he could perfectly meld existences with Jenova. Nevertheless, what was in my heart was the same as what lurked in Sephiroth's heart, and thus he was able to repress the personality of Cloud. But, it was also a complex that was masking the Cloud persona. However, with the old memories......Sephiroth was able to control my consciousness.
ヴィンセント「自分の意志に弱さを感じた人間は徐々に心の内のセフィロスが目覚める ……すれがあの計画の副作用だったんだ」 Vincent: My will has felt weaker as though the humanity in my heart has gradually diminished since Sephiroth awoke ......this is probably a secondary effect of his plan.
※当初はリユニオンの設定はなく、「クラウドはセフィロスの分身」という話だった。 クレーター内部に眠るのも、星の兵器であるウェポンではなく、 セフィロスが生み出した邪悪なモンスターになっている。
※When we first created the Reunion concept we said the story would be "Cloud is Sephiroth's other self." While he was asleep in the Crater, he would use the planet's power to create WEAPON, and Sephiroth would bring forth these sinister monsters.
(The term "other self" is a bit hard to translate. x_X; It can also mean his "offshoot" or even his "child" O_O! Now there is a freaky thought, huh? Of course, Sephiroth isn't old enough to possibly be Cloud's father..... in the finished version. *cackles like a dork*)
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:07 am
heres the next scene with rufus and cloud!! MAJOR CLOUD AND AERITH heart
the site: [http://community.livejournal.com/adventchildren_/783005.html#cutid1]
ルファウスとの会談 A conversation with Rufus
「ブーゲンハーゲンを白の間に降ろす」「ロケット作戦失敗イベント」 のふたつをこなしている状態で、飛空艇に乗ってかつ、 コクピットを呼び出したら発生。 "Bugenhagen dropped off in the White Space" "The failure of Rocket's attack event" after those two events have been handled, once you board the Airship again, you'll be called called to the cockpit to start this squence.
(Bugenhagen in the White Space refers to the Key of the Ancients scene.
BTW, in case anyone is curious 飛空艇 or "Tosoratei" is Airship in kanji)
ケット・シー「あの、クラウドはん。 ルファウスがあんたさんと話したいって言ってますのや」 Cait Sith: Um, Mistah Cloud. Rufus would like to have a discussion with you.
(Just want to cite that Cait Sith speaks in Kansai-ben, Kyoto dialect.)
クラウド「よし、つなげ」 Cloud: Okay, give me the phone.
ケット・シー「ちがいますのや。直接会って話したいと」 Cait Sith: No, not like that. He wants to speak to you in person.
クラウド「……場所は?」 Cloud: ......Where?
ケット・シー「ゴールゴソーサー」 Cait Sith: The Gold Saucer.
ゴールゴソーサー(場所未定、観覧車でも乗る?) At the Gold Saucer (Haven't decided the location, maybe they could board the Feris Wheel?)
(LOL! We're going to assume that this next scene happens with Cloud and Rufus riding a Feris Wheel together. Because that would be terribly funny)
ルファウス「ひさしぶりだな。セフィロスはどうしてる?」 Rufus: It's been a while. And how is Sephiroth?
(Cloud: Oh he's fine. We've been thinking about getting a dog or maybe a cat... and how is Tseng? You guys still planning to fix up that place in Costa Del Sol?
*bricked*)
クラウド、さあねポーズ Cloud pauses here
ルファウス「おやおや。セフィロス・コピーのキミにもわからばいのか?」 Rufus: Hey now. Aren't you suposed to be a Sephiroth Clone?
(Just noting that Rufus is speaking informally to Cloud during this part. Almost friendly-like.)
クラウド「俺は……ちがう。俺は……子どもだった。 自分で作り出した幻想の世界に生きていたんだ。 もう幻想はいらない。もうソルジャーどっこはいやめだ。 俺はただのクラウドだ」 Cloud: I'm......different. I'm......just a kid. I produced an illusionary world to live in. An unnecessary illusion. And I didn't even get into SOLDIER. So I'm just Cloud.
ルファウス「……なるほど。では、ただのクラウドくん。 いまにもメテオがこの星を直撃しようとしている。 この危機をキミたちはどうしとうと言うのだ?」 Rufus: .......I see. Well then, just Cloud-kun. Right now, Meteor is aimed to hit our planet directly. What does your group have to say about this crisis?
(Cloud-kun biggrin Rufus likes using -kun though. In the Japanese version he even says "Heidegger-kun" XD)
クラウド「俺たちは……。俺たちは星の力を借りて ……星と古代種、そして俺たちの力を合わせて……」 Cloud: We are....... We are borrowing the Planet's power ......The Planet and the Ancients, we'll join forces with them......
ルファウス「フッフッフ……。私に言わせればそれもおとぎ話。 子どもにでも聞かせてやるがいい。 さて現実の話をしようか」 Rufus: Ha ha ha...... that is quite the story if I might say so. You may be a kid but you're a good informant. Well, if your story is true it might be useful.
……間…… ......Time passes......
(*insert yaoi here*)
ルファウス「メテオはセフィロスが呼んでいる。 つまりセフィロスがいなくなればメテオは進路を変更する。 これは我々の結論だ。我々はセフィロスを倒す。そのための準備も整った。 お前たちが何をやろうとお前の勝手だ。ただし!我々の邪魔をするな。 これは我々が生き残る最後のチャンスだからな」 Rufus: So Sephiroth has called Meteor. And in short we believe he can change it's course. That's our conclusion at least. But we will defeat Sephiroth. For that reason we've been gathering provisions. Whatever you intend to do is your own decision. However! Don't get in our way This may be our last chance at survival.
(And now he's switched back to formal speech mode
And thanks so much for the correction from elvaron!)
立ち去ろうとするルファウス。 Rufus starts to leave.
ルファウス「ひとつ聞きたい。 お前たちが星を救えるというそのバカげた自信の根拠はなんだ?」 Rufus: Hear out one more question. Where does your group find the ridiculous self-confidence to say that you'll save this Planet?
クラウド「………………エアリス」 Cloud: ..................Aeris.
(Okay now everyone all together - AWWWWWWWW!)
ルファウスには聞こえない。 Rufus doesn't hear that.
ルファウス「なんだって?」 Rufus: What was that?
クラウド「あんたに言ってもわからないさ」 Cloud: I don't know what else to tell you.
(...Why does Cloud use "anta"? Really, it's always been weird to me... it's a rather familiar and almost feminine pronoun. >_>;;; )
ルファウス、やれやれポーズ。立ち去る。クラウドひとりだと。 Rufus pauses in dissappointment. Then he leaves. Cloud is left alone.
クラウド「エアリス……。これでいいんだよな」 Cloud: Aeris....... That went well.
※初期段階では、魔晄キャノンがバリアへ発射される前に、 ルファウスとクラウドの会談が予定されちた。 クラウドたちと意見は異なるものの真剣に星の危機を回避しようとするルファウスの姿が印象的。
※In the intial stages, after the Mako Cannon shoots Sephiroth's barrier, we had plans for a conversation between Rufus and Cloud. Even though the party disagrees with him over the seriousness of the Planet's crisis, Rufus' actions still cut an impressive figure
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 9:36 am
.[.pink.spider.]. クラウド「でも、そんな自分がイヤだったんだ。 そして、それを隠そうとしている自分もよけい情けなった。 俺の存在はセフィロスが消してのではない。 幼なじに自分の姿を隠しているときから、せに俺の存在などなったのかもしれない。 セフィロスはただそれに付け人ってきただけだったんだ……」 Cloud: But still, it was wrong of me. And, hiding everything about myself really was shameful. But Sephiroth couldn't erase my true self. However having a childhood friend lie to be about my true self, that might be why I lost it. Sephiroth could only do what he did because he had an assistant...... omg eek woah thats really direct even though he didnt come out and say tifa thats still woah. I can understand why they took it out but I would think it would be better to have left it in. I feel for tifa because she was confused and she lied not to hurt cloud. She was scared of how he'd react but not once did she apologize and not once did cloud blame her. Square should've added tifa apologizing and cloud blaming her because it seems much more realistic because peopleget mad at each other and obviously wouldnt you be hurt if a friend lied to you? .[.pink.spider.]. ルファウス「ひとつ聞きたい。 お前たちが星を救えるというそのバカげた自信の根拠はなんだ?」 Rufus: Hear out one more question. Where does your group find the ridiculous self-confidence to say that you'll save this Planet? クラウド「………………エアリス」 Cloud: ..................Aeris. (Okay now everyone all together - AWWWWWWWW!) ルファウスには聞こえない。 Rufus doesn't hear that. ルファウス「なんだって?」 Rufus: What was that? クラウド「あんたに言ってもわからないさ」 Cloud: I don't know what else to tell you. (...Why does Cloud use "anta"? Really, it's always been weird to me... it's a rather familiar and almost feminine pronoun. >_>;;; ) ルファウス、やれやれポーズ。立ち去る。クラウドひとりだと。 Rufus pauses in dissappointment. Then he leaves. Cloud is left alone. クラウド「エアリス……。これでいいんだよな」 Cloud: Aeris....... That went well. That is some major cloud and aerith and its sweet and they should've left it. But I can see that square took it out because they try not to lean too much towards one pairing although its quite obvious who the intended couple is, espically after reading this. You can also see that square adds extra tifa parts only to balance out their cloud and aerith. For example kingdom hearts was just cloud and aerith but to please tifa fans they added tifa in kh2. Even in japan its been surveyed that the japanese see cloud and aerith as the cannon couple while cloud and tifa is fanon. Thats the benefit of doujinshi for the japanese. The japanese know that cloud and aerith are the main couple and so fans of cloti and other fans can get together through doujinshi and share their own opinions. But these other fans do not argue who cloud loves in an offical sense because they see it as cloud and aerith, even if they support cloti. But even though they know that cloti is not offical they still like it! but there is no love triangle debate does that sum it all up? I did my best sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 6:54 pm
thanks for those tutorials, i'll give them a look when i've got the time. I hope to be able to create something decent and that won't be a disgrace to cloud/aerith.
Lean not towards a pairing? well, at least not in 7 they didn't. but the ones after they did. maybe they changed their mind after the reactions we all had to cloud and aerith?
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 9:53 am
oh no problem! and dont doubt yourself anything you could make would be amazing and a great addition to cloud and aerith heart
well yes I agree, square has so many hints to cloud and aerith it makes my mind blow probably since nomura enjoys cloud and aerith and said that he wanted to make side stories with the couple and since japan too prefers cloud and aerith square makes money the producers are happy fans are happy I'm happy : D for example JUST LOOK AT ITADAKI STREET! soo much emphasis on cloud and aerith it makes me burst with happiness and in tactics and kingdom hearts and chain of memories!! the ending of advent children too also shows that the cloud and aerith story wont just end ^___^
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:19 pm
true, the ending of AC also shows us that there was more to the story than what square showed us.
Once i draw out an aerith-ish sketch, i'll scan it. but it may be awhile before that happens.
I should also note that square would make a literal small fortune if they released half of these cloud aerith related ... things, here in the states.
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:36 am
cant wait to see your picture! : D but ya if square released cloud and aerith stuff in the states I'd be really happy! but problem is america prefers tifa so if they brought cxa they would have to bring tifa too
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:47 am
well it all makes sense but in the end square I think would be producing more then would be sold. I went to shoppers and there was this florida's natural candy with kingdom hearts on the cover and I just bought it because it looked good, but the candy was disguisting.
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 7:59 am
lol sadly I think I would buy it too! even if the candy sucked I'd still buy it just for the cover xD
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:28 am
regardless of the candy being good or bad, you still bought it. which mens square still got paid.
anyway, i truly doubt they would bring half the CxA stuff here that they have in japan. I just don't see them being that smart. [sigh] oh well.
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:35 am
true, but it still would be awesome if they did bring them here. but I doubt it
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:41 am
ya I'm a sucker for square stuff...and now that you mention it samurai crazy fans like me reguardless of what the product was would buy it just if it had a picture on the cover!
like this!!

you know what wold be super spiffy! a cloud and aerith lunch box!! ^O^
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:43 am
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Posted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:44 am
I'd buy it too....no actually depends on the price sweatdrop a lunch box? who actually uses one, like a metal one? thats so old school!
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